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@staciva
Are there still slots for round 2? I'd love a review if you have the time (:
Are there still slots for round 2? I'd love a review if you have the time (:
@staciva
Are there still slots for round 2? I'd love a review if you have the time (:
Are there still slots for round 2? I'd love a review if you have the time (:
@IronPen
[sub]Honorable mentions to [url=http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/127298/12729796_350.png?mtime=V-Bw4AACKfo]Lokunfaad[/url] - I adore how well the Conjurer apparel and the tail bauble look with his genes, and his tragic backstory made snivel a little.. And also to [url=http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/132639/13263833_350.png?mtime=V2l4sAACRJ4]Venselor[/url] - his skin and apparel are a match made in heaven! And also adding in [url=http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/117720/11771935_350.png?mtime=V3tq4wADB5I]Evgir[/url] - the autumn and winter themes clash so perfectly together on her! And to [url=http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/129652/12965153_350.png?mtime=V43v8QACSh8]Fractal[/url] - absolutely stunning with her colours and Sylvan apparel set. And last but not least [url=http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/136836/13683556_350.png?mtime=Vn6ZigAC0uA]ChickenFry[/url] - I am so hungry right now because of her..[/sub]
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=12659480]
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First and foremost I begin with Gospel - everybody’s [s]secretly[/s] favourite airship captain! His apparel gives him such a menacing yet professional look, especially the Aviator apparel and his smoky goggles. As well as those, the white scarf and cloudy wings blend in just well to finish off his Captain look! Meanwhile, his passion for flying and his dream to build an incredible airship make him such an avid believer in himself and his goals - much to the joy of his mate when she has to untie him from his excited knots! I personally adore his story and personality, great job on such a unique and jolly dragon :D
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=12802235]
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A beautiful dragon inside and out as it seems, MorningGlory might be a small Earth Guardian in the trade of crystals but she certainly doesn’t seem to mind, for her love of racing keeps her afloat! I am in awe of how you’ve managed to combine possibly two of the most unrelated jobs/hobbies in the world, and with such a beautiful girl as well. Adding the flowery apparel was a nice touch (the Sunrise Hibiscus makes it look like she’s grinning happily! Aw!) and work well with her golden colours and genes, as well as her golden heart. The brass wings just fit in as well, good work on keeping her lightweight yet decorative!
[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=20418589]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/204186/20418589_350.png[/img]
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If there’s a particular theme I admire, it’s Flight hybrids, and his Icy heritage and wings plus his shadowy Primary and Gloomwillow Guide definitely hint at some sort of dark icy magic… But today I’m just gonna focus on his looks. Talk about a beautiful mix of blue and black! I would’ve never thought Poison and Facet could work together but Maas has just proved me wrong. The mixture of Sylvan, Silk and Lapis Lazuli apparel just cooperate splendidly together with his unique colours and finally the Chillspike Crown sitting atop his icicle-like head feathers finishes his dramatic yet regal appearance. I definitely would love to see what kind of story he’s hiding!
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[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=20224880]
[img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/202249/20224880_350.png[/img]
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[s]Marco’s XXY Aqua/Banana are surprisingly really a good match! However I’m afraid I can’t really say the same with her apparel… Bright purple doesn’t really fit well with the bright blue and pale yellow colours of Marco. The type of apparel is perfectly fine, especially fitting for a quartermaster of an airship, but it would probably look better if it was a Mage’s [b]Sapphire[/b] Overcoat and apparel instead of the current Nightshade. I personally feel this would match better with her blue/yellow gene colours, but any final changes is entirely up to you.[/s]
Edit: [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/1972099/6#post_23205983]Marco[/url] is based on a fan character, and apparel is necessary.
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Instead of finding the perfect [I]pair,[/I] I found the perfect trio with [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=138161&tab=dragon&did=17096888]Ace[/url], [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=138161&tab=dragon&did=20182911]Sabo[/url] and [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=138161&tab=dragon&did=18957105]Luffy[/url]. What a heartbreaking brotherhood they share, from Ace’s tragic beginnings to Luffy’s loneliness and baby-like natre and finally Sabo’s unexpected disappearance and memory loss, yet they still managed to keep each other strong and stand united at whatever or whoever [s](looking at you Millefiore)[/s] got in their way! I greatly admire their brothership, good job at writing such a tragic one.
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For the final afterword, I have to confess one thing: Despite your lore being under construction, it is probably the most fascinating and free-flowing clan stories I have seen as far. Everyone’s stories links with one another despite how different everyone is, I am well impressed and looking forward to seeing them finished! Fantastic job on every single one of them, even those that are just in their descriptive stages!
Your lair was certainly a very unique and wonderful lair to review, it was so lovely seeing so many different breeds, colours and genes all in one lair, and I love how you've also described the relationships between Beastclan and familiars alike with certain dragons.
