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TOPIC | Sornieth Zodiac Event Final Rounds!
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@sinjin [quote][center][font=book antiqua][size=5]Dear Torquil, I admit that when Scion came to me with an entourage from your clan, I had not expected such good news. Yeineat has remained in the company of Katiyana and the rest of the jail’s wardens (not as a prisoner, more an apprentice) and while he and Katiyana get along quite well, he does seem a bit lonesome at times. Analemma is currently recovering from its brush with one of the light astrals, and I think it may be better for Yeineat to go. I’m glad to be able to send him to a clan that wishes him so much welcome he can call home. Both your gift and your request are accepted with my greatest gratitude. May the infinite light bless you, [b]Empress Rebis of Analemma[/b][/font][/size] [/center][/quote]
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Dear Torquil,
I admit that when Scion came to me with an entourage from your clan, I had not expected such good news. Yeineat has remained in the company of Katiyana and the rest of the jail’s wardens (not as a prisoner, more an apprentice) and while he and Katiyana get along quite well, he does seem a bit lonesome at times.

Analemma is currently recovering from its brush with one of the light astrals, and I think it may be better for Yeineat to go. I’m glad to be able to send him to a clan that wishes him so much welcome he can call home. Both your gift and your request are accepted with my greatest gratitude.

May the infinite light bless you,
Empress Rebis of Analemma
Gen1 Quest:
Midnight/Midnight/Seafoam Male
Wine/Wine/light green range
@Seveneggs – Don’t be nervous, it’s really good so far~ Very intriguing ovo
@Seveneggs – Don’t be nervous, it’s really good so far~ Very intriguing ovo
Gen1 Quest:
Midnight/Midnight/Seafoam Male
Wine/Wine/light green range
@Kittychat47 [center][img]http://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/portraits/227366/22736568p.png[/img] [img]http://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/portraits/236594/23659385p.png[/img] [/center] Caress couldn’t remember the last time she had personally attended a meeting in the Obscura. It was a good thing, she supposed. It meant she had a trustworthy cohort who could uphold Bramble Step’s laws and keep its secrets while she lived her busy life. But it was nice to be back. She had forgotten just how wastefully luxurious it was there. The velvet carpets and plush seats, the decadent wines in bottles of rare crystals, the heady scent of flowers that only grew in the dark… One could almost forget it was an oubliette. But that was by design. This was the secret court where Bramble Step’s laws were made and upheld and where delicate matters were given such privacy that even the Shadowbinder could not hear the whispers from within. “Welcome. I am Madame Caress, margravine and liaison of Shadow affairs to Aphaster City and the rest of the Analemma Dominions, proprietress and a long list of other things that would bore us both to tears.” She settles comfortably upon one of the lounge chairs, with a disarming but not overly sweet smile. “I understand you’ve come to meet about an astral.” Cisco followed her example and allowed himself to mirror her relaxed demeanor. “Yes, we’ve been in contact with your queen about Metapneumata.” “Ah yes, I remember…” She laughed politely. “[i]Gloomwillow Grotto.[/i] How endlessly charming.” Morse crossed his arms, somewhat ruffled by her casual amusement and by the situation. Analemma was a light clan, but this whole district was nestled up to the twilit border between the Sunbeam Ruins and the Tangled Wood, and Caress wore shadow loyalism on her sleeve. “It’s what we’ll go by, for the sake of this conversation.” Caress waved her hand in a gentle go-ahead. “As you like it. It’s neither here nor there and no insult to me. So let’s get to business. What exactly do you need?” “We’re hoping for information about this ‘plane’ that you want to send her to,” said Cisco. “We’re a clan experienced in spirits, and while Metapneumata’s power is worrisome, the spirit plane we are familiar with is…unkind.” “And you wish to be kind to her, even as she threatens your home with ruin?” Morse bristled. “It’s not her fault.” Caress raised her shoulders in an easy shrug. “Will it still not be her fault when your clan begins to burn?” Cisco gently cleared his throat. “I believe we are getting off topic.” “So we are,” said Caress, rising to pour herself a drink. “Analemma has only recently recovered from a rather unfortunate run in with an astral. My husband and my dearest friend…” She clenched her jaw. “Nevermind. I cannot answer your question, but I have one who can on standby.” She knocked against a stone, and a violet sigil lit. Only a few moments later, a blood red imperial arrived. A deep scar split the right side of his face and smoke trailed from a dark cigar that hung loose at the corner of his mouth. A worn ledger teeming with fluttering page markers nestled under one of his arm. “Carnelian,” he said gruffly, neglecting to offer his hand to either of them in favor of opening the book. “What sort of information you need?” “Excuse his lack of good manners,” said Caress, with a smile that said she was almost certain going to do something unpleasant if he embarrassed her. “He’s a detective, not a diplomat.” “I understand,” said Cisco. “We need to know about the plane that the astral come from. If you are hunting Metapneumata, we don’t wish to turn her over if you are only going to make her suffer.” “You’re not the first to have that opinion.” He clapped the book shut. “Astral plane is somethin’ special, doesn’t have anything to do with the spirit plane you’re so worried about. The archmage would probably have the best details, but she’s out in lightning territory right now. Different astral out that way blew up a trade company’s cargo. Messy situation.” “Do you have no more information other than ‘it’s not the same.’?” “Plenty. It’s the realm of the stars and the sidereal. Not really fit for a dragon to go to, but what other plane is, really?” He scratched idly at his neck. “It’s not a hostile place, it’s just not a place a dragon could understand, and that astrals we’re all scrambling around to find weren’t supposed to form, much less be called off-plane to trounce around Sornieth with the rest of us.” “And does is harm them," Morse pressed. "To be sent back or to have that astral component removed?” “Only if they resist, but the way I hear it, your astral’s twin was ecstatic to get a ride back home. Let me put it this way--” He flipped the book back open, turning a few pages before he got to what he wanted. “Katasomata was plagued by visions of Sornieth’s past. All day, all night, no breaks. When the good Imperator went to go get her and take her home, she was so relieved she cried. Well, harder anyway. They’re both criers as I hear it.” He took his cigarette from his mouth. “You got lucky and got an astral that actually feels some sympathy for this world. If you want to return the gesture, let the Archmage send her home.”
@Kittychat47
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Caress couldn’t remember the last time she had personally attended a meeting in the Obscura. It was a good thing, she supposed. It meant she had a trustworthy cohort who could uphold Bramble Step’s laws and keep its secrets while she lived her busy life. But it was nice to be back. She had forgotten just how wastefully luxurious it was there. The velvet carpets and plush seats, the decadent wines in bottles of rare crystals, the heady scent of flowers that only grew in the dark…

