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@tigressRising

I'm glad you like them!!! I'll definitely put you on the pinglist!

Are you happy with what I did with them? I imagine Fire didn't actually join Aleksei and the Stingers because he only really wanted to join because Pyrite was joining. I'm glad you like their personalities! Fire is especially fun to write!
@tigressRising

I'm glad you like them!!! I'll definitely put you on the pinglist!

Are you happy with what I did with them? I imagine Fire didn't actually join Aleksei and the Stingers because he only really wanted to join because Pyrite was joining. I'm glad you like their personalities! Fire is especially fun to write!
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@Petall Yeah! I like what you did with them. I'll admit, I thought you were asking about Pyrite's exalted siblings because you wanted to do something with him interacting with the exalted. But this lore about Pyrite wanting to join his brother's gang and becoming a thief is interesting too. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
@Petall Yeah! I like what you did with them. I'll admit, I thought you were asking about Pyrite's exalted siblings because you wanted to do something with him interacting with the exalted. But this lore about Pyrite wanting to join his brother's gang and becoming a thief is interesting too. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
@Petall Ooooh, I love the idea of arcs, and the stories so far are great! Oriel's children's post was so great...I'm eager to read more of these stories!
@Petall Ooooh, I love the idea of arcs, and the stories so far are great! Oriel's children's post was so great...I'm eager to read more of these stories!
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@Kizzan

Thank you!!! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
@Kizzan

Thank you!!! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
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----- [center][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2383572/5#post_32375875]Previous[/url][/center] ----- [center][b][u]Chapter 17: ...There's an Exciting Journey to be Had![/u][/b] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=40062165] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/400622/40062165_350.png[/img] [/url] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=40062164] [img]http://www1.flightrising.com/dgen/dressing-room/dragon?did=40062164&skin=0&apparel=390,371,425,436,946,17902&xt=dressing.png[/img] [/url][/center] Palla laughed as she felt the wind rush through her feathers. Windkeep Tower and all of the Jamboree banners faded into the distance as the small airship lifted into the sky. Freedom, it was hers at last! At her side, Pennar held a telescope to his eye, scoping out their path. Palla let out a laugh and veered sharply through the air to avoid a flock of birds. She couldn't remember the last time she had felt this happy. As the twins settled into their journey, Queen Fenn's words echoed through Palla's head. [i]It is important, as a dragon reaches adulthood, to expand their knowledge and understanding of the world. As the first hatchlings in our clan, you, Palla and Pennar, will be the first to carry this new tradition: to travel Sornieth. Your journey is your own, you may travel for as long or short as you want, but I urge you to make the most of this journey. On it you may discover what you are truly made of.[/i] More than anything, that's what Palla wanted. She wanted to discover what she was made of, and who she was. "So, where do you want to go?" She asked her brother. "Anywhere!" Pennar laughed, eyes gleaming. "Anywhere it is!" Palla said, cranking the wheel and rising higher into the sky. The wind would guide them. [center][img]https://orig00.deviantart.net/e0bf/f/2018/247/7/5/divider_by_cas_a_fras-dcm237t.png[/img][/center] [center][img]http://flightrising.com/dgen/preview/dragon?age=1&body=103&bodygene=7&breed=10&element=4&gender=0&tert=104&tertgene=4&winggene=1&wings=166&auth=b697021a0cafc6b4c9c80c89b4fe3b40cb063893&dummyext=prev.png[/img][/center] The prison cell wasn't as bad as it could have been, Pyrite tried to reason, but that was only a small comfort. It was the night before his trial. If he was found guilty, he would be put to death. He didn't know how he was going to escape this. Pyrite rarely let himself feel scared, but he couldn't hold it back anymore. He was shaking uncontrollably, and he couldn't sleep. Suddenly, he heard a voice outside his window. "Hey, buddy!" [center][img]http://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/382953/38295205_350.png[/img][/center] "Aleksei!" Pyrite hissed. "What are you doing here?" "Fire told me what you did, and begged me to come and help you." His older brother grunted. "I'm breaking you out." "How? Pyrite asked, glancing over his shoulder to make sure no one was listening. "Don't worry about it, I have a few tricks up my sleeve." Aleksei grinned crookedly. Aleksei disappeared from view. A few minutes later, he appeared on the other side of the bars. With a click, the door to Pyrite's cell swung open. "How-" Pyrite whispered again. "What did I saw about asking questions? Now hush, we need to be quiet." Aleksei urged as he beckoned his brother forward and wrapped a dark cloak around him. Pyrite followed the coatl out of the prison, eyes wide as he saw the guards unconsciously on the floor. The other prisoners called out, begging Aleksei to take them with him as well. Aleksei walked past them like they were not there. Once they reached the edge of the city, Aleksei stopped. "We're good now." "Oh thank you so much! Thank you for giving me another chance, I promise-" "Woah, woah, woah! Who said anything about a second chance!" Aleksei said. "But you said-" Pyrite protested, taken aback. "I said it was a noble thing to give yourself up for Fire, and I rescued you for that." Aleksei said, eyes narrowed. "That was your reward. But the fact if the matter is, you got caught. You gave yourself up. And because of that you've proved you will be a liability to the Crystalplate Stingers. There were other, better ways to get out of that situation, and you disgraced me. I never want to see you again." "But-" Pyrite's voice wavered, confused. "Just go!" Aleksei hissed, baring his teeth. Pyrite did not need to be told twice. He took off, not daring to look back at his brother. He was free, but at what a cost. ----- [center][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2383572/6#post_32678335]Next[/url][/center] ----- [center]@CleverDual @Alwaid @zzzhorses @Skyeset @ScrivenerRook @Kizzan @clarax @lilastar @tigressRising[/center] ----- The original dragon to call "theif!" In the previous update was a Stringer, and it was a test to see how well they could formulaye an escape plan. Pyrite failed that completely. Also, just to let you know, I started a new story this week, one that I am very very excited for! You can check it out [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2406323]here[/url]! I might try to get a new update out tomorrow, but if I can't, it may be a couple weeks until I can get put another update because I'll be traveling.


