@Disillusionist
Hello, I remember you! I made a note of your lair being one of my favorite lore lairs ages ago [s]probably years[/s]. It's been a long while since I've read any of your lore, but I'll probably look at it again later. [emoji=coatl happy size=1]
As for Dagmar... hopefully you can get something from this. I was wary of trying to figure out a job, so I went for more of her day to day instead.
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[quote]Dagmar is more of an early bird kind of dragon, preferring to wake up before most others to do some light reading and to make a list of what she has to do for the day. She finds sleeping in impossible, so her early morning hours are often spent tending to her own small herb garden and daydreaming.[/quote]
@pheelthemoment
Of course~ They were a fun one to review, and the apparel gap is honestly a small thing. [emoji=coatl happy size=1]
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@Saiban next (I love the long ones yess, no worries there), then Crystalitar, Hisscale, and ClanHeartsgleam. If any swaps show up before then, they'll bump up in the queue. ^.^
This might take a minute~
@
Disillusionist
Hello, I remember you! I made a note of your lair being one of my favorite lore lairs ages ago
probably years. It's been a long while since I've read any of your lore, but I'll probably look at it again later.
As for Dagmar... hopefully you can get something from this. I was wary of trying to figure out a job, so I went for more of her day to day instead.
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Dagmar is more of an early bird kind of dragon, preferring to wake up before most others to do some light reading and to make a list of what she has to do for the day. She finds sleeping in impossible, so her early morning hours are often spent tending to her own small herb garden and daydreaming.
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pheelthemoment
Of course~ They were a fun one to review, and the apparel gap is honestly a small thing.
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Saiban next (I love the long ones yess, no worries there), then Crystalitar, Hisscale, and ClanHeartsgleam. If any swaps show up before then, they'll bump up in the queue. ^.^
This might take a minute~
@VoxxVoleur
Hope you enjoy these! :D
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[Quote] This plague mage may appear sombre and grim, and can be monotonous even by Fae standards.But she inherited the rascally streak of her sire, often delving into rebellious research or experimental tactics. A rather charming personality sometimes reveals itself if you can pull Starrise away from her precious tomes long enough![/quote]
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[Quote]Veil is enigmatic as her name, purposely keeping her abilities [I]and[/I] motives tidily hidden away. She enjoys speaking cryptically, especially to tease or innocently frustrate other dragons-good luck figuring out the ingredients to any of her potions! However, her adoration of the night sky is no secret, both her lair and alchemy shop nearly glittering with dark, starry gauze and covered in complicated astrology maps. She sometimes claims that her brand of the arcane relies on moon phases and the positions of celestial bodies.[/quote]
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VoxxVoleur
Hope you enjoy these! :D
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This plague mage may appear sombre and grim, and can be monotonous even by Fae standards.But she inherited the rascally streak of her sire, often delving into rebellious research or experimental tactics. A rather charming personality sometimes reveals itself if you can pull Starrise away from her precious tomes long enough!
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Veil is enigmatic as her name, purposely keeping her abilities and motives tidily hidden away. She enjoys speaking cryptically, especially to tease or innocently frustrate other dragons-good luck figuring out the ingredients to any of her potions! However, her adoration of the night sky is no secret, both her lair and alchemy shop nearly glittering with dark, starry gauze and covered in complicated astrology maps. She sometimes claims that her brand of the arcane relies on moon phases and the positions of celestial bodies.
@Saiban
I very much understand lore going through a rework. I have three clans worth of lore, and even some of my important dragons are heavily outdated. Here we go - I think I go into a bit more detail here, so I'm comfortable reviewing less dragons in exchange for extra details. I hope you don't mind that I picked on your fandragons.
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[quote]First up, Everest. He's. So. Cute!
Now that I've gotten that out of my system, I thought he was an XXY dragon at first. All of these ghostly boys colors come together in a beautiful way that even almost matches his eyes, but I like that it doesn't. His eyes look like the only part of him that isn't muted in a way? It's a nice touch.
I think my favorite part of his headcanons has to be that he loves spices and that his lore even gives the reason for why he does. He's a heartwarming if cold, ghostly boy. It would be hard to improve given that he's a perma baby, so just more lore? He has everything he needs.[/quote]
[s]Please send him over to [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/15735458]Rhusa[/url] for cuddles. I think he'd like her tea shop.[/s]
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[quote]Kyoko is a beautiful dragon, the wing ribbons work particularly well against her constellation for even more sparkles and I like that she has more bows elsewhere. It helps tie her outfit together. Need I say that the layered sylvan dresses are well done? And three of them at that, the color gradient blends well from start to finish and the fact that it looks more solid than one layer seems fitting for a detective.
