What, wrote Oakrest letters that will never be answered in lieu of diplomacy? lol I mean i guess we could. XD kinda one-sided tho
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What, wrote Oakrest letters that will never be answered in lieu of diplomacy? lol I mean i guess we could. XD kinda one-sided tho
Hey guys I have some more lore for you to criticize and a picture!
[quote name=Locale]Morrow Islands
General Information
This small grouping of islands is mostly unknown in the Sea of One Thousand Currents and its peculiar nature goes against most common sense. While the islands themselves never change, their position constantly shifts. It's an unpredictable jump that can happen at any time and can move them anywhere in the Sea. Most who find these islands stumble upon them.
Moirai island
A small island with a rocky coast, the majority of the clan resides near the Augury Cave, where the Whispering Stream bubbles from the earth, carrying it's forbidden knowledge. The stream empties into Moirai Cay, the only sandy shore on the island, and by the time it reaches the sea it's whispers have all but died away. Dragons make their dens by either carving out a lair in the rocky areas near the augury, or by constructing them out of the wood from the forest to the north.
[url]https://imgur.com/gallery/aDAcS[/url]
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Hey guys I have some more lore for you to criticize and a picture!
Locale wrote:
Morrow Islands
General Information
This small grouping of islands is mostly unknown in the Sea of One Thousand Currents and its peculiar nature goes against most common sense. While the islands themselves never change, their position constantly shifts. It's an unpredictable jump that can happen at any time and can move them anywhere in the Sea. Most who find these islands stumble upon them.
Moirai island
A small island with a rocky coast, the majority of the clan resides near the Augury Cave, where the Whispering Stream bubbles from the earth, carrying it's forbidden knowledge. The stream empties into Moirai Cay, the only sandy shore on the island, and by the time it reaches the sea it's whispers have all but died away. Dragons make their dens by either carving out a lair in the rocky areas near the augury, or by constructing them out of the wood from the forest to the north.
https://imgur.com/gallery/aDAcS
General Information
This small grouping of islands is mostly unknown in the Sea of One Thousand Currents and its peculiar nature goes against most common sense. While the islands themselves never change, their position constantly shifts. It's an unpredictable jump that can happen at any time and can move them anywhere in the Sea. Most who find these islands stumble upon them.
Moirai island
A small island with a rocky coast, the majority of the clan resides near the Augury Cave, where the Whispering Stream bubbles from the earth, carrying it's forbidden knowledge. The stream empties into Moirai Cay, the only sandy shore on the island, and by the time it reaches the sea it's whispers have all but died away. Dragons make their dens by either carving out a lair in the rocky areas near the augury, or by constructing them out of the wood from the forest to the north.
https://imgur.com/gallery/aDAcS
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Whisperingstream - Awesome! I love the map! :D
[quote name=Edits?][b]Morrow Islands[/b]
[i]General Information[/i]
This small grouping of islands is mostly unknown in the Sea of a Thousand Currents, and its peculiar nature goes against most common sense. While the islands themselves never change, their position constantly shifts. It's an unpredictable jump that can happen at any time and can move them anywhere in the Sea. Most who find these islands stumble upon them.
[b]Moirai Island[/b]
Moirai is a small island with a rocky coast. The Whispering Stream bubbles from the earth, carrying its forbidden knowledge out of the Augury Cave. The stream empties into Moirai Cay, the only sandy shore on the island, and by the time it reaches the sea, its whispers have all but died away. Dragons make their dens by either carving out a lair in the rocky areas near the Augury Cave or by constructing them out of wood from the forest to the north.
I would suggest imbedding the image if you can! On Imgur, click on the drop down next to Copy, then go to "get share links" and choose the BBCode option.
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Whisperingstream - Awesome! I love the map! :D
Edits? wrote:
Morrow Islands
General Information
This small grouping of islands is mostly unknown in the Sea of a Thousand Currents, and its peculiar nature goes against most common sense. While the islands themselves never change, their position constantly shifts. It's an unpredictable jump that can happen at any time and can move them anywhere in the Sea. Most who find these islands stumble upon them.
