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Well, I'm finally going to do a nuzlocke. I couldn't bring myself to dump all my existing dragons, so this is going to be a partitioned nuzlocke, the general outline for which can be found [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/qnc/2175070]here[/url]. And if you're unfamiliar with the normal nuzlocke challenge, you can find it [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/frd/1150203/1]here[/url]. Without further ado... On to the rules! [center]~*~*~*~*~*~*~[/center] [indent]-I'll be starting with [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=118584&tab=dragon&did=26493854]Orodruin[/url] and [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=118584&did=33301118]Eiros[/url]. -New dragons may be acquired by finding eggs in the coli, buying one egg per month (funds permitting), or buying one dragon for every three dragons I get to level 25 (ungened, any breed, and funds permitting). Eggs may be donated, but only one egg per user for every three months. [s]You know who you are.... :P[/s] -Genes can only be applied to a dragon after it reaches levels 10, 15, and 25 for their primary, secondary, and tertiary respectively. -Food, familiars, battlestones, and apparel must be found in the coli or bought/brewed with treasure and items earned by the nuzlocke dragons. -If a dragon faints in the coli, it is dead and must be sold, exalted, or raffled off. Exceptions in the next rule. -If a dragon reaches level 25 and faints in the coli, flip a coin. Tails, the dragon dies. Heads, the dragon must 'rest' and not enter the coli for 2 weeks. No reflipping. -Nuzlocke dragons may only breed with each other. -For every hatchling born (nest eggs only, not abandoned elemental eggs), flip a coin. Tales, the hatchling dies. Heads, it lives. No reflipping. -One breed change may be purchased for every egg hatched (funds permitting).[/indent] [center]~*~*~*~*~*~*~[/center] [center]~ Story Quick Links ~ [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2196520#post_27468673]Prologue[/url] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2196520#post_27574968]Stubborn Ideals[/url] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2196520#post_27630928]Janus[/url] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2196520#post_27699059]Southern Currents[/url] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2196520/2#post_27814146]Family Feud[/url] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2196520/2#post_27943145]Remember For Me[/url] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2196520/2#post_28100991]Healer[/url] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2196520/3#post_28465110]Nightmares[/url][/center] [center]~*~*~*~*~*~*~[/center] [center]~ Nuzlocke Dragons ~ [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=118584&tab=dragon&did=26493854][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/264939/26493854.png[/img][/url][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=118584&tab=dragon&did=33301118][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/333012/33301118.png[/img][/url][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=118584&tab=dragon&did=33573731][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/335738/33573731.png[/img][/url][/center] [center]~*~*~*~*~*~*~[/center]
Well, I'm finally going to do a nuzlocke. I couldn't bring myself to dump all my existing dragons, so this is going to be a partitioned nuzlocke, the general outline for which can be found here. And if you're unfamiliar with the normal nuzlocke challenge, you can find it here. Without further ado... On to the rules!

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-I'll be starting with Orodruin and Eiros.
-New dragons may be acquired by finding eggs in the coli, buying one egg per month (funds permitting), or buying one dragon for every three dragons I get to level 25 (ungened, any breed, and funds permitting). Eggs may be donated, but only one egg per user for every three months. You know who you are.... :P
-Genes can only be applied to a dragon after it reaches levels 10, 15, and 25 for their primary, secondary, and tertiary respectively.
-Food, familiars, battlestones, and apparel must be found in the coli or bought/brewed with treasure and items earned by the nuzlocke dragons.
-If a dragon faints in the coli, it is dead and must be sold, exalted, or raffled off. Exceptions in the next rule.
-If a dragon reaches level 25 and faints in the coli, flip a coin. Tails, the dragon dies. Heads, the dragon must 'rest' and not enter the coli for 2 weeks. No reflipping.
-Nuzlocke dragons may only breed with each other.
-For every hatchling born (nest eggs only, not abandoned elemental eggs), flip a coin. Tales, the hatchling dies. Heads, it lives. No reflipping.
-One breed change may be purchased for every egg hatched (funds permitting).

