Claim!
For the one doing me Please choose from the first two pages - everything past Ny (the ungened noc) o page 3 is for sale and will not be staying, apart from the last three dragons.
Only about the first page and a half has lore and are more developed :)
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Sariteiya
For the overall feel and look of your lair, like a first impression, I will say that I really dig it! Some might say its a bit messy as there seem to be no overarching look or feel (some would say aesthetic) to it, but I say it looks diverse and interesting,
All of your dragons seem like
characters in a diverse, living, breathing community. They're all dressed nicely and differently. I dig it, this is a lair I would read through
A comment on your lore/bio format also needs to be made: I'm a fan.
Its so short and nice and engaging. Again, I really get the feeling that all of your dergs are characters with strong and unique ideas behind them (like Gredhogg with his gold ; simple yet good) In very few words you perfectly convey the feel and personality of a dragon.
Your naming is also so good. It seems to have a theme, but the names are still different and match each specific dragon well. Again, the names add to the feeling of your clan being a functioning society, not just a random collection of lizards
Now for five specific dragons:
Such a pretty XXY, her look is amazing - the ivory seems golden against the obsidian and her silks matches perfectly. You know, even before reading her bio, that this is a
lady but maybe one you need to watch out for
Her bio is the main reason for me choosing her. Its sweet and short and vey expressive. again I'm impressed how living, yet short, you can convey a lot of information about her personality. I like her a lot.
She was the first I spotted in your lair, simply because lookwise - she's
just my stylr I love the way she looks so much! I'm so here for whie range cir over darker colors (and mulberry is one of my favorite colors)
To click on her beautiful face and then find such a funny, whimsical bio was a true delight. I'm in love (pun a little bit intended)
I'm usually not much for mirrors, so I was actually more surprised about really liking her lore than about her profession. A+++ triple right there and again; your writing of characters is so spot on
What a cutie. This is the grandmother we all deserve. I love speckel an freckle, but I'm usually not much for crackle - this lady rocks it tho!
I also love how you've added both the bracelet and the glasses in the same golden color, that way it doesn't get to overwhelming against the grey and white of her colors
I clicked on this one thinking exacly what his bio says; what a cute lil fella
The mere fact that you call me out through my screen lands him on my list big time. I adore him and his familiar is extremely well matched
I'm sorry for never making it off the first page of your lair, but they were all too good to not include (I make these by clicking from the first dragon and through stopping on he ones too good not to include) I will be reading through the rest of you dragons though as I'm so in love with your writing!
This one has to go in as an honorable mention. I'm no really for her look, simply because she's not my style in colors, genes and breed. But I adore her personality so much!
She's so sweet and I've never wanted to hug a dragon more!
Also, I need to say you've dressed Lilisil to perfection. The red is such a good idea on her colors and she manages to look stunning and calm in this, seemingly, very aggressive color!