Thank you so much again for letting me review your lair, and thank you even more for your patience!
@IronPen
Honorable mentions to Lokunfaad - I adore how well the Conjurer apparel and the tail bauble look with his genes, and his tragic backstory made snivel a little.. And also to Venselor - his skin and apparel are a match made in heaven! And also adding in Evgir - the autumn and winter themes clash so perfectly together on her! And to Fractal - absolutely stunning with her colours and Sylvan apparel set. And last but not least ChickenFry - I am so hungry right now because of her..
First and foremost I begin with Gospel - everybody’ssecretly favourite airship captain! His apparel gives him such a menacing yet professional look, especially the Aviator apparel and his smoky goggles. As well as those, the white scarf and cloudy wings blend in just well to finish off his Captain look! Meanwhile, his passion for flying and his dream to build an incredible airship make him such an avid believer in himself and his goals - much to the joy of his mate when she has to untie him from his excited knots! I personally adore his story and personality, great job on such a unique and jolly dragon :D
A beautiful dragon inside and out as it seems, MorningGlory might be a small Earth Guardian in the trade of crystals but she certainly doesn’t seem to mind, for her love of racing keeps her afloat! I am in awe of how you’ve managed to combine possibly two of the most unrelated jobs/hobbies in the world, and with such a beautiful girl as well. Adding the flowery apparel was a nice touch (the Sunrise Hibiscus makes it look like she’s grinning happily! Aw!) and work well with her golden colours and genes, as well as her golden heart. The brass wings just fit in as well, good work on keeping her lightweight yet decorative!
If there’s a particular theme I admire, it’s Flight hybrids, and his Icy heritage and wings plus his shadowy Primary and Gloomwillow Guide definitely hint at some sort of dark icy magic… But today I’m just gonna focus on his looks. Talk about a beautiful mix of blue and black! I would’ve never thought Poison and Facet could work together but Maas has just proved me wrong. The mixture of Sylvan, Silk and Lapis Lazuli apparel just cooperate splendidly together with his unique colours and finally the Chillspike Crown sitting atop his icicle-like head feathers finishes his dramatic yet regal appearance. I definitely would love to see what kind of story he’s hiding!
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Marco’s XXY Aqua/Banana are surprisingly really a good match! However I’m afraid I can’t really say the same with her apparel… Bright purple doesn’t really fit well with the bright blue and pale yellow colours of Marco. The type of apparel is perfectly fine, especially fitting for a quartermaster of an airship, but it would probably look better if it was a Mage’s Sapphire Overcoat and apparel instead of the current Nightshade. I personally feel this would match better with her blue/yellow gene colours, but any final changes is entirely up to you.
Edit: Marco is based on a fan character, and apparel is necessary.
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Instead of finding the perfect pair, I found the perfect trio with Ace, Sabo and Luffy. What a heartbreaking brotherhood they share, from Ace’s tragic beginnings to Luffy’s loneliness and baby-like natre and finally Sabo’s unexpected disappearance and memory loss, yet they still managed to keep each other strong and stand united at whatever or whoever(looking at you Millefiore) got in their way! I greatly admire their brothership, good job at writing such a tragic one.
____________________________________________________________________
For the final afterword, I have to confess one thing: Despite your lore being under construction, it is probably the most fascinating and free-flowing clan stories I have seen as far. Everyone’s stories links with one another despite how different everyone is, I am well impressed and looking forward to seeing them finished! Fantastic job on every single one of them, even those that are just in their descriptive stages!
Your lair was certainly a very unique and wonderful lair to review, it was so lovely seeing so many different breeds, colours and genes all in one lair, and I love how you've also described the relationships between Beastclan and familiars alike with certain dragons.
Thank you so much again for letting me review your lair, and thank you even more for your patience!
Honorable mentions to Lokunfaad - I adore how well the Conjurer apparel and the tail bauble look with his genes, and his tragic backstory made snivel a little.. And also to Venselor - his skin and apparel are a match made in heaven! And also adding in Evgir - the autumn and winter themes clash so perfectly together on her! And to Fractal - absolutely stunning with her colours and Sylvan apparel set. And last but not least ChickenFry - I am so hungry right now because of her..
First and foremost I begin with Gospel - everybody’s
A beautiful dragon inside and out as it seems, MorningGlory might be a small Earth Guardian in the trade of crystals but she certainly doesn’t seem to mind, for her love of racing keeps her afloat! I am in awe of how you’ve managed to combine possibly two of the most unrelated jobs/hobbies in the world, and with such a beautiful girl as well. Adding the flowery apparel was a nice touch (the Sunrise Hibiscus makes it look like she’s grinning happily! Aw!) and work well with her golden colours and genes, as well as her golden heart. The brass wings just fit in as well, good work on keeping her lightweight yet decorative!
