Kali's Detailed Lair Reviews
Status: Accepting people on a pinglist for when I reopen
What I offer
Detailed lair reviews with constructive criticism, typically around 800-1000 words. I see a lot of lair reviews offered where the reviewer selects their favorites to talk about, which is great. But I think a lot of people on FR are like me - we also want to make our lairs even better! So my reviews mix praise with advice. Of course, everything I say is just my opinion. You are welcome to check out my
clan page,
lair, and
lorebook to see where I'm coming from.
Format
Reviews have four main parts.
- Impressions of your clan's main page.
- Impressions of your overall lair - aesthetics, organization, etc.
- Comments on your lore and general thoughts on bios/formatting
- Specific dragons. Generally I talk about ~6 specific dragons, a mix of those that are perfect and those that I have some advice for.
Examples
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Payment
The price for a standard lair review is 40kT/50g. This includes the standard four part review no matter how large your lair is. I do charge extra for people with a lot of lore/bios: it's an additional 5kT for each additional page of dragons with bios or lore after the first page.
I do accept
items as payment at LAH. I also love art of my dragons and would happily accept that as payment. Payment (unless it's art) is due in advance, once I have placed you in the queue.
When can you expect your review?
I will try to get all reviews done within two weeks of when I put your name in the queue. Feel free to ping or PM me at any time to ask after the status of your review!
Order form
Quote:
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Kalistys
User:
Lair link:
Payment type: (treasure, gems, art, items)
Review delivery: (forum, PM, tumblr)
Dragons or pages to ignore:
Things to focus on:
Kali's Detailed Lair Reviews
Status: Accepting people on a pinglist for when I reopen
What I offer
Detailed lair reviews with constructive criticism, typically around 800-1000 words. I see a lot of lair reviews offered where the reviewer selects their favorites to talk about, which is great. But I think a lot of people on FR are like me - we also want to make our lairs even better! So my reviews mix praise with advice. Of course, everything I say is just my opinion. You are welcome to check out my
clan page,
lair, and
lorebook to see where I'm coming from.
Format
Reviews have four main parts.
- Impressions of your clan's main page.
- Impressions of your overall lair - aesthetics, organization, etc.
- Comments on your lore and general thoughts on bios/formatting
- Specific dragons. Generally I talk about ~6 specific dragons, a mix of those that are perfect and those that I have some advice for.
Examples
1 ~
2 ~
3 ~
4 ~
5 ~
6
Payment
The price for a standard lair review is 40kT/50g. This includes the standard four part review no matter how large your lair is. I do charge extra for people with a lot of lore/bios: it's an additional 5kT for each additional page of dragons with bios or lore after the first page.
I do accept
items as payment at LAH. I also love art of my dragons and would happily accept that as payment. Payment (unless it's art) is due in advance, once I have placed you in the queue.
When can you expect your review?
I will try to get all reviews done within two weeks of when I put your name in the queue. Feel free to ping or PM me at any time to ask after the status of your review!
Order form
Quote:
@
Kalistys
User:
Lair link:
Payment type: (treasure, gems, art, items)
Review delivery: (forum, PM, tumblr)
Dragons or pages to ignore:
Things to focus on:
Queue
1.
2.
3.
Completed reviews
Petall - Paid
Shoyou - Paid
Anubiis - Paid
creepsheeps - Paid
Basilius - Paid
ElphabaThropp - Paid
Ximena - Paid
Pandacow - Paid
Chocoli - Paid
gardenvoir - Paid
AJNinami - Paid (art)
Noelblue - Paid
hatterlet - Paid
Iodine - Paid
Gowenna - Paid
Purpleater13 - Paid
Pinglist
MightyVildaTilda, Siennia
Queue
1.
2.
3.
Completed reviews
Petall - Paid
Shoyou - Paid
Anubiis - Paid
creepsheeps - Paid
Basilius - Paid
ElphabaThropp - Paid
Ximena - Paid
Pandacow - Paid
Chocoli - Paid
gardenvoir - Paid
AJNinami - Paid (art)
Noelblue - Paid
hatterlet - Paid
Iodine - Paid
Gowenna - Paid
Purpleater13 - Paid
Pinglist
MightyVildaTilda, Siennia
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Kalistys wasnt sure if i should ping you or not but just in case!
User: Shoyou
Lair link:
here!
Dragons or pages to ignore: just ignore the unnamed/ the ones on sale!
Things to focus on: uhhh anything? lore/apparel/aesthetics would be great!
Lair review style: be a mix of analytical and humorous please!
Payment type: treasure!
Review delivery: PM please! for some reason i cant see what you have on your tumblr even though i have one :<
@
Kalistys wasnt sure if i should ping you or not but just in case!
User: Shoyou
Lair link:
here!
Dragons or pages to ignore: just ignore the unnamed/ the ones on sale!
Things to focus on: uhhh anything? lore/apparel/aesthetics would be great!
Lair review style: be a mix of analytical and humorous please!
Payment type: treasure!
Review delivery: PM please! for some reason i cant see what you have on your tumblr even though i have one :<
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juno | 23
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they/she/he
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english/bahasa
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xxxxx
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I don’t want to become a gloomy person
like the rain of a summer shower
if you feel the same way I do
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I’ll become a star in your sky
Whether it’s day or night
I always want to sleep there
by your side forever
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Shoyou A-ok! Thanks for your order :)
For some reason on my main dashboard I can't see my own reviews either-only on mobile!
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Shoyou A-ok! Thanks for your order :)
For some reason on my main dashboard I can't see my own reviews either-only on mobile!
@
Kalistys
User: Anubiis
Lair link: Mobile site sucks for linking XD
Dragons or pages to ignore: Any of the gen ones or hatchlings please! *mostly on page 4*
Things to focus on: Page one and two!
Lair review style: I have no preference!
Payment type: Gems!
Review delivery: Fourm please!
@
Kalistys
User: Anubiis
Lair link: Mobile site sucks for linking XD
Dragons or pages to ignore: Any of the gen ones or hatchlings please! *mostly on page 4*
Things to focus on: Page one and two!
Lair review style: I have no preference!
Payment type: Gems!
Review delivery: Fourm please!
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Anubiis
Thanks for your order! I'll ping you here when it's done (some time tomorrow)
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Anubiis
Thanks for your order! I'll ping you here when it's done (some time tomorrow)
@
Kalistys
User: creepsheeps
Lair link:
http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=270063
Dragons or pages to ignore: Please ignore Ponyo, Hoot, ChocolateButter, Watermelon, and page 4
Things to focus on: Mostly just the overall aesthetic my lair gives off! Any reviews on apparel would be lovely as well'
Lair review style: Mostly analytical maybe but anything would be great!
Payment type: Treasure
Review delivery: Tumblr would be nice :) My blog name is creepsheeps-fr
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Kalistys
User: creepsheeps
Lair link:
http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=270063
Dragons or pages to ignore: Please ignore Ponyo, Hoot, ChocolateButter, Watermelon, and page 4
Things to focus on: Mostly just the overall aesthetic my lair gives off! Any reviews on apparel would be lovely as well'
Lair review style: Mostly analytical maybe but anything would be great!
Payment type: Treasure
Review delivery: Tumblr would be nice :) My blog name is creepsheeps-fr
cowboy | 19 | he/him
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creepsheeps
Thanks for your order! I'll tag you on tumblr when it's complete :)
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creepsheeps
Thanks for your order! I'll tag you on tumblr when it's complete :)