One could almost forget it was an oubliette.

But that was by design. This was the secret court where Bramble Step’s laws were made and upheld and where delicate matters were given such privacy that even the Shadowbinder could not hear the whispers from within.

“Welcome. I am Madame Caress, margravine and liaison of Shadow affairs to Aphaster City and the rest of the Analemma Dominions, proprietress and a long list of other things that would bore us both to tears.” She settles comfortably upon one of the lounge chairs, with a disarming but not overly sweet smile. “I understand you’ve come to meet about an astral.”

Cisco followed her example and allowed himself to mirror her relaxed demeanor. “Yes, we’ve been in contact with your queen about Metapneumata.”

“Ah yes, I remember…” She laughed politely. “Gloomwillow Grotto. How endlessly charming.”

Morse crossed his arms, somewhat ruffled by her casual amusement and by the situation. Analemma was a light clan, but this whole district was nestled up to the twilit border between the Sunbeam Ruins and the Tangled Wood, and Caress wore shadow loyalism on her sleeve.

“It’s what we’ll go by, for the sake of this conversation.”

Caress waved her hand in a gentle go-ahead. “As you like it. It’s neither here nor there and no insult to me. So let’s get to business. What exactly do you need?”

“We’re hoping for information about this ‘plane’ that you want to send her to,” said Cisco. “We’re a clan experienced in spirits, and while Metapneumata’s power is worrisome, the spirit plane we are familiar with is…unkind.”

