Creative Corner

@MasqD
I really like this! It is very intriguing. Can I be added to the Pinglist, please?

[quote name="ArgenteaMoon" date=2017-01-01 23:09:55] @MasqD I think your paragraphs are too long? But that might be my inability to focus on long blocks of text on a screen. Also, I think there are places where you need a punctuation mark, but there are nothing and places where there are too many commas. Can be more specific if you like. [/quote] I struggle with punctuation; and grammar as a whole. [s]totally flunked that class in high school.[/s] I added Grammarly to my computer hoping it would help, but it's still a program. I would definitely love any help you can give me. over comma-ing is my tragic flaw. As far as the huge large paragraphs; My biggest plan for this was to kinda do my coding (pictures of births/deaths etc.) inside of the text so the text was broken up better. But my computer was absolutely fighting me; I had to do 3 different tabs just to get anywhere. [s]shockwave is evil![/s] But I will go back through and break up the text better. :DD

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@MasqD I'll send you a message :3

EDIT: oops nope the message box is too small, and I find it easier to see what I would do to change it if I just rewrite the entire piece :p I'm not honestly the best at proofreading but hey I offered :p

@AerinCantator

Thank you. <3

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P.s did you want to be added to the pinglist for future updates?

@MasqD finished me editing advice and sent it!

(aaaand who knows if @AerinCantator is going to notice you asked her if she wanted to be on your pinglist. She only came here because I wanted to show her who I was helping :P)

@Argenteamoon

Yeah, I figured that out in your message. :D

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