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TOPIC | The Darkest Memories [Nuzlocke]
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A NUZLOCKE CHALLENGE
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Thank You For Reading My Re: Version Of The Darkest Memories.
Please Let Me Know What You Think, Or If There Are Any Conspiracies, I Love Hearing Those Kinds Of Things.


Con/Crit is very much appreciated as long as it stays helpful and constructive.

My Plan For This Is To Have Weekly Updates For You To Read.

Click Here to Read The Newest Update!

5 March: Oh no....... All my pictures got deleted I have to go through my thread and replace them all. the majority of them I have replaced. the prettifying ones are still missing on a few chapters.
^ Still Haven't Done That; Probably tomorrow I'll blast through that, maybe some art updates who Knows.
Not I!
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[center][img]http://orig03.deviantart.net/fd78/f/2017/064/c/7/rules_and_alterations_by_masq_d-db1an7u.png[/img] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=mb&board=frd&id=1150203]Original Nuzlocke Master Post[/url][/center] [LIST=I] [*]You can buy a dragon from the AH after you've leveled three dragons to level 25. [*]You can only buy one egg a month. [*][s]You can't scatter scroll a dragon until they've reached level 25.[/s] You can only scatter scroll a dragon at birth or before they are added to the storyline. (See Additions) [*]You can't give a dragon a primary gene until level 10, can't give them a secondary gene until level 15, and can't give them a tertiary gene until level 20. [*] For every egg you find, whether in the Coliseum or by scavenging, you may purchase one breed change for any dragon. [*]You cannot gather food, you must grind for it in the coli. [*]If a dragon faints in the coli, it's dead. Exalt. [*]Dragons born with genes cannot breed until their level is equal their birth genealogy; the story will indicate them as basic until such is not true. [/LIST] ----- [quote name=Pinglist] *Adriel *AerinCantator *Springwind[/quote] [quote name= Exceptions To Rules]1) I am very supportive of my flight, and I often dorm for my fellow arcanite superstars. Those dragons "fodder" is of course not mine. If the dragon is not written in the story somewhere, be it near future or already in existence, it doesn't exist. I have a friend holding all the dragons I acquired as part of My original story line, and they will be added back to my lair the same way they entered the first time. [b]Unless someone dies and it changes the arc.[/b] None of them has bred, and they are all g1. 2) In my original Arc including unpublished pieces; my protagonist leaves my main clan in the first chapter; for reasons that I never updated to the internet. However, most of all those particular dragons following that original arc were exalted. The only remaining dragons are my progenitors Apocalypse and WaterDream. So you will get to see me revive two clans; because I'm not changing that arc; it's critical to how my story plays out, dragons of AV-H are however immune and will not uphold standard rules. I can buy a dragon per month not consistent with my one hatch per month of the other clan; no new g1 hatches are included in AV-H clan. Other rules remain the same. [/quote] In True Nuzlocke Fashion; Can't Have Exceptions Without Additions. Otherwise, Where is the Fairness in that? [quote name= Additions] 1) Treasure will be gained from selling Coliseum Item Drops, and Chests Accrued From Farming. If a dragon leaves via story; it is being gifted not sold. It should be assumed for my story unless otherwise written; Dragons are Bartering items with other dragons on the island. Not necessarily the trading post/auction house. 2) For the Egg-Based Portion of this Challenge; I will be using [url=https://www.random.org/coins/]Random Dot ORG's "Coin Flipper"[/url] to decide the fates of my poor babies. D: Settings Per Dragon; "Chinese 150 Yuan." Dragon Side - Alive Great Wall Side - Death. ~~ It lines the coins out for me in a row; dragons will be matched to them per the order they found in the lair upon hatching. 3) Dragons cannot change their Skincent Without a Level 10 Mystic; Birth Geneology Without Level 15 Mystic and Breed without a Level 25 Mystic. The gene rule technically only applies to g2's and on, but the breed change and adding skincents was kind of my little version of a kickback to the original difficulty of the challenge. And Last addition which seems to be a favourite among locke-boomers: 4) Dragons won't be exalted until I write it in the story this will make reveals more dramatic and is not me playing Arcanists hand... [/quote]
  1. You can buy a dragon from the AH after you've leveled three dragons to level 25.
  2. You can only buy one egg a month.
  3. You can't scatter scroll a dragon until they've reached level 25. You can only scatter scroll a dragon at birth or before they are added to the storyline. (See Additions)
  4. You can't give a dragon a primary gene until level 10, can't give them a secondary gene until level 15, and can't give them a tertiary gene until level 20.
  5. For every egg you find, whether in the Coliseum or by scavenging, you may purchase one breed change for any dragon.
  6. You cannot gather food, you must grind for it in the coli.
  7. If a dragon faints in the coli, it's dead. Exalt.
  8. Dragons born with genes cannot breed until their level is equal their birth genealogy; the story will indicate them as basic until such is not true.

