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[center]I am a little stuck with my clan’s lore right now, so you should totally just find a dragon in my lair and destroy my ever loving mind with questions. Be as obnoxious or as professional or as kind as you’d like. Also, if you have any apparel, scry, scene/vista, skin/accent, or bio code suggestions I encourage you to throw them at me for any dragon you’d like! [u]FORCE ME TO WRITE LORE THAT I CANNOT ESCAPE >:3[/u] Here’s some lore snippets that I already have for a few dergs, but it isn’t really in their bios yet. [b]Eldritch[/b] One of my first dragons obtained via exalt save hatchery. He is still one of my favourites with such a simple outfit, but I think it works quite well! His lore is in the making, but he’s, in short, a self-appointed leader. He’s fair, but not afraid to inflict punishment. He is a balance of good and evil, falling into a near-perfect neutral grey area. [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/100454523][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/1004546/100454523_350.png[/img][/url] [b]Highclere[/b] A true beauty and Eldritch’s daughter. She has a very high rank in the clan and shows a quite similar stance to that of her father’s. Highclere is a prophet who values order, beauty, wit, and strength. Her own hatchlings must first be judged by her own prophetic abilities to determine their course in life. She must know what every member, new or old, will do for the clan in the future and act on this accordingly. [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/101060367][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/1010604/101060367_350.png[/img][/url] [b]Ariadne[/b] She, too, is still in the works. Ariadne is the clan’s sorceress, which also gained her quite a high spot with the unspoken hierarchy. She much values sorcery over witchcraft and states that “Wands are for the weak— I control my magic with my own mind and hands, I have no need for a wooden stick to carry out my spells”. She is the clan’s guardian and secondary leader. [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/100685670][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/1006857/100685670_350.png[/img][/url][/center]
I am a little stuck with my clan’s lore right now, so you should totally just find a dragon in my lair and destroy my ever loving mind with questions. Be as obnoxious or as professional or as kind as you’d like.
Also, if you have any apparel, scry, scene/vista, skin/accent, or bio code suggestions I encourage you to throw them at me for any dragon you’d like!

FORCE ME TO WRITE LORE THAT I CANNOT ESCAPE >:3

Here’s some lore snippets that I already have for a few dergs, but it isn’t really in their bios yet.
Eldritch
One of my first dragons obtained via exalt save hatchery. He is still one of my favourites with such a simple outfit, but I think it works quite well! His lore is in the making, but he’s, in short, a self-appointed leader. He’s fair, but not afraid to inflict punishment. He is a balance of good and evil, falling into a near-perfect neutral grey area.
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Highclere
A true beauty and Eldritch’s daughter. She has a very high rank in the clan and shows a quite similar stance to that of her father’s. Highclere is a prophet who values order, beauty, wit, and strength. Her own hatchlings must first be judged by her own prophetic abilities to determine their course in life. She must know what every member, new or old, will do for the clan in the future and act on this accordingly.
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Ariadne
She, too, is still in the works. Ariadne is the clan’s sorceress, which also gained her quite a high spot with the unspoken hierarchy. She much values sorcery over witchcraft and states that “Wands are for the weak— I control my magic with my own mind and hands, I have no need for a wooden stick to carry out my spells”. She is the clan’s guardian and secondary leader.
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boop <3
boop <3
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@Savvy0712 I love character lore >:DD Here's some questions that might help :> Since you say he can be evil, what questionable crimes has he commited? [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/100454523][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/1004546/100454523_350.png[/img][/url] Let's say another dragon who also happens to be a sorcerer joins the clan, will Ariadne be welcoming and befriend the dragon or would she be jealous/fear they may overthrow her and sabotage the dragon or would she be the type to just not care? [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/100685670][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/1006857/100685670_350.png[/img][/url] With all this pressure of using her prophetic abilities to serve the clan, does Highclere ever feel stressed out? Perhaps she's uncertain of a certain dragon's outcome and she doesn't know how to craft a plan or explain it to others. [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/101060367][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/1010604/101060367_350.png[/img][/url] Do the progens Helios and Raya have lore? [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/100416634][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/1004167/100416634_350.png[/img][/url] [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/100416635][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/1004167/100416635_350.png[/img][/url]
@Savvy0712 I love character lore >:DD Here's some questions that might help :>

Since you say he can be evil, what questionable crimes has he commited?
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Let's say another dragon who also happens to be a sorcerer joins the clan, will Ariadne be welcoming and befriend the dragon or would she be jealous/fear they may overthrow her and sabotage the dragon or would she be the type to just not care?
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With all this pressure of using her prophetic abilities to serve the clan, does Highclere ever feel stressed out? Perhaps she's uncertain of a certain dragon's outcome and she doesn't know how to craft a plan or explain it to others.
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Do the progens Helios and Raya have lore?
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Just noting that idk if you use the dragon poses to reference character pronouns or not, so I'll probably use they/them just in case, unless a set pronoun is put in their bios. Also never mind me throwing a few ideas your way, but I like to do more than ask questions. xD [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/94847776][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/948478/94847776_350.png[/img][/url] MMMM, loving the appearance of this one - even if the breed and name change! I'd like to know about perhaps a backstory, or maybe if the Eclipse gene serves a purpose? Like is it a marking, does it resemble anything, does it give ~special powers~? I'm almost getting an anti-hero vibe here, as well. Perhaps a little headcanon, hehe: An anti-hero / vigelante who stalks the night and uses the powers of Eclipse to stop others. [s]Sounds kinda Batman-ripoff-y, doesn't it...[/s] Or perhaps they committed a crime and it's literally stained them for life. :o [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/100671251][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/1006713/100671251_350.png[/img][/url] Rune also has me intrigued! I'd always start off with backstory and the like, but I suppose I'd also like to know how do they see things in the world (either FR or your own - depending if you use FR lore or not)? I also get a somewhat mysterious vibe from the colors and name. The combination makes me think of a nature ancient (not dragon breed, just an ancient creature in general), or spirit. The Runes gene especially always gives me that kinda idea, since it's super mysterious.
Just noting that idk if you use the dragon poses to reference character pronouns or not, so I'll probably use they/them just in case, unless a set pronoun is put in their bios.

Also never mind me throwing a few ideas your way, but I like to do more than ask questions. xD


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MMMM, loving the appearance of this one - even if the breed and name change!
I'd like to know about perhaps a backstory, or maybe if the Eclipse gene serves a purpose? Like is it a marking, does it resemble anything, does it give ~special powers~?

I'm almost getting an anti-hero vibe here, as well. Perhaps a little headcanon, hehe: An anti-hero / vigelante who stalks the night and uses the powers of Eclipse to stop others. Sounds kinda Batman-ripoff-y, doesn't it...

Or perhaps they committed a crime and it's literally stained them for life. :o




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Rune also has me intrigued! I'd always start off with backstory and the like, but I suppose I'd also like to know how do they see things in the world (either FR or your own - depending if you use FR lore or not)?

I also get a somewhat mysterious vibe from the colors and name. The combination makes me think of a nature ancient (not dragon breed, just an ancient creature in general), or spirit. The Runes gene especially always gives me that kinda idea, since it's super mysterious.
I noticed you have these two as a permanent pair! [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/99424902][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/994250/99424902_350.png[/img][/url] [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/99220049][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/992201/99220049_350.png[/img][/url] Is there any lore as to why they're together/how they became mates? What draws them to each other? Also! What does the note in Glacian's bio mean? "#78 (1, Scorned by Deity)" It could be nothing but I wondered if there was an interesting story behind it!
I noticed you have these two as a permanent pair!

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Is there any lore as to why they're together/how they became mates? What draws them to each other?

Also! What does the note in Glacian's bio mean? "#78 (1, Scorned by Deity)"
It could be nothing but I wondered if there was an interesting story behind it!
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Apologies for the late responses, everyone! I was on a trip for spring break haha.