Chapter 17: ...There's an Exciting Journey to be Had!



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Palla laughed as she felt the wind rush through her feathers. Windkeep Tower and all of the Jamboree banners faded into the distance as the small airship lifted into the sky. Freedom, it was hers at last!

At her side, Pennar held a telescope to his eye, scoping out their path. Palla let out a laugh and veered sharply through the air to avoid a flock of birds. She couldn't remember the last time she had felt this happy.

As the twins settled into their journey, Queen Fenn's words echoed through Palla's head. It is important, as a dragon reaches adulthood, to expand their knowledge and understanding of the world. As the first hatchlings in our clan, you, Palla and Pennar, will be the first to carry this new tradition: to travel Sornieth. Your journey is your own, you may travel for as long or short as you want, but I urge you to make the most of this journey. On it you may discover what you are truly made of.

More than anything, that's what Palla wanted. She wanted to discover what she was made of, and who she was.

"So, where do you want to go?" She asked her brother.

"Anywhere!" Pennar laughed, eyes gleaming.

"Anywhere it is!" Palla said, cranking the wheel and rising higher into the sky. The wind would guide them.

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The prison cell wasn't as bad as it could have been, Pyrite tried to reason, but that was only a small comfort. It was the night before his trial. If he was found guilty, he would be put to death.

He didn't know how he was going to escape this. Pyrite rarely let himself feel scared, but he couldn't hold it back anymore. He was shaking uncontrollably, and he couldn't sleep.

Suddenly, he heard a voice outside his window. "Hey, buddy!"
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"Aleksei!" Pyrite hissed. "What are you doing here?"

"Fire told me what you did, and begged me to come and help you." His older brother grunted. "I'm breaking you out."

"How? Pyrite asked, glancing over his shoulder to make sure no one was listening.

"Don't worry about it, I have a few tricks up my sleeve." Aleksei grinned crookedly.

Aleksei disappeared from view. A few minutes later, he appeared on the other side of the bars. With a click, the door to Pyrite's cell swung open.

"How-" Pyrite whispered again.

"What did I saw about asking questions? Now hush, we need to be quiet." Aleksei urged as he beckoned his brother forward and wrapped a dark cloak around him.