Pinglist wrote:
*Adriel *AerinCantator *Springwind
Exceptions wrote:
1) I am very supportive of my flight, and I often dorm for my fellow arcanite superstars. Those dragons "fodder" is of course not mine. If the dragon is not written in the story somewhere, be it near future or already in existence, it doesn't exist. I have a friend holding all the dragons I acquired as part of My original story line, and they will be added back to my lair the same way they entered the first time. Unless someone dies and it changes the arc. None of them has bred, and they are all g1.

2) In my original Arc including unpublished pieces; my protagonist leaves my main clan in the first chapter; for reasons that I never updated to the internet. However, most of all those particular dragons following that original arc were exalted. The only remaining dragons are my progenitors Apocalypse and WaterDream. So you will get to see me revive two clans; because I'm not changing that arc; it's critical to how my story plays out, dragons of AV-H are however immune and will not uphold standard rules. I can buy a dragon per month not consistent with my one hatch per month of the other clan; no new g1 hatches are included in AV-H clan. Other rules remain the same.

In True Nuzlocke Fashion; Can't Have Exceptions Without Additions. Otherwise, Where is the Fairness in that?
Additions wrote:
1) Treasure will be gained from selling Coliseum Item Drops, and Chests Accrued From Farming. If a dragon leaves via story; it is being gifted not sold. It should be assumed for my story unless otherwise written; Dragons are Bartering items with other dragons on the island. Not necessarily the trading post/auction house.

2) For the Egg-Based Portion of this Challenge; I will be using Random Dot ORG's "Coin Flipper" to decide the fates of my poor babies. D:
Settings Per Dragon; "Chinese 150 Yuan."
Dragon Side - Alive
Great Wall Side - Death.
~~ It lines the coins out for me in a row; dragons will be matched to them per the order they found in the lair upon hatching.

3) Dragons cannot change their Skincent Without a Level 10 Mystic; Birth Geneology Without Level 15 Mystic and Breed without a Level 25 Mystic.
The gene rule technically only applies to g2's and on, but the breed change and adding skincents was kind of my little version of a kickback to the original difficulty of the challenge.

And Last addition which seems to be a favourite among locke-boomers:
4) Dragons won't be exalted until I write it in the story this will make reveals more dramatic and is not me playing Arcanists hand...
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[center][img]http://orig03.deviantart.net/a59d/f/2017/064/4/d/glossary_by_masq_d-db1an89.png[/img] Many writers inspired me ~also Hayao Miyazaki~ to make my own like words up; so that the book feels more real; like you see it through the characters eyes, and their experiences. For quick reference whenever I use a new word; I will put it at the bottom of the post so that you can look at it. Words In The Glossary Will Be Coloured Like This: [color=#75008f][Skystar][/color] [img]http://orig01.deviantart.net/69a5/f/2017/064/f/0/affiliates_by_masq_d-db1ana0.png[/img] These are nuzlocke stories I would recommend for you to read. Even if you don't particularly like mine, they are just super. If you want to be in this section, please let me know you are doing the challenge because I just love reading these books so much it is the best. [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2042493]After The Storm[/url] - By [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=userpage&id=34726]ArgenteaMoon[/url] [url=www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/1252396]The Arcane Exile[/url] - By [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=userpage&id=80484]Kaial[/url] (No New Updates Planned) [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/1213167]Hardcore Nuzlocke Challenge - Story![/url] - By [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=userpage&id=90591]LagMonster[/url] (MIA) [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?board=cc&id=1234476&p=mb]Resort Nuzlocke[/url]- By [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=userpage&id=59149]Kizmetto[/url] These are a Few I Haven't Fully Read Yet, But I Am Very Excited About! [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/1320615]Midnight Sun: A Nuzlocke Story[/url] - By [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=userpage&id=133625]Cerastes[/url] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/1407127]From Ashes [Nuzlocke][/url] - By [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=userpage&id=141527]Tiirran[/url] I didnt plan to really have [s]m[/s]any pinkerlocke affiliates; I'm not a huge fan of them. I thought Baby-Lockes were already to easy. And I dont really get the rules; its too involved maybe. I'm not someone who hangs with Pinkerton or his pile on the daily. But this is exciting as it is a [b]Crossover-locke.[/b] [size=1]I made that name up just now shhh.[/size] [Size=2]Combination of a Nuzlocke and Pinkerlocke which I have made an exception for. :P[/size] [Url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2085821]Windestiny[/URL] by [URL=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=userpage&id=285001]SpringWind[/URL][/center]
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Many writers inspired me ~also Hayao Miyazaki~ to make my own like words up; so that the book feels more real; like you see it through the characters eyes, and their experiences. For quick reference whenever I use a new word; I will put it at the bottom of the post so that you can look at it.

