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TOPIC | [STARFALL] Poetry Contest - Day 7 up!
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[center][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/10040/1003964_350.png[/img][br] [size=2]@kriseis: Again, FR didn't want to take my weird text so I converted it into images to make the poem work the way I wanted. I hope this is okay. n _ n' Others: If you are confused after reading the poem see the end note.[/size][br] [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/1988817/6#post_22878527]Perspective I: Gravity[/url] | [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/1988817/9#post_22911011]Perspective II: Rox[/url][br] [b]Perspective III: Naomi[/b][br][br] [b]xi.[/b] history is funny it doesnt remember pain or love or anything really. it remembers facts: over 5 million dragons died. fact. of all the dragons on sornieth only 100,000 survived. fact. people like facts. they are predictable. easy. [b]xii.[/b] i have never operated in the easy. the organization of arcane energy gather within the small room. they beg the exalted mother. fact. they believe she can bring back the arcanist. fact. it's easy to blend in when you look just like them. fact. but the "organization" doesn't know [img]http://i.imgur.com/98JYJc3.png[/img] [i]fact.[/i] [b]xiii.[/b] i was born a long time ago. each day that i grew older my lust for vengeance grew. they sent me to fight for the arcanist but I [img]http://i.imgur.com/NRSp4M9.png[/img] instead i created a home for myself for my [img]http://i.imgur.com/UGSX8qZ.png[/img] who am i? [img]http://i.imgur.com/LqXQckR.png[/img] fact. it was [img]http://i.imgur.com/OAhO6tU.png[/img] you reincarnated me through the cauldron. fed me through it. in exchange for what? petty eggs? [img]http://i.imgur.com/q1NQYd4.png[/img] after all, baldwin was my oldest child. my first follower. and now with the begging, the worshipping from the organization of arcane energy. i am at my full potential. fact. [b]xiv.[/b] starfall was just the beginning the death of the arcanist just the beginning. it is time for a new deity bow to her or face the force of her exalted army. [img]http://i.imgur.com/7fpp4L8.png[/img] [size=2]End Note: If you are confused, [url=http://fr-3t.tumblr.com/post/138092302155/all-about-naomi-for-those-who-have-no-idea-whats]here is a short history of Naomi.[/url][/size][/center]
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@kriseis: Again, FR didn't want to take my weird text so I converted it into images to make the poem work the way I wanted. I hope this is okay. n _ n'

Others: If you are confused after reading the poem see the end note.


Perspective I: Gravity | Perspective II: Rox

Perspective III: Naomi


xi.
history is funny
it doesnt remember pain
or love or anything really.

it remembers facts:

over 5 million dragons died.
fact.

of all the dragons on sornieth
only 100,000 survived.
fact.

people like facts.
they are predictable.
easy.

xii.
i have never operated in the easy.
the organization of arcane energy
gather within the small room.

they beg the exalted mother.
fact.

they believe she can bring back the arcanist.
fact.

it's easy to blend in when you look just like them.
fact.

but the "organization" doesn't know
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fact.

xiii.
i was born a long time ago.
each day that i grew older
my lust for vengeance grew.

they sent me to fight
for the arcanist
but I
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instead i created a home for myself
for my
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who am i?
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fact.

it was
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you reincarnated me through
the cauldron. fed me through it.
in exchange for what?
petty eggs?

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after all, baldwin was my oldest child.
my first follower.

and now with the begging, the worshipping
from the organization of arcane energy.
i am at my full potential.
fact.

xiv.
starfall was just the beginning
the death of the arcanist just the beginning.
it is time for a new deity
bow to her or face the force of her exalted army.

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End Note: If you are confused, here is a short history of Naomi.
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Hope I'm not too late to enter, I just found this post.. This is one of the two poems in my clan's information that I wrote a few days ago during Starfall..

~ Ode to Clans and Their Lore ~
Written By: KatzPetz

Some clans have many and some have fewer,
A fledgling clan will have less since it is newer.
No clan is too big nor is any clan is too small,
Some are just one breed; some have members of all.

Whether your clan is new or your clan is old,
Each clan has a history, a lore, a story to be told.
Let the legends begin and the words will start to flow,
Where each clan's path will take them, no one knows.
Hope I'm not too late to enter, I just found this post.. This is one of the two poems in my clan's information that I wrote a few days ago during Starfall..