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[center][size=5][b][u]Prologue[/u][/b][/size][/center] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/qmJ3pxq.png[/img][/center] "Are you sure you're strong enough for this?" "I was a healer. I owe it to the ones I failed." "Repay that debt by staying alive." "I plan to." Imona studied the black wildclaw closely, taking in the drake's injuries and then contrasting them with the determined fire in his eyes. "Alright. But when we're done, you need to rest." Orodruin rested his head on his back and peered at the pearlcatcher over the edge of one wing. He didn't agree, but didn't argue either. "Tell me about the symptoms," Imona told him. Orodruin didn't answer immediately. he closed his eyes and took several deep breaths. "It started with a simple fever. Three to four days after the onset, the fever would break and the subject would show every sign of recovery. Between one and two weeks after that, the subject's plumage and scales would begin to fade. First to a solid colour like mine and then to a washed out grey," Orodruin said. He took another ragged breath. "During that time, there were sometimes other symptoms, but they were varied. Low fevers, migraines, dizziness, and blurred vision. Sometimes nothing at all. Krakatau and I couldn't find a pattern." "And then?" Imona asked. He felt certain he knew the answer and his claw shook slightly. He didn't want to hear what he was sure Orodruin would say, but he had to listen. "And then they died." The words were so soft that Imona barely heard them. He was thankful when Orodruin rallied his strength for the rest of his description. "As a patient's colours faded, so did their energy. They would become weak, short of breath, and lethargic. Only a few possessed wills strong enough to fight through it to the end." Orodruin paused. "To a dragon, I watched my friends, my enemies, my family die and no remedy, no cure, no old wives' medicine that I knew could save them." "Orodruin-" "Don't use that name!" the wildclaw shrieked. "I'm not worthy of it. I should have died with them. I should have... I'm sorry. You were right, Imona. I'm not strong enough for this yet." Orodruin rose to his feet and took a few unsteady steps towards the door. Imona hurried to block his way. "Where are you going? You promised to rest," the pearlcatcher protested. "And I will. Outside. But not here. You have what you need. Tell all Sornieth about Blacksands Fading Fever." Outside, Orodruin stood in the dark under the stars, thinking about what he was going to do next. Without his clan, his mate, his mentor, he felt lost. He closed his eyes and pictured the Lightning dragoness he had met during his travels. Already pale with the fever, she had pressed her last living egg into Orodruin's claws and begged him to take the hatchling out of danger. Now the Summer Squalls had offered them a home. "He's safe now," the wildclaw whispered. "I can't do more for him than that, but I will find the cure to this plague." A shiver ran through him as he said the words. They felt right. This must be the reason the Eleven had kept him alive while his precious Ereba faded! He would leave as soon as his wounds healed and return to the Blacksand Annex. He find the answer even if he had to travel to the halls of the Plaguebringer herself. Feeling calmer now that he had a plan, Orodruin curled up on the damp grass and fell asleep. [center]~*~*~*~*~*~*~ [/center] Two months passed and Orodruin grew restless. The numerous injuries he had sustained crossing the Ashfall Wastes were little more than a nuisance now. Even the worst of them, a bad sprain in his left hip was almost completely healed. Furthermore, with the guardian hatchling, Eiros as he called himself, adjusting well to the Wind clan, there was little left to hold Orodruin on the Plateau. Eiros had become something of a favorite among the Squalls' dragonesses and Orodruin allowed himself a small smile at the thought. The Eleven were surely watching out for that hatchling and Orodruin's promise to Eiros' mother could easily be considered fulfilled. Imona, however, didn't share Orodruin's opinion about the wildclaw's fitness. "You shouldn't be travelling so soon," the pearlcatcher informed the drake during one of their periodic examinations. "I'll be fine," Orodruin insisted. "I'm worried about more than your physical fitness, Orodruin," Imona said sharply. "And even that is questionable." "I didn't ask for your opinion." "And as a healer it is my duty to give it anyways," Imona replied. He tone softened as he tried another line of reasoning. "Besides, it's incredibly dangerous to travel alone. The Squalls are on good terms with the Beastclans in the area. Let one of us go with you." Orodruin was already shaking his head. "Absolutely not," he insisted. "I won't put another dragon in danger. This is something I have to do." The pair was interrupted by a cough from the doorway. The two drakes turned to see Eiros watching them. "I'll go with him." "You won't," Imona and Orodruin said together. "Actually, neither of you gets a say in this," Eiros said, much more calmly than most hatchlings who have just been told they can't do something. "I will either travel with Orodruin or I will leave on my Search. And just so happen to travel into the Ashfall Wastes." Every dragon in the room was silent for a moment and then Imona laughed. "Well, since I can't stop him, at least you won't be alone, Orodruin," he said. The wildclaw glared at the young guardian who acted as if he were completely oblivious to the older drake's displeasure. "Fine. Have it your way," he said. "This time." ------------------------------------------------------------------ [center][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2196520#post_27574968]Next[/url][/center]
Prologue
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"Are you sure you're strong enough for this?"

"I was a healer. I owe it to the ones I failed."

"Repay that debt by staying alive."

"I plan to."

Imona studied the black wildclaw closely, taking in the drake's injuries and then contrasting them with the determined fire in his eyes.

"Alright. But when we're done, you need to rest."

Orodruin rested his head on his back and peered at the pearlcatcher over the edge of one wing. He didn't agree, but didn't argue either.

"Tell me about the symptoms," Imona told him.

Orodruin didn't answer immediately. he closed his eyes and took several deep breaths.

"It started with a simple fever. Three to four days after the onset, the fever would break and the subject would show every sign of recovery. Between one and two weeks after that, the subject's plumage and scales would begin to fade. First to a solid colour like mine and then to a washed out grey," Orodruin said. He took another ragged breath. "During that time, there were sometimes other symptoms, but they were varied. Low fevers, migraines, dizziness, and blurred vision. Sometimes nothing at all. Krakatau and I couldn't find a pattern."

"And then?" Imona asked. He felt certain he knew the answer and his claw shook slightly. He didn't want to hear what he was sure Orodruin would say, but he had to listen.

"And then they died." The words were so soft that Imona barely heard them. He was thankful when Orodruin rallied his strength for the rest of his description.

"As a patient's colours faded, so did their energy. They would become weak, short of breath, and lethargic. Only a few possessed wills strong enough to fight through it to the end."

Orodruin paused. "To a dragon, I watched my friends, my enemies, my family die and no remedy, no cure, no old wives' medicine that I knew could save them."

"Orodruin-"

"Don't use that name!" the wildclaw shrieked. "I'm not worthy of it. I should have died with them. I should have... I'm sorry. You were right, Imona. I'm not strong enough for this yet." Orodruin rose to his feet and took a few unsteady steps towards the door. Imona hurried to block his way.

"Where are you going? You promised to rest," the pearlcatcher protested.

"And I will. Outside. But not here. You have what you need. Tell all Sornieth about Blacksands Fading Fever."


Outside, Orodruin stood in the dark under the stars, thinking about what he was going to do next. Without his clan, his mate, his mentor, he felt lost. He closed his eyes and pictured the Lightning dragoness he had met during his travels. Already pale with the fever, she had pressed her last living egg into Orodruin's claws and begged him to take the hatchling out of danger. Now the Summer Squalls had offered them a home.

"He's safe now," the wildclaw whispered. "I can't do more for him than that, but I will find the cure to this plague."

A shiver ran through him as he said the words. They felt right. This must be the reason the Eleven had kept him alive while his precious Ereba faded!

He would leave as soon as his wounds healed and return to the Blacksand Annex. He find the answer even if he had to travel to the halls of the Plaguebringer herself.

Feeling calmer now that he had a plan, Orodruin curled up on the damp grass and fell asleep.

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Two months passed and Orodruin grew restless. The numerous injuries he had sustained crossing the Ashfall Wastes were little more than a nuisance now. Even the worst of them, a bad sprain in his left hip was almost completely healed. Furthermore, with the guardian hatchling, Eiros as he called himself, adjusting well to the Wind clan, there was little left to hold Orodruin on the Plateau.

Eiros had become something of a favorite among the Squalls' dragonesses and Orodruin allowed himself a small smile at the thought. The Eleven were surely watching out for that hatchling and Orodruin's promise to Eiros' mother could easily be considered fulfilled.

Imona, however, didn't share Orodruin's opinion about the wildclaw's fitness.

"You shouldn't be travelling so soon," the pearlcatcher informed the drake during one of their periodic examinations.

"I'll be fine," Orodruin insisted.

"I'm worried about more than your physical fitness, Orodruin," Imona said sharply. "And even that is questionable."

"I didn't ask for your opinion."

"And as a healer it is my duty to give it anyways," Imona replied. He tone softened as he tried another line of reasoning. "Besides, it's incredibly dangerous to travel alone. The Squalls are on good terms with the Beastclans in the area. Let one of us go with you."

Orodruin was already shaking his head. "Absolutely not," he insisted. "I won't put another dragon in danger. This is something I have to do."

The pair was interrupted by a cough from the doorway. The two drakes turned to see Eiros watching them.

"I'll go with him."

"You won't," Imona and Orodruin said together.

"Actually, neither of you gets a say in this," Eiros said, much more calmly than most hatchlings who have just been told they can't do something. "I will either travel with Orodruin or I will leave on my Search. And just so happen to travel into the Ashfall Wastes."

Every dragon in the room was silent for a moment and then Imona laughed. "Well, since I can't stop him, at least you won't be alone, Orodruin," he said.

The wildclaw glared at the young guardian who acted as if he were completely oblivious to the older drake's displeasure.

"Fine. Have it your way," he said. "This time."



[center][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2196520#post_27468673]Previous[/url][/center] ---------------------------------------------------------------- [center][size=5][b][u]Stubborn Ideals[/u][/b][/size][/center] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/UsG2MF8.png[/img][/center] "I told you I would be helpful," Eiros informed Orodruin as the older drake passed him the carefully collected carpenter wax from the empty hive. Orodruin gave the fledgling guardian an inscrutable glance. He didn't like to admit that the rebellious young dragon was right, but he also wasn't quite hard headed enough to insist that he would have been fine on his own. Eiros had saved his life more than once over the past few weeks, though the first time it had happened had easily been the most startling. It was their first day alone together and they had been set upon by a particularly vicious pair of webwings. The two drakes hadn't thought to stay together and the webwings had separated them. Pinned down and bleeding from cuts on his shoulders, neck, and sides, Orodruin had seen death in the emerald webwing's eyes. And then, very simply, the webwing was gone and Eiros was standing in its place, sides heaving and nothing but panic in his face. "I guess so," Orodruin said grudgingly and Eiros grinned. It was the closest to an apology he was likely to get. Orodruin's gruff ways didn't bother the young guardian. There were far too many other things that needed his attention to waste it on concern for Orodruin. The closest he had ever come was early in their journey. The pair had camped two days journey out from the lair of the Summer Squalls and Eiros had asked for Orodruin's help with a deep bruise. The wildclaw had refused and Eiros, puzzled, asked why he didn't just use his healing magic. Orodruin had grunted something about not deserving to be a healer anymore and how Eiros could go soak his paw in the nearby creek to help it. Eiros hadn't thought it wise to ask too many questions since. Leaving the ruined carpenter hive, the two drakes continued on across the Windswept Plateau, heading towards the Ashfall Wastes. Eiros would gallop ahead, half running and half jumping to glide on half-developed wings, and then pause for Orodruin to catch up before hurrying ahead again. Anything to keep him busy and distract him from the thousand questions he wanted to ask his companion about their quest. In the end, it was Orodruin who broke the silence, calling Eiros' name as he approached. "Why did you come with me?" "Huh?" Eiros asked, his brain still bounding around somewhere in the atmosphere. "The Squalls would have been happy to have you until you were old enough to leave on your Search. Why would you risk that to come with me to the Eleven know where?" Orodruin said, the words coming out more tired than confused or frustrated. Eiros took a moment to consider the question before answering. "You saved me," he said, as if gratitude was all a young dragon barely out of his egg needed to leave a safe home to go on a dangerous journey. Orodruin wasn't ready to accept that answer, though. "There's more to it than that," he insisted. The guardian stared at the wildclaw, not sure how to put into words what had made him decide to come with Orodruin. It was gratitude for Orodruin's willingness to help Eiros' mother save her child, but it was also something about how sad Orodruin seemed and how alone he was. He didn't deserve to be alone. And there was more to it than that. Orodruin was on a quest to find the cure to the disease that had killed his family, but that same disease had stolen Eiros' chance to know his own family. How could he even start to explain to Orodruin that he felt robbed of something he had never known and probably never would? So he didn't. "Nope, that's it," Eiros insisted, shuffling one paw against the grass. "Didn't seem fair to let you walk off to your death and rob me of my chance to thank you properly someday." Orodruin studied Eiros and then turned away with a sigh. "Much too serious for a fledgling of one month." Eiros laughed at that. "You're too serious for a healer of ten years," he replied. "What do you expect from me if you're my only company?" And to that, Orodruin had no response. Eiros did have a point, after all. ------------------------------------------------- [center][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2196520#post_27630928]Next[/url][/center] [center]---------------------------------------------[/center] OOC: I'm going to try to update this at least once a week and work in anything noteworthy into the story. I've only officially been doing the nuzlocke for two days now, but so far nothing extraordinary has happened. Orodruin did almost die in his second battle where he was only saved by the emerald webwing choosing to attack Eiros instead of Orodruin. Guess that'll teach me to pay better attention...



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"I told you I would be helpful," Eiros informed Orodruin as the older drake passed him the carefully collected carpenter wax from the empty hive.

Orodruin gave the fledgling guardian an inscrutable glance. He didn't like to admit that the rebellious young dragon was right, but he also wasn't quite hard headed enough to insist that he would have been fine on his own. Eiros had saved his life more than once over the past few weeks, though the first time it had happened had easily been the most startling.

It was their first day alone together and they had been set upon by a particularly vicious pair of webwings. The two drakes hadn't thought to stay together and the webwings had separated them. Pinned down and bleeding from cuts on his shoulders, neck, and sides, Orodruin had seen death in the emerald webwing's eyes.

And then, very simply, the webwing was gone and Eiros was standing in its place, sides heaving and nothing but panic in his face.

"I guess so," Orodruin said grudgingly and Eiros grinned. It was the closest to an apology he was likely to get.

Orodruin's gruff ways didn't bother the young guardian. There were far too many other things that needed his attention to waste it on concern for Orodruin. The closest he had ever come was early in their journey.

The pair had camped two days journey out from the lair of the Summer Squalls and Eiros had asked for Orodruin's help with a deep bruise. The wildclaw had refused and Eiros, puzzled, asked why he didn't just use his healing magic.

Orodruin had grunted something about not deserving to be a healer anymore and how Eiros could go soak his paw in the nearby creek to help it.

Eiros hadn't thought it wise to ask too many questions since.

Leaving the ruined carpenter hive, the two drakes continued on across the Windswept Plateau, heading towards the Ashfall Wastes. Eiros would gallop ahead, half running and half jumping to glide on half-developed wings, and then pause for Orodruin to catch up before hurrying ahead again. Anything to keep him busy and distract him from the thousand questions he wanted to ask his companion about their quest.

In the end, it was Orodruin who broke the silence, calling Eiros' name as he approached.

"Why did you come with me?"

"Huh?" Eiros asked, his brain still bounding around somewhere in the atmosphere.

"The Squalls would have been happy to have you until you were old enough to leave on your Search. Why would you risk that to come with me to the Eleven know where?" Orodruin said, the words coming out more tired than confused or frustrated.

Eiros took a moment to consider the question before answering. "You saved me," he said, as if gratitude was all a young dragon barely out of his egg needed to leave a safe home to go on a dangerous journey.

Orodruin wasn't ready to accept that answer, though.

"There's more to it than that," he insisted.

The guardian stared at the wildclaw, not sure how to put into words what had made him decide to come with Orodruin. It was gratitude for Orodruin's willingness to help Eiros' mother save her child, but it was also something about how sad Orodruin seemed and how alone he was. He didn't deserve to be alone. And there was more to it than that. Orodruin was on a quest to find the cure to the disease that had killed his family, but that same disease had stolen Eiros' chance to know his own family.

How could he even start to explain to Orodruin that he felt robbed of something he had never known and probably never would? So he didn't.

"Nope, that's it," Eiros insisted, shuffling one paw against the grass. "Didn't seem fair to let you walk off to your death and rob me of my chance to thank you properly someday."

Orodruin studied Eiros and then turned away with a sigh. "Much too serious for a fledgling of one month."

Eiros laughed at that. "You're too serious for a healer of ten years," he replied. "What do you expect from me if you're my only company?"

And to that, Orodruin had no response. Eiros did have a point, after all.






OOC: I'm going to try to update this at least once a week and work in anything noteworthy into the story. I've only officially been doing the nuzlocke for two days now, but so far nothing extraordinary has happened. Orodruin did almost die in his second battle where he was only saved by the emerald webwing choosing to attack Eiros instead of Orodruin. Guess that'll teach me to pay better attention...
[center][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2196520#post_27574968]Previous[/url][/center] --------------------------------------------- [center]@Petall @Spiritfire [size=5][b][u]Janus[/u][/b][/size] [img]http://imgur.com/fcvvW4P.png[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/UsG2MF8.png[/img][/center] The open plains and bamboo forests of the Windswept Plateau seemed to go on forever. Eiros and Orodruin had been travelling for just over a month and they still hadn't reached the edge of the Ashfall Wastes. Eiros started to ask Orodruin what was taking them so long, thought about it for a second, and decided to go ahead. "Are we ever going to get to the Wastes?" he asked, his voice taking on a more moaning tone than he had intended. Orodruin glared at him for a moment, then heaved a sigh. Eiros relaxed a bit as well, realizing that the older dragon had decided he couldn't blame the young drake for not knowing. "The Squalls live at the northern end of the Plateau, at the base of the Reedcleft Ascent and right next to the Sea of a Thousand Currents," Orodruin said at last. "The Ashfall Waste is to the southeast, but we'll have to cross the entire Plateau. You'll probably start seeing the Waste in the next few days. We'll have to follow the border a little ways, though. There's a steep cliff down from the Plateau and we'll have to find a place where we can climb down." Eiros nodded once, then tipped his head in mild confusion. "And we can't just fly down because..." "The winds off the Plateau are unpredictable. I could probably make it down. But I'm not willing to try it with a lumbering guardian fletchling along. You'd probably get lost or hurt and then I'd have to take care of you out here in the wild." Orodruin stopped and added a small smile to his next words. "More importantly, I saw you bouncing around like a burned jackalope yesterday. You can't fly yet." Eiros started to protest, but he didn't want to lie. "So I suppose I'd better start teaching you," the wildclaw added. It never occurred to Eiros to question how a wildclaw planned to teach a guardian to fly. He had a certain amount of faith in his companion and if Orodruin said he could teach Eiros, then Eiros would believe that the wildclaw had that ability. And, surprisingly, the older drake did have a solid grasp of the mechanics of a guardian's flight. They spent the rest of the day using the strong winds across the Plateau to practice gliding and the two tired dragons made camp that night without making much progress. Eiros took the first watch, grumbling a little as Orodruin settled down in a makeshift reed nest that blocked most of the constant breeze. Now that the sun had gone down, the chill was much more noticeable. The guardian shivered and settled himself a little ways away from his friend and listened to the night noises of the Plateau. He wasn't sure how long exactly he watched, eyes staring blindly into the dark, but the faint sliver of moon overhead hadn't quite reached the angle Orodruin had set for waking him. Something had caught Eiros' attention, though, and he tried to focus on whatever he had seen or heard. The rustle came again and this time Eiros heard it. Moving as quietly as he could, he stood and crept forward. He kept his wings still and his tail out of the grass as he heard the rustle once more, closer this time. Eiros twisted his head, trying to get a location for the sound. The next time it moved, he thought he could... There it was! He lunged, pouncing down on whatever was stalking through the grass and calling out for Orodruin as he grappled with the furry thing he had found. The wildclaw sprang to his feet, evidently not sleeping as soundly as Eiros had assumed, and blew a quick breath of fire into the sky. For a split second, the area was lit up in a shower of sparks and Eiros saw the cream coloured creature he had captured. Then Orodruin kicked viciously into the creature's head and it fell still. "Phytocat," Orodruin said in awe. "I've never seen one before, but Ereba..." He choked, but forced his way through, "loved them." Eiros was much less interested in what it was, though, and much more interested in what to do with it. "Can I keep it?" Orodruin stared at the guardian in surprise. "Keep it? It'll kill us the second we turn our backs on it." "Janus wouldn't kill us," Eiros protested. "Janus?" "That's his name." Orodruin blinked. "His name," he repeated dully. He shook his head. "No, Eiros, you can't keep the phytocat. They're vicious and we won't get a solid nights' sleep." "We keep a watch, anyways," Eiros protested, trying to see the wildclaw through the dark. "I'll make him a leash and earn his trust and everything'll be fine!" Orodruin placed his head in his paws. "Eiros..." He hissed in frustration. "Fine. But I don't trust that thing and you'd better not either. I can't watch your back every minute of the day, you know." Eiros stroked the phytocat's still form. "Sure thing, Orodruin," he said, dragging the mammal back to where he had been lying earlier. "Your gonna love it with us, Janus." The wildclaw hissed again, muttering under his breath about foolish fledglings. Then again, if the addle-brain was right and he could win the phytocat's trust, it could prove helpful. They were, after all, only two dragons against the world. Or it could prove to be the death of Orodruin's only companion. "Flamecaller, please don't let it kill us," he whispered as he drifted back to an uneasy sleep. [center][img]http://flightrising.com/images/cms/familiar/art/1149.png[/img][/center] ------------------------------------------------------- [center][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2196520#post_27699059]Next[/url][/center]


@Petall @Spiritfire

Janus
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The open plains and bamboo forests of the Windswept Plateau seemed to go on forever. Eiros and Orodruin had been travelling for just over a month and they still hadn't reached the edge of the Ashfall Wastes. Eiros started to ask Orodruin what was taking them so long, thought about it for a second, and decided to go ahead.

"Are we ever going to get to the Wastes?" he asked, his voice taking on a more moaning tone than he had intended. Orodruin glared at him for a moment, then heaved a sigh. Eiros relaxed a bit as well, realizing that the older dragon had decided he couldn't blame the young drake for not knowing.

"The Squalls live at the northern end of the Plateau, at the base of the Reedcleft Ascent and right next to the Sea of a Thousand Currents," Orodruin said at last. "The Ashfall Waste is to the southeast, but we'll have to cross the entire Plateau. You'll probably start seeing the Waste in the next few days. We'll have to follow the border a little ways, though. There's a steep cliff down from the Plateau and we'll have to find a place where we can climb down."

Eiros nodded once, then tipped his head in mild confusion. "And we can't just fly down because..."

"The winds off the Plateau are unpredictable. I could probably make it down. But I'm not willing to try it with a lumbering guardian fletchling along. You'd probably get lost or hurt and then I'd have to take care of you out here in the wild." Orodruin stopped and added a small smile to his next words. "More importantly, I saw you bouncing around like a burned jackalope yesterday. You can't fly yet."

