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FriendlyUser wrote on 2023-08-25 09:22:44:
@/Healoe, that was beautiful, I loved what you wrote! I was trying to read slowly to savor every bit of it. The drama and the bonus ending made it such an interesting back story. Makes me want to do an animation XD. Poor Imogen, luckily Fuli will take great care of them. I'll send the rest of the payment now!
KursedCurtain wrote on 2023-08-30 06:58:36:
@/Healoe oh this was a lovely read! I might have to draw some of this sometime haha!
Such an interesting way of putting the story into fr lore :3 such a lovely little adventurous spirit, I care this lovely line lol
(And the narrator is,, an owl? I love that!)
I might have to comm you again sometime! Maybe after the fest, haha!
FriendlyUser wrote on 2023-08-31 08:31:54:
@/Healoe ,
You welcome!! I honestly wouldn’t mind if my whole lair was filled with your writing XD.
Personally as someone who adores and loves reading I have so much respect for those who can write. I’ve definitely tried, but I never get to finish it because I run into problems//loose motivation//think of a new story- I just struggle concentrating on one thing. :,)
Your lore is really cool to read, it’s unique! So I would be extremely surprised if no one wanted any.
I can’t agree more about how much art forums there are, it’s really overwhelming. I’ve wanted to start my own art shop but I’ve been extremely hesitant. I’ve wanted to do something a little different, like where I use my realism style to draw people’s pets! I just feel more comfortable with doing that. But I just don’t know how many people will order any art. I also have no idea how to price my art. Lol.
XxCalypsoxX wrote on 2023-09-02 20:12:06:
@/Healoe
Thank you for the ping!!! the first one got lost D;
sending payment now, thank you so much for the awesome lore! I love how you wrote each of the pieces <3
edit: also yes please, feel free to show them off! :D
moriougai wrote on 2023-09-02 23:04:31:
@/Healoe woah i actually wasn't expecting you to like, bring in other dragons from the clan :0 that's so epic! i love it so much! and it's totally okay to showcase her in your examples post, thank you so much for this!
moriougai wrote on 2023-09-04 05:42:42:
@/Healoe thank you for the epic lore! sending payment soon :>
SairentoTsuki wrote on 2023-09-05 23:55:55:
@/Healoe
SO SORRY for the late reply I read this during rollover so I completely forgot to reply,,, but thank you so much !! I never considered them to be dancers but I think it's a rlly cute idea...
But yeah it doesn't really fit Winter and Tundra so I'd love if you changed it to a fictional dragon!
Edit: feel free to showcase!
FriendlyUser wrote on 2023-09-06 17:10:11:
@/Healoe ,
This is awesome! It makes me want to read the mythical codex XD I feel like this definitely represents Fuli, she would be a great explorer!
Take your time on the coded version though!
I really appreciate your effort on the first one and this one, both are absolutely amazing. Makes me smile every time I read it (Mainly because your writing inspires me a ton, but I also love it when Fuli finds Imogen and they become friends! Personally agree it's one of the best friendships. C: ) Don't forget to take your payment in Crossroads!
I also don't mind at all that it was a little shorter, it was still amazing! Made me smile so big jdroiejjfireo
BirdyDraws wrote on 2023-09-08 09:57:22:
@/Healoe
Aggg I absolutely LOVE it!<33
And ofcourse you may showcase her as an example^v^
XxCalypsoxX wrote on 2023-09-09 09:40:14:
@/Healoe
Thank you so much! This is such a cute lore you did for them:)
Chaosdragoness wrote on 2023-09-09 10:51:34:
@/Healoe
So sorry for the late response! I posted right before I went to bed lol
Thank you so much for accepting and let me know when to send payment!
As for updates and when, I had meant to be a little clearer but tired brain last night lol. I had just meant to let me know when you started or if any complications arose ^^ if you can get it done by the 12th then wonderful, but as I said, there is absolutely no rush so please take your time if you need to!
Thank you again!
moriougai wrote on 2023-09-10 20:49:39:
@/Healoe oh this is BEAUTIFUL and so much more than i thought i would get!! i love it!! will definitely keep coming back to you for more lore <3 and you're welcome to use iona as an example too!
FunnyBBones wrote on 2023-09-11 16:00:25:
@/Healoe
Thank you so much I love it. I will be ordering from you again at some time.
The Story has been added to Akeira's bio if you wish to showcase it :)
Chaosdragoness wrote on 2023-09-12 10:01:37:
@/Healoe
AHHH
This is absolutely amazing! I love this so much, they have such sweet and cute interactions in their povs ^^
Thank you so much for doing this and absolutely you may use them as an example! I also will definitely come back at some point if you're still going
Edit: Sent payment in CR!
Chaosdragoness wrote on 2023-09-12 10:40:13:
Ahhhhhh
I'm so sorry for the multiple replies/edits
I did change just some very minor things, mainly just clearing up that Shale is the one who runs the clan and not King. He's in his retirement days, but is very much the one that brings in everyone to the island of misfit toys hahah
Jekra wrote on 2023-09-13 09:26:29:
I HAD THE BIGGEST GRIN ON MY FACE READING THAT IT'S SO SWEET <3
I love that so much thank you!! You can put him on your lore showcase him that's all cool :]
Liesmith wrote on 2023-09-14 21:07:11:
@/Healoe Hello and thank you so much! Ahhhh, you wrote so much more than I expected - I genuinely love it, I can't wait to format this in Wicket and Bough's profiles. Q^Q!!! Please do feel absolutely free to showcase them wherever you would like! <3 And I'll send over some baldwin mats and gems ASAP ^_^
I really love the story that you wrote - it fits both their themes and also the general themes of the snowsquall tundra that I try to work into my lair so well (which I didn't even mention in my prompt, so I feel extra appreciative of this!!) <3 And I love the contrast of their POVs, including the daily entry style of Bough's. Genuinely wonderful!!