Words In The Glossary Will Be Coloured Like This: [Skystar]

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These are nuzlocke stories I would recommend for you to read. Even if you don't particularly like mine, they are just super. If you want to be in this section, please let me know you are doing the challenge because I just love reading these books so much it is the best.

After The Storm - By ArgenteaMoon
The Arcane Exile - By Kaial (No New Updates Planned)
Hardcore Nuzlocke Challenge - Story! - By LagMonster (MIA)
Resort Nuzlocke- By Kizmetto

These are a Few I Haven't Fully Read Yet, But I Am Very Excited About!

Midnight Sun: A Nuzlocke Story - By Cerastes
From Ashes [Nuzlocke] - By Tiirran


I didnt plan to really have many pinkerlocke affiliates; I'm not a huge fan of them. I thought Baby-Lockes were already to easy. And I dont really get the rules; its too involved maybe. I'm not someone who hangs with Pinkerton or his pile on the daily.

But this is exciting as it is a Crossover-locke.
I made that name up just now shhh.
Combination of a Nuzlocke and Pinkerlocke which I have made an exception for. :P

Windestiny by SpringWind
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[center][img]http://orig08.deviantart.net/46ef/f/2017/064/8/b/table_of_contents_by_masq_d-db1an75.png[/img] [/center] [b] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2080968/1#post_24742550][size=4][color=#1a1a1a]Chapter 1 - Gifts Of The Strand[/color][/size][/url] [LIST=I] [*] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2080968/1#post_24742550][b][color=#1a1a1a]Entry 1 - - - - - [i]Run![/i][/b][/color][/url] [*] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2080968/3#post_24896500][b][color=#1a1a1a]Entry 2 - - - - - [i]Don't Let Me Down...[/i][/b][/color][/url] [*] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2080968/4#post_25049078][b][color=#1a1a1a]Entry 3 - - - - - [i]Dreamless[/i][/b][/color][/url] [*] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2080968/4#post_25184254][b][color=#1a1a1a]Entry 4 - - - - - [i]What Matters Most[/i][/b][/color][/url] [*] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2080968/5#post_25320355][b][color=#1a1a1a]Entry 5 - - - - - [i]Tundra[/i][/b][/color][/url] [*] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2080968/5#post_25455762][b][color=#1a1a1a]Entry 6 - - - - - [i]Abanoned (Part I)[/i][/b][/color][/url] [*] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2080968/5#post_25595229][b][color=#1a1a1a]Entry 7 - - - - - [i]Abanoned (Part II)[/i][/b][/color][/url] [*] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2080968/6#post_25738644][b][color=#1a1a1a]Entry 8 - - - - - [i]Map Of The World[/i][/b][/color][/url] [*] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2080968/6#post_25887766][b][color=#1a1a1a]Entry 9 - - - - - [i]Adventure[/i][/b][/color][/url] [*] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2080968/7#post_25991851][b][color=#1a1a1a]Entry 10 - - - - [i]The Worst Mistake[/i][/b][/color][/url] [/LIST]
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Chapter 1 - Gifts Of The Strand
  1. Entry 1 - - - - - Run!
  2. Entry 2 - - - - - Don't Let Me Down...
  3. Entry 3 - - - - - Dreamless
  4. Entry 4 - - - - - What Matters Most
  5. Entry 5 - - - - - Tundra
  6. Entry 6 - - - - - Abanoned (Part I)
  7. Entry 7 - - - - - Abanoned (Part II)
  8. Entry 8 - - - - - Map Of The World
  9. Entry 9 - - - - - Adventure
  10. Entry 10 - - - - The Worst Mistake