Eiros started to protest, but he didn't want to lie.

"So I suppose I'd better start teaching you," the wildclaw added.

It never occurred to Eiros to question how a wildclaw planned to teach a guardian to fly. He had a certain amount of faith in his companion and if Orodruin said he could teach Eiros, then Eiros would believe that the wildclaw had that ability. And, surprisingly, the older drake did have a solid grasp of the mechanics of a guardian's flight. They spent the rest of the day using the strong winds across the Plateau to practice gliding and the two tired dragons made camp that night without making much progress.

Eiros took the first watch, grumbling a little as Orodruin settled down in a makeshift reed nest that blocked most of the constant breeze. Now that the sun had gone down, the chill was much more noticeable. The guardian shivered and settled himself a little ways away from his friend and listened to the night noises of the Plateau.

He wasn't sure how long exactly he watched, eyes staring blindly into the dark, but the faint sliver of moon overhead hadn't quite reached the angle Orodruin had set for waking him. Something had caught Eiros' attention, though, and he tried to focus on whatever he had seen or heard. The rustle came again and this time Eiros heard it. Moving as quietly as he could, he stood and crept forward. He kept his wings still and his tail out of the grass as he heard the rustle once more, closer this time. Eiros twisted his head, trying to get a location for the sound. The next time it moved, he thought he could...

There it was! He lunged, pouncing down on whatever was stalking through the grass and calling out for Orodruin as he grappled with the furry thing he had found.

The wildclaw sprang to his feet, evidently not sleeping as soundly as Eiros had assumed, and blew a quick breath of fire into the sky. For a split second, the area was lit up in a shower of sparks and Eiros saw the cream coloured creature he had captured. Then Orodruin kicked viciously into the creature's head and it fell still.

"Phytocat," Orodruin said in awe. "I've never seen one before, but Ereba..." He choked, but forced his way through, "loved them."

Eiros was much less interested in what it was, though, and much more interested in what to do with it.

"Can I keep it?"

Orodruin stared at the guardian in surprise. "Keep it? It'll kill us the second we turn our backs on it."

"Janus wouldn't kill us," Eiros protested.

"Janus?"

"That's his name."

Orodruin blinked. "His name," he repeated dully. He shook his head. "No, Eiros, you can't keep the phytocat. They're vicious and we won't get a solid nights' sleep."

"We keep a watch, anyways," Eiros protested, trying to see the wildclaw through the dark. "I'll make him a leash and earn his trust and everything'll be fine!"

Orodruin placed his head in his paws. "Eiros..." He hissed in frustration. "Fine. But I don't trust that thing and you'd better not either. I can't watch your back every minute of the day, you know."

Eiros stroked the phytocat's still form. "Sure thing, Orodruin," he said, dragging the mammal back to where he had been lying earlier. "Your gonna love it with us, Janus."

The wildclaw hissed again, muttering under his breath about foolish fledglings. Then again, if the addle-brain was right and he could win the phytocat's trust, it could prove helpful. They were, after all, only two dragons against the world. Or it could prove to be the death of Orodruin's only companion.

"Flamecaller, please don't let it kill us," he whispered as he drifted back to an uneasy sleep.
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@ScrivenerRook

I love Janus already!!!! I'm looking forward to seeing if Eiros is successful in his endeavour. Great update!
@ScrivenerRook