@unicornrabbit62
“Since you say he can be evil, what questionable crimes has he commited?”
I like to think that some things have gotten twisted over time, but he’s committed wild acts just the same. For one, some dragons secretly gossip about what really happens to some of the hatchlings that aren’t kept in the clan. He hardly ever truly leaves the clan with a hatchling at his side, so where do they go? Naturally, rumours spread like wildfire. It’s been said that he slaughtered them himself, not wanting them to serve the Lightweaver, which sounds accurate enough because nobody truly knows which deity he aligns most with. Some children who are scared of both Eldritch and Ariadne say that hatchlings are taken to Ariadne to be experimented on and to be used in potions/brews. He has, however, actually slaughtered dragons from his own clan before. Such as sick/injured dragons who are unlikely to recover. He believes a sick dragon should be put out of its misery to ensure its own easy end and the end to whatever disease they may be carrying. He has also executed, publicly, multiple criminals (no matter how large or little the crime) with a solid lack of trial. Dragons of the clan also noticed his neutral, even bored, expression during executions such as these. Some even say they saw him smirk.

“Let's say another dragon who also happens to be a sorcerer joins the clan, will Ariadne be welcoming and befriend the dragon or would she be jealous/fear they may overthrow her and sabotage the dragon or would she be the type to just not care?”
Ariadne would probably assess this new sorcerer/ess as much as possible and figure out who they are, their skill level, and what they want. She would gather background information from other clans who may know or have seen them and even follow this new dragon around or ask them questions. Depending on this, she’ll either sabotage them and get them sold, sent away, exalted, or even killed, or she will accept them and attempt to befriend them, but still keep an eye on them regardless.

“With all this pressure of using her prophetic abilities to serve the clan, does Highclere ever feel stressed out? Perhaps she's uncertain of a certain dragon's outcome and she doesn't know how to craft a plan or explain it to others.”
She is often seen as regal and withholding a very neutral character. However, she isn’t always what she seems. She sees some good futures, but then she also sees those that end in death and/or misery. She struggles with how to act on it, which brings stress. If she foresees a sweet, loving, and compassionate dragon becoming a criminal four years down the line, does she let it happen? Does she seize them now to prevent it? This requires quite a strong will, especially considering she hardly reveals such things and carries the burden alone. Highclere can also be quite cryptic, using riddles or poems to convey her words, or she may be blunt and straightforward, saying exactly what will happen, but with little detail.

“Do the progens Helios and Raya have lore?”
Sort of, but nothing is really set in stone, which is why it’s not written anywhere. Helios is strong, fair, and respectful. However, he isn’t always respected in return. For reasons unbeknownst to the rest of the clan, he gave up his leadership within the clan and left Eldritch entirely in charge. It was mostly unspoken. His own clan, founded on equality and compassion, has turned into a sick monarchy. Many call him a coward, but know his strong connection, still, to Eldritch, so they prefer not to say so out loud.
Raya is more aggressive and was against Eldritch from the beginning. She believes in what he is doing to the clan, but she hadn’t wanted to revoke her leadership. She is the main reason that her and Helios still have a high status, refusing to fully back down.


@Commander
(Kythereia)“I'd like to know about perhaps a backstory, or maybe if the Eclipse gene serves a purpose? Like is it a marking, does it resemble anything, does it give ~special powers~?”
It’s simply a marking. However, it is known to be quite rare. Genes often play a fair role in determining the status of a dragon within this clan, so the eclipse marking is also a symbol of her high status. In a pyramid diagram, she would be considered high upper class. Those with such markings at also encouraged to produce offspring as soon as possible, with the hopes of producing even more valuable dragons in the future, which can help the status of the clan as a whole, too.

(Rune)“I suppose I'd also like to know how do they see things in the world (either FR or your own - depending if you use FR lore or not)?”
He actually doesn’t have any lore as of now and he desperately needs to be regened and possibly renamed and breed-changed. Though I like to think he is vastly different from his mate, Highclere. This is because the only reason they are together is for the sake of acceptable offspring. So, like many royal arranged marriages in human history, they don’t actually have much in common. This means that while Highclere views the world as complicated, layered, and she shows neutrality as often as possible, Rune does not see all the layers at once. He attempts to see through Highclere’s eyes, though it isn’t easy. He finds neutrality difficult to achieve in a world of only good and evil. He does not see the grey area where an anti-hero, or even just your average person, may lay. Highclere does what she can to help him see things through her perspective, though he doesn’t always seem to grasp the concept.


@taraceroid
“Is there any lore as to why they're together/how they became mates? What draws them to each other?“
Nothing is fully set in stone, but I’m thinking an arranged relationship either from a different clan and later sold into this clan, or they arrived separately, but the relationship was arranged by Eldritch. Due to the fact that the clan values appearance, those who can produce offspring with set colours and genes that are known to look quite nice, you can count on an arrangement. Some dragons spend months breeding with different dragons, both inside and outside the clan, in order to produce acceptable offspring and find their permanent mate/s. Either way, all of my permanent breeding pairs are likely arranged relationships.

“What does the note in Glacian's bio mean? "#78 (1, Scorned by Deity)"
It could be nothing but I wondered if there was an interesting story behind it!”

Well, actually, I have zero clue. Whenever I got Glacian, that was already there. I planned on reaching out to the owner, but I just never got around to it haha. All I understand is the last part, that Glacian is scorned by his deity. Why that is there, however, I’m not entirely sure. I didn’t want to remove it just in case it were important, however.
Apologies for the late responses, everyone! I was on a trip for spring break haha.


@unicornrabbit62
“Since you say he can be evil, what questionable crimes has he commited?”
I like to think that some things have gotten twisted over time, but he’s committed wild acts just the same. For one, some dragons secretly gossip about what really happens to some of the hatchlings that aren’t kept in the clan. He hardly ever truly leaves the clan with a hatchling at his side, so where do they go? Naturally, rumours spread like wildfire. It’s been said that he slaughtered them himself, not wanting them to serve the Lightweaver, which sounds accurate enough because nobody truly knows which deity he aligns most with. Some children who are scared of both Eldritch and Ariadne say that hatchlings are taken to Ariadne to be experimented on and to be used in potions/brews. He has, however, actually slaughtered dragons from his own clan before. Such as sick/injured dragons who are unlikely to recover. He believes a sick dragon should be put out of its misery to ensure its own easy end and the end to whatever disease they may be carrying. He has also executed, publicly, multiple criminals (no matter how large or little the crime) with a solid lack of trial. Dragons of the clan also noticed his neutral, even bored, expression during executions such as these. Some even say they saw him smirk.

“Let's say another dragon who also happens to be a sorcerer joins the clan, will Ariadne be welcoming and befriend the dragon or would she be jealous/fear they may overthrow her and sabotage the dragon or would she be the type to just not care?”
Ariadne would probably assess this new sorcerer/ess as much as possible and figure out who they are, their skill level, and what they want. She would gather background information from other clans who may know or have seen them and even follow this new dragon around or ask them questions. Depending on this, she’ll either sabotage them and get them sold, sent away, exalted, or even killed, or she will accept them and attempt to befriend them, but still keep an eye on them regardless.

“With all this pressure of using her prophetic abilities to serve the clan, does Highclere ever feel stressed out? Perhaps she's uncertain of a certain dragon's outcome and she doesn't know how to craft a plan or explain it to others.”
She is often seen as regal and withholding a very neutral character. However, she isn’t always what she seems. She sees some good futures, but then she also sees those that end in death and/or misery. She struggles with how to act on it, which brings stress. If she foresees a sweet, loving, and compassionate dragon becoming a criminal four years down the line, does she let it happen? Does she seize them now to prevent it? This requires quite a strong will, especially considering she hardly reveals such things and carries the burden alone. Highclere can also be quite cryptic, using riddles or poems to convey her words, or she may be blunt and straightforward, saying exactly what will happen, but with little detail.