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[center][img]http://orig13.deviantart.net/abb4/f/2017/064/6/2/the_dragons_by_masq_d-db1aqbr.png[/img] [img]http://orig12.deviantart.net/f00e/f/2017/064/4/9/celestial_starlet_by_masq_d-db1an90.png[/img][/center] [columns][b]Name:[/b] Petite | [b]Age:[/b] 22 [b]Gender: [/b]Female [b]Orientation:[/b] ? [b]Classification:[/b] Immortal Object Born in a clan where her only mindset was to be the best so she could one day find her true home. Petite moved to Anonymity-Ville, and shortly after arriving at her new found home Petite meets a charming Wildclaw named Leslie and the two quickly became friends. But her whole world is shaken up when her best friend gets promoted to a Defense Flier and tragedy befalls her best friend. Fleeing her home and everything she has ever known; Petite embarks on a devastating journey to Protect the last glimpses of her old life. But with enemies at her back; and uncertainty in her future... will she be strong enough to survive? [nextcol][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=6739524] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/67396/6739524_350.png[/img] [/url][/columns] [columns][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=9709374] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/97094/9709374_350.png[/img] [/url][nextcol][b]Name:[/b] Yui | [b]Age:[/b] 7 [b]Gender: [/b]Female [b]Orientation:[/b] ? [b]Classification:[/b] Immortal Object Hatched in The Strand by her would be mother Petite. Yui is an innocent young tundra, whose only goal is to keep Petite smiling at whatever cost. [/columns] [center][img]http://orig12.deviantart.net/533e/f/2017/064/e/7/anonymity_ville_by_masq_d-db1an98.png[/img][/center] [right][columns][b]Name:[/b] Apocalypse | [b]Age:[/b] 37 [b]Gender: [/b]Female [b]Orientation:[/b] Straight Bonded [b]Classification:[/b] Clan Elder The Distraught Leader, to Anonymity-Ville. Apocalypse spends many of her days with her head buried in books and paperwork; all in an attempt to make the clan a better place for all dragons. Her choices in delegation do not often go awry. She is insightful in recognising good pairs; and hard workers. Despite the fae language gap. She strives for balance in her clan, and for peace among the realms. But can easily be led astray by promises of a better life. [nextcol][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=6901489] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/69015/6901489_350.png[/img] [/url][/columns] [columns][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=6901490] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/69015/6901490_350.png[/img] [/url][nextcol][b]Name:[/b] WaraNingyo | [b]Age:[/b] 37 [b]Gender: [/b]Male [b]Orientation:[/b] Straight Bonded [b]Classification:[/b] Clan Elder Lore states that this proud guardian was once a gentle tundra. Wara now spends most of his days doing the heavy lifting and brunt of the defending of Anonymity-Ville when the clan is under attack. but often delegates his skills to dragons with more experience in melee fighting. While a still good-natured kind-hearted dragon. It can be hard to understand his motives.
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Name: Petite | Age: 22
Gender: Female
Orientation: ?
Classification: Immortal Object

Born in a clan where her only mindset was to be the best so she could one day find her true home. Petite moved to Anonymity-Ville, and shortly after arriving at her new found home Petite meets a charming Wildclaw named Leslie and the two quickly became friends. But her whole world is shaken up when her best friend gets promoted to a Defense Flier and tragedy befalls her best friend.

Fleeing her home and everything she has ever known; Petite embarks on a devastating journey to Protect the last glimpses of her old life. But with enemies at her back; and uncertainty in her future... will she be strong enough to survive?

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Name: Yui | Age: 7
Gender: Female
Orientation: ?
Classification: Immortal Object

Hatched in The Strand by her would be mother Petite.
Yui is an innocent young tundra, whose only goal is to keep Petite smiling at whatever cost.
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Name: Apocalypse | Age: 37
Gender: Female
Orientation: Straight Bonded
Classification: Clan Elder

The Distraught Leader, to Anonymity-Ville. Apocalypse spends many of her days with her head buried in books and paperwork; all in an attempt to make the clan a better place for all dragons. Her choices in delegation do not often go awry. She is insightful in recognising good pairs; and hard workers. Despite the fae language gap.