Pyrite followed the coatl out of the prison, eyes wide as he saw the guards unconsciously on the floor. The other prisoners called out, begging Aleksei to take them with him as well. Aleksei walked past them like they were not there.

Once they reached the edge of the city, Aleksei stopped. "We're good now."

"Oh thank you so much! Thank you for giving me another chance, I promise-"

"Woah, woah, woah! Who said anything about a second chance!" Aleksei said.

"But you said-" Pyrite protested, taken aback.

"I said it was a noble thing to give yourself up for Fire, and I rescued you for that." Aleksei said, eyes narrowed. "That was your reward. But the fact if the matter is, you got caught. You gave yourself up. And because of that you've proved you will be a liability to the Crystalplate Stingers. There were other, better ways to get out of that situation, and you disgraced me. I never want to see you again."

"But-" Pyrite's voice wavered, confused.

"Just go!" Aleksei hissed, baring his teeth. Pyrite did not need to be told twice. He took off, not daring to look back at his brother. He was free, but at what a cost.


The original dragon to call "theif!" In the previous update was a Stringer, and it was a test to see how well they could formulaye an escape plan. Pyrite failed that completely.

Also, just to let you know, I started a new story this week, one that I am very very excited for! You can check it out here!

I might try to get a new update out tomorrow, but if I can't, it may be a couple weeks until I can get put another update because I'll be traveling.
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@Petall OH MY GOSH THAT IS AMAZING!!!!!!! (i finished my 13-17 catch up just in time!!!! :D :D :D )

DUDE I LOVE PYRITE SO FREAKING MUCH!!!!
@Petall OH MY GOSH THAT IS AMAZING!!!!!!! (i finished my 13-17 catch up just in time!!!! :D :D :D )

DUDE I LOVE PYRITE SO FREAKING MUCH!!!!
@CleverDuel

AAAAA I'm so glad you like it!!!!
@CleverDuel

AAAAA I'm so glad you like it!!!!
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@Petall aHHHHHH OH THAT WAS SUCH A GOOD UPDATE. Poor Pyrite... But Pennar and Palla are going off on their own so that's cool!! :D
@Petall aHHHHHH OH THAT WAS SUCH A GOOD UPDATE. Poor Pyrite... But Pennar and Palla are going off on their own so that's cool!! :D
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@Kizzan

Thank you!!! I have exciting plans to come in this arc for all three of them...
@Kizzan