“And you wish to be kind to her, even as she threatens your home with ruin?”

Morse bristled. “It’s not her fault.”

Caress raised her shoulders in an easy shrug. “Will it still not be her fault when your clan begins to burn?”

Cisco gently cleared his throat. “I believe we are getting off topic.”

“So we are,” said Caress, rising to pour herself a drink. “Analemma has only recently recovered from a rather unfortunate run in with an astral. My husband and my dearest friend…” She clenched her jaw. “Nevermind. I cannot answer your question, but I have one who can on standby.”

She knocked against a stone, and a violet sigil lit. Only a few moments later, a blood red imperial arrived. A deep scar split the right side of his face and smoke trailed from a dark cigar that hung loose at the corner of his mouth. A worn ledger teeming with fluttering page markers nestled under one of his arm.

“Carnelian,” he said gruffly, neglecting to offer his hand to either of them in favor of opening the book. “What sort of information you need?”

“Excuse his lack of good manners,” said Caress, with a smile that said she was almost certain going to do something unpleasant if he embarrassed her. “He’s a detective, not a diplomat.”

“I understand,” said Cisco. “We need to know about the plane that the astral come from. If you are hunting Metapneumata, we don’t wish to turn her over if you are only going to make her suffer.”

“You’re not the first to have that opinion.” He clapped the book shut. “Astral plane is somethin’ special, doesn’t have anything to do with the spirit plane you’re so worried about. The archmage would probably have the best details, but she’s out in lightning territory right now. Different astral out that way blew up a trade company’s cargo. Messy situation.”

“Do you have no more information other than ‘it’s not the same.’?”

“Plenty. It’s the realm of the stars and the sidereal. Not really fit for a dragon to go to, but what other plane is, really?” He scratched idly at his neck. “It’s not a hostile place, it’s just not a place a dragon could understand, and that astrals we’re all scrambling around to find weren’t supposed to form, much less be called off-plane to trounce around Sornieth with the rest of us.”

“And does is harm them," Morse pressed. "To be sent back or to have that astral component removed?”

“Only if they resist, but the way I hear it, your astral’s twin was ecstatic to get a ride back home. Let me put it this way--”

He flipped the book back open, turning a few pages before he got to what he wanted. “Katasomata was plagued by visions of Sornieth’s past. All day, all night, no breaks. When the good Imperator went to go get her and take her home, she was so relieved she cried. Well, harder anyway. They’re both criers as I hear it.”