She strives for balance in her clan, and for peace among the realms. But can easily be led astray by promises of a better life.

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Name: WaraNingyo | Age: 37
Gender: Male
Orientation: Straight Bonded
Classification: Clan Elder

Lore states that this proud guardian was once a gentle tundra. Wara now spends most of his days doing the heavy lifting and brunt of the defending of Anonymity-Ville when the clan is under attack. but often delegates his skills to dragons with more experience in melee fighting. While a still good-natured kind-hearted dragon. It can be hard to understand his motives.
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[center][img]http://orig05.deviantart.net/ae6a/f/2017/064/e/c/chapter_1_by_masq_d-db1an8v.png[/img][/center] ----- [RIGHT] [COLOR=#BBBBBB]C[/COLOR][COLOR=#FFFFFF]~ [/COLOR] [COLOR=#BBBBBB]H[/COLOR][COLOR=#FFFFFF]~ [/COLOR] [COLOR=#BBBBBB]A[/COLOR][COLOR=#FFFFFF]~ [/COLOR] [COLOR=#BBBBBB]P[/COLOR][COLOR=#FFFFFF]~ [/COLOR] [COLOR=#BBBBBB]T[/COLOR][COLOR=#FFFFFF]~ [/COLOR] [COLOR=#BBBBBB]E[/COLOR][COLOR=#FFFFFF]~ [/COLOR] [COLOR=#BBBBBB]R[/COLOR][COLOR=#FFFFFF]~~~ [/COLOR] [COLOR=#BBBBBB]1[/COLOR][COLOR=#FFFFFF]~ [/COLOR] [B]ENTRY 1 [/B] [COLOR=#DDDDDD]01 - 01 - 17[/COLOR] [/RIGHT] [center][size=5][color=#75008f]RUN![/color][/size][/center] [center][size=1]@MasqD @ArgenteaMoon[/size][/center] [center][size=4][i][color=#aaaaaa]How had everything changed so much in such a little time? This had been her favorite season - When the orbit of Sornieth twisted away from the [color=#75008f][skystar][/color] and gave more power to the Icewarden. Driving away the heat that made younger dragonkin lurk in the shade for fear of getting [color=#75008f][starburn][/color] on their fragile wings.[/color][/i][/size][/center] The light of the skystar was just overhead now, and it was nearly middle-day. It had already been almost a whole day, and Petite wasn't even outside of her clan’s regular gathering fields and now forced to land. She had flown the whole way thus far, but the air pressure had dropped, and now there was no wind to carry her along. The skystar had barely burned off the morning fog, and there was no heat stored up in the ground yet for her to hover on either, the air had become stagnant. She would need to strum her wings continuously just to keep herself airborne, and that would only succeed in wearing her out quickly, something she didn’t need right now, she was a fugitive now after all. She knew she would have to make it to the forest by [color=#75008f][eveningfall][/color]. By now the hunting parties would have already started to comb the mountains looking for her. Abandoning one's clan was terrible, it was wrong and highly frowned upon, usually, when leaving to start anew, there was a huge send-off and well wishes. [i]But there was no one to send her off, or to wish her well.[/i] The idea of taking things from other clans was by its very nature wrong, but many dragons still did it, hoarding trophies and making games out of others misfortune. To steal an egg, however, was a crime far worse than just the petty thievery common of dragons, it was a crime punishable by no less than death. Still, she could not bring herself to return to them to [i]"that clan!"[/i] New memories replaced everything she used to be; "Memories" of things, of feelings she would never forget. They would continue to haunt her, tear her apart from the inside out, break her down. They shredded all her hopes and dreams, every bit of the future she had always dreamed of with her was gone now. “Time fixed nothing!” she vowed remorsefully and pressed on, leery of every shadow moving near her and taking the longest route to avoid any other clans in the area which might give away her position. That, of course, had been easy with flying, she could easily see all the under-skilled magelets of other clans practicing and working on building up their lairs just below, blissfully unaware of her flying overhead. On the ground she had little to no sight and walking around any bend could expose her to some new and unknown encampment. Each clan had a goal: to nurture their skills so that they may one day join the Arcanist at the Observatory on the highest point in Arcane territory. But Petite’s destination was far from the dreams of twenty thousand dragon clans. She was not sure if it had been a good idea to leave at all, but she knew one thing for certain she could not go back now. Not after everything. Her head began to swim dizzyingly fast again, and she felt queasy. It seemed as if her mind would never know peace again, that the thoughts in her head would always be an unforgiving tornado. Petite forced herself to breathe slow, calming breaths, looking around her and trying to find stable things to steady her grip on the reality of the world in front of her. The spinning began to slow and her headache dulled into something bearable. Petite sat for a moment. every second she stayed still meant another second closer to being found by Anonymity but she couldn't move, she could barely keep herself from crying let alone walking forward. She swung her tail and sent a small rock sailing away. [i]“Why had this happened, Why couldn't things go back to the way they were! Why did she have to do this, to be this dragon, this was wrong! Her life was wrong, what they did to Leslie... was wrong!”