“Do the progens Helios and Raya have lore?”
Sort of, but nothing is really set in stone, which is why it’s not written anywhere. Helios is strong, fair, and respectful. However, he isn’t always respected in return. For reasons unbeknownst to the rest of the clan, he gave up his leadership within the clan and left Eldritch entirely in charge. It was mostly unspoken. His own clan, founded on equality and compassion, has turned into a sick monarchy. Many call him a coward, but know his strong connection, still, to Eldritch, so they prefer not to say so out loud.
Raya is more aggressive and was against Eldritch from the beginning. She believes in what he is doing to the clan, but she hadn’t wanted to revoke her leadership. She is the main reason that her and Helios still have a high status, refusing to fully back down.


@Commander
(Kythereia)“I'd like to know about perhaps a backstory, or maybe if the Eclipse gene serves a purpose? Like is it a marking, does it resemble anything, does it give ~special powers~?”
It’s simply a marking. However, it is known to be quite rare. Genes often play a fair role in determining the status of a dragon within this clan, so the eclipse marking is also a symbol of her high status. In a pyramid diagram, she would be considered high upper class. Those with such markings at also encouraged to produce offspring as soon as possible, with the hopes of producing even more valuable dragons in the future, which can help the status of the clan as a whole, too.

(Rune)“I suppose I'd also like to know how do they see things in the world (either FR or your own - depending if you use FR lore or not)?”
He actually doesn’t have any lore as of now and he desperately needs to be regened and possibly renamed and breed-changed. Though I like to think he is vastly different from his mate, Highclere. This is because the only reason they are together is for the sake of acceptable offspring. So, like many royal arranged marriages in human history, they don’t actually have much in common. This means that while Highclere views the world as complicated, layered, and she shows neutrality as often as possible, Rune does not see all the layers at once. He attempts to see through Highclere’s eyes, though it isn’t easy. He finds neutrality difficult to achieve in a world of only good and evil. He does not see the grey area where an anti-hero, or even just your average person, may lay. Highclere does what she can to help him see things through her perspective, though he doesn’t always seem to grasp the concept.


@taraceroid
“Is there any lore as to why they're together/how they became mates? What draws them to each other?“
Nothing is fully set in stone, but I’m thinking an arranged relationship either from a different clan and later sold into this clan, or they arrived separately, but the relationship was arranged by Eldritch. Due to the fact that the clan values appearance, those who can produce offspring with set colours and genes that are known to look quite nice, you can count on an arrangement. Some dragons spend months breeding with different dragons, both inside and outside the clan, in order to produce acceptable offspring and find their permanent mate/s. Either way, all of my permanent breeding pairs are likely arranged relationships.

“What does the note in Glacian's bio mean? "#78 (1, Scorned by Deity)"
It could be nothing but I wondered if there was an interesting story behind it!”

Well, actually, I have zero clue. Whenever I got Glacian, that was already there. I planned on reaching out to the owner, but I just never got around to it haha. All I understand is the last part, that Glacian is scorned by his deity. Why that is there, however, I’m not entirely sure. I didn’t want to remove it just in case it were important, however.
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Oh, I love those ideas! I'll be honest that I really liked Rune's genes as is, but of course, it's up to you to decide what you wanna do with your dragons.


The Eclipse gene meaning something like that is an awesome concept! Now I wonder what would be the mark of the most powerful. :o
Oh, I love those ideas! I'll be honest that I really liked Rune's genes as is, but of course, it's up to you to decide what you wanna do with your dragons.


The Eclipse gene meaning something like that is an awesome concept! Now I wonder what would be the mark of the most powerful. :o
OMG didn't expect to see Eldritch in the wild! It's good to see that he's being taken good care of! And he has children!
OMG didn't expect to see Eldritch in the wild! It's good to see that he's being taken good care of! And he has children!
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@Spuddicus
He is very very VERY taken care of! I absolutely adore him and I’m so glad that I took him in when I did <3
@Spuddicus
He is very very VERY taken care of! I absolutely adore him and I’m so glad that I took him in when I did <3
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