He took his cigarette from his mouth. “You got lucky and got an astral that actually feels some sympathy for this world. If you want to return the gesture, let the Archmage send her home.”
Gen1 Quest:
Midnight/Midnight/Seafoam Male
Wine/Wine/light green range
@Mangoramune may I be added to the participants pinglist? I'd love to join :D
@Mangoramune may I be added to the participants pinglist? I'd love to join :D
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@Kayin Unfortunately all the distributions have been completed, there's nothing left but for everyone to finish their stories.
Sorry!
@Kayin Unfortunately all the distributions have been completed, there's nothing left but for everyone to finish their stories.
Sorry!
Gen1 Quest:
Midnight/Midnight/Seafoam Male
Wine/Wine/light green range
@SirenMoons [center][img]http://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/portraits/384860/38485945p.png[/img] [img]http://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/portraits/179132/17913129p.png[/img][/center] Rebis’ fingers clenched around the letter, nearly tearing it in two. Another light astral. Another thrall situation. Gods, to imagine another clan going through what they had was—nauseating to say the least. “Are Lavi and the Archmage still in the next territory?” The Lady Judge, Azricai, nodded, but held up a different letter. “I fear you may wish to read this one as well before you come to your conclusions.” Rebis leaned back in her chair, her frills wilting. “I can barely take the suspense. Please, if there’s more bad news just paraphrase it for me.” “It seems when Phozaloi fled the Grotto, she went to the plague lands.” She tossed the letter down. “Rache, Queen of the Vengeful, has taken the astral in. As ‘a gift that will serve her well.’” Rebis pressed her hands into her eyes as though that could somehow control her growing temper. “Tell me that my first impression of them is wrong.” Azricai shook her head. “I cannot, when I share your opinion and believe it right.” “Put out a call for information and get a letter back to the Grotto. This could escalate to a plague/nature conflict, and that is the last thing we need to be embroiled in.” ---- [center][img]http://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/portraits/356091/35609093p.png[/img] [img]http://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/portraits/224037/22403684p.png[/img] [img]http://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/portraits/313541/31354029p.png[/img] [/center] Rebis had never truly understood why the previous queen had allowed a loyalist of the Order of Yersinia to exist on their territory, and though it was proving useful, she still could not say that she was glad. Eaqarab was familiar with The Vengeful. Like most plague clans, the Order was on hot and cold footing with them. An interesting slave was always easily obtained from a clan of their sort if the right price could be named, but their frankly appalling lust for blood and death was considered rather…unscientific. Their willy-nilly offering to the Wyrmwound just that: haphazard religious offerings, all fervor and no technique. [b]“Thank you,”[/b] Rebis said just forcefully enough to stop Eaqarab from expounding further. “I think I get the gist of how your order of Contagion-nurturing cult finds senseless murder barbaric.” Eaqarab’s wide jaws spread in a smile without any irony. “So glad to make myself understood, your Majesty. You and dear queen Telos, may she be exulted in exaltation forever, were always women of science. I knew you’d understand.” If it were left up to her, Rebis would have had the guardian thrown bodily out of the Hall of Five Lights. As it was, she was politely escorted out. In her wake, the Tahalils quickly and efficiently sterilized the court room. The mother, Haematica, had been the clan’s first plagueling and original elemental liaison—a mantle she gladly put back on when her lastborn daughter, Middlemist, was otherwise occupied. Her firstborn daughter, Alala, had eventually become the Tribune of Health for the entire clan. “I await your counsel,” Rebis said patiently, even as Alala impersonally took her hands and diligently cleaned every digit. The mother Tahalil shook her head. “There is no counsel that will not lead to conflict. A plague clan like this speaks only in blood and usefulness to their causes. I cannot say for certain it is wise to even contact the Grotto.” “That is not up for discussion,” Rebis said flatly, her quill already in hand. “It will only be worse if the Grotto tracks Phozaloi unknowing that she is now under the protection of the Vengeful.” Alala sat gingerly in her usual seat, three to the queen’s left side. “Would Lutia destroy them?” “Without question. It would be easier than when she laid waste to the Catoptria at Ashfall. But I hesitate to let her raze a clan, even one like this, if another method can be found. I also don’t necessarily want to have her leave that much arcane radiation near the Wyrmwoud. The border of Ashfall could not be used for five eons after her work there. Five eons for arcane magic to mix with the source of all contagion? That just begs for trouble.” “Agreed,” the Tahalils said in unison. Hopefully, the Grotto would have a suggestion. The Vengul thought that they could use Phozaloi, but if it was anything like it had been with Titi-Tet, it was only a matter of time before Phozaloi began to use them. [quote][center][font=book antiqua][size=5]Written in urgent haste to the Grotto, We have received word from a clan in the Scarred Wastes known as the Vengeful. Their reputation is ill and they have taken in Phozaloi as their own—I do not recommend you chase too far. Please come to Analemma, we will welcome you, and perhaps together we can pool our knowledge and resources to form a plan of action. May the light keep you, [b]Empress Rebis of Analemma[/b][/font][/size] [/center][/quote]
@SirenMoons
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Rebis’ fingers clenched around the letter, nearly tearing it in two. Another light astral. Another thrall situation. Gods, to imagine another clan going through what they had was—nauseating to say the least.

“Are Lavi and the Archmage still in the next territory?”

The Lady Judge, Azricai, nodded, but held up a different letter. “I fear you may wish to read this one as well before you come to your conclusions.”

Rebis leaned back in her chair, her frills wilting. “I can barely take the suspense. Please, if there’s more bad news just paraphrase it for me.”

