hi! i'd like to get some writing practice in so i'd like to offer free lore snippets for your dergs! these will all be roughly a paragraph long and you can, of course, use or discard them as you see fit (credit is not required ^^)
if you'd like examples of my writing you can check out some of my dragons with finished lore in
this tab of my lair
any user may offer up one derg per day! and
please indicate, at the very least, pronouns for your dragon! any other info is welcome (such as gender, orientation, occupation, etc), but dergs without finer details are welcome too ^^
no need to ping, i am subbed, but no worries if ya do ^^
will edit this line of the post, as well as the thread title, when im taking a break from these:
status: OPEN, catching up!
hi! i'd like to get some writing practice in so i'd like to offer free lore snippets for your dergs! these will all be roughly a paragraph long and you can, of course, use or discard them as you see fit (credit is not required ^^)
if you'd like examples of my writing you can check out some of my dragons with finished lore in
this tab of my lair
any user may offer up one derg per day! and
please indicate, at the very least, pronouns for your dragon! any other info is welcome (such as gender, orientation, occupation, etc), but dergs without finer details are welcome too ^^
no need to ping, i am subbed, but no worries if ya do ^^
will edit this line of the post, as well as the thread title, when im taking a break from these:
status: OPEN, catching up!
Hey there! Thak you so much for your generosity!
If you'd like to, feel free to practice or experiment on Cargo, I haven't figured out his backstory and character yet! He just reminded me of cargo ships, that's all I've got!
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Hey there! Thak you so much for your generosity!
If you'd like to, feel free to practice or experiment on Cargo, I haven't figured out his backstory and character yet! He just reminded me of cargo ships, that's all I've got!
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Islet hello!! here's your snippet for Cargo ^^
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Cargo liked to count things. He was very good at not loosing track thanks to his handmade abacus. The skeleton of the abacus was made of fine metals and the beads were fashioned from roughly cut gems that gleamed when the light struck them just so. It had been a gift from his best friend when he came of age and was awarded his dream apprenticeship to the keeper of the clan's hoard.
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Islet hello!! here's your snippet for Cargo ^^
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Cargo liked to count things. He was very good at not loosing track thanks to his handmade abacus. The skeleton of the abacus was made of fine metals and the beads were fashioned from roughly cut gems that gleamed when the light struck them just so. It had been a gift from his best friend when he came of age and was awarded his dream apprenticeship to the keeper of the clan's hoard.
Woah, that is really neat! I really like how you incorporated the gene colors in your lore! Amazing <3
Woah, that is really neat! I really like how you incorporated the gene colors in your lore! Amazing <3
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Here's Melosa. Everyone agrees they have dark-elegance mysterious-past vibes, but I'm not sure how to implement those vibes. Pronouns she/they.
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Here's Melosa. Everyone agrees they have dark-elegance mysterious-past vibes, but I'm not sure how to implement those vibes. Pronouns she/they.
@TheEnforcer hello! snippet for Melosa :)
[quote]Melosa's parlor was as immaculate as its owner. Not a speck of dust adorned the room, not a single object out of place. This was exactly to their liking. Appearances must be kept and they must be kept well. This, she knew. Any mysterious past must be kept behind closed doors. And those doors locked tight. Melosa often entertained guests in her parlor but none were ever allowed further into the dwelling. There were whispers, speculations, to be sure. But Melosa was so gracious a host that their quirks were easily overlooked.[/quote]
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TheEnforcer hello! snippet for Melosa :)
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Melosa's parlor was as immaculate as its owner. Not a speck of dust adorned the room, not a single object out of place. This was exactly to their liking. Appearances must be kept and they must be kept well. This, she knew. Any mysterious past must be kept behind closed doors. And those doors locked tight. Melosa often entertained guests in her parlor but none were ever allowed further into the dwelling. There were whispers, speculations, to be sure. But Melosa was so gracious a host that their quirks were easily overlooked.
OH OH I would love to try this! I have this G1 named Mastaba, all I know is that he is in my Desert Tab with other 'desert' dragons (really just earthy types)
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OH OH I would love to try this! I have this G1 named Mastaba, all I know is that he is in my Desert Tab with other 'desert' dragons (really just earthy types)
@ChissChass hello! here's your snippet for Mastaba :)
[quote]Wander the desert for a thousand years and you may never find it. It's not quite an oasis, not exactly. A little too rough around the edges for that. Some may say that it's not worth looking for at all. But to Mastaba, it's the perfect home. He has carved out a life in that almost oasis. It's quiet. There's the very occasional traveler that stumbles onto it, now and then, just to keep life interesting.[/quote]
omg sorry if this posts twice or something, internet blinked out just as i went to post it and made me think i'd lost it lol
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ChissChass hello! here's your snippet for Mastaba :)
Quote:
Wander the desert for a thousand years and you may never find it. It's not quite an oasis, not exactly. A little too rough around the edges for that. Some may say that it's not worth looking for at all. But to Mastaba, it's the perfect home. He has carved out a life in that almost oasis. It's quiet. There's the very occasional traveler that stumbles onto it, now and then, just to keep life interesting.
omg sorry if this posts twice or something, internet blinked out just as i went to post it and made me think i'd lost it lol
Oh I love your writing your two matriarchs are so lovely and I also Love Opal and his hoard of cats haha.
Maybe of of these gals if you like either of them
[url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/74348752][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/743488/74348752.png[/img][/url] These gals are a bit more fleshed out in there lore
[url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/75359095][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/753591/75359095.png[/img][/url] and these gals have basically no lore except a little snippet haha!
Thank you for the chance!!!!
Oh I love your writing your two matriarchs are so lovely and I also Love Opal and his hoard of cats haha.
Maybe of of these gals if you like either of them
These gals are a bit more fleshed out in there lore
and these gals have basically no lore except a little snippet haha!
Thank you for the chance!!!!