Moirai Island
Moirai is a small island with a rocky coast. The Whispering Stream bubbles from the earth, carrying its forbidden knowledge out of the Augury Cave. The stream empties into Moirai Cay, the only sandy shore on the island, and by the time it reaches the sea, its whispers have all but died away. Dragons make their dens by either carving out a lair in the rocky areas near the Augury Cave or by constructing them out of wood from the forest to the north.
I would suggest imbedding the image if you can! On Imgur, click on the drop down next to Copy, then go to "get share links" and choose the BBCode option.
General Information
This small grouping of islands is mostly unknown in the Sea of a Thousand Currents, and its peculiar nature goes against most common sense. While the islands themselves never change, their position constantly shifts. It's an unpredictable jump that can happen at any time and can move them anywhere in the Sea. Most who find these islands stumble upon them.
Moirai Island
Moirai is a small island with a rocky coast. The Whispering Stream bubbles from the earth, carrying its forbidden knowledge out of the Augury Cave. The stream empties into Moirai Cay, the only sandy shore on the island, and by the time it reaches the sea, its whispers have all but died away. Dragons make their dens by either carving out a lair in the rocky areas near the Augury Cave or by constructing them out of wood from the forest to the north.
I would suggest imbedding the image if you can! On Imgur, click on the drop down next to Copy, then go to "get share links" and choose the BBCode option.
stream - this may be nitpicky but... consider?
instead of
[quote]While the islands themselves never change, their position constantly shifts.[/quote]
try
[quote]While the islands themselves never change, their location constantly shifts.[/quote]
Position always reminds me of like ... rotation? Location is more the spacial placement of something in an area.
I definitely support putting a space between the two islands for readability sake.
Obviously take whatever suggestion we make only if you want to take it. Your voice is the important one in your own writing, so if you disagree with something suggested, that's cool, and you should do it how you want.
stream - this may be nitpicky but... consider?
instead of
try
Position always reminds me of like ... rotation? Location is more the spacial placement of something in an area.
I definitely support putting a space between the two islands for readability sake.
Obviously take whatever suggestion we make only if you want to take it. Your voice is the important one in your own writing, so if you disagree with something suggested, that's cool, and you should do it how you want.
instead of
Quote:
While the islands themselves never change, their position constantly shifts.
try
Quote:
While the islands themselves never change, their location constantly shifts.
Position always reminds me of like ... rotation? Location is more the spacial placement of something in an area.
I definitely support putting a space between the two islands for readability sake.
Obviously take whatever suggestion we make only if you want to take it. Your voice is the important one in your own writing, so if you disagree with something suggested, that's cool, and you should do it how you want.
Eulerian, if you ever wanted a list of descendants in my lair by generation rather than pairs...
[LIST]
[*]Brightwork's half-brother: [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=245141&tab=dragon&did=35210747]Softblaze[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=35210747][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/352108/35210747.png[/img][/url]
[*]Brightwork's brother Gabriel's children: [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=245141&tab=dragon&did=35478109]Beacon[/url], [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=245141&did=35478110]Balefire[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=35478109][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/354782/35478109.png[/img][/url][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=35478110][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/354782/35478110.png[/img][/url]
[*]Children: [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=245141&tab=dragon&did=25949430]Yew[/url], [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=245141&did=26703576]Ember[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=25949430][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/259495/25949430.png[/img][/url][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=26703576][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/267036/26703576.png[/img][/url]
[*]Grandchildren:
[indent][LIST]
[*]Eilif -> [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=245141&tab=dragon&did=32524332]Ena[/url], [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=245141&tab=dragon&did=34390730]Efika[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=32524332][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/325244/32524332.png[/img][/url][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=34390730][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/343908/34390730.png[/img][/url]
[*]Melchior -> [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=245141&tab=dragon&did=33420960]Nari[/url], [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=245141&tab=dragon&did=33420961]Iseul[/url], [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=245141&tab=dragon&did=33420962]Joon[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=33420960][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/334210/33420960.png[/img][/url][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=33420961][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/334210/33420961.png[/img][/url][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=33420962][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/334210/33420962.png[/img][/url]
[*]Hasina -> [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=245141&tab=dragon&did=33466547]Sablo[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=33466547][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/334666/33466547.png[/img][/url]