Also, she's a fandragon and I recognized her after it was more obviously outlined her in bio so far. I don't know how I would feel about that kind of detective work personally, but I would certainly look forward to seeing how you mix the original Kyoko with your lore in flight rising. There's a lot of potential here.
Nice job on the familiar matching too~[/quote]
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[quote]Another fandragon, who I sadly don't know. I see that her outfit isn't complete just yet, so I'll go off of her plans. The gembond combined with the flourish wing piece look like they just go together. What a fluid continuation. The brown-beige from the flourish piece ties in with the ice pick and the tail jewelry despite them all being very different sets.
I'm guessing that the clothing on her body is probably reflective of the character she's based on, so the layering of the different sets is probably as good as it can get given all of the pieces. Sometimes you get clipping. Any fandragon is admirable.[/quote]
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[quote]So Socks is a Kelp Beds trainer. Lore that incorporates in game mechanics always has a certain promise to it, and her little paragraph makes her seem a bit skittish? What an interesting combination. I do wonder how her job and personality work together.
I was wondering why I have never seen her leg armor before, and it's because she has a bunch of apparel on at once. Her leg armor looks like it came from a bazaar, much like the trading post. It looks like something one of a kind that was made from all the scraps someone had laying around. There's a lot of character just in that area of her. For the rest, I like how the cyan theme continues everywhere else and how there's much less in other places. Her legs are like a statement piece. Having that much going on everywhere would be too busy. This is a nice balance, but I have to ask, what do she do about armor given her occupation? It seems dangerous to leave her mid section open, so I'd love to know how that would be explained. Beautiful dragon - her eyes glow, her body glows, and she has a very one of a kind look thanks to apparel.[/quote]
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[quote]Khellouin, in the best way, looks like a Halloween party. The kind that isn't tacky. 70% autumn, 30% tasteful Halloween. It's a nice look. The grasps look like they weave around her wing garland perfectly, almost purposely. She also has the first pleasant to look at use of the haunting amber nightshroud that I've seen so far, and her overall mix of haunting amber and tigerlily flowers is enough for her. It's not too simple or complex or overdone in any one place. She is incredibly balanced as is. I would be careful when adding anything else to her, not that it couldn't be done, but that she might get too heavy or complicated in an area with more added.
For lore, sometimes less is more and I need answers. I need them. I am beyond intrigued and have so many questions from six bulleted lines. Not even six sentences! But there's so much to unpack here. I hope she gets a story worthy of her one day,
Maybe I'll even get answers too.
Her level is a nice touch that perhaps conveniently reflects that she's a well traveled dragon.[/quote]
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Saiban
I very much understand lore going through a rework. I have three clans worth of lore, and even some of my important dragons are heavily outdated. Here we go - I think I go into a bit more detail here, so I'm comfortable reviewing less dragons in exchange for extra details. I hope you don't mind that I picked on your fandragons.
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First up, Everest. He's. So. Cute!
Now that I've gotten that out of my system, I thought he was an XXY dragon at first. All of these ghostly boys colors come together in a beautiful way that even almost matches his eyes, but I like that it doesn't. His eyes look like the only part of him that isn't muted in a way? It's a nice touch.
I think my favorite part of his headcanons has to be that he loves spices and that his lore even gives the reason for why he does. He's a heartwarming if cold, ghostly boy. It would be hard to improve given that he's a perma baby, so just more lore? He has everything he needs.
Please send him over to Rhusa for cuddles. I think he'd like her tea shop.
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Kyoko is a beautiful dragon, the wing ribbons work particularly well against her constellation for even more sparkles and I like that she has more bows elsewhere. It helps tie her outfit together. Need I say that the layered sylvan dresses are well done? And three of them at that, the color gradient blends well from start to finish and the fact that it looks more solid than one layer seems fitting for a detective.
Also, she's a fandragon and I recognized her after it was more obviously outlined her in bio so far. I don't know how I would feel about that kind of detective work personally, but I would certainly look forward to seeing how you mix the original Kyoko with your lore in flight rising. There's a lot of potential here.
Nice job on the familiar matching too~
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Another fandragon, who I sadly don't know. I see that her outfit isn't complete just yet, so I'll go off of her plans. The gembond combined with the flourish wing piece look like they just go together. What a fluid continuation. The brown-beige from the flourish piece ties in with the ice pick and the tail jewelry despite them all being very different sets.