Thank you!!! I have exciting plans to come in this arc for all three of them...
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----- [center][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2383572/6#post_32437112]Previous[/url][/center] ----- [center][b][u]Chapter 18: The Plaguelands[/u][/b] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=40062165] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/400622/40062165_350.png[/img] [/url] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=40062164] [img]http://www1.flightrising.com/dgen/dressing-room/dragon?did=40062164&skin=0&apparel=390,371,425,436,946,17902&xt=dressing.png[/img] [/url][/center] The air was stiff and tepid, and from this height, Palla could see the great pulsing of the land below. Strewn about on the fleshy ground were piles of carrion and waste, the remainders of those who had lived the land in an earlier time. her heart beat faster. There had never been any place so different from the home she had left behind. Palla heard a creak, and soon Pennar was at her side. Her brother was staring at the land around them in abject disgust. He was wrapped in a blanket, and he looked as though he had just woken up. "I thought you said you'd steer us out of the scarred wasteland." Pennar complained. "Everything about this place from the view to the stench makes me sick to my stomach." "I like it here." Palla shot back. "But I thought this journey was about seeing new things and having new experiences. We've been here for the past two weeks." Pennar pointed out. "It's also about stepping out of our comfort zones." Palla argued, though she couldn't help but feel she had just stepped into hers. Here she could truly see what she was made of. Here she could take risks and seek adventure, and live a life outside of the boring string of celebrations and peaceful walk through the gardens. It had seemed to her like Oriel had never let her or Pennar do anything exciting or remotely dangerous. "Fine. Just promise me that we can see some other things soon." Pennar sighed. "Of course." Palla said halfheartedly, suddenly distracted by the vast expanse that was appearing on the horizon. They had just reached the Wyrmwound. "Do you want to go down and get a closer look?" "Not really." Pennar shifted his weight to take a step back from the edge of the ship, but didn't protest further. Palla was too far gone to be reasoned with, and she was staring too intently at her goal to notice the flicker of fear in her brother's eyes as he looked at her. [center][img]https://orig00.deviantart.net/e0bf/f/2018/247/7/5/divider_by_cas_a_fras-dcm237t.png[/img][/center] [center][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=28254965] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/282550/28254965_350.png[/img] [/url][/center] Dremasul was regretting his decision to travel through the Scarred Wasteland. There were better ways to reach the Windswept Plateau from the Starfall Isles, ways that didn't involve death and destruction. he had seen enough of that in his lifetime. He tried to push away the guilt that gnawed at him every time he saw the corpse of another dragon, but despite his efforts, it remained a constant presence. He was free, for the first time since his first life. Reanimated by [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=26129344]a necromancer[/url] who had only given him half his soul, Dremasul had spent the last several years of his existence in a half life, becoming the personal hitman for the dragon who held half of his soul captive. The more he lived, and made connections, the more Idwallon had to hold over him, and when Dremasul's wind home had been destroyed, he had nowhere else to turn. With Dremasul's help, he had risen to power and taken over the arcane clan in which the two had lived. By some fluke, Dremasul's other half of his soul was released when Id had been taken down by a clanmate. He was whole again for the first time in a long long time, and with nothing left to tie him to the arcane clan, he fled before anyone could turn on him and punish him for his own crimes within the clan. Dremasul, knowing better than to look a second chance in the mouth, had decided to return to wind, to see if he could find any remainder of the clan he once lived in. If anyone, even his ex-mate, had escaped the destruction that befell it, he had to know. But he hadn't realized how sturdy being only half alive had made him. He'd had to eat less, and he could go further without resting. He was tiring out more quickly, and he was beginning to doubt he would make it out of the plaguelands alive. That was when he saw him. The wasteland was full of bodies in varying stages of decay, but from all of his practice soul-catching for Id, he could tell the wildclaw lying unconscious a several feet away still had the spark of life in him. [center][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=40036092] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/400361/40036092_350.png[/img] [/url][/center] Dremasul raced over to the young wildclaw's side. He looked greatly dehydrated, and he had a few talon marks that looked to be infected. It looked as though he didn't have long left. Removing some of the trinkets and fabric that coated his body, Dramsul began tending to the wounds, and poured some water from his own drinking skin into the young wildclaw's mouth. For so long, he had been stealing souls and tearing family's apart. He could never repay what he had taken, but if he had a second chance at life, he was going to o his best to atone for what he had done to achieve it. Dremasul spent days looking after his new ward, leaving only to hunt and to find fresh sources of water. On the dawn of the fourth day, his patient blinked open his eyes to reveal their deep, oceanic blue. He had done it. He had saved a life, for the first time in a long, long time... ----- [center][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2383572/7#post_32699503]Next[/url][/center] ----- @CleverDual @Alwaid @zzzhorses @Skyeset @ScrivenerRook @Kizzan @clarax @lilastar @tigressRising @Disillusionist ----- Introducing Dremasul!!! This boy of mine used to be a member of my clan, until I gave him away to @Aven in a lair purge to continue some shared lore between Dremasul and their Idwallon. I am excited to have him return, because he has always been one of my favourite dragons and I'm glad to get another chance to explore him deeper and grow his character! I'm now back from my two week hiatus while I was traveling with family, so updates should be somewhat regularly again! I'm excited to continue this arc, though I don't think it's going to meet the deadline I had initially set so certain things are going to be happening later than I would have hoped. But that's okay, my lore and the way I run by clan is now more driven by the story than the other way around, so i am happy to wait to do certain things. Also, now I finally get to show you Pyrite fullly dressed!


Chapter 18: The Plaguelands



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The air was stiff and tepid, and from this height, Palla could see the great pulsing of the land below. Strewn about on the fleshy ground were piles of carrion and waste, the remainders of those who had lived the land in an earlier time. her heart beat faster. There had never been any place so different from the home she had left behind.

Palla heard a creak, and soon Pennar was at her side. Her brother was staring at the land around them in abject disgust. He was wrapped in a blanket, and he looked as though he had just woken up.

"I thought you said you'd steer us out of the scarred wasteland." Pennar complained. "Everything about this place from the view to the stench makes me sick to my stomach."