[/i] Her breath caught in her throat and she could taste the saltiness of the tears that adorned her cheek. It was true that none of this was fair, but sitting around waiting for... what? There was nothing left of what her life had been. And with the small egg protected by her coat, all she could do was to move forward. Her story now had a purpose, reason; the memories etched in her mind would always exist, and they would always hurt like a dagger to the heart. But this baby, it's story was unwritten, and Petite would fight for that, fight for the happiness of this egg. It was all she could do. Slowly she slowly stood up and began to walk deeper into the grove and towards the Starwood Strand. Petite felt the change in the air, as the light of the skystar began to wane. It would still be another day and a half before she made it within seeing distance of the Strand. She stretched her long, graceful wings eager to leave behind the mountainside - it had been excruciatingly painful to navigate the mountain on foot. She had almost crashed into two newly formed clans in just the last hour. Now it was almost eveningfall of the second day, every hour that passed made her feel safe like they would never find her. But she still had to be cautious. Avoiding obvious flight paths, and trails. Making even the slightest error in direction could mean certain death, the farther away she got, the less she knew about the terrain. One of the great things about being an imperial was that she had some of the biggest wings in her clan. [i]"No they were not hers anymore,”[/i] she frowned at that thought. Sure, she hated them for what they did, but now had no home to go back too: she was a renegade, a fugitive. She shook the idea of forgiving them from her mind; it had always been in her kind-hearted nature to forgive, regardless of circumstance. [i]“All it took to start a clan was two dragons, And the egg she had found with Leslie would make a fine companion. This time she would not forgive. Nor would she forget!”[/i] [center] [img]http://orig13.deviantart.net/0cf4/f/2017/064/2/2/spacer_by_masq_d-db1c677.png[/img][/center] The warm wind pulled against the leaves that refused to settle on the ground, sending them up in playful spirals, the crystalline waters a great aqua candy backdrop to their mischief. She laid out in the sun excited for her friend Leslie’s return. Today was her first day in the defense fliers. Petite smiled and gazed up at the skystar, holding one clawed palm to measure the distance between now and eveningfall. They should be returning any minute, she jumped to her feet and flew over to her nest; it was closer to the outside of the larger magical sap bubbles where the clan leaders lived, for some reason, she had always preferred the quiet, to the hustle and hum of "The First" bubbles. Faes, for the most part, used vibrations to speak to one another and only used magic casting to talk to dragons who didn't know the language or rather lacking the crest of frills which the fae species used to communicate. After a while hearing so much babble you couldn't understand, gave one a headache. She landed beside the familiar nest; Petite had never been one for decorations, the clan that had raised her hadn’t been fond of all the clutter everything had a system, and there wasn’t time for decoration. Most of those born to her birth home left when they were very young to help new clans grow in strength. Petite was just that, a helpful dragon for hunting and gathering. She would often lie in her den wondering what her parents were like, or rather what of her personality she had taken from them. She smiled at all the flowers Leslie had twisted around in the magically cured sap in the doorway, her nest was certainly brighter with her wildclaw touch. Even tho she had been born a fierce dragon by nature Leslie was nothing more than a big softy, she’d rather paint her claws than use them in a fight. On more than one occasion she had shown Petite her book of Fae spells. She moved apparel aside looking for the present she meticulously hid from the raptor-ish dragon. With the slightest tug she pulled out the jacket, it had taken two months of selling her food rations to afford it. It was just the right shade of leather with golden filigree, way too much for her sense of style, but it would look perfect on her friend. She looked at the egg floating in the corner and smiled. Flying directly over the center circle where they sorted the food into [color=#75008f][coffers][/color] to protect the daily reaping from spoiling. Petite heard the whistle that the hunting parties had returned, she couldn't have timed it any more perfect. But when she made it to the clearing she stopped dead in her tracks. ----- Links: [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=6739524] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/67396/6739524.png[/img] [/url] ----- ----- [u][b]Glossary[/b][/u] [LIST=I] [*]The Great Skystar: (Object) The Sun. [*]Starburn: (Afliction) Sunburn [*]Eveningfall: (Time Of Day) The Eve of Night; The Moment Between Dusk and Nighttime. [*]Coffers: (Object) A Place To Store Food So That It Doesn't Spoil. Food Inside Of Coffers Cannot Be Sold. ~A.k.a Converted Food Points~ [/LIST]
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ENTRY 1
01 - 01 - 17

