@crowworm
I really liked his lore! It was short but still engaging, and left me interested in learning about him. It seems like he might be trying to put on a false sense fof cheerfulness,, the way he left so abruptly makes me think whatever he saw wasn't pleasant.
Next: [s]why are the only dragons I write about my fandragons[/s] What about them?
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crowworm
I really liked his lore! It was short but still engaging, and left me interested in learning about him. It seems like he might be trying to put on a false sense fof cheerfulness,, the way he left so abruptly makes me think whatever he saw wasn't pleasant.
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why are the only dragons I write about my fandragons What about them?
[center]@Vulcanatus
To me, this dragon of yours is extremely mysterious! Not much appears to be known about them, and I'm already wondering what might happen next with them! They seem shady, like they might have committed a horrible crime... and they don't seem too emotional about it, either.
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I hope her lore looks okay. She's the oldest dragon in my lair. (2 years!)[/center]
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Vulcanatus
To me, this dragon of yours is extremely mysterious! Not much appears to be known about them, and I'm already wondering what might happen next with them! They seem shady, like they might have committed a horrible crime... and they don't seem too emotional about it, either.
I hope her lore looks okay. She's the oldest dragon in my lair. (2 years!)
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@LunaflareMoon
I found Goldy's lore very interesting,, the way you used the wolf cape to show that she actually looked like a wolf was nice! I can totally feel how she would want to get revenge for judging her for looking different,,
NP: I just finished writing Nightingale's [ pretty bad ] lore, any thoughts?
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I found Goldy's lore very interesting,, the way you used the wolf cape to show that she actually looked like a wolf was nice! I can totally feel how she would want to get revenge for judging her for looking different,,
NP: I just finished writing Nightingale's [ pretty bad ] lore, any thoughts?
@Shiningbreeze
That is a sad, and easily relatable story. Sometimes it is hard to cope with the loss. Musics may help, but without a guidance, it just won't work. I think that Nightingale lowkey blames his sister's disappearance on himself, such kind of thing happens easily in this situation.
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To the next person: can you read Kaleyard's bio? You don't have to read the featured stories.
(while I would like to share [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=42996&did=1289267]Lo[/url][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=42996&tab=dragon&did=19404076]ren[/url] instead, but their stories are long and confusing.)
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Shiningbreeze
That is a sad, and easily relatable story. Sometimes it is hard to cope with the loss. Musics may help, but without a guidance, it just won't work. I think that Nightingale lowkey blames his sister's disappearance on himself, such kind of thing happens easily in this situation.
To the next person: can you read Kaleyard's bio? You don't have to read the featured stories.
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Loren instead, but their stories are long and confusing.)
@BrassicaOracle
I love Kalyard's character, and how everything from his looks to his powers have an almost 'yin and yang' aspect to it. I'm curious about the dragon himself and what he acts like outside of work! Also, that bit about him researching Emperors is intriguing...that could make for a good, creepy story in the future ;D
For the next person, here's my newest lore babe :D Her bio could probably use some fleshing out, and constructive criticism is welcome.
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BrassicaOracle
I love Kalyard's character, and how everything from his looks to his powers have an almost 'yin and yang' aspect to it. I'm curious about the dragon himself and what he acts like outside of work! Also, that bit about him researching Emperors is intriguing...that could make for a good, creepy story in the future ;D
For the next person, here's my newest lore babe :D Her bio could probably use some fleshing out, and constructive criticism is welcome.
@ClanHeartsgleam, this was very lovely to read. I work in a nursing home taking care of Alzheimer’s and dementia patients, so this Dragons story rings true for me. I will admit that I didn’t notice the Mortician/Undertaker under her name initially, and was slightly confused as to what her job was in the first paragraph, but got it on the second for sure. Then I noticed the job title, lol. I love the little details about her scent as well, as I felt it added that extra touch of her being a real character. Great job!
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ClanHeartsgleam, this was very lovely to read. I work in a nursing home taking care of Alzheimer’s and dementia patients, so this Dragons story rings true for me. I will admit that I didn’t notice the Mortician/Undertaker under her name initially, and was slightly confused as to what her job was in the first paragraph, but got it on the second for sure. Then I noticed the job title, lol. I love the little details about her scent as well, as I felt it added that extra touch of her being a real character. Great job!
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@Claire
Ooo this is good. It's short but exceptionally written. I love the biblical language, it honestly sounds like the blurb of a book. I want to see more! Thematic and a pretty spooky idea. I like it a lot :)
Could you read Uvie's, next person? :3
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Claire
Ooo this is good. It's short but exceptionally written. I love the biblical language, it honestly sounds like the blurb of a book. I want to see more! Thematic and a pretty spooky idea. I like it a lot :)
Could you read Uvie's, next person? :3
@MurkyDepths
Uvie has such an interesting story. The way you lead to her becoming enchanted by [i]him[/i] and becoming more and more involved in [i]his[/i] world was marvelous. You made it pretty clear that there was going to be a downfall to this drunken state of bliss and ignorance, and it made me hold on to every world to see how she fell and what would happen to her. How you ended it was also really smart. Showing that she was still working on recovering but was in no way broken or accepting pity was amazing. Overall I really liked it!
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Here's Lecia for the next person!
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MurkyDepths
Uvie has such an interesting story. The way you lead to her becoming enchanted by
him and becoming more and more involved in
his world was marvelous. You made it pretty clear that there was going to be a downfall to this drunken state of bliss and ignorance, and it made me hold on to every world to see how she fell and what would happen to her. How you ended it was also really smart. Showing that she was still working on recovering but was in no way broken or accepting pity was amazing. Overall I really liked it!
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Here's Lecia for the next person!
@Ipepi
Lecia is a real tragic hero, the fact that she is perceptive enough to see [i]something[/i] yet altruistic enough to believe the best in people. I hope that precious girl doesn’t get too overwhelmed with all the bad in the world!
Here’s my boy Diablerie for the next person!
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Ipepi
Lecia is a real tragic hero, the fact that she is perceptive enough to see
something yet altruistic enough to believe the best in people. I hope that precious girl doesn’t get too overwhelmed with all the bad in the world!
Here’s my boy Diablerie for the next person!
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@FelinaeFatale
It's not super long, but the first person perspective makes it feel really personal, kind of like a journal entry. I honestly feel really bad for this poor Fae, being ignored by his god despite trying so hard... But it's very motivating as well, how he chose to strike out on his own instead of being complacent in ignorance.
The last two lines gave me a chill, and that's really good! I can only hope the future is brighter for him.
Here is mine, for the next person:
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FelinaeFatale
It's not super long, but the first person perspective makes it feel really personal, kind of like a journal entry. I honestly feel really bad for this poor Fae, being ignored by his god despite trying so hard... But it's very motivating as well, how he chose to strike out on his own instead of being complacent in ignorance.
The last two lines gave me a chill, and that's really good! I can only hope the future is brighter for him.
Here is mine, for the next person:
