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@SuperNinjaDragon [img]http://img09.deviantart.net/65d7/i/2013/322/4/3/danny__the_champion_of_the_world_by_oozepheroo-d6usv09.jpg[/img] [img]http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m372/Slyphier/With_text_web.jpg[/img] [url]http://oozepheroo.deviantart.com/art/Danny-The-Champion-of-the-World-414532089[/url] This is a book jacket illustration I did for a book by Roald Dahl. It's supposed to wrap around a hard cover book. If you go to the link, you can see it bigger. It's a book for kids, and the story focuses on the love of a father and his son and their crazy pheasant poaching adventures. [i]Destroy me.[/i] >D
@SuperNinjaDragon

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This is a book jacket illustration I did for a book by Roald Dahl. It's supposed to wrap around a hard cover book. If you go to the link, you can see it bigger.

It's a book for kids, and the story focuses on the love of a father and his son and their crazy pheasant poaching adventures.

Destroy me. >D
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Thank you @superninjadragon! :)

*roasts drawing and eats it, content with the verbal burning of the art*

*lol I don't even know where the actual drawing on paper is in my room anymore, o well, I can dream*
Thank you @superninjadragon! :)

*roasts drawing and eats it, content with the verbal burning of the art*

*lol I don't even know where the actual drawing on paper is in my room anymore, o well, I can dream*
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@Superninjadragon
Actually the viola just has one string that's lower than the violins and no E string. I thought that it might've been a viola because the two higher pitched strings seem nearly the same and doesn't look as thin as an E string
(I played he Viola for orchestra and I can say that the viola is just bigger than the violin by a few millimeters and doesn't have an E string)

I have no idea, I'm not an music expert, it just resembled more of an viola to me xD
@Superninjadragon
Actually the viola just has one string that's lower than the violins and no E string. I thought that it might've been a viola because the two higher pitched strings seem nearly the same and doesn't look as thin as an E string
(I played he Viola for orchestra and I can say that the viola is just bigger than the violin by a few millimeters and doesn't have an E string)

I have no idea, I'm not an music expert, it just resembled more of an viola to me xD
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@SuperNinjaDragon

I have a link to some of my most recent arts here. Thanks for offering this service! <3
@SuperNinjaDragon

I have a link to some of my most recent arts here. Thanks for offering this service! <3
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@Texasface
Oh, interesting! Thanks for telling me :)
@Texasface
Oh, interesting! Thanks for telling me :)
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@Relicbeast I love your art style - it's so cute :3 Anyways, let's critique! I think that for your commission: [img]https://67.media.tumblr.com/a4299a7d15ae2ae2dc32060d5b2db1a1/tumblr_oclnmzZFdB1vdj0gbo1_500.png[/img] You can make the legs a bit longer. Not too long to the point it loses the chibi look, but longer so it can be [b]in proportion with [/b]the torso and arms. And our next critique: [img]https://67.media.tumblr.com/38d680f8a5e00c3732e482a45e213347/tumblr_oc8vh8XcbJ1vdj0gbo1_540.png[/img] Since you did some shading in Emile's hair and eyes, I think it'll be suitable to add [b]shading[/b] to the rest of Emile's body. Your proportions are very good, so I don't need to say anything about that. Sorry about the late reply, and thanks for being patient :)
@Relicbeast
I love your art style - it's so cute :3
Anyways, let's critique! I think that for your commission:
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You can make the legs a bit longer. Not too long to the point it loses the chibi look, but longer so it can be in proportion with the torso and arms.
And our next critique:
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Since you did some shading in Emile's hair and eyes, I think it'll be suitable to add shading to the rest of Emile's body. Your proportions are very good, so I don't need to say anything about that.
Sorry about the late reply, and thanks for being patient :)
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@superninjadragon thank you! Also, that isnt shading in Emiles hair! Thats just how their hair is normally colored.
@superninjadragon thank you! Also, that isnt shading in Emiles hair! Thats just how their hair is normally colored.
@Relicbeast
Ahh! I'm so sorry! I did consider it might be the natural hair colour, but then I decided it might be shading.
@Relicbeast
Ahh! I'm so sorry! I did consider it might be the natural hair colour, but then I decided it might be shading.
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@superninjadragon its a-ok! I can totally see why youd think its shading
@superninjadragon its a-ok! I can totally see why youd think its shading
@relicbeast
Oh, okay. Thanks for letting me critique your art :D
@relicbeast
Oh, okay. Thanks for letting me critique your art :D
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