RUN!


How had everything changed so much in such a little time? This had been her favorite season - When the orbit of Sornieth twisted away from the [skystar] and gave more power to the Icewarden. Driving away the heat that made younger dragonkin lurk in the shade for fear of getting [starburn] on their fragile wings.

The light of the skystar was just overhead now, and it was nearly middle-day. It had already been almost a whole day, and Petite wasn't even outside of her clan’s regular gathering fields and now forced to land. She had flown the whole way thus far, but the air pressure had dropped, and now there was no wind to carry her along. The skystar had barely burned off the morning fog, and there was no heat stored up in the ground yet for her to hover on either, the air had become stagnant. She would need to strum her wings continuously just to keep herself airborne, and that would only succeed in wearing her out quickly, something she didn’t need right now, she was a fugitive now after all. She knew she would have to make it to the forest by [eveningfall]. By now the hunting parties would have already started to comb the mountains looking for her.

Abandoning one's clan was terrible, it was wrong and highly frowned upon, usually, when leaving to start anew, there was a huge send-off and well wishes. But there was no one to send her off, or to wish her well. The idea of taking things from other clans was by its very nature wrong, but many dragons still did it, hoarding trophies and making games out of others misfortune. To steal an egg, however, was a crime far worse than just the petty thievery common of dragons, it was a crime punishable by no less than death.

Still, she could not bring herself to return to them to "that clan!"

New memories replaced everything she used to be; "Memories" of things, of feelings she would never forget. They would continue to haunt her, tear her apart from the inside out, break her down. They shredded all her hopes and dreams, every bit of the future she had always dreamed of with her was gone now.

“Time fixed nothing!” she vowed remorsefully and pressed on, leery of every shadow moving near her and taking the longest route to avoid any other clans in the area which might give away her position. That, of course, had been easy with flying, she could easily see all the under-skilled magelets of other clans practicing and working on building up their lairs just below, blissfully unaware of her flying overhead. On the ground she had little to no sight and walking around any bend could expose her to some new and unknown encampment.

Each clan had a goal: to nurture their skills so that they may one day join the Arcanist at the Observatory on the highest point in Arcane territory. But Petite’s destination was far from the dreams of twenty thousand dragon clans. She was not sure if it had been a good idea to leave at all, but she knew one thing for certain she could not go back now. Not after everything.

Her head began to swim dizzyingly fast again, and she felt queasy. It seemed as if her mind would never know peace again, that the thoughts in her head would always be an unforgiving tornado. Petite forced herself to breathe slow, calming breaths, looking around her and trying to find stable things to steady her grip on the reality of the world in front of her. The spinning began to slow and her headache dulled into something bearable.

Petite sat for a moment. every second she stayed still meant another second closer to being found by Anonymity but she couldn't move, she could barely keep herself from crying let alone walking forward. She swung her tail and sent a small rock sailing away.

“Why had this happened, Why couldn't things go back to the way they were! Why did she have to do this, to be this dragon, this was wrong! Her life was wrong, what they did to Leslie... was wrong!” Her breath caught in her throat and she could taste the saltiness of the tears that adorned her cheek.

It was true that none of this was fair, but sitting around waiting for... what? There was nothing left of what her life had been. And with the small egg protected by her coat, all she could do was to move forward. Her story now had a purpose, reason; the memories etched in her mind would always exist, and they would always hurt like a dagger to the heart. But this baby, it's story was unwritten, and Petite would fight for that, fight for the happiness of this egg. It was all she could do. Slowly she slowly stood up and began to walk deeper into the grove and towards the Starwood Strand.