I'm guessing that the clothing on her body is probably reflective of the character she's based on, so the layering of the different sets is probably as good as it can get given all of the pieces. Sometimes you get clipping. Any fandragon is admirable.
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So Socks is a Kelp Beds trainer. Lore that incorporates in game mechanics always has a certain promise to it, and her little paragraph makes her seem a bit skittish? What an interesting combination. I do wonder how her job and personality work together.
I was wondering why I have never seen her leg armor before, and it's because she has a bunch of apparel on at once. Her leg armor looks like it came from a bazaar, much like the trading post. It looks like something one of a kind that was made from all the scraps someone had laying around. There's a lot of character just in that area of her. For the rest, I like how the cyan theme continues everywhere else and how there's much less in other places. Her legs are like a statement piece. Having that much going on everywhere would be too busy. This is a nice balance, but I have to ask, what do she do about armor given her occupation? It seems dangerous to leave her mid section open, so I'd love to know how that would be explained. Beautiful dragon - her eyes glow, her body glows, and she has a very one of a kind look thanks to apparel.
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Khellouin, in the best way, looks like a Halloween party. The kind that isn't tacky. 70% autumn, 30% tasteful Halloween. It's a nice look. The grasps look like they weave around her wing garland perfectly, almost purposely. She also has the first pleasant to look at use of the haunting amber nightshroud that I've seen so far, and her overall mix of haunting amber and tigerlily flowers is enough for her. It's not too simple or complex or overdone in any one place. She is incredibly balanced as is. I would be careful when adding anything else to her, not that it couldn't be done, but that she might get too heavy or complicated in an area with more added.
For lore, sometimes less is more and I need answers. I need them. I am beyond intrigued and have so many questions from six bulleted lines. Not even six sentences! But there's so much to unpack here. I hope she gets a story worthy of her one day,
Maybe I'll even get answers too.
Her level is a nice touch that perhaps conveniently reflects that she's a well traveled dragon.
@ClanHeartsgleam
Aren't headcanons fun? I notice you read into Valere's bit of a lore. My lair has a fun bunch. Hopefully you can get something from these to help figure your two out~ I definitely enjoyed writing them. [emoji=heart size=1]
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[quote]Hawk has always been more of a lover than a fighter. He loves to travel, but only travels with hired guards. Some say he works as a magician, but reading into tarot cards and the arcane isn't "work" to him. He considers it a calling, one of his many callings, and the fact that he happens to make money from it is rather convenient in taking care of his need for food and travel.
Dragons who shortchange him have been known to find that their wallets were full of fake currency long after he was gone. Was it magic? A trick? Who knows?[/quote]
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[quote]Seraphiel is a dragon who could only be described as murky. Her very existence a bit hard to see properly, like waking up and needing to rub one's eyes first - only that her image doesn't clear. Dragons opt to look at the only solid, clear parts of her whenever they interact, typically her mane or kilt. A difficult, complicated magic seems likely to be the cause, but trying to look at her is enough of a headache as it is without trying to understand it.[/quote]
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ClanHeartsgleam
Aren't headcanons fun? I notice you read into Valere's bit of a lore. My lair has a fun bunch. Hopefully you can get something from these to help figure your two out~ I definitely enjoyed writing them.
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Hawk has always been more of a lover than a fighter. He loves to travel, but only travels with hired guards. Some say he works as a magician, but reading into tarot cards and the arcane isn't "work" to him. He considers it a calling, one of his many callings, and the fact that he happens to make money from it is rather convenient in taking care of his need for food and travel.
Dragons who shortchange him have been known to find that their wallets were full of fake currency long after he was gone. Was it magic? A trick? Who knows?
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Seraphiel is a dragon who could only be described as murky. Her very existence a bit hard to see properly, like waking up and needing to rub one's eyes first - only that her image doesn't clear. Dragons opt to look at the only solid, clear parts of her whenever they interact, typically her mane or kilt. A difficult, complicated magic seems likely to be the cause, but trying to look at her is enough of a headache as it is without trying to understand it.
Thank you so much, those headcanons are absolutely perfect for them! :D
Thank you so much, those headcanons are absolutely perfect for them! :D
@ClanHeartsgleam
You're welcome! [emoji=coatl happy size=1]
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[quote name="Crystalitar" date="2020-06-17 10:05:52" ]
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Would love some headcanon about Dulgury ^^ A free one, (as im struggling with creativity myself)
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@Crystalitar
More of a silly one for your soft boy. [emoji=coatl happy size=1]
[quote]Dulgury is a glass blower, at least in his free time. At the moment he needs help from fire dragons to get the glass hot enough to work with, but he's been to at least ten workshops and sometimes the glass pieces he makes don't come out looking like misshapen multicolored pears. (They were supposed to be hearts! He couldn't gift these to anyone...)[/quote]
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[quote name="Hisscale" date="2020-06-17 10:37:55" ]
Hello, I have a dragon here that could make use of some headcanons for some lore.
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Feel free to praise or to say whatever you want about her. My goal is to craft a neat story.
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@Hisscale
I hope this can help somehow!
[quote]She molts more quickly than most dragons of her kind, but her nymph seems to know something to help soothe the maddening regeneration process. Without relief, she's been known to commit far worse murders just for the distraction of them. The gore from these can take days to wash out, and longer for anyone who comes across them to forget.[/quote]
@
ClanHeartsgleam
You're welcome!
Crystalitar wrote on 2020-06-17 10:05:52:
Would love some headcanon about Dulgury ^^ A free one, (as im struggling with creativity myself)
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Crystalitar
More of a silly one for your soft boy.
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Dulgury is a glass blower, at least in his free time. At the moment he needs help from fire dragons to get the glass hot enough to work with, but he's been to at least ten workshops and sometimes the glass pieces he makes don't come out looking like misshapen multicolored pears. (They were supposed to be hearts! He couldn't gift these to anyone...)
Hisscale wrote on 2020-06-17 10:37:55:
Hello, I have a dragon here that could make use of some headcanons for some lore.
Feel free to praise or to say whatever you want about her. My goal is to craft a neat story.
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Hisscale
I hope this can help somehow!
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She molts more quickly than most dragons of her kind, but her nymph seems to know something to help soothe the maddening regeneration process. Without relief, she's been known to commit far worse murders just for the distraction of them. The gore from these can take days to wash out, and longer for anyone who comes across them to forget.
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VoxxVoleur
Thanks so much! I forgot all about ridgeback molting. I'll use this as a prompt for their story.
I hope to do a review swap when I have time.
Have a good day.
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VoxxVoleur
Thanks so much! I forgot all about ridgeback molting. I'll use this as a prompt for their story.
I hope to do a review swap when I have time.
Have a good day.
@Hisscale
Of course, come back anytime. [emoji=coatl happy size=1]
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Hisscale
Of course, come back anytime.
Omg thats an adorable one for Dulgury. Definetly gonna use that! thanks <3
Omg thats an adorable one for Dulgury. Definetly gonna use that! thanks <3
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VoxxVoleur
aaa tysm!!!
Everest is one of my comfort dragons and i always love seeing him get recognized. i'll likely get around to his lore... eventually. maybe.
haa... writing is difficult sometimes :'D
i don't mind you picking my fandragons!! they tend to get noticed less and i spend,, too much time trying to get them as accurate as possible :P i don't know myself how im gonna tie in the lore but i'll figure it out(i did the best i could with Franziska,
her outfit is a difficult one to replicate haha)
Socks' leg is mainly just... well, socks, but at this point i think it could count as armor with how thick it probably is haha! i'll have to think about the armor situation
Khellouin is a very popular dragon from my lair! i'm happy she's so loved, though, i'm very proud of her (she's my random progen, actually!) i don't plan on adding much more to her look (if any).
thank you again!! i always love getting kind comments on my dragons :D
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VoxxVoleur
aaa tysm!!!
Everest is one of my comfort dragons and i always love seeing him get recognized. i'll likely get around to his lore... eventually. maybe.
haa... writing is difficult sometimes :'D
i don't mind you picking my fandragons!! they tend to get noticed less and i spend,, too much time trying to get them as accurate as possible :P i don't know myself how im gonna tie in the lore but i'll figure it out(i did the best i could with Franziska,
her outfit is a difficult one to replicate haha)
Socks' leg is mainly just... well, socks, but at this point i think it could count as armor with how thick it probably is haha! i'll have to think about the armor situation
Khellouin is a very popular dragon from my lair! i'm happy she's so loved, though, i'm very proud of her (she's my random progen, actually!) i don't plan on adding much more to her look (if any).
thank you again!! i always love getting kind comments on my dragons :D
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-> HES SO SMALL AAAA
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