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I'm sure it will, especially with Radiocalar (another eyeburner I've taken in) around. :P
I'm sure it will, especially with Radiocalar (another eyeburner I've taken in) around. :P
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The gentle luthier looked around, before gently strumming his instrument, a lute, he was hidden among the tables of the bar. The small [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=23573673]Fae barkeep[/url] looked up, a smile lighting up her face as she watched the Coatl begin. He let out a low sigh, before playing a slow, gentle tune. When a loud crash was heard outside the bar, he jumped, playing a distorted and hideous note.
The luthier quickly grabbed his lute before darting outside to see an [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&id=424292&tab=dragon&did=46758712]Emperor[/url]. He let out a wordless shriek, dashing back into the bar. The barkeep looked at him, confused, before her face showed her realization. She spoke, but the words were falling on deaf ears. She stopped, quickly jotting down something which the Coatl looked at. "It's okay! They won't hurt you!" It read.
He tried to believe the words but was still petrified nonetheless.
It was an Emperor. It could kill him. It will kill him.
He shoved the thoughts out of his head, his shaky breathes slowly becoming more steady. Once he had calmed, the luthier began his tune again, playing much more cautiously this time. When he had finished he just lay down, instead of starting another song. Before he could realize it, he was asleep; and before he could dream, he was awake. Soft blankets surrounded his feathers.
He looked around and saw an unfamiliar surrounding. Then he saw the Fae. This was her house. "Thank you." he murmured, falling back into sleep.
its under by 4 words but I dont think I can add on without making it obvious im extending it.
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The gentle luthier looked around, before gently strumming his instrument, a lute, he was hidden among the tables of the bar. The small Fae barkeep looked up, a smile lighting up her face as she watched the Coatl begin. He let out a low sigh, before playing a slow, gentle tune. When a loud crash was heard outside the bar, he jumped, playing a distorted and hideous note.
The luthier quickly grabbed his lute before darting outside to see an Emperor. He let out a wordless shriek, dashing back into the bar. The barkeep looked at him, confused, before her face showed her realization. She spoke, but the words were falling on deaf ears. She stopped, quickly jotting down something which the Coatl looked at. "It's okay! They won't hurt you!" It read.
He tried to believe the words but was still petrified nonetheless.
It was an Emperor. It could kill him. It will kill him.
He shoved the thoughts out of his head, his shaky breathes slowly becoming more steady. Once he had calmed, the luthier began his tune again, playing much more cautiously this time. When he had finished he just lay down, instead of starting another song. Before he could realize it, he was asleep; and before he could dream, he was awake. Soft blankets surrounded his feathers.
He looked around and saw an unfamiliar surrounding. Then he saw the Fae. This was her house. "Thank you." he murmured, falling back into sleep.
its under by 4 words but I dont think I can add on without making it obvious im extending it.
The gentle luthier looked around, before gently strumming his instrument, a lute, he was hidden among the tables of the bar. The small Fae barkeep looked up, a smile lighting up her face as she watched the Coatl begin. He let out a low sigh, before playing a slow, gentle tune. When a loud crash was heard outside the bar, he jumped, playing a distorted and hideous note.
The luthier quickly grabbed his lute before darting outside to see an Emperor. He let out a wordless shriek, dashing back into the bar. The barkeep looked at him, confused, before her face showed her realization. She spoke, but the words were falling on deaf ears. She stopped, quickly jotting down something which the Coatl looked at. "It's okay! They won't hurt you!" It read.
He tried to believe the words but was still petrified nonetheless.
It was an Emperor. It could kill him. It will kill him.
He shoved the thoughts out of his head, his shaky breathes slowly becoming more steady. Once he had calmed, the luthier began his tune again, playing much more cautiously this time. When he had finished he just lay down, instead of starting another song. Before he could realize it, he was asleep; and before he could dream, he was awake. Soft blankets surrounded his feathers.
He looked around and saw an unfamiliar surrounding. Then he saw the Fae. This was her house. "Thank you." he murmured, falling back into sleep.
its under by 4 words but I dont think I can add on without making it obvious im extending it.
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Can I claim please?
Can I claim please?
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@pinkkittens I'd like to ask you to make a few revisions, if you don't mind. I'd add another day to your claim to give you the time to do it, of course ^-^ There are a few things I'd appreciate you expanding upon in your story:
-Why weren't Décède, Pourrir and Mourrant a danger to the dragons?
-Was the bar empty? If not, how did the customers react to the Emperor outside?
-Why did Nelikr fall asleep after playing?
@MegaraFrostalon Held, although please ping next time! It'll help making sure your claim isn't overlooked :)
-Why weren't Décède, Pourrir and Mourrant a danger to the dragons?
-Was the bar empty? If not, how did the customers react to the Emperor outside?
-Why did Nelikr fall asleep after playing?
@MegaraFrostalon Held, although please ping next time! It'll help making sure your claim isn't overlooked :)
@pinkkittens I'd like to ask you to make a few revisions, if you don't mind. I'd add another day to your claim to give you the time to do it, of course ^-^ There are a few things I'd appreciate you expanding upon in your story:
-Why weren't Décède, Pourrir and Mourrant a danger to the dragons?
-Was the bar empty? If not, how did the customers react to the Emperor outside?
-Why did Nelikr fall asleep after playing?
@MegaraFrostalon Held, although please ping next time! It'll help making sure your claim isn't overlooked :)
-Why weren't Décède, Pourrir and Mourrant a danger to the dragons?
-Was the bar empty? If not, how did the customers react to the Emperor outside?
-Why did Nelikr fall asleep after playing?
@MegaraFrostalon Held, although please ping next time! It'll help making sure your claim isn't overlooked :)
@MasterEggy Reminder about your hold. It expires tonight