“It seems when Phozaloi fled the Grotto, she went to the plague lands.” She tossed the letter down. “Rache, Queen of the Vengeful, has taken the astral in. As ‘a gift that will serve her well.’”

Rebis pressed her hands into her eyes as though that could somehow control her growing temper. “Tell me that my first impression of them is wrong.”

Azricai shook her head. “I cannot, when I share your opinion and believe it right.”

“Put out a call for information and get a letter back to the Grotto. This could escalate to a plague/nature conflict, and that is the last thing we need to be embroiled in.”

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Rebis had never truly understood why the previous queen had allowed a loyalist of the Order of Yersinia to exist on their territory, and though it was proving useful, she still could not say that she was glad.

Eaqarab was familiar with The Vengeful. Like most plague clans, the Order was on hot and cold footing with them. An interesting slave was always easily obtained from a clan of their sort if the right price could be named, but their frankly appalling lust for blood and death was considered rather…unscientific. Their willy-nilly offering to the Wyrmwound just that: haphazard religious offerings, all fervor and no technique.

“Thank you,” Rebis said just forcefully enough to stop Eaqarab from expounding further. “I think I get the gist of how your order of Contagion-nurturing cult finds senseless murder barbaric.”

Eaqarab’s wide jaws spread in a smile without any irony. “So glad to make myself understood, your Majesty. You and dear queen Telos, may she be exulted in exaltation forever, were always women of science. I knew you’d understand.”

If it were left up to her, Rebis would have had the guardian thrown bodily out of the Hall of Five Lights. As it was, she was politely escorted out. In her wake, the Tahalils quickly and efficiently sterilized the court room. The mother, Haematica, had been the clan’s first plagueling and original elemental liaison—a mantle she gladly put back on when her lastborn daughter, Middlemist, was otherwise occupied. Her firstborn daughter, Alala, had eventually become the Tribune of Health for the entire clan.

“I await your counsel,” Rebis said patiently, even as Alala impersonally took her hands and diligently cleaned every digit.

The mother Tahalil shook her head. “There is no counsel that will not lead to conflict. A plague clan like this speaks only in blood and usefulness to their causes. I cannot say for certain it is wise to even contact the Grotto.”

“That is not up for discussion,” Rebis said flatly, her quill already in hand. “It will only be worse if the Grotto tracks Phozaloi unknowing that she is now under the protection of the Vengeful.”

Alala sat gingerly in her usual seat, three to the queen’s left side. “Would Lutia destroy them?”

“Without question. It would be easier than when she laid waste to the Catoptria at Ashfall. But I hesitate to let her raze a clan, even one like this, if another method can be found. I also don’t necessarily want to have her leave that much arcane radiation near the Wyrmwoud. The border of Ashfall could not be used for five eons after her work there. Five eons for arcane magic to mix with the source of all contagion? That just begs for trouble.”

“Agreed,” the Tahalils said in unison.

Hopefully, the Grotto would have a suggestion. The Vengul thought that they could use Phozaloi, but if it was anything like it had been with Titi-Tet, it was only a matter of time before Phozaloi began to use them.
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Written in urgent haste to the Grotto,

We have received word from a clan in the Scarred Wastes known as the Vengeful. Their reputation is ill and they have taken in Phozaloi as their own—I do not recommend you chase too far.

Please come to Analemma, we will welcome you, and perhaps together we can pool our knowledge and resources to form a plan of action.

May the light keep you,
Empress Rebis of Analemma
Gen1 Quest:
Midnight/Midnight/Seafoam Male
Wine/Wine/light green range
@Mangoramune

The final part!

The two things I struggled with the most was making sure this didn't fly wildly off of the rails and just writing up the letter itself. Like I know I definitely went in a consistent direction with this whole event, but I also worried a bit I was running perhaps a little too far with Bailuk's lore.
@Mangoramune

The final part!

The two things I struggled with the most was making sure this didn't fly wildly off of the rails and just writing up the letter itself. Like I know I definitely went in a consistent direction with this whole event, but I also worried a bit I was running perhaps a little too far with Bailuk's lore.
[size=2][s][i]try to keep it short, i said and don't get distracted when writing ... i'm a monster[/i][/s][/size] But! I finally arrive with my first part. Admittedly, pretty late, but trying to get in some good writing times in has been a bit of a struggle in the past few weeks. Excuses, excuses though. [s]also, i kind of fizzled out about half way through, so take that as you will. [quote=Astralis: 1- Eltanin] Even in the early morning, the Clan Tempestas Clamanti was a flurry of activity. The just-risen sun had yet to scrape over the dizzying high walls of the Great Tempest mesa and the Clan’s territory was still cast in darkness; still, dragons flitted amongst the gardens or picked their ways through the desert-dried earth and air. Some were just arriving from traveling throughout the night night, ready for foretold comfort and rest. Others were trying to get a start on the day’s business before the high-noon heat set in: whether it be helping tend the Oasis, training for when they went before the Stormcatcher for exaltation, or just getting to the next point in their journeys. Chaotic to a level, but in a way, beautiful. Like the buzz of a beehive, knowing that sweet honey lay at the end. From the little lip of rock above the mouth of the Lair, Eulalia watched it all... [center][url=https://ciphers-fr.tumblr.com/post/187670331505/astralis-1-eltanin][CONTINUE][/url][/center][/quote] @/Mangoramune While there's no chance that I'm going to be able to have this all completed by the 15th... I still plan to see this thing through. I've got some ideas on how to work around interaction things should you choose/need to wash your hands of this event, so to say. Whatever may happen, real life is the priority. [emoji=gaoler happy size=1] But overall, I'll just be plodding along as fast as I can write. It's all planned out in my hand on how it goes, but muses are fickle beasts. I hope that those that read will enjoy!
try to keep it short, i said
and don't get distracted when writing
... i'm a monster


But! I finally arrive with my first part. Admittedly, pretty late, but trying to get in some good writing times in has been a bit of a struggle in the past few weeks. Excuses, excuses though.

also, i kind of fizzled out about half way through, so take that as you will.

Astralis: 1- Eltanin wrote:
Even in the early morning, the Clan Tempestas Clamanti was a flurry of activity.

The just-risen sun had yet to scrape over the dizzying high walls of the Great Tempest mesa and the Clan’s territory was still cast in darkness; still, dragons flitted amongst the gardens or picked their ways through the desert-dried earth and air. Some were just arriving from traveling throughout the night night, ready for foretold comfort and rest. Others were trying to get a start on the day’s business before the high-noon heat set in: whether it be helping tend the Oasis, training for when they went before the Stormcatcher for exaltation, or just getting to the next point in their journeys. Chaotic to a level, but in a way, beautiful. Like the buzz of a beehive, knowing that sweet honey lay at the end.

From the little lip of rock above the mouth of the Lair, Eulalia watched it all...

@/Mangoramune
While there's no chance that I'm going to be able to have this all completed by the 15th... I still plan to see this thing through. I've got some ideas on how to work around interaction things should you choose/need to wash your hands of this event, so to say. Whatever may happen, real life is the priority.



But overall, I'll just be plodding along as fast as I can write. It's all planned out in my hand on how it goes, but muses are fickle beasts.

I hope that those that read will enjoy!
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@Mangoramune

I had planned to have my story wrapped up by now but I've had some health issues these last few weeks, is there any plans to extend the end date for this? If not I can totally try and get out the rest within two days but it might be tight.
@Mangoramune

I had planned to have my story wrapped up by now but I've had some health issues these last few weeks, is there any plans to extend the end date for this? If not I can totally try and get out the rest within two days but it might be tight.
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@Mangoramune

Just uploaded my whole thing into AO3, which can be accessed through this finely-crafted link.

Finishing school and bad brain weather combined to make this extremely late and not that polished, but by GOD I finished it.
@Mangoramune

Just uploaded my whole thing into AO3, which can be accessed through this finely-crafted link.

Finishing school and bad brain weather combined to make this extremely late and not that polished, but by GOD I finished it.
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