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@OzmatheGreat One slot just opened!
@OzmatheGreat One slot just opened!
@Soldi [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=36991679] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/369917/36991679_350.png[/img] [/url] I never would have thought to put that accent on a red dragon, but wow, it looks amazing. The contrast between the blue and red in his wings is really striking. You've chosen the perfect apparel and tertiary to go with it as well -- the Burnished Gold Belt looks so good with the accent that I initially assumed it was part of it. The runes match the accent really well too; I especially like how they turn his antlers gold. Nice art, too! [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=43299615] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/432997/43299615_350.png[/img] [/url] I really like the use of that accent together with the Brightshine Raiments. The black smoke in the accent goes nicely with the black of the raiments themselves. And I love the sunlight effect on her wings. Her familiar really fits that dark-and-light theme too -- as do her colors, which contrast with what you'd expect from a Light primal. Nice job carrying on that "Light, but also dark" motif! [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=35721022] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/357211/35721022_350.png[/img] [/url] I like how the starry pattern of the Ghost Flame Cloak goes with that accent. The accent itself and the healer's items really suit her colors, especially her tertiary. I especially love how her feet match the colors of the accent! And it looks great on the dark background provided by her primary and secondary. [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=42982372] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/429824/42982372_350.png[/img] [/url] Wow, the Roseate Tail Tatters go super well with that accent. I had to actually check and make sure that they weren't part of the accent itself. The Bewitching Ruby Pendants also suit it nicely, and I like how the Brass Scale Tatters look with his colors. However, the nightshroud isn't quite working for me -- I like its visual style, but the color is too red to fit with the primarily pink/purple accent. Unfortunately none of the other nightshrouds suit him better -- I even tried layering them together for a while, but no dice. The closest I could get was combining the cyan and emerald nightshrouds, and the edges remained too blue or green, depending on which one was on top. However, I might recommend looking at the following possibilities to replace the nightshroud: the Cobalt Filigree Breastplate, the Grove or Scarlet Sylvan Dress, or maybe even the Lucky Sage Shawl. Maybe some combination thereof. Here's a version where he's wearing the Lucky Sage Shawl and the Scarlet Sylvan Dress; I think he looks quite dashing. [img]http://www1.flightrising.com/dgen/dressing-room/dragon?did=42982372&skin=12542&apparel=26869,23138,15710,26873,26871,28783,26877,770&xt=dressing.png[/img] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=37784042] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/377841/37784042_350.png[/img] [/url] Seyn's colors are beautiful! I love the delicate blue of his Sky Facet, and the Lapis Opal is really pretty as well. I enjoy how the gems on his collar and headpiece perfectly match his wings. The candles look nice on him as well! Thank you for showing me your lair; I quite enjoyed it! Please send 15kt/g by PM or CR at your earliest convenience.
@Soldi


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I never would have thought to put that accent on a red dragon, but wow, it looks amazing. The contrast between the blue and red in his wings is really striking. You've chosen the perfect apparel and tertiary to go with it as well -- the Burnished Gold Belt looks so good with the accent that I initially assumed it was part of it. The runes match the accent really well too; I especially like how they turn his antlers gold. Nice art, too!


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I really like the use of that accent together with the Brightshine Raiments. The black smoke in the accent goes nicely with the black of the raiments themselves. And I love the sunlight effect on her wings. Her familiar really fits that dark-and-light theme too -- as do her colors, which contrast with what you'd expect from a Light primal. Nice job carrying on that "Light, but also dark" motif!


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I like how the starry pattern of the Ghost Flame Cloak goes with that accent. The accent itself and the healer's items really suit her colors, especially her tertiary. I especially love how her feet match the colors of the accent! And it looks great on the dark background provided by her primary and secondary.


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Wow, the Roseate Tail Tatters go super well with that accent. I had to actually check and make sure that they weren't part of the accent itself. The Bewitching Ruby Pendants also suit it nicely, and I like how the Brass Scale Tatters look with his colors. However, the nightshroud isn't quite working for me -- I like its visual style, but the color is too red to fit with the primarily pink/purple accent. Unfortunately none of the other nightshrouds suit him better -- I even tried layering them together for a while, but no dice. The closest I could get was combining the cyan and emerald nightshrouds, and the edges remained too blue or green, depending on which one was on top. However, I might recommend looking at the following possibilities to replace the nightshroud: the Cobalt Filigree Breastplate, the Grove or Scarlet Sylvan Dress, or maybe even the Lucky Sage Shawl. Maybe some combination thereof. Here's a version where he's wearing the Lucky Sage Shawl and the Scarlet Sylvan Dress; I think he looks quite dashing.

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Seyn's colors are beautiful! I love the delicate blue of his Sky Facet, and the Lapis Opal is really pretty as well. I enjoy how the gems on his collar and headpiece perfectly match his wings. The candles look nice on him as well!

Thank you for showing me your lair; I quite enjoyed it! Please send 15kt/g by PM or CR at your earliest convenience.
[quote][b]Review type:[/b] Top Five [b]Excluded tabs:[/b] Hibernal Den [b]Should I look in the Hibernal Den?:[/b] Nope! [b]Focus (bios, appearance, both):[/b] Appearance, my bio stuff isn't really there [b]Tone (positive or concrit):[/b] not picky honest [b]PM or post?[/b] PM[/quote] :3
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Review type: Top Five
Excluded tabs: Hibernal Den
Should I look in the Hibernal Den?: Nope!
Focus (bios, appearance, both): Appearance, my bio stuff isn't really there
Tone (positive or concrit): not picky honest
PM or post? PM
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@OzmatheGreat Got it! I'll add you to the list.
@OzmatheGreat Got it! I'll add you to the list.
@Crustacean [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=23966753] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/239668/23966753_350.png[/img] [/url] The first thing that struck me about Vascula was how well her appearance suits that name, given her accent. Vascula, like [i]vascular[/i], and that accent makes the webbing of her wings look like blood vessels. Very nice! She also has an overall blood-and-flesh appearance that's suitable for a dragon involved in medicine, and her outfit makes it clear that she's a nurse. I enjoyed reading her lore and I could really get a sense of her personality from it. She seems like a fun dragon to write about! Grumpy, bossy, but with a heart of gold -- I like her. Oh, and the Plague April Fools' eyes are perfect for her. [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=14800403] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/148005/14800403_350.png[/img] [/url] Royal really lives up to his name too! Obviously, given his colors, but his golden outfit gives him a very regal appearance too. And I like that it matches the accent color in his skink and spinner! As for his lore, I found the idea of this heroic Light paladin coming from a family with a dark past and darker ideals to be an interesting twist. Seeing that he has fears and scars from his past definitely adds depth to his character. [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=30424929] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/304250/30424929_350.png[/img] [/url] I clicked straight through from Royal to Prometheus and [i]oh no[/i]. You've chosen a great dragon for that accent; its colors are perfect, especially the secondary and tertiarty. The Boneyard Tatters look very good as well. As for the lore ... That's [i]highly alarming[/i]. Those last two lines are very ominous -- and very good! [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=45211700] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/452118/45211700_350.png[/img] [/url] I found the lore of the Shining Court pretty intriguing overall, and I enjoyed both Tyrian's and Heliotrope's bios. Tyrian's obviously going down a dark path, but Heliotrope actually really appeals to me. His relationship with Royal is quite sad, and I find myself hoping that they get to have an honest heart-to-heart someday, though I rather doubt it. I also love the idea of Heliotrope subtly exerting power over the Court even though they think of him as a drunken fool. He's a beautiful dragon, too -- I'm surprised by how well Violet Crystal and Facet go with the Nebula Starsilks. They look like they were made for him! [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=46606242] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/466063/46606242_350.png[/img] [/url] Spark is a gorgeous, perfect Lightning dragon. I absolutely love Copper Bee! It goes absolutely perfectly with that awesome skin. His lore is great too. The idea of an automaton suddenly gaining sentience is quite appealing, and I love the idea of creativity filling a void within him. It's such an interesting, even ironic detail, considering that robots are usually described as lacking in creativity. Of course, the idea of a synthetic being struggling with the basics of organic life, like eating and sleeping, is always a fun one. Thank you for showing me your lair; I really enjoyed it! You have some great lore and art. Please send 15kt/g by PM or CR at your earliest convenience. (Extra shoutout to Roswell because [i]hey, I know that reference[/i] and you've done a great job of creating a dragon for it.)
@Crustacean


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The first thing that struck me about Vascula was how well her appearance suits that name, given her accent. Vascula, like vascular, and that accent makes the webbing of her wings look like blood vessels. Very nice! She also has an overall blood-and-flesh appearance that's suitable for a dragon involved in medicine, and her outfit makes it clear that she's a nurse. I enjoyed reading her lore and I could really get a sense of her personality from it. She seems like a fun dragon to write about! Grumpy, bossy, but with a heart of gold -- I like her. Oh, and the Plague April Fools' eyes are perfect for her.


