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@Keldi claim Next Person: You are free to hate me for the length of Zerobi's lore I'm still proud of her (:< [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=36665440] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/366655/36665440_350.png[/img] [/url]

@EgoLobster Love the lore! It was a fantastic read! Also love how you linked the Welder's Mask into her story! Wonderful job! [rule] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=40554535] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/405546/40554535_350.png[/img] [/url]

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@LostSketchbook
aaa tysm ^^; it took me roughly 8 hours to plot, draft, and revise (:

@LostSketchbook a bunch of things to touch on here, but first and foremost I love the premise! A dragon who never sought to be leader accidently becoming leader, and a good one at that. I also really like how you found a work around for a charge, considering that if a guardian is leader their charge can be exploited or damaging for clan welfare at times! She seems like a skilled dragon in general and has a good heart, I appreciate the simplistic style you wrote her lore in too (I see lots of lore in the form of stories in bios, but I like seeing more factual descriptions like mine as well!) I also really love how you developed her familiar as his own character along side her, rather than just part of her character. Amazing job! Here's my boy Serezha for the next person! Sorry for the length. [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=33762075] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/337621/33762075_350.png[/img] [/url]

@Redtiger7736 :o I love Mumford and Sons. And I have a character pretty much based on that song myself. Lemme just read this... But, you can thank Serezha for me. I've always wanted a beaver skull. Looks good on the mantle. And that birdskull looks pretty good on his head. Though a skull a day... I mean, I imagine those pile up quite a bit after a while. He's an interesting fellow, to be sure. Preoccupation with revenge aside, he seems pretty sane to me. Maybe a little socially awkward or something, not understanding conventional idioms and stuff. Too bad his mother didn't give him the more motherly motive behind her sending him away to another clan. I really hope that later on in his story (maybe after he defeats that evil ol' Ridgeback), he can go back to her and find out the rest of the story. In the meantime, I'm glad he's got Hellrise. They seem like a pleasant pair. One part-time maniacal skull-collector, and one peacemaker. Sounds like a lovely beginning for a story. ----- Here's my little buddy Cruor for the next person. Sorry it's a little long. :/ [center][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=26613152] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/266132/26613152_350.png[/img] [/url][/center]

@Almedha thank you!! That particular song fit very well for him tbh. I'm glad you like him though, he and Hellrise are one of my favorites! I haven't developed much of a relation with his mother (and sadly her lair is dead) but it would be interesting if he eventually got an explanation as to why he had to leave.

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@Babolink Oooh, I really like him as a character~ It would be great to see a expanded version about how he deals with the responsabilities and his wish to keep creating :3 Altought, I feel the large amount of names and lack of... "personality" from the narration takes away from the readig experience and makes it more like an extract from that one boring history book >.< Next person: I'm totally not biased but... [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=16410890] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/164109/16410890_350.png[/img] [/url]