~ Ode to Clans and Their Lore ~
Written By: KatzPetz

Some clans have many and some have fewer,
A fledgling clan will have less since it is newer.
No clan is too big nor is any clan is too small,
Some are just one breed; some have members of all.

Whether your clan is new or your clan is old,
Each clan has a history, a lore, a story to be told.
Let the legends begin and the words will start to flow,
Where each clan's path will take them, no one knows.
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@kriseis this was so much fun! Thank you for an excellent Starfall!

And now for a depressing poem. :3
Exile
I stand alone
Cold feet on cold stone
With nothingness in my heart.

I wish to go home
To lands I once roamed
But I don't know where I can start.

I stand there for
A very long while
Many thoughts come,
But they never stay.
Nothing has meaning
As long as I'm here
And I do not know
If I can leave it
This place you think you love
But that I would hate
If I could feel again.

I don't know what's wrong and what's right
But if I could see between darkness and light
I'd choose the opposite of this.

I lost someone close to me
Their face is slipping, but I still barely see
It's myself I miss.

You say it'll be over soon but I know
That nothing stops time and nothing's my home
I'll never get back to my heart

Yes, I wish to go home
To the lands I once roamed
But I never ever know how to start.
@kriseis this was so much fun! Thank you for an excellent Starfall!

And now for a depressing poem. :3
Exile
I stand alone
Cold feet on cold stone
With nothingness in my heart.

I wish to go home
To lands I once roamed
But I don't know where I can start.

I stand there for
A very long while
Many thoughts come,
But they never stay.
Nothing has meaning
As long as I'm here
And I do not know
If I can leave it
This place you think you love
But that I would hate
If I could feel again.

I don't know what's wrong and what's right
But if I could see between darkness and light
I'd choose the opposite of this.

I lost someone close to me
Their face is slipping, but I still barely see
It's myself I miss.

You say it'll be over soon but I know
That nothing stops time and nothing's my home
I'll never get back to my heart

Yes, I wish to go home
To the lands I once roamed
But I never ever know how to start.
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@kriseis
Exalt Fodder
By Lightshadow101

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NO
I will not go gentle into that "good" night
You can't!
I shall burn and rage by the close of day
I'm not worthless!
rage, rage, against the dying of light

I was bred by you.
Nurtured.
Loved, even.

You turned on me.
Might as well be dead.
You left me.

You said I was "serving"
I was doing the right thing.
I was helping the gods.

BUT YOU JUST ABANDONED ME
I AM NOT SERVING
I AM A SLAVE
I ENDLESSLY FIGHT
ENDLESSLY
AND YOU ABANDONED ME HERE!

Why did you abandon me?
I thought you loved me
I though you cared
But I was just exalt fodder.
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@kriseis
Is everything okay? It's been 11 days since we've heard from you. I hope everything is okay! I know some users dissapear during hard times so I'm hoping that's not the case. :(
@kriseis
Is everything okay? It's been 11 days since we've heard from you. I hope everything is okay! I know some users dissapear during hard times so I'm hoping that's not the case. :(
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@Merewen

Yeah, I'm still here! I've been waiting to hear back from more of my judges but it looks like I'll have to just use the ones who've replied and draft a couple RL friends to help me make the judging as fair as possible. I'm sorry it's been so long, and I'll try to get at least the first day's results posted by this weekend!
@Merewen

Yeah, I'm still here! I've been waiting to hear back from more of my judges but it looks like I'll have to just use the ones who've replied and draft a couple RL friends to help me make the judging as fair as possible. I'm sorry it's been so long, and I'll try to get at least the first day's results posted by this weekend!
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@kriseis
Please don't worry. It's more important that you're okay and I'm glad to hear that you are. Take your time. :)
@kriseis
Please don't worry. It's more important that you're okay and I'm glad to hear that you are. Take your time. :)
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@kriseis

Could we get an update? No pressure to finish quickly, but I'd like to know how things are going.
@kriseis

Could we get an update? No pressure to finish quickly, but I'd like to know how things are going.
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@kriseis

Can we please get an update? :) It's been nearly two months now. Pinging @bellzan since they also asked.
@kriseis

Can we please get an update? :) It's been nearly two months now. Pinging @bellzan since they also asked.
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@Kriseis
Hey! Just wondering how everything is going, and when we might be able to have an update on the winners? Hope everything is turning out well, and have a happy Nov.! C;
@Kriseis
Hey! Just wondering how everything is going, and when we might be able to have an update on the winners? Hope everything is turning out well, and have a happy Nov.! C;
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