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@Rav3nw1nged
Glad to have helped :D
Thank you for the info! I might revamp my siggy to make my links clearer in a similar way :3
@Rav3nw1nged
Glad to have helped :D
Thank you for the info! I might revamp my siggy to make my links clearer in a similar way :3
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@SuperNinjaDragon Roast me based on my artshop. Do your worst. XD
@SuperNinjaDragon Roast me based on my artshop. Do your worst. XD
[center][img]https://i.imgur.com/Ptrecfq.png[/img] [img]https://i.imgur.com/eXNY0fq.png[/img][/center] these are both of my beginning digital art. I have been told its good considering i have no tablet and just a mouse. I'm not proud of it buuuuuut they are of both my dragons. I know they arent the best so im not expecting love lol
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these are both of my beginning digital art. I have been told its good considering i have no tablet and just a mouse. I'm not proud of it buuuuuut they are of both my dragons. I know they arent the best so im not expecting love lol
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I’ve got two pieces of art here vvv Be as harsh as you want! For this one, I was going for an alien that looks like a cross between a Velociraptor & Dog. (Also, I’m aware they look very feminine, it’s part of this character specifically.) [img]https://file.toyhou.se/images/8614633_ZryPDlpRab15NJq.png[/img] For this one, I’m more focused on the critique of the water + scenery. I used a waterbending base as a reference for the pose, but apparently it disappeared from my photo storage oops. [img]https://file.toyhou.se/images/7198609_Cr6TDSoAjXfKsLp.png[/img]
I’ve got two pieces of art here vvv
Be as harsh as you want!

For this one, I was going for an alien that looks like a cross between a Velociraptor & Dog. (Also, I’m aware they look very feminine, it’s part of this character specifically.)
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For this one, I’m more focused on the critique of the water + scenery. I used a waterbending base as a reference for the pose, but apparently it disappeared from my photo storage oops.
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Previously "RGDPersonallity"
@SuperNinjaDragon [img]https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-MTS5WM7wNos/W43ud2jNArI/AAAAAAAAF7E/1WRojrk-zscQ5hMlCeXXTjPN2onmEbBzgCL0BGAYYCw/h1535/5187513893970536713%253Faccount_id%253D1.png[/img] It's a Coatl bust commission for @skeptiical Something looks wrong, but I can't place it [img]http://i66.tinypic.com/2ivmnh0.jpg[/img]
@SuperNinjaDragon

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It's a Coatl bust commission for @skeptiical

Something looks wrong, but I can't place it

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mire hates me:(
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it hasn't been updated in a while but STILL
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@ShinyDecidueye

it may help if you didn’t have a broken link :”)
@ShinyDecidueye

it may help if you didn’t have a broken link :”)
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@abovecloud yoooooo this is a portrait piece I was commissioned. Hit me with it! [img]https://pre00.deviantart.net/fade/th/pre/i/2018/246/a/2/mojo_by_squiddikin-dclyp0f.jpg[/img]
@abovecloud yoooooo this is a portrait piece I was commissioned. Hit me with it!
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Ooo hi there this looks incredibly helpful! Do your worst! @SuperNinjaDragon [img]https://i.imgur.com/1s6b8UXl.jpg[/img] ^colored pencils + copic sketch [img]https://i.imgur.com/XYm8gKEl.jpg[/img] ^colored pencils [img]https://s8.postimg.cc/4dw99rnh1/IMG_5668.jpg[/img] ^colored pencils + copic sketch edit: yeah i know the shading on the last one's wings could be better, i was a bit distracted at the time lol
Ooo hi there this looks incredibly helpful! Do your worst! @SuperNinjaDragon

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^colored pencils + copic sketch

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^colored pencils

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^colored pencils + copic sketch
edit: yeah i know the shading on the last one's wings could be better, i was a bit distracted at the time lol
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@aboveclouds O.O ur art is so good! Oh my gosh! Please absolutely murder these pieces, and my insignificant art skillz A little dragon blorb i doodled [img]https://i.postimg.cc/SKYYPwbz/3-B594743-7-EC9-43-DE-B64-F-E01-FCC68-A19-A.jpg[/img] A random OC design, the sqigglys on his sides and stuff are markings.[img]https://i.postimg.cc/K8zMP19f/4-EB952-B9-13-A7-418-E-A2-C7-F085512-AB8-A0.png [/img] Kauhu, my DnD character. (His pose here looks awkward i know) [img] https://i.postimg.cc/cHqtGXdk/C8-C4-C49-F-004-D-4-C1-B-B080-3-B31-DF859488.jpg [/img] Another little doodle, of Kauhu and another of my DnD characters fighting [img] https://i.postimg.cc/vZN63Gks/F21-C7-AC6-1560-4-A3-F-BC4-A-8408-FEC78-B8-E.jpg[/img] I have already identified a few of my problems. Ie-feathering, instead of longer continuous lines..., but please, id love to be critiqued, as i know it will help me grow as an artist.
@aboveclouds
O.O ur art is so good! Oh my gosh!
Please absolutely murder these pieces, and my insignificant art skillz
A little dragon blorb i doodled
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A random OC design, the sqigglys on his sides and stuff are markings.4-EB952-B9-13-A7-418-E-A2-C7-F085512-AB8-A0.png
Kauhu, my DnD character. (His pose here looks awkward i know)
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Another little doodle, of Kauhu and another of my DnD characters fighting
F21-C7-AC6-1560-4-A3-F-BC4-A-8408-FEC78-B8-E.jpg
I have already identified a few of my problems. Ie-feathering, instead of longer continuous lines..., but please, id love to be critiqued, as i know it will help me grow as an artist.
Wassup my bros
Hello everybody! Sorry, I think I haven't been clear enough.

Since I just slowly phased out of being able to write critique since I was busy but always thought 'I'll come back to it soon' I left the thread as it was.

Now I've updated the title with '[closed]' so that it'll be clear I will no longer be writing critique. I should've done this a lot sooner, sorry everybody :(

However, I'm planning on getting back to critiquing, making the process a whole lot clearer and cleaner, etc. and will be making a new thread! So stay tuned :3
Hello everybody! Sorry, I think I haven't been clear enough.

Since I just slowly phased out of being able to write critique since I was busy but always thought 'I'll come back to it soon' I left the thread as it was.

Now I've updated the title with '[closed]' so that it'll be clear I will no longer be writing critique. I should've done this a lot sooner, sorry everybody :(

However, I'm planning on getting back to critiquing, making the process a whole lot clearer and cleaner, etc. and will be making a new thread! So stay tuned :3
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