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Royal really lives up to his name too! Obviously, given his colors, but his golden outfit gives him a very regal appearance too. And I like that it matches the accent color in his skink and spinner! As for his lore, I found the idea of this heroic Light paladin coming from a family with a dark past and darker ideals to be an interesting twist. Seeing that he has fears and scars from his past definitely adds depth to his character.


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I clicked straight through from Royal to Prometheus and oh no. You've chosen a great dragon for that accent; its colors are perfect, especially the secondary and tertiarty. The Boneyard Tatters look very good as well. As for the lore ... That's highly alarming. Those last two lines are very ominous -- and very good!


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I found the lore of the Shining Court pretty intriguing overall, and I enjoyed both Tyrian's and Heliotrope's bios. Tyrian's obviously going down a dark path, but Heliotrope actually really appeals to me. His relationship with Royal is quite sad, and I find myself hoping that they get to have an honest heart-to-heart someday, though I rather doubt it. I also love the idea of Heliotrope subtly exerting power over the Court even though they think of him as a drunken fool. He's a beautiful dragon, too -- I'm surprised by how well Violet Crystal and Facet go with the Nebula Starsilks. They look like they were made for him!


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Spark is a gorgeous, perfect Lightning dragon. I absolutely love Copper Bee! It goes absolutely perfectly with that awesome skin. His lore is great too. The idea of an automaton suddenly gaining sentience is quite appealing, and I love the idea of creativity filling a void within him. It's such an interesting, even ironic detail, considering that robots are usually described as lacking in creativity. Of course, the idea of a synthetic being struggling with the basics of organic life, like eating and sleeping, is always a fun one.

Thank you for showing me your lair; I really enjoyed it! You have some great lore and art. Please send 15kt/g by PM or CR at your earliest convenience.

(Extra shoutout to Roswell because hey, I know that reference and you've done a great job of creating a dragon for it.)
@Dovah [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=27511053] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/275111/27511053_350.png[/img] [/url] What a cool accent! It works really well with Ghost's colors, especially his tertiary. I like the silvery effect on the fur at his elbow. His art is absolutely beautiful, and his lore is intriguing. I went ahead and read "Outsider," and I definitely enjoyed it, but it did leave me with questions! Of course I'm wondering why he was pursued, and how he knows Sable, if she doesn't know him. But I'm also curious about what debt Ghost owes the clan for saving his life. [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=30047694] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/300477/30047694_350.png[/img] [/url] Another great combination of accent and dragon -- that accent goes perfectly with his runes. I like the matching familiar as well. For concrit, though, I have to say that his apparel seems a little too purple to really match him well. Unless there's a lore reason for it, I would maybe consider more light blue apparel -- maybe the eerie cyan set. [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=4294005] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/42941/4294005_350.png[/img] [/url] Oh, wow, what a beautiful accent. It's just gorgeous. I enjoyed Sable's lore too: the idea of a dragon going right up to the edge of exaltation before realizing she didn't want to is cool. She feels like a good dragon to have as a healer, if she's caring and kind! Obviously her bio isn't finished yet but it seems like it'll be interesting to hear how she ended up going from that collapsed cave to her place in your clan. And wow, she has a lot of great art. [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=16587894] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/165879/16587894_350.png[/img] [/url] King is a great dragon for that accent, and I feel like blood is a thematically appropriate tertiary for him, just after glancing through some of your other lore ... The birdskull necklace looks especially good on him. He's definitely an interesting -- and somewhat worrying -- clan leader! I definitely get a good feel for how ruthless and cunning he is through his bio. Though I suppose it would be interesting to hear more about his Shade corruption -- where did it come from (though I know you said his early life would be added later), how does it manifest, is it growing stronger? [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=4371783] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/43718/4371783_350.png[/img] [/url] I really like Kekoa's colors, especially his secondary. It looks very good with that accent. His outfit looks very nice as well; the quiver particularly suits him. And his lore is intriguing: I really feel for him as a prisoner seeking the approval of his captor, without much hope for the future. I hope things turn out all right for him! Or better than execution, at least. Thank you for showing me your lair; I quite enjoyed it. Please send 15kt/g by PM or CR at your earliest convenience.
@Dovah


