THE
EVERWHITE CHRONICLES
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Hey guys! This is a thread for a book (series) that I'm writing, the Everwhite Chronicles! Well, yeah. I guess you can just read the first part of the first book, which is named Battle of Betrayal, here then, lol. The full book's not done yet (only part 1 is), but it's the second version of the third version of the original book. Yeah, I rewrote it many times.
Really honestly, I just want feedback. I don't know if the book is good or not as it is, and maybe you can't tell until it's longer, but oh well. I also don't know if this is the right forum, so please tell me if not...
And here's the long summary of the book:
In a world of large oceans and small islands, where the strong survive and the weak learn to bow down to those stronger than them or be killed, there is one power that reigns supreme. The Central Government took over hundreds of years ago, but no one force can rule everything. To this day, some lands, too inconsequential to the Government, or lands where the inhabitants are too strong to take over, stay free of Government rule. On Dawen Island, the biggest island in the world, where the Government HQ is located, there is such a place. They call it the Uncharted Land of Dawen Island. Here, two main forces live in secrecy. Anyone who passes their borders finds themselves healed, nourished and cared for until they are thrown into the colosseum- the place closest to Heaven. To fight to the death for the amusement of the King of Rockets- the King of a clan of men. Helios Everwhite, seventeen years old, finds himself stuck in such a battle and decides he doesn't like it. And so he kills the king and takes the throne for himself. He makes himself the ally of the second clan of the land- the Night Howlers, and their Queen, Arabesque- but doesn't show his face until two years later, when the Government is enacting a trade-off between themselves and a man named Zero for something called the Weather Staff- a weapon that controls the skies. Helios, two of his generals, Arabesque, and two other Night Howlers form a shaky alliance to steal the Staff. Join Helios, the Shade Elite and changeling, as he travels around Dawen Island, experiences capture, defeat, torture and love.
So, if you didn't want to read all that, in short; Four dudes and three gals set off on an adventure to steal a potentially mass-destructible weapon being sold to the govenment. Girls think the guys have ulterior motived, and they do. Yeah, that's about it.
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I also want to say that the name Everwhite and things to do with the name and my book was not meant to offend anyone or anything, and if it does so I am very sorry. Please remember that this is a work of fiction! Any relation to any persons places or things is entirely coincidental and is not associated whatsoever with them. If you don't like the story or anything I said, please just ignore this entirely. I don't appreciate hate, and I don't mean to cause it. No one is making you read this, so please stop if you don't want to.