If there’s a particular theme I admire, it’s Flight hybrids, and his Icy heritage and wings plus his shadowy Primary and Gloomwillow Guide definitely hint at some sort of dark icy magic… But today I’m just gonna focus on his looks. Talk about a beautiful mix of blue and black! I would’ve never thought Poison and Facet could work together but Maas has just proved me wrong. The mixture of Sylvan, Silk and Lapis Lazuli apparel just cooperate splendidly together with his unique colours and finally the Chillspike Crown sitting atop his icicle-like head feathers finishes his dramatic yet regal appearance. I definitely would love to see what kind of story he’s hiding!
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Edit: Marco is based on a fan character, and apparel is necessary.
____________________________________________________________________
Instead of finding the perfect pair, I found the perfect trio with Ace, Sabo and Luffy. What a heartbreaking brotherhood they share, from Ace’s tragic beginnings to Luffy’s loneliness and baby-like natre and finally Sabo’s unexpected disappearance and memory loss, yet they still managed to keep each other strong and stand united at whatever or whoever
____________________________________________________________________
For the final afterword, I have to confess one thing: Despite your lore being under construction, it is probably the most fascinating and free-flowing clan stories I have seen as far. Everyone’s stories links with one another despite how different everyone is, I am well impressed and looking forward to seeing them finished! Fantastic job on every single one of them, even those that are just in their descriptive stages!
Your lair was certainly a very unique and wonderful lair to review, it was so lovely seeing so many different breeds, colours and genes all in one lair, and I love how you've also described the relationships between Beastclan and familiars alike with certain dragons.
Thank you so much again for letting me review your lair, and thank you even more for your patience!
@Staciva
Oh my I feel so flustered after that amazing review! MG's lore is actually fairly new, I started using her for a dragon race game in teh Share forum because she's so well-proportioned, my smallest guardian with the biggest wings and weighed the least. One her second race she won
I would normally agree about Marco's apparel but she's a fandragon of this guy:
[img]http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/onepiece/images/6/6d/Marco_Pirate_Warriors_3.png/revision/latest?cb=20150406100822.png[/img]
So at least I'll keep her coat unless he gets an outfit upgrade the next time he shows up which is possible. In fact, she's from the same series that the trio is from! One Piece is an awesome manga and I'm so happy I got the perfect fandragons for them though I did have to tweak their lore to fit the site's lore.
And oh my does that give me some awesome incentive to really start upgrading everyone else. I'm happy to know you like the style, I always see some rigid styles or their all independent but I didn't want that for my dragons despite my terrible lair purging tendencies. Oh man, just thanks a bunch!!
@Staciva
Oh my I feel so flustered after that amazing review! MG's lore is actually fairly new, I started using her for a dragon race game in teh Share forum because she's so well-proportioned, my smallest guardian with the biggest wings and weighed the least. One her second race she won
I would normally agree about Marco's apparel but she's a fandragon of this guy:
So at least I'll keep her coat unless he gets an outfit upgrade the next time he shows up which is possible. In fact, she's from the same series that the trio is from! One Piece is an awesome manga and I'm so happy I got the perfect fandragons for them though I did have to tweak their lore to fit the site's lore.
And oh my does that give me some awesome incentive to really start upgrading everyone else. I'm happy to know you like the style, I always see some rigid styles or their all independent but I didn't want that for my dragons despite my terrible lair purging tendencies. Oh man, just thanks a bunch!!
Oh my I feel so flustered after that amazing review! MG's lore is actually fairly new, I started using her for a dragon race game in teh Share forum because she's so well-proportioned, my smallest guardian with the biggest wings and weighed the least. One her second race she won
I would normally agree about Marco's apparel but she's a fandragon of this guy:
So at least I'll keep her coat unless he gets an outfit upgrade the next time he shows up which is possible. In fact, she's from the same series that the trio is from! One Piece is an awesome manga and I'm so happy I got the perfect fandragons for them though I did have to tweak their lore to fit the site's lore.
And oh my does that give me some awesome incentive to really start upgrading everyone else. I'm happy to know you like the style, I always see some rigid styles or their all independent but I didn't want that for my dragons despite my terrible lair purging tendencies. Oh man, just thanks a bunch!!
@Staciva
Could you reveiw my lair?
Could you reveiw my lair?
@Staciva
Could you reveiw my lair?
Could you reveiw my lair?
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@AngelFire335
Hello again! Sure I'd love to review your lair, adding you to the waiting list soon ^^
Hello again! Sure I'd love to review your lair, adding you to the waiting list soon ^^
@AngelFire335
Hello again! Sure I'd love to review your lair, adding you to the waiting list soon ^^
Hello again! Sure I'd love to review your lair, adding you to the waiting list soon ^^
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