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@SuperNinjaDragon
So I'm a cartoon artist, so obviously these are gonna look, well, cartoony. For some of them I can already see the mistakes, so I'll point them out, but other than those I would like to know if there's anything else I can improve on.
[img]https://pre01.deviantart.net/a240/th/pre/i/2017/218/c/3/untitled_by_samiam798123-dbj21wu.jpg[/img]
So on this one, I already know the hips are too long, lol, I tried to make her look tall and I ended up stretching her out of proportion XD
[img]https://img05.deviantart.net/b9a8/i/2017/224/4/5/untitled_by_samiam798123-dbjsb4w.jpg[/img]
So this one is obviously incomplete, but you can still see all the characters. The reason why the hands on the middle one look weird is cause sometimes, when I can't do hands for the life of me, I'll do styalized mitten hands. I do the same with feet.
EDIT: I ended up finishing it
[img]https://pre12.deviantart.net/0784/th/pre/i/2017/218/5/8/untitled_by_samiam798123-dbj255f.jpg[/img]
You know at first the legs looked off to me, now it's grown on me, but they probabaly still look really wrong XD
[img]https://orig11.deviantart.net/ab88/f/2017/218/4/c/untitled_by_samiam798123-dbj25bi.png[/img]
*crying* Her right arm's too long
[img]https://img11.deviantart.net/dbc4/i/2017/218/a/b/untitled_by_samiam798123-dbj25ih.jpg[/img]
For these next ones they were in my old sketch book and my friend likes to litter stupid doodles in there, so just ignore the ones around it.
Here's some hand practice I did:
[img]https://img08.deviantart.net/5ed2/i/2017/218/7/c/untitled_by_samiam798123-dbj25sj.jpg[/img]
[img]https://img11.deviantart.net/a53c/i/2017/218/a/2/untitled_by_samiam798123-dbj25to.jpg[/img]
[img]https://img03.deviantart.net/74ac/i/2017/218/9/c/untitled_by_samiam798123-dbj25u7.jpg[/img]
[img]https://img13.deviantart.net/975e/i/2017/218/4/5/untitled_by_samiam798123-dbj25up.jpg[/img]
[img]https://img07.deviantart.net/e081/i/2017/218/b/5/untitled_by_samiam798123-dbj25uw.jpg[/img]
@kittyvyxen
@SuperNinjaDragon
So I'm a cartoon artist, so obviously these are gonna look, well, cartoony. For some of them I can already see the mistakes, so I'll point them out, but other than those I would like to know if there's anything else I can improve on.
So on this one, I already know the hips are too long, lol, I tried to make her look tall and I ended up stretching her out of proportion XD
So this one is obviously incomplete, but you can still see all the characters. The reason why the hands on the middle one look weird is cause sometimes, when I can't do hands for the life of me, I'll do styalized mitten hands. I do the same with feet.
EDIT: I ended up finishing it
You know at first the legs looked off to me, now it's grown on me, but they probabaly still look really wrong XD
*crying* Her right arm's too long
For these next ones they were in my old sketch book and my friend likes to litter stupid doodles in there, so just ignore the ones around it.
Here's some hand practice I did:
@kittyvyxen
So I'm a cartoon artist, so obviously these are gonna look, well, cartoony. For some of them I can already see the mistakes, so I'll point them out, but other than those I would like to know if there's anything else I can improve on.
So on this one, I already know the hips are too long, lol, I tried to make her look tall and I ended up stretching her out of proportion XD
So this one is obviously incomplete, but you can still see all the characters. The reason why the hands on the middle one look weird is cause sometimes, when I can't do hands for the life of me, I'll do styalized mitten hands. I do the same with feet.
EDIT: I ended up finishing it
You know at first the legs looked off to me, now it's grown on me, but they probabaly still look really wrong XD
*crying* Her right arm's too long
For these next ones they were in my old sketch book and my friend likes to litter stupid doodles in there, so just ignore the ones around it.
Here's some hand practice I did:
@kittyvyxen
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@SuperNinjaDragon
Np, sorry I didn't realize how busy they are;;
Np, sorry I didn't realize how busy they are;;
@SuperNinjaDragon
Np, sorry I didn't realize how busy they are;;
Np, sorry I didn't realize how busy they are;;
@AboveCloud
can't really say much about what I'm going for art wise since I mostly do it just for fun but I guess my style is going more into semi-realism then anything else.
this one if my only really finished piece I've done lately. it was the first time I tried painting again after a long while of just doing nothing at all.
[img]http://img03.deviantart.net/b7fa/i/2017/217/1/4/the_first_by_anaires-dbhg151.png[/img]
most of the time I just kind of sketch the lines a lot and put colors under it and shade it like that. some look cleaner then others but I like how it looks even if other would say it's just because I'm lazy.
[img]http://img15.deviantart.net/da9d/i/2017/191/2/7/a_big_puppy_by_anaires-dbftide.png[/img]
[img]http://orig07.deviantart.net/dda6/f/2017/211/9/3/little_shit_by_anaires-dbi74p7.png[/img]
@AboveCloud
can't really say much about what I'm going for art wise since I mostly do it just for fun but I guess my style is going more into semi-realism then anything else.
this one if my only really finished piece I've done lately. it was the first time I tried painting again after a long while of just doing nothing at all.
most of the time I just kind of sketch the lines a lot and put colors under it and shade it like that. some look cleaner then others but I like how it looks even if other would say it's just because I'm lazy.
can't really say much about what I'm going for art wise since I mostly do it just for fun but I guess my style is going more into semi-realism then anything else.
this one if my only really finished piece I've done lately. it was the first time I tried painting again after a long while of just doing nothing at all.
most of the time I just kind of sketch the lines a lot and put colors under it and shade it like that. some look cleaner then others but I like how it looks even if other would say it's just because I'm lazy.