"I like it here." Palla shot back.

"But I thought this journey was about seeing new things and having new experiences. We've been here for the past two weeks." Pennar pointed out.

"It's also about stepping out of our comfort zones." Palla argued, though she couldn't help but feel she had just stepped into hers. Here she could truly see what she was made of. Here she could take risks and seek adventure, and live a life outside of the boring string of celebrations and peaceful walk through the gardens. It had seemed to her like Oriel had never let her or Pennar do anything exciting or remotely dangerous.

"Fine. Just promise me that we can see some other things soon." Pennar sighed.

"Of course." Palla said halfheartedly, suddenly distracted by the vast expanse that was appearing on the horizon. They had just reached the Wyrmwound. "Do you want to go down and get a closer look?"

"Not really." Pennar shifted his weight to take a step back from the edge of the ship, but didn't protest further. Palla was too far gone to be reasoned with, and she was staring too intently at her goal to notice the flicker of fear in her brother's eyes as he looked at her.

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Dremasul was regretting his decision to travel through the Scarred Wasteland. There were better ways to reach the Windswept Plateau from the Starfall Isles, ways that didn't involve death and destruction. he had seen enough of that in his lifetime. He tried to push away the guilt that gnawed at him every time he saw the corpse of another dragon, but despite his efforts, it remained a constant presence.

He was free, for the first time since his first life. Reanimated by a necromancer who had only given him half his soul, Dremasul had spent the last several years of his existence in a half life, becoming the personal hitman for the dragon who held half of his soul captive. The more he lived, and made connections, the more Idwallon had to hold over him, and when Dremasul's wind home had been destroyed, he had nowhere else to turn. With Dremasul's help, he had risen to power and taken over the arcane clan in which the two had lived.

By some fluke, Dremasul's other half of his soul was released when Id had been taken down by a clanmate. He was whole again for the first time in a long long time, and with nothing left to tie him to the arcane clan, he fled before anyone could turn on him and punish him for his own crimes within the clan.

Dremasul, knowing better than to look a second chance in the mouth, had decided to return to wind, to see if he could find any remainder of the clan he once lived in. If anyone, even his ex-mate, had escaped the destruction that befell it, he had to know. But he hadn't realized how sturdy being only half alive had made him. He'd had to eat less, and he could go further without resting. He was tiring out more quickly, and he was beginning to doubt he would make it out of the plaguelands alive.

That was when he saw him. The wasteland was full of bodies in varying stages of decay, but from all of his practice soul-catching for Id, he could tell the wildclaw lying unconscious a several feet away still had the spark of life in him.

Dremasul raced over to the young wildclaw's side. He looked greatly dehydrated, and he had a few talon marks that looked to be infected. It looked as though he didn't have long left.

Removing some of the trinkets and fabric that coated his body, Dramsul began tending to the wounds, and poured some water from his own drinking skin into the young wildclaw's mouth. For so long, he had been stealing souls and tearing family's apart. He could never repay what he had taken, but if he had a second chance at life, he was going to o his best to atone for what he had done to achieve it.

Dremasul spent days looking after his new ward, leaving only to hunt and to find fresh sources of water. On the dawn of the fourth day, his patient blinked open his eyes to reveal their deep, oceanic blue. He had done it. He had saved a life, for the first time in a long, long time...

@CleverDual @Alwaid @zzzhorses @Skyeset @ScrivenerRook @Kizzan @clarax @lilastar @tigressRising @Disillusionist
Introducing Dremasul!!! This boy of mine used to be a member of my clan, until I gave him away to @Aven in a lair purge to continue some shared lore between Dremasul and their Idwallon. I am excited to have him return, because he has always been one of my favourite dragons and I'm glad to get another chance to explore him deeper and grow his character!

I'm now back from my two week hiatus while I was traveling with family, so updates should be somewhat regularly again! I'm excited to continue this arc, though I don't think it's going to meet the deadline I had initially set so certain things are going to be happening later than I would have hoped. But that's okay, my lore and the way I run by clan is now more driven by the story than the other way around, so i am happy to wait to do certain things.

Also, now I finally get to show you Pyrite fullly dressed!
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