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@Schmoop

Cute character and style c: - but do remember: critiques like "the legs are too small" can still be valid, even if your style is one with generally small legs. It's all about proportions and such - you gotta know your anatomy before you can break it and such c:. And i know the "incomplete lineart" style or what to call it XD A youtuber i follow called Kasey Golden has a similar style :3.

as for my critique: I think the wings could use a little work. It's good that you have the lairs of feathers like wings have, they just look a little inconsistent compared to each other. Like you've drawn them two different ways ^^. I also think you could push your shadows more, they are barely visible ^^. And i think you should color more where the legs meet the sweater, right now there's a...rounded edge?.. which makes it look like doll-legs that were kinda sewn on or something? sorry i don't know how to express it better ^^'

If you're feeling up to it, i would recommend trying out more dynamic poses and angles, if you want to improve further :3

Hope you could use my critique c:

@cordifolium
Oh god yes
The leg thing is getting on my nerves, but the little corners are too small for my markers :,)
I also make legs smaller because I one, wanna make the sweater fluffier, and two, the character himself is skinny a f so like- but I just like the style more? Also I just realized that the wings look different from one another and my gOD does it annoy me. Also, lemme try to clear up the shadow stuff~ if you'd like to see more of my other legitimate art, not doodles, just let me know!

[quote name="cordifolium" date="2018-12-18 10:29:57" ] @Schmoop Cute character and style c: - but do remember: critiques like "the legs are too small" can still be valid, even if your style is one with generally small legs. It's all about proportions and such - you gotta know your anatomy before you can break it and such c:. And i know the "incomplete lineart" style or what to call it XD A youtuber i follow called Kasey Golden has a similar style :3. as for my critique: I think the wings could use a little work. It's good that you have the lairs of feathers like wings have, they just look a little inconsistent compared to each other. Like you've drawn them two different ways ^^. I also think you could push your shadows more, they are barely visible ^^. And i think you should color more where the legs meet the sweater, right now there's a...rounded edge?.. which makes it look like doll-legs that were kinda sewn on or something? sorry i don't know how to express it better ^^' If you're feeling up to it, i would recommend trying out more dynamic poses and angles, if you want to improve further :3 Hope you could use my critique c: [/quote] Btw [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/dWYOHEa.jpg[/IMG] Sorta fixed some of it? My markers are giving up on mEEEEE

@Schmoop

I'd love to see your other art! :D Post it here if you want my opinion on it :3
(or send it via PM if you don't want my advice on it, just want to show it to me c: )

EDIT: that was a fast fix! lol. Yep the shadows look much better now c:

I feel like something is wrong, other than the mouth (because that’s what I think this guys mouth would look like) [img]https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/485206153475784741/522532235056775192/image0.jpg[/img]

@Pepper6
What a cute guy! (and i would'nt have commented on the mouth either way, it looks cool! :D)

I think it is because the neck tapers down the wrong way, that it looks a little weird c: Normally the neck gets thicker the further down to the chest it gets c:. You could also make the edge of the apparel horn a half-circle to make it more natural looking :D

@TwilightStars

i give the same kind of critique to everyone lol. just my honest opinion ^^

when you say not drawn with tablet, do you then mean with mouse? :)
cause if that's the case, then I'm very impressed ^^

my advice would to require a drawing tablet, it can greatly help with your line stability and such. - but yeah, your lines are a bit "wonky" - try to be more confident in your lines, often it helps by making the drawing strokes faster ^^ I would also suggest using different line weights to create more visual interest (can also be done with a tablet c:). Hmm i also think your anatomy could use a bit of work (you're missing the nostrils) but esp. the neck area - the neck tapers up to the head, instead of going straight up c: ^^

I think 50k is a fine prize for your adoptables, they're very cute c:

Can you critique this? I want to know what to improve on in my guardians c: I was having some trouble under the head, since the spines get bigger again.. and with all the spines in general [img]https://i.ibb.co/89z8T2q/5318-C50-E-2-AC3-45-A8-AC1-D-90-FAB357-A28-E.jpg[/img] Sorry if it’s a bit hard to understand ;u;