@GruesomeGoo OMG I'm speechless you gave them so much character, more than I could ever come up with like dude there's so many possibilities here now, with a serious and silly side. I'm sure they'll grow up to do great things. maybe cause a catastrophe or two with their pranks.
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@GruesomeGoo OMG I'm speechless you gave them so much character, more than I could ever come up with like dude there's so many possibilities here now, with a serious and silly side. I'm sure they'll grow up to do great things. maybe cause a catastrophe or two with their pranks.
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[quote name="SunnyInferno" date="2022-03-22 13:17:40" ]
Hi! I am back for another round of your writing! I couldn't get enough of what you wrote for Letholdus so I thought to come around!
I would like to have a sort of backstory written for Amiri here. He has a blurb in his bio written by someone else, but I find it a bit lacking. I would still keep the shyness and speech impediment. You could mention that they are only as close to [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/60470275]Iro[/url], as they live in the same tent and have the same job. (They follow around in a travelling fair) [s][size=2]but maybe a hint of romance? if that is somewhere along your drift.[/size][/s]
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[center]Plumbing the depths of writing long forgotten can lead one to many startling and revolutionary discoveries. Unimaginable power and unimaginable evil can lurk between the dusty pages of an off-cast book; for most, a risk not worth taking. But for Amiri, a challenge! A treasure! And most of all, something new to learn!
Most who see the scholarly doctor of the black arts, with his sharp featured face buried in a book, assume that he has always been an introverted bookworm; but those dragons would be quite surprised if Amiri ever did speak the truth of his past. At one point, Amiri served an ancient clan as a sort of celebrity doctor; one whose words were like honey to the ruling family. Everyone loved and relied on him, until he came across that damnable book; [i]The Dracon Nïckahenna[/i]. What horrors were unleashed from that infernal tome, none will ever know...for the clan was exterminated down to the last fragment of eggshell, in an event so horrifying it scarred Amiri for life, impeding his speech and sucking him into a deep depression.
But Amiri was like the phoenix; rather then give up on the dark arts, he tunneled deeper. Soon, his power had grown twofold since that dark day, and he swore to master the black arts to ensure such evil would never be unleashed on his watch again. And so, he pours over the ink-stained pages, mastering the secrets contained within; committing the knowledge within to memory. Were it not for Iro, his fellow scholar, Amiri's gifts may have never come to light again.
Iro was once just a visitor to Amiri's vast library of knowledge. But, he was the first to discover Amiri's talent with the powers of life and death, and pushed him to be the best he could possibly be, helping countless other dragons within the clan with everything from minor scrapes to debilitating diseases. Amiri as of yet has been unable to come up with the words to thank Iro; his stammer grows far worse around the mysterious, tall, burning-eyed sorcerer, and his heart always begins to jump a beat when they meet eyes.
An odd sensation. Perhaps one day he will discover why this happens...it could be a rare form of heart defect...[/center]
SunnyInferno wrote on 2022-03-22 13:17:40:
Hi! I am back for another round of your writing! I couldn't get enough of what you wrote for Letholdus so I thought to come around!
I would like to have a sort of backstory written for Amiri here. He has a blurb in his bio written by someone else, but I find it a bit lacking. I would still keep the shyness and speech impediment. You could mention that they are only as close to Iro, as they live in the same tent and have the same job. (They follow around in a travelling fair)but maybe a hint of romance? if that is somewhere along your drift.
I would like to have a sort of backstory written for Amiri here. He has a blurb in his bio written by someone else, but I find it a bit lacking. I would still keep the shyness and speech impediment. You could mention that they are only as close to Iro, as they live in the same tent and have the same job. (They follow around in a travelling fair)
Plumbing the depths of writing long forgotten can lead one to many startling and revolutionary discoveries. Unimaginable power and unimaginable evil can lurk between the dusty pages of an off-cast book; for most, a risk not worth taking. But for Amiri, a challenge! A treasure! And most of all, something new to learn!
Most who see the scholarly doctor of the black arts, with his sharp featured face buried in a book, assume that he has always been an introverted bookworm; but those dragons would be quite surprised if Amiri ever did speak the truth of his past. At one point, Amiri served an ancient clan as a sort of celebrity doctor; one whose words were like honey to the ruling family. Everyone loved and relied on him, until he came across that damnable book; The Dracon Nïckahenna. What horrors were unleashed from that infernal tome, none will ever know...for the clan was exterminated down to the last fragment of eggshell, in an event so horrifying it scarred Amiri for life, impeding his speech and sucking him into a deep depression.
But Amiri was like the phoenix; rather then give up on the dark arts, he tunneled deeper. Soon, his power had grown twofold since that dark day, and he swore to master the black arts to ensure such evil would never be unleashed on his watch again. And so, he pours over the ink-stained pages, mastering the secrets contained within; committing the knowledge within to memory. Were it not for Iro, his fellow scholar, Amiri's gifts may have never come to light again.
Iro was once just a visitor to Amiri's vast library of knowledge. But, he was the first to discover Amiri's talent with the powers of life and death, and pushed him to be the best he could possibly be, helping countless other dragons within the clan with everything from minor scrapes to debilitating diseases. Amiri as of yet has been unable to come up with the words to thank Iro; his stammer grows far worse around the mysterious, tall, burning-eyed sorcerer, and his heart always begins to jump a beat when they meet eyes.
An odd sensation. Perhaps one day he will discover why this happens...it could be a rare form of heart defect...