I love Janus already!!!! I'm looking forward to seeing if Eiros is successful in his endeavour. Great update!
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[center][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2196520#post_27630928]Previous[/url][/center] --------------------------------------------- [center]@Petall @Spiritfire [size=5][b][u]Southern Currents[/u][/b][/size] [img]http://imgur.com/fcvvW4P.png[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/UsG2MF8.png[/img][/center] Orodruin kept a wary eye on Eiros and his new pet, ready, if he thought he was needed, to step in and subdue the struggling phytocat. But even at a month old, Eiros was almost twice as long as Orodruin, already displaying that he came from a race of giants. Janus, a little five-foot furry thing, didn't pose much of a threat. Still, Orodruin had to admire the creature's tenacity. He didn't know two many dragons who would keep fighting when their captors were at least six times bigger than they were. He gave a slight smile. With the exception of fae dragons, there weren't too many things six times bigger than a full-grown dragon. It had taken them a week to travel down the border of the Plateau and the Waste to the Unclaimed Sea. Orodruin could smell it now, the scent of salt and fish that had been a part of his everyday life before the Fever. He wondered if Eiros could smell it, too, and decided that the guardian probably could, but was too distracted to wonder what it meant. Would he know? Was the scent of the sea ingrained in guardians because of their origin in the Sea of a Thousand Currents? It seemed unlikely, but Orodruin had heard of stranger things. "Janus, stop it!" Orodruin heard Eiros say and checked quickly to make sure the other drake was alright. The phytocat had clamped down on the guardian's left wing and hung there while Eiros tried desperately to get him off without tearing the wing membrane. It would be a painful, though not fatal injury and Orodruin left the guardian, thinking that it might well serve as a reminder to Eiros not to mess around with such things in the future. "Stop playing, Eiros," Orodruin called, feigning disinterest in the younger drake's plight. "I'm not playing," Eiros protested. "I just could really use a hand here." Orodruin stretched his wings in a sign of refusal. "I warned you not to bring that thing." Eiros mouthed something terribly discourteous at the older dragon's back, but said nothing. A nip to the phytocat's bamboo growths finally convinced Janus to let go with a pained yelp. Eiros lifted Janus by the nape of his neck and hurried to catch up with Orodruin. "So're 'e c'ose ta th' ocean?" Eiros asked around a mouthful of phytocat fur. Orodruin pretended not to understand for a moment and then feigned understanding. "Ocean? Smells like it's right over the ridge there," he said, ducking as the guardian launched into a half-run, spreading wings that would have knocked Orodruin clean out if they had connected. "Whoohoo!" the fledgling whooped as he went. "And thank goodness because you can go play in the water and give me a break," Orodruin muttered, starting to chuckle at how much he sounded like the older dragons from his clan. The chuckle died as he thought of his mentor, Krakatau, telling him much the same thing on Orodruin's first day as the old imperial's apprentice. Over the ridge, the Plateau plunged several kilometers in a steep slope over a few dozen meters and Eiros was already a quarter of the way down, sliding quickly and using his wings as a sort of parachute. Orodruin spread his wings and launched himself into the air, flying out over the ocean and circling back in a shallow, looping dive. He arrived on the beach after Eiros, but he had been in no such hurry. "Welcome to the ocean, Eiros," Orodruin told him, dipping a front claw in the lapping surf. The guardian dropped Janus unceremoniously to the sand where the terrified phytocat lay quivering. Eiros was so excited that his fins quivered as he set a claw into the water for the first time. The Plateau had only a few small, swift-running streams and the sight of so much water all in one place stunned the guardian. This was bigger even than the Sea of a Thousand Currents. It might not look it, but Eiros could [i]feel[/i] it when he touched it. This water was deep and old and vast. So very vast. "How come no one lives here?" he asked. It seemed like heaven to him. "Oh, a few Wind and Fire clans live along this stretch of coast," Orodruin said easily, "but most of them avoid it because of the currents up from the Southern Icefield. The Fire clans fair better because of the heat from the Great Furnace, but a lot of the Wind clans get frozen out in the winter." Eiros stared out at the ocean in awe. "There's land across that?" "Land, ice, the Ice Flight insists it's land. Most of the rest of us just think it's desolate." "I wanna go there someday," Eiros muttered, but then his gaze refocused on the wildclaw. "Later. Once we're finished." For once Orodruin couldn't find it in him to make a quip about staying with a Wind clan if Eiros wanted to travel or tell the guardian that he wasn't really welcome on the trip and to leave if he wanted. It wasn't fair to the guardian, was it? After all Eiros had given up and done for Orodruin? Orodruin shook his head. Eiros was making him soft. Caring was dangerous. "Come on. The Waste is this way," he snapped, turning and heading east along the sand. Eiros whistled for Janus who, to Orodruin's surprise, rose unsteadily and took a few steps toward Eiros. The guardian lifted the phytocat onto his back and, after a tense moment, Janus settled down, albeit cautiously. "Flamecaller be praised," Orodruin muttered. "You really are taming that thing, aren't you?" Eiros shrugged. "I didn't actually expect that to work," he admitted. The pair continued along the beach without saying much to each other. Eiros kept up a running line of chatter aimed at Janus which saved Orodruin the trouble of paying attention. So he didn't notice at first when Eiros' never-ending babble changed. "I've never seen the Waste, Janus, so we'll get to see it together, but Orodruin was born there. We'll kind of be depending on him to get us where we're going. I'm not even sure where we're going. Are you flammable, Janus? It seems like you would be, but maybe you'd surprise me? I just feel like I ought to know before we walk into the fi- Oh Windsinger, Orodruin, what's that? Is it alive? Oh Windsinger." Eiros was already bounding ahead by the time Orodruin registered his name. "Eiros! Eiros, what are you doing? Come back here!" He slipped in the sand as he chased after Eiros, finally seeing what had caught the guardian's attention. A small scrap of blue-grey fur and yellow leather, all coated liberally with sand. "Flamecaller have mercy," he hissed. "If it's not one thing..." Eiros had already reached the bundle and gently nuzzled the little tundra hatchling, looking for any sign of life. The hatchling's side heaved once and that was all Eiros needed. "He's alive," Eiros said. "Eiros..." But the guardian was insistent. "We can't leave him, Orodruin. He'll die on his own." Orodruin hesitated and finally nodded once. "Alright," he said, though, privately, he was of the opinion that the tundra would likely die anyway. "Eleven help him," he sighed and, to tell the truth, he wasn't sure if he meant the tundra or Eiros. [center][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=33573731] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Pk1AV4m.png[/img] [/url][/center] --------------------------------------------- [center][url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2196520/2#post_27814146]Next[/url][/center]



@Petall @Spiritfire

Southern Currents
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Orodruin kept a wary eye on Eiros and his new pet, ready, if he thought he was needed, to step in and subdue the struggling phytocat. But even at a month old, Eiros was almost twice as long as Orodruin, already displaying that he came from a race of giants. Janus, a little five-foot furry thing, didn't pose much of a threat. Still, Orodruin had to admire the creature's tenacity. He didn't know two many dragons who would keep fighting when their captors were at least six times bigger than they were. He gave a slight smile. With the exception of fae dragons, there weren't too many things six times bigger than a full-grown dragon.

It had taken them a week to travel down the border of the Plateau and the Waste to the Unclaimed Sea. Orodruin could smell it now, the scent of salt and fish that had been a part of his everyday life before the Fever. He wondered if Eiros could smell it, too, and decided that the guardian probably could, but was too distracted to wonder what it meant. Would he know? Was the scent of the sea ingrained in guardians because of their origin in the Sea of a Thousand Currents? It seemed unlikely, but Orodruin had heard of stranger things.