[*]Farine -> [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=245141&tab=dragon&did=33548381]Tavish[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=33548381][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/335484/33548381.png[/img][/url]
[*]Equinox -> [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=245141&tab=dragon&did=33810581]Solstice[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=33810581][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/338106/33810581.png[/img][/url]
[*]Sundance -> [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=245141&tab=dragon&did=34050491]Starweaver[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=34050491][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/340505/34050491.png[/img][/url]
[/LIST][/indent]
[*]Great-grandchildren:
[indent][LIST]
[*]Eilif -> Aeneas -> [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=245141&did=33499212]Sobek[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=33499212][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/334993/33499212.png[/img][/url]
[*]Eilif -> Ena -> [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=245141&tab=dragon&did=34508885]Ghalib[/url], [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=245141&did=34508887]Tanner[/url], [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=245141&did=34508888]Sayer[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=34508885][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/345089/34508885.png[/img][/url][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=34508887][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/345089/34508887.png[/img][/url][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=34508888][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/345089/34508888.png[/img][/url]
[*]Eilif -> Efika -> [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=245141&did=35920923]Sage[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=35920923][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/359210/35920923.png[/img][/url]
[*]Rosie -> Miller -> [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=245141&did=34444645]Nimble[/url], [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=245141&did=35866170]Alexi[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=34444645][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/344447/34444645.png[/img][/url][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=35866170][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/358662/35866170.png[/img][/url]
[/LIST][/indent]
[*]Great-great-grandchildren:
[indent][LIST]
[*]Eilif -> Ena -> Ghalib -> [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=245141&did=35080646]Amon[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=35080646][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/350807/35080646.png[/img][/url]
[*] Melchior -> Lilystitch -> Lirianthe -> [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=245141&tab=dragon&did=36149523]Tuff[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=36149523][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/361496/36149523.png[/img][/url]
[/LIST][/indent]
[*]Great-great-great-grandchildren:
[indent][LIST]
[*]Eilif -> Aeneas -> Sobek -> Kaliq -> [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=35258474]Litten[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=35258474][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/352585/35258474.png[/img][/url]
[*]Melchior -> Nari -> Mari-> Eliza -> [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=245141&tab=dragon&did=36591778]Alvin[/url]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=36591778][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/365918/36591778.png[/img][/url]
[/LIST][/indent][/LIST]
Eulerian, if you ever wanted a list of descendants in my lair by generation rather than pairs...
I love your suggestions, both of you! Honestly, it's really awesome of you guys
Sal- how does one imgur mobile?
Sal- how does one imgur mobile?
I love your suggestions, both of you! Honestly, it's really awesome of you guys
Sal- how does one imgur mobile?
Sal- how does one imgur mobile?
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Whisperingstream - Err...I honestly have no idea? I still have a dumb flip phone, what is the 21st century give me my laptop for all interneting please. >.>;;
If you can see a drop down next to the image, will it let you copy/paste code?
If you can see a drop down next to the image, will it let you copy/paste code?
Whisperingstream - Err...I honestly have no idea? I still have a dumb flip phone, what is the 21st century give me my laptop for all interneting please. >.>;;
If you can see a drop down next to the image, will it let you copy/paste code?
If you can see a drop down next to the image, will it let you copy/paste code?
I accidentally (somehow I literally have no clue) cracked my dad's screen on his laptop so I'm banned. I have to wait until I go to my school to buy a laptop from there
I accidentally (somehow I literally have no clue) cracked my dad's screen on his laptop so I'm banned. I have to wait until I go to my school to buy a laptop from there
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Stream - *wince* oof.
Also - I have cracked laptop screens.
And kindle screens.
And Ipod screens.
P much everything but a TV. So like, I understand how you can accidentally with that. :\ Rough times until school tho.
Also - I have cracked laptop screens.
And kindle screens.
And Ipod screens.
P much everything but a TV. So like, I understand how you can accidentally with that. :\ Rough times until school tho.
Stream - *wince* oof.
Also - I have cracked laptop screens.
And kindle screens.
And Ipod screens.
P much everything but a TV. So like, I understand how you can accidentally with that. :\ Rough times until school tho.
Also - I have cracked laptop screens.
And kindle screens.
And Ipod screens.
P much everything but a TV. So like, I understand how you can accidentally with that. :\ Rough times until school tho.