Most who see the scholarly doctor of the black arts, with his sharp featured face buried in a book, assume that he has always been an introverted bookworm; but those dragons would be quite surprised if Amiri ever did speak the truth of his past. At one point, Amiri served an ancient clan as a sort of celebrity doctor; one whose words were like honey to the ruling family. Everyone loved and relied on him, until he came across that damnable book; The Dracon Nïckahenna. What horrors were unleashed from that infernal tome, none will ever know...for the clan was exterminated down to the last fragment of eggshell, in an event so horrifying it scarred Amiri for life, impeding his speech and sucking him into a deep depression.
But Amiri was like the phoenix; rather then give up on the dark arts, he tunneled deeper. Soon, his power had grown twofold since that dark day, and he swore to master the black arts to ensure such evil would never be unleashed on his watch again. And so, he pours over the ink-stained pages, mastering the secrets contained within; committing the knowledge within to memory. Were it not for Iro, his fellow scholar, Amiri's gifts may have never come to light again.
Iro was once just a visitor to Amiri's vast library of knowledge. But, he was the first to discover Amiri's talent with the powers of life and death, and pushed him to be the best he could possibly be, helping countless other dragons within the clan with everything from minor scrapes to debilitating diseases. Amiri as of yet has been unable to come up with the words to thank Iro; his stammer grows far worse around the mysterious, tall, burning-eyed sorcerer, and his heart always begins to jump a beat when they meet eyes.
An odd sensation. Perhaps one day he will discover why this happens...it could be a rare form of heart defect...
@GruesomeGoo
Wow, that was so much cooler than I would have come up with! You always have such cool ideas and concepts to add to characters, making them so much more interesting!! I loved the backstory you gave him and the reason for his character and motivations. I can't get enough!! Thank you so much!! [emoji=tundra love size=1]
@GruesomeGoo
Wow, that was so much cooler than I would have come up with! You always have such cool ideas and concepts to add to characters, making them so much more interesting!! I loved the backstory you gave him and the reason for his character and motivations. I can't get enough!! Thank you so much!!
Wow, that was so much cooler than I would have come up with! You always have such cool ideas and concepts to add to characters, making them so much more interesting!! I loved the backstory you gave him and the reason for his character and motivations. I can't get enough!! Thank you so much!!
FR: +10 | He/Him | Always looking for lore
These [s]children[/s] dragons of mine~ (I explain mostly everything better in their bios, but some are better here... I think)
[url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/55942866][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/559429/55942866_350.png[/img][/url]
He's sarcastic, he's the lord of sass, blunt, straight to the point, going on... [i]ketchup spilling sprees[/i] like a walk to McDonalds on a normal day. Random as hell tho lmao. Sometimes he pops up in conversations like he's the one who started it.
[url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/76646393][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/766464/76646393_350.png[/img][/url]
He's a robot, well, a dragon mind within a robot body, that is. He's easy-going and passionate about things he does. He's friendly and hard to piss off, but if you do, be ready to be hated by [i]everybody[/i]... for like, 2 days, he literally can't stay mad (unless you killed someone like wth-)
[url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/76718255][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/767183/76718255_350.png[/img][/url]
He's an empath with telekinesis. He's friendly, but socially awkward, has a smaller brother vibe to most dragons, but is the absolute best friend of younglings.
[url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/76463477][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/764635/76463477_350.png[/img][/url]
They're stoic, but once you get to know them you will notice they'll absolutely die fighting for you life.
I have duplicate apparel, skins I don't need, along with, Idk, a mediocre amount of gems and [i]some[/i] gold. I'm happy to give the skins and apparel (if you even take em) lol
These children dragons of mine~ (I explain mostly everything better in their bios, but some are better here... I think)
He's sarcastic, he's the lord of sass, blunt, straight to the point, going on... ketchup spilling sprees like a walk to McDonalds on a normal day. Random as hell tho lmao. Sometimes he pops up in conversations like he's the one who started it.
He's a robot, well, a dragon mind within a robot body, that is. He's easy-going and passionate about things he does. He's friendly and hard to **** off, but if you do, be ready to be hated by everybody... for like, 2 days, he literally can't stay mad (unless you killed someone like wth-)
He's an empath with telekinesis. He's friendly, but socially awkward, has a smaller brother vibe to most dragons, but is the absolute best friend of younglings.
They're stoic, but once you get to know them you will notice they'll absolutely die fighting for you life.
I have duplicate apparel, skins I don't need, along with, Idk, a mediocre amount of gems and some gold. I'm happy to give the skins and apparel (if you even take em) lol
He's sarcastic, he's the lord of sass, blunt, straight to the point, going on... ketchup spilling sprees like a walk to McDonalds on a normal day. Random as hell tho lmao. Sometimes he pops up in conversations like he's the one who started it.
He's a robot, well, a dragon mind within a robot body, that is. He's easy-going and passionate about things he does. He's friendly and hard to **** off, but if you do, be ready to be hated by everybody... for like, 2 days, he literally can't stay mad (unless you killed someone like wth-)
He's an empath with telekinesis. He's friendly, but socially awkward, has a smaller brother vibe to most dragons, but is the absolute best friend of younglings.
They're stoic, but once you get to know them you will notice they'll absolutely die fighting for you life.
I have duplicate apparel, skins I don't need, along with, Idk, a mediocre amount of gems and some gold. I'm happy to give the skins and apparel (if you even take em) lol
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