"Janus, stop it!" Orodruin heard Eiros say and checked quickly to make sure the other drake was alright. The phytocat had clamped down on the guardian's left wing and hung there while Eiros tried desperately to get him off without tearing the wing membrane. It would be a painful, though not fatal injury and Orodruin left the guardian, thinking that it might well serve as a reminder to Eiros not to mess around with such things in the future.

"Stop playing, Eiros," Orodruin called, feigning disinterest in the younger drake's plight.

"I'm not playing," Eiros protested. "I just could really use a hand here."

Orodruin stretched his wings in a sign of refusal. "I warned you not to bring that thing."

Eiros mouthed something terribly discourteous at the older dragon's back, but said nothing. A nip to the phytocat's bamboo growths finally convinced Janus to let go with a pained yelp. Eiros lifted Janus by the nape of his neck and hurried to catch up with Orodruin.

"So're 'e c'ose ta th' ocean?" Eiros asked around a mouthful of phytocat fur.

Orodruin pretended not to understand for a moment and then feigned understanding. "Ocean? Smells like it's right over the ridge there," he said, ducking as the guardian launched into a half-run, spreading wings that would have knocked Orodruin clean out if they had connected.

"Whoohoo!" the fledgling whooped as he went.

"And thank goodness because you can go play in the water and give me a break," Orodruin muttered, starting to chuckle at how much he sounded like the older dragons from his clan. The chuckle died as he thought of his mentor, Krakatau, telling him much the same thing on Orodruin's first day as the old imperial's apprentice.

Over the ridge, the Plateau plunged several kilometers in a steep slope over a few dozen meters and Eiros was already a quarter of the way down, sliding quickly and using his wings as a sort of parachute. Orodruin spread his wings and launched himself into the air, flying out over the ocean and circling back in a shallow, looping dive. He arrived on the beach after Eiros, but he had been in no such hurry.

"Welcome to the ocean, Eiros," Orodruin told him, dipping a front claw in the lapping surf.

The guardian dropped Janus unceremoniously to the sand where the terrified phytocat lay quivering. Eiros was so excited that his fins quivered as he set a claw into the water for the first time. The Plateau had only a few small, swift-running streams and the sight of so much water all in one place stunned the guardian. This was bigger even than the Sea of a Thousand Currents. It might not look it, but Eiros could feel it when he touched it. This water was deep and old and vast. So very vast.

"How come no one lives here?" he asked. It seemed like heaven to him.

"Oh, a few Wind and Fire clans live along this stretch of coast," Orodruin said easily, "but most of them avoid it because of the currents up from the Southern Icefield. The Fire clans fair better because of the heat from the Great Furnace, but a lot of the Wind clans get frozen out in the winter."

Eiros stared out at the ocean in awe. "There's land across that?"

"Land, ice, the Ice Flight insists it's land. Most of the rest of us just think it's desolate."

"I wanna go there someday," Eiros muttered, but then his gaze refocused on the wildclaw. "Later. Once we're finished."

For once Orodruin couldn't find it in him to make a quip about staying with a Wind clan if Eiros wanted to travel or tell the guardian that he wasn't really welcome on the trip and to leave if he wanted. It wasn't fair to the guardian, was it? After all Eiros had given up and done for Orodruin?

Orodruin shook his head. Eiros was making him soft. Caring was dangerous.

"Come on. The Waste is this way," he snapped, turning and heading east along the sand.

Eiros whistled for Janus who, to Orodruin's surprise, rose unsteadily and took a few steps toward Eiros. The guardian lifted the phytocat onto his back and, after a tense moment, Janus settled down, albeit cautiously.

"Flamecaller be praised," Orodruin muttered. "You really are taming that thing, aren't you?"

Eiros shrugged. "I didn't actually expect that to work," he admitted.

The pair continued along the beach without saying much to each other. Eiros kept up a running line of chatter aimed at Janus which saved Orodruin the trouble of paying attention. So he didn't notice at first when Eiros' never-ending babble changed.

"I've never seen the Waste, Janus, so we'll get to see it together, but Orodruin was born there. We'll kind of be depending on him to get us where we're going. I'm not even sure where we're going. Are you flammable, Janus? It seems like you would be, but maybe you'd surprise me? I just feel like I ought to know before we walk into the fi- Oh Windsinger, Orodruin, what's that? Is it alive? Oh Windsinger."

Eiros was already bounding ahead by the time Orodruin registered his name. "Eiros! Eiros, what are you doing? Come back here!"

He slipped in the sand as he chased after Eiros, finally seeing what had caught the guardian's attention. A small scrap of blue-grey fur and yellow leather, all coated liberally with sand.

"Flamecaller have mercy," he hissed. "If it's not one thing..."

Eiros had already reached the bundle and gently nuzzled the little tundra hatchling, looking for any sign of life. The hatchling's side heaved once and that was all Eiros needed.

"He's alive," Eiros said.

"Eiros..."

But the guardian was insistent. "We can't leave him, Orodruin. He'll die on his own."

Orodruin hesitated and finally nodded once. "Alright," he said, though, privately, he was of the opinion that the tundra would likely die anyway. "Eleven help him," he sighed and, to tell the truth, he wasn't sure if he meant the tundra or Eiros.



@ScrivenerRook

A new dragon!!! How exciting! I can't wait to see what he adds to the story!
@ScrivenerRook

A new dragon!!! How exciting! I can't wait to see what he adds to the story!
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