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What a cool accent! It works really well with Ghost's colors, especially his tertiary. I like the silvery effect on the fur at his elbow. His art is absolutely beautiful, and his lore is intriguing. I went ahead and read "Outsider," and I definitely enjoyed it, but it did leave me with questions! Of course I'm wondering why he was pursued, and how he knows Sable, if she doesn't know him. But I'm also curious about what debt Ghost owes the clan for saving his life.


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Another great combination of accent and dragon -- that accent goes perfectly with his runes. I like the matching familiar as well. For concrit, though, I have to say that his apparel seems a little too purple to really match him well. Unless there's a lore reason for it, I would maybe consider more light blue apparel -- maybe the eerie cyan set.


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Oh, wow, what a beautiful accent. It's just gorgeous. I enjoyed Sable's lore too: the idea of a dragon going right up to the edge of exaltation before realizing she didn't want to is cool. She feels like a good dragon to have as a healer, if she's caring and kind! Obviously her bio isn't finished yet but it seems like it'll be interesting to hear how she ended up going from that collapsed cave to her place in your clan. And wow, she has a lot of great art.


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King is a great dragon for that accent, and I feel like blood is a thematically appropriate tertiary for him, just after glancing through some of your other lore ... The birdskull necklace looks especially good on him. He's definitely an interesting -- and somewhat worrying -- clan leader! I definitely get a good feel for how ruthless and cunning he is through his bio. Though I suppose it would be interesting to hear more about his Shade corruption -- where did it come from (though I know you said his early life would be added later), how does it manifest, is it growing stronger?


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I really like Kekoa's colors, especially his secondary. It looks very good with that accent. His outfit looks very nice as well; the quiver particularly suits him. And his lore is intriguing: I really feel for him as a prisoner seeking the approval of his captor, without much hope for the future. I hope things turn out all right for him! Or better than execution, at least.

Thank you for showing me your lair; I quite enjoyed it. Please send 15kt/g by PM or CR at your earliest convenience.
I'd love to nab a spot!
Review type: Per page
Excluded tabs: need exp/genes
Should I look in the Hibernal Den?: no thanks :3
Focus (bios, appearance, both): both
Tone (positive or concrit):
PM or post: Post please
I'd love to nab a spot!
Review type: Per page
Excluded tabs: need exp/genes
Should I look in the Hibernal Den?: no thanks :3
Focus (bios, appearance, both): both
Tone (positive or concrit):
PM or post: Post please
Free lore thread
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Kindryte
"Just here to collect silly little dragons in my silly little lair"
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Permas are both in my lair and hibden
@Kindryte OK! I count 4 pages, so it'll come out to 12kt/g. (No worries about payment now; you pay when the review is complete.)
@Kindryte OK! I count 4 pages, so it'll come out to 12kt/g. (No worries about payment now; you pay when the review is complete.)
sounds good!
sounds good!
Free lore thread
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Kindryte
"Just here to collect silly little dragons in my silly little lair"
Imagine highlighting a forum signature.

Permas are both in my lair and hibden
@Lukra

Review type: Top 5 please!
Excluded tabs: Fodder
Should I look in the Hibernal Den? Yes!
Focus (bios, appearance, both): Appearance!
Tone (positive or concrit): A little bit of both, if that makes sense?
PM or post? Post!

ty in advance <3!
@Lukra

Review type: Top 5 please!
Excluded tabs: Fodder
Should I look in the Hibernal Den? Yes!
Focus (bios, appearance, both): Appearance!
Tone (positive or concrit): A little bit of both, if that makes sense?
PM or post? Post!

ty in advance <3!
tf2
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