Petite felt the change in the air, as the light of the skystar began to wane. It would still be another day and a half before she made it within seeing distance of the Strand. She stretched her long, graceful wings eager to leave behind the mountainside - it had been excruciatingly painful to navigate the mountain on foot. She had almost crashed into two newly formed clans in just the last hour.

Now it was almost eveningfall of the second day, every hour that passed made her feel safe like they would never find her. But she still had to be cautious. Avoiding obvious flight paths, and trails. Making even the slightest error in direction could mean certain death, the farther away she got, the less she knew about the terrain. One of the great things about being an imperial was that she had some of the biggest wings in her clan.

"No they were not hers anymore,” she frowned at that thought. Sure, she hated them for what they did, but now had no home to go back too: she was a renegade, a fugitive. She shook the idea of forgiving them from her mind; it had always been in her kind-hearted nature to forgive, regardless of circumstance. “All it took to start a clan was two dragons, And the egg she had found with Leslie would make a fine companion. This time she would not forgive. Nor would she forget!”
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The warm wind pulled against the leaves that refused to settle on the ground, sending them up in playful spirals, the crystalline waters a great aqua candy backdrop to their mischief. She laid out in the sun excited for her friend Leslie’s return. Today was her first day in the defense fliers. Petite smiled and gazed up at the skystar, holding one clawed palm to measure the distance between now and eveningfall.

They should be returning any minute, she jumped to her feet and flew over to her nest; it was closer to the outside of the larger magical sap bubbles where the clan leaders lived, for some reason, she had always preferred the quiet, to the hustle and hum of "The First" bubbles. Faes, for the most part, used vibrations to speak to one another and only used magic casting to talk to dragons who didn't know the language or rather lacking the crest of frills which the fae species used to communicate. After a while hearing so much babble you couldn't understand, gave one a headache.

She landed beside the familiar nest; Petite had never been one for decorations, the clan that had raised her hadn’t been fond of all the clutter everything had a system, and there wasn’t time for decoration. Most of those born to her birth home left when they were very young to help new clans grow in strength. Petite was just that, a helpful dragon for hunting and gathering. She would often lie in her den wondering what her parents were like, or rather what of her personality she had taken from them.

She smiled at all the flowers Leslie had twisted around in the magically cured sap in the doorway, her nest was certainly brighter with her wildclaw touch. Even tho she had been born a fierce dragon by nature Leslie was nothing more than a big softy, she’d rather paint her claws than use them in a fight. On more than one occasion she had shown Petite her book of Fae spells.

She moved apparel aside looking for the present she meticulously hid from the raptor-ish dragon. With the slightest tug she pulled out the jacket, it had taken two months of selling her food rations to afford it. It was just the right shade of leather with golden filigree, way too much for her sense of style, but it would look perfect on her friend. She looked at the egg floating in the corner and smiled.

Flying directly over the center circle where they sorted the food into [coffers] to protect the daily reaping from spoiling. Petite heard the whistle that the hunting parties had returned, she couldn't have timed it any more perfect. But when she made it to the clearing she stopped dead in her tracks.
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Glossary
  1. The Great Skystar: (Object) The Sun.
  2. Starburn: (Afliction) Sunburn
  3. Eveningfall: (Time Of Day) The Eve of Night; The Moment Between Dusk and Nighttime.
  4. Coffers: (Object) A Place To Store Food So That It Doesn't Spoil. Food Inside Of Coffers Cannot Be Sold. ~A.k.a Converted Food Points~
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@MasqD interesting! but I got some tips if you wanna hear them :3
@MasqD interesting! but I got some tips if you wanna hear them :3
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Yes please. <3
@argenteamoon


Yes please. <3
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@MasqD I think your paragraphs are too long? but that might be my inability to focus on long blocks of text on a screen. Also I think there are places where you need a punctuation mark, but there's nothing, and places where there are too many commas. can be more specific if you like.
@MasqD I think your paragraphs are too long? but that might be my inability to focus on long blocks of text on a screen. Also I think there are places where you need a punctuation mark, but there's nothing, and places where there are too many commas. can be more specific if you like.
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