@Satire
Don't worry about it, we just had a chat just moments ago and they wanted a small break. There was no way you could have known, so don't worry about it. :)
I'm not particularly good at critiquing human related stuff though, so would you like anybody else to critique for you or are you fine with me?
Don't worry about it, we just had a chat just moments ago and they wanted a small break. There was no way you could have known, so don't worry about it. :)
I'm not particularly good at critiquing human related stuff though, so would you like anybody else to critique for you or are you fine with me?
@Satire
Don't worry about it, we just had a chat just moments ago and they wanted a small break. There was no way you could have known, so don't worry about it. :)
I'm not particularly good at critiquing human related stuff though, so would you like anybody else to critique for you or are you fine with me?
Don't worry about it, we just had a chat just moments ago and they wanted a small break. There was no way you could have known, so don't worry about it. :)
I'm not particularly good at critiquing human related stuff though, so would you like anybody else to critique for you or are you fine with me?
[center]@SuperNinjaDragon
If I'm going to be an art student I'm gonna need to improve on shit s o LETS DO THIS
[img]https://68.media.tumblr.com/36fa9cef807d5eea34e86d676b1810f0/tumblr_otdn9sHlet1vv5rqao1_1280.png[/img]
[img]https://68.media.tumblr.com/7672af8614d5ebf64424a6aeb30662f8/tumblr_otdn7z6XM81vv5rqao1_1280.png[/img]
@SuperNinjaDragon
If I'm going to be an art student I'm gonna need to improve on **** s o LETS DO THIS
If I'm going to be an art student I'm gonna need to improve on **** s o LETS DO THIS
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@SuperNinjaDragon
If you feel ok with it, I'd be down for you? Wouldn't mind, you give good critique (:
If you feel ok with it, I'd be down for you? Wouldn't mind, you give good critique (:
@SuperNinjaDragon
If you feel ok with it, I'd be down for you? Wouldn't mind, you give good critique (:
If you feel ok with it, I'd be down for you? Wouldn't mind, you give good critique (:
@razu
So sorry for my late reply!!!
But anyway, thank you for all your help, esp. w/ the noses (yeeeah I've been really lazy w/ noses for a while lmao, thank you for showing me how it's properly done!!!) and profile views! I've been trying to practice them lately because tbh I'm not all that great at them, and your tips about placement and the distances between features really helps a lot!
Thanks so much as well for your kind words, and for pointing me towards some resources! I find sometimes that I worry too much about trying to get things perfectly right, when really I should be worrying about getting the big picture/basics down first - otherwise, I just frustrate myself, and that's no good.
All in all, thank you for ripping my work apart, I think I really needed it. c:
So sorry for my late reply!!!
But anyway, thank you for all your help, esp. w/ the noses (yeeeah I've been really lazy w/ noses for a while lmao, thank you for showing me how it's properly done!!!) and profile views! I've been trying to practice them lately because tbh I'm not all that great at them, and your tips about placement and the distances between features really helps a lot!
Thanks so much as well for your kind words, and for pointing me towards some resources! I find sometimes that I worry too much about trying to get things perfectly right, when really I should be worrying about getting the big picture/basics down first - otherwise, I just frustrate myself, and that's no good.
All in all, thank you for ripping my work apart, I think I really needed it. c:
@razu
So sorry for my late reply!!!
But anyway, thank you for all your help, esp. w/ the noses (yeeeah I've been really lazy w/ noses for a while lmao, thank you for showing me how it's properly done!!!) and profile views! I've been trying to practice them lately because tbh I'm not all that great at them, and your tips about placement and the distances between features really helps a lot!
Thanks so much as well for your kind words, and for pointing me towards some resources! I find sometimes that I worry too much about trying to get things perfectly right, when really I should be worrying about getting the big picture/basics down first - otherwise, I just frustrate myself, and that's no good.
All in all, thank you for ripping my work apart, I think I really needed it. c:
So sorry for my late reply!!!
But anyway, thank you for all your help, esp. w/ the noses (yeeeah I've been really lazy w/ noses for a while lmao, thank you for showing me how it's properly done!!!) and profile views! I've been trying to practice them lately because tbh I'm not all that great at them, and your tips about placement and the distances between features really helps a lot!
Thanks so much as well for your kind words, and for pointing me towards some resources! I find sometimes that I worry too much about trying to get things perfectly right, when really I should be worrying about getting the big picture/basics down first - otherwise, I just frustrate myself, and that's no good.
All in all, thank you for ripping my work apart, I think I really needed it. c:
This thread is still boppin lets go
This is my third time back and I've only got one piece today--a little bust of my baby Fleur
[img]http://i.imgur.com/BgdBy3p.png[/img]
Probably took around two hours? I should really start timing myself lol
I'd really like critique on lighting or whatever you find to be nit-picky about; a word of notice, though, my style is naturally just a little messy.
This thread is still boppin lets go
This is my third time back and I've only got one piece today--a little bust of my baby Fleur
Probably took around two hours? I should really start timing myself lol
I'd really like critique on lighting or whatever you find to be nit-picky about; a word of notice, though, my style is naturally just a little messy.
This is my third time back and I've only got one piece today--a little bust of my baby Fleur
Probably took around two hours? I should really start timing myself lol
I'd really like critique on lighting or whatever you find to be nit-picky about; a word of notice, though, my style is naturally just a little messy.
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