(The only edit I made is that I decided last minute that they are both going to be ladies, so I just changed Wicket's pronouns!)
StarsAndMoon wrote on 2023-09-15 10:35:39:
@/Healoe Awesome!! i love how they turned out, delightfully imposing and eerie :D I absolutely don’t mind them being in the Lore Showcase, and I’ll get payment sent over now.
Hazelgem wrote on 2023-09-16 21:05:42:
Aaaa I love it! <333 It’s amazing! Your writing is so nice to read! Would it be alright if I edit some of the words and sentences so it matches the dragon a little more? And yes you can show the writing in in your showcase post :D
FL1GHT0F87 wrote on 2023-09-19 05:25:11:
@/Healoe
Sorry for the late response, I wanted to wait until you were done. Yes, you may showcase it.
Jekra wrote on 2023-09-19 06:42:30:
AHAHRAGRHRHAGHR I LOVE THAT SO MUCH THAT'S SO SILLY
That's absolutely perfect, you are so good at bringing these little thoughts I had to life tysm !!!!!!!!!!!
Edit: Yeah you can put him up on the showcase too!! That's cool :D
Noonchi wrote on 2023-09-19 09:38:24:
@/Healoe
Wow I love it!!!! especially how you included her snip of an interaction I included.
Thank you so much and you can absolutely add her to your showcase :>
edit; btw if you're ever in the market for lore or wanting to do a lore trade lmk!
winterleaves11 wrote on 2023-09-21 16:21:20:
[copied and pasted from crossroads messages]
thank you for the lore!! it may take a bit for me to put it in her bio, but feel free to display fauna on your page. i hope this payment will suffice!!
FriendlyUser wrote on 2023-09-24 11:05:14:
@/Healoe , both stories are perfect!! XD Mix of light and darkness.
Kune's ending was chef kiss, I can now imagine Fuli being extremely annoying in a funny way <33
Skyion's story was very interesting. His pursuit to end Imogen for being an outcast and him ending up being an outcast?!!!1! Love that ending as well ^^
FunnyBBones wrote on 2023-09-24 16:56:18:
@/Healoe
Sorry for the late reply but I god dam love the story and of course you can you them as an example :D I will be back for more.
Chaosdragoness wrote on 2023-09-25 05:25:53:
Once again you did an amazing job, it fits him perfectly! I especially love that you added a bit more to Alun and Belial's relationship ^^
Thank you once again for the wonderful lore!
orcats wrote on 2023-09-26 10:35:21:
@/Healoe
tyty it turned out great! :D feel free to use them for the showcase!
Jekra wrote on 2023-09-27 05:50:30:
THAT TURNED OUT WONDERFUL TYSM!!!
FunnyBBones wrote on 2023-09-28 22:06:24:
@/Healoe Once again you did a great god and I love it. As always feel free to use it as a example :) I will be back someday.
NikTheBug wrote on 2023-09-29 04:21:59:
@/Healoe
Oh I absolutely ADORE what you've written! The only things I'll really tweak will just be very small edits, your whole story will be still the same, because oh my god it's great!!
You are 100%okay to put it into the showcase too! Also if you do the update ping me again rq i dont mind pings!
Once again, the writing is great and once i get the time I'll manage to edit it into the bio!
ShinigamiGrimm wrote on 2023-10-02 08:44:39:
@/Healoe
This... These! These stories are amazing! I truly am in absolute awe of what you've managed to come up with! These are wonderful! You have an amazing talent and I commend you for writing as much as you did. I love how you went with what little lore I already had and expanded it into a more in-depth storyline, and the many stories for Mac and Aqua are much appreciated <3
I'm not worried about how long it took! I understand from an artists and writers perspective that it takes time to create a masterpiece ^^
You're absolutely free to showcase them, and I would like to thank you again for such wonderful work! (I'll be sending another pm with a tip!)
FriendlyUser wrote on 2023-10-05 14:27:05:
@/Healoe , I'm glad that gave you a bit of a refresher! It's totally okay though, I ordered giving you time to complete it whenever! It could have been a month and I would have still been very grateful! :) I wish you the best of luck on exams! Hopefully, you got the score you were wishing for.
As always, your writing never ceases to inspire me! The story itself definitely gave off quite an eerie vibe, which is exactly what I was looking for! I can picture Cerys in agony, his condition slowly getting worse (which is quite interesting to depict- I'm not weird I promise XD I'm just in the spooky spirit! The spooky season is finally upon us WOO!!) Anyways- as I have said before, this would be a wonderful animation to construct, especially the part of Cerys entering the house. Ahhh!! I'm honestly really excited about this piece- it is so unique! On another note, I think including the Corroded Petal concept was super cool.. guess I'll have to start saving up for another order from you! I'm highly interested in that concept now XD. Thank you so so much for this amazing piece of writing! Hopefully, you won't get too overwhelmed with the writing, I wish you luck!
FunnyBBones wrote on 2023-10-07 00:44:15:
@/Healoe
omg I love it. Like always you did a really great job. I take a good break and burnout is a very real thing and when you open up again I'll be here to order more of your great story's :)
Let me know if you don't want your review to be here (because I added this way later on and I don't wanna get perms from so many people, or if you'd like to add any comments!