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[center][img]http://imgur.com/IiMnF0a.gif[/img] [size=4][b]thanks for your interest! if you'd still like some lore from me, i'll be happy to ping you when i open shop![/b][/size] Since I need more writing examples to fluff up my writing portfolio, I'm offering free lore blurbs (~100-200 words, give or take) for your dragons/OCs! [s]If it helps, I've been writing for another site for about 2 years, and have other works published. But that's neither here nor there :')[/s][/center] ----- [b]Just some quick things/rules:[/b] [LIST] [*]While they are free, I will be slightly picky with the dragons I choose to write for! If I feel like I can't do your dragon justice, [b]I have the right to decline your request.[b] [*]I also can't guarantee that I'll end up doing your lore! Things pop up, but I will let you know if this is the case. [*]I'm a very tired person, so please be patient with me! Turnaround times vary depending on my energy levels and general busyness. [*][b]If I write for you, you are allowing me to use the piece in my writing portfolio.[/b] Any identifying information will be removed. [/LIST] ----- [b]What I can do:[/b] [LIST] [*]Write from existing lore (preferred) [*]Write from scratch [s](I hope you don't mind your dragons being vain and arrogant)[/s] [*]Most styles: poetry, prose, whatever [/LIST] [b]What I [i]love[/i] to do:[/b] [LIST] [*]Rich, arrogant, vain dragons [*]Balls, masquerades, opulence in abundance [*]Pearls, champagne, caviar, lace, silk -- this general aesthetic [*]Musicians, particularly pianists and violinists [*]Sad dragons that like to wax philosophic / poetic where they can [*]Romance [/LIST] [b]What I won't do:[/b] [LIST] [*]Write a huge, huge bio (You can, however, bribe me if you so wish) [*]Stuff that perpetuates bigotry or hate [*]Things that make me uncomfortable (this will be exercised at my own discretion) [/LIST]
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thanks for your interest! if you'd still like some lore from me, i'll be happy to ping you when i open shop!

Since I need more writing examples to fluff up my writing portfolio, I'm offering free lore blurbs (~100-200 words, give or take) for your dragons/OCs!

If it helps, I've been writing for another site for about 2 years, and have other works published. But that's neither here nor there :')



Just some quick things/rules:

  • While they are free, I will be slightly picky with the dragons I choose to write for! If I feel like I can't do your dragon justice, I have the right to decline your request.
  • I also can't guarantee that I'll end up doing your lore! Things pop up, but I will let you know if this is the case.
  • I'm a very tired person, so please be patient with me! Turnaround times vary depending on my energy levels and general busyness.
  • If I write for you, you are allowing me to use the piece in my writing portfolio. Any identifying information will be removed.



What I can do:

  • Write from existing lore (preferred)
  • Write from scratch (I hope you don't mind your dragons being vain and arrogant)
  • Most styles: poetry, prose, whatever

What I love to do:

  • Rich, arrogant, vain dragons
  • Balls, masquerades, opulence in abundance
  • Pearls, champagne, caviar, lace, silk -- this general aesthetic
  • Musicians, particularly pianists and violinists
  • Sad dragons that like to wax philosophic / poetic where they can
  • Romance

What I won't do:

  • Write a huge, huge bio (You can, however, bribe me if you so wish)
  • Stuff that perpetuates bigotry or hate
  • Things that make me uncomfortable (this will be exercised at my own discretion)
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toyhouse || medium || insp.
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[b][u]EXAMPLES[/b][/u] [b]From my own lair (my lair is a 1920s jazz club, for context):[/b][br][br] [columns][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=203342&tab=dragon&did=19821882][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/198219/19821882.png[/img][/url][nextcol][color=transparent]xxxx[/color][nextcol]He breathes in familiar smoke — stagnant, suspended over the heads of his content patrons like starless firmament. His velvet lungs feign to its toxins, helpless and stranded inside an arrogant hedonist. He cares not for his health, for the moment the spotlights dazzle him, he abandons himself to his own fantasies. With a saccharine, honeyed voice, he invites the audience to lose themselves in their own indulgences — reality cannot touch them here.[/columns] [br] [columns][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=203342&tab=dragon&did=18401587][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/184016/18401587.png[/img][/url][nextcol][color=transparent]xxxx[/color][nextcol]She takes a glance at her audience — dazed, astonished eyes tinged with an insidious reverie meet hers. Their attention did not waver from her, enraptured by such a piercing red in colourless context. She needn’t worry herself with pleasantries, for they know who she is. Her lips part and her words flow out of her. She knows what to say, taking the words in their souls and serenading them with what they want, or perhaps need, to hear.[/columns] [br] [columns][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=203342&tab=dragon&did=33246539][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/332466/33246539.png[/img][/url][nextcol][color=transparent]xxxx[/color][nextcol]Violin in hand, he steps out onto the stage, buzzed and alive. He moves with a certain swagger that seems natural for a man of such a pedigree as his; yet there was a certain languid quality to his gait, as if he floats above his patrons with ease, that betrays nothing but overconfidence. The audience cease their chatter when they spot him, and he acknowledges them with a nod. He takes his place and feels the heat of the spotlight, luring him, demanding excellence...[/columns] [br] [columns][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=203342&tab=dragon&did=32511062][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/325111/32511062.png[/img][/url][nextcol][color=transparent]xxxx[/color][nextcol]He sits at a table far from the golden lights of the stage. A half empty bottle of burgundy keeps him company as the cabaret begin. He lifts the lip of the bottle to his own and looks around him, noting how these glassy-eyed patrons rejoice so greatly at the spectacle unfolding on stage. He envies them -- foolish, empty people content and satisfied by frivolous entertainment. Part of him regrets funding the upkeep of the club, but where else would he go to abandon himself to distraction... [/columns][br] [b]Misc. dragons:[/b][br][br] [columns][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=84374&tab=dragon&did=3605151][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/36052/3605151.png[/img][/url][nextcol][color=transparent]xxxx[/color][nextcol]She moves around the vast hall with fluid and effortless strides, betraying nothing but a sense of confidence and awareness of her own excellence. She makes the effort to greet her guests, most of whom she did not know, exchanging pleasantries and compliments for a brief moment as fine hosts do. Certainly, all see her as an agreeable woman, one of the most esteemed in her clan; anyone should think themselves lucky to be invited to her lavish affairs. But one needn’t tell her this directly, for she knows her own worth — nobody who valued themselves poorly would live such an opulent life as she. (Dragon belongs to @Countercats)[/columns][br] [b]Other writings:[/b][br] [LIST] [*][url=https://medium.com/@ hedwig/33-1-3-bd3d40e1643]33 1/3 RPMs (A letter to Estelle)[/url] - A letter from one of my OCs to another. [*][url=https://medium.com/@ hedwig/salem-kaylune-npc-301a3f9efa2d]Salem (A Kaylune NPC)[/url] - This is an example of one of my longer bios! Salem is an NPC that belongs to [url=kaylune.com]Kaylune[/url] (the site I work for). [*][url=https://medium.com/@ hedwig/altair-kaylune-npc-540ced7335d5]Altair (A Kaylune NPC)[/url] - Another example of one of my longer bios! Altair is an NPC that belongs to [url=kaylune.com]Kaylune[/url]. [*][url=https://medium.com/@ hedwig/fiat-lux-55164f0a2b89]Fiat Lux[/url] - An example of my poetry! Warning for some religious connotations + general existential crisis stuff. [/LIST]
EXAMPLES

From my own lair (my lair is a 1920s jazz club, for context):


19821882.png xxxx He breathes in familiar smoke — stagnant, suspended over the heads of his content patrons like starless firmament. His velvet lungs feign to its toxins, helpless and stranded inside an arrogant hedonist. He cares not for his health, for the moment the spotlights dazzle him, he abandons himself to his own fantasies. With a saccharine, honeyed voice, he invites the audience to lose themselves in their own indulgences — reality cannot touch them here.

18401587.png xxxx She takes a glance at her audience — dazed, astonished eyes tinged with an insidious reverie meet hers. Their attention did not waver from her, enraptured by such a piercing red in colourless context. She needn’t worry herself with pleasantries, for they know who she is. Her lips part and her words flow out of her. She knows what to say, taking the words in their souls and serenading them with what they want, or perhaps need, to hear.

33246539.png xxxx Violin in hand, he steps out onto the stage, buzzed and alive. He moves with a certain swagger that seems natural for a man of such a pedigree as his; yet there was a certain languid quality to his gait, as if he floats above his patrons with ease, that betrays nothing but overconfidence. The audience cease their chatter when they spot him, and he acknowledges them with a nod. He takes his place and feels the heat of the spotlight, luring him, demanding excellence...

32511062.png xxxx He sits at a table far from the golden lights of the stage. A half empty bottle of burgundy keeps him company as the cabaret begin. He lifts the lip of the bottle to his own and looks around him, noting how these glassy-eyed patrons rejoice so greatly at the spectacle unfolding on stage. He envies them -- foolish, empty people content and satisfied by frivolous entertainment. Part of him regrets funding the upkeep of the club, but where else would he go to abandon himself to distraction...



Misc. dragons:


3605151.png xxxx She moves around the vast hall with fluid and effortless strides, betraying nothing but a sense of confidence and awareness of her own excellence. She makes the effort to greet her guests, most of whom she did not know, exchanging pleasantries and compliments for a brief moment as fine hosts do. Certainly, all see her as an agreeable woman, one of the most esteemed in her clan; anyone should think themselves lucky to be invited to her lavish affairs. But one needn’t tell her this directly, for she knows her own worth — nobody who valued themselves poorly would live such an opulent life as she. (Dragon belongs to @Countercats)



Other writings:

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bury me in burgundy, i just don't care.

toyhouse || medium || insp.
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[b][u]FORM[/u][/b] Interested? Please [b]ping me[/b] and fill this out! c: [b]Dragon/OC link:[/b] A link to your dragon or OC! [b]Does your dragon have existing lore?[/b] Yes/No [b]If yes, what lore does it have?[/b] You can just tell me to check its bio. [b]If no, what ideas do you have for this dragon?[/b] You're welcome to be as vague or as specific as you want! You can also just tell me to write what I want, but I warn you that your dragon will most likely have a huge, huge ego. [b]Notes:[/b] Anything else you'd like me to know/do i.e. a specific style, point of view (I default to third person, but can do first/second), something you'd like me to emulate etc. [b]Do you agree with my rules in the first post?[/b] Yes/No [b]Any song recommendations?[/b] I'm looking for new music :') Feel free to skip this! [code] @Rochambeau [b]Dragon/OC link:[/b] A link to your dragon or OC! [b]Does your dragon have existing lore?[/b] Yes/No [b]If yes, what lore does it have?[/b] You can just tell me to check its bio. [b]If no, what ideas do you have for this dragon?[/b] You're welcome to be as vague or as specific as you want! You can also just tell me to write what I want, but I warn you that your dragon will most likely have a huge, huge ego. [b]Notes:[/b] Anything else you'd like me to know/do i.e. a specific style, point of view (I default to third person, but can do first/second), something you'd like me to emulate etc. [b]Do you agree with my rules in the first post?[/b] Yes/No [b]Any song recommendations?[/b] I'm looking for new music :') Feel free to skip this![/code] If you'd [i]really[/i] like a longer bio (like my examples), feel free to ask! Alternatively, I'd happily accept art for longer pieces n _ n And, of course, tips are greatly appreciated :')
FORM

Interested? Please ping me and fill this out! c:

Dragon/OC link: A link to your dragon or OC!
Does your dragon have existing lore? Yes/No
If yes, what lore does it have? You can just tell me to check its bio.
If no, what ideas do you have for this dragon? You're welcome to be as vague or as specific as you want! You can also just tell me to write what I want, but I warn you that your dragon will most likely have a huge, huge ego.
Notes: Anything else you'd like me to know/do i.e. a specific style, point of view (I default to third person, but can do first/second), something you'd like me to emulate etc.
Do you agree with my rules in the first post? Yes/No
Any song recommendations? I'm looking for new music :') Feel free to skip this!

Code:
@Rochambeau [b]Dragon/OC link:[/b] A link to your dragon or OC! [b]Does your dragon have existing lore?[/b] Yes/No [b]If yes, what lore does it have?[/b] You can just tell me to check its bio. [b]If no, what ideas do you have for this dragon?[/b] You're welcome to be as vague or as specific as you want! You can also just tell me to write what I want, but I warn you that your dragon will most likely have a huge, huge ego. [b]Notes:[/b] Anything else you'd like me to know/do i.e. a specific style, point of view (I default to third person, but can do first/second), something you'd like me to emulate etc. [b]Do you agree with my rules in the first post?[/b] Yes/No [b]Any song recommendations?[/b] I'm looking for new music :') Feel free to skip this!

If you'd really like a longer bio (like my examples), feel free to ask! Alternatively, I'd happily accept art for longer pieces n _ n

And, of course, tips are greatly appreciated :')
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bury me in burgundy, i just don't care.

toyhouse || medium || insp.
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[center][img]http://i.imgur.com/5V01jh3.gif[/img] if you like Great Comet (or musicals in general) we'll be great friends[/center] ----- [b]REQUESTS:[/b][br] [LIST] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/2#post_28901794]Knifedad[/url] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/2#post_28903951]Destemona[/url] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/3#post_28910362]Rave31[/url] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/3#post_28914180]CHINCHINLOVER[/url] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/4#post_28918143]DeathSpecter[/url] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/4#post_28940602]Gowenna[/url] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/4#post_28943462]SucculentPrince[/url] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/4#post_28944275]zzzhorses[/url] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/5#post_28947416]Ellapinky[/url] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/5#post_28949893]Bluebird88[/url] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/5#post_28951192]Joying[/url] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/6#post_28957002]aerieyena[/url] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/6#post_28981678]SkullLotus[/url] [/LIST] [b]FINISHED:[/b][br] [LIST] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/2#post_28896742]Howlerwolf[/url] - [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/3#post_28909667]x[/url] || [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/3#post_28916912]x[/url] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/2#post_28897504]SamIamLuvDov[/url] - [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/4#post_28917168]x[/url] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/2#post_28900252]Sebaschan[/url] - [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/6#post_28952398]x[/url] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/3#post_28911582]Paxportal27[/url] - [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/6#post_28985019]x[/url] [*][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/2#post_28901129]Tala2121[/url] - [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2256956/6#post_28985019]x[/url] [/LIST]
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if you like Great Comet (or musicals in general) we'll be great friends



REQUESTS:


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bury me in burgundy, i just don't care.

toyhouse || medium || insp.
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@Rochambeau can we post yet?
@Rochambeau can we post yet?
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@Rochambeau I just bought Rin not too long ago; I'm not quite sure what to do for her (or even if I'll keep her current apparel) and I've considered making her a messenger, but I'm still floundering about for a role for her. Anyway, if an idea strikes you I'd love to get a lore blurb for her! Thanks in advance! [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=34551927] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/345520/34551927_350.png[/img] [/url] (hopefully I'm not posting too soon, ha ha whoops, I'll delete this post if so)
@Rochambeau

I just bought Rin not too long ago; I'm not quite sure what to do for her (or even if I'll keep her current apparel) and I've considered making her a messenger, but I'm still floundering about for a role for her. Anyway, if an idea strikes you I'd love to get a lore blurb for her! Thanks in advance!

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(hopefully I'm not posting too soon, ha ha whoops, I'll delete this post if so)

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they/any
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@Rochambeau I would absolutely love it if you write a blurb for Callisto here! :) Rich, opulent, egotistical dragons are far and few between in my lair, but Callisto is the exception to this rule. I picked him for the lore blurb, since I am aware that you enjoy writing bios for the poshest of lore dragons. [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=23806800] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/238069/23806800_350.png[/img] [/url] He does not have a full bio yet, but the gist of the ideas that I have for him is this: [i]While I don't have much typed up for his personality and interests yet (he's currently a very underdeveloped character at the moment) the core of the ideas that I've got for him is that he is a elegant and resourceful, but also narcissistic and elitist astrophysicist and astronomer. While he is revered for his cleverness and ingenuity, he is also a dragon to be wary of. Many visitors to his centre recall his shocking acts of snobbery and narcissism, going so far as to halt Tundras from attending his lectures because 'they are the foil-brained lowlings of the dragon world!'[/i]
@Rochambeau
I would absolutely love it if you write a blurb for Callisto here! :) Rich, opulent, egotistical dragons are far and few between in my lair, but Callisto is the exception to this rule. I picked him for the lore blurb, since I am aware that you enjoy writing bios for the poshest of lore dragons.

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He does not have a full bio yet, but the gist of the ideas that I have for him is this:

While I don't have much typed up for his personality and interests yet (he's currently a very underdeveloped character at the moment) the core of the ideas that I've got for him is that he is a elegant and resourceful, but also narcissistic and elitist astrophysicist and astronomer. While he is revered for his cleverness and ingenuity, he is also a dragon to be wary of. Many visitors to his centre recall his shocking acts of snobbery and narcissism, going so far as to halt Tundras from attending his lectures because 'they are the foil-brained lowlings of the dragon world!'
Quetzal - 22 - Any Pronouns - Autistic - GLaDOS fan- Sci-Fi Artist and Writer
@Rave31 @Tala2121 @QuetzalQueen

Posting's fine! :o I was just editing my reserves n _ n! When you're able, please fill out the form and I'll get back to you ASAP!
@Rave31 @Tala2121 @QuetzalQueen

Posting's fine! :o I was just editing my reserves n _ n! When you're able, please fill out the form and I'll get back to you ASAP!
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bury me in burgundy, i just don't care.

toyhouse || medium || insp.
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Do you think you'd want to do a little something for these two spookers?? BBCode: [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=35003322] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/350034/35003322_350.png[/img] [/url] BBCode: [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=35003324] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/350034/35003324_350.png[/img] [/url] They're brother and sister and very involved in witchcraft
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@Rochambeau what would happen if I told you that I wanted you to do one for my unnamed shadow male noc and the theme would be like he betrayed shadow and decided to become a double agent for shadow?
@Rochambeau what would happen if I told you that I wanted you to do one for my unnamed shadow male noc and the theme would be like he betrayed shadow and decided to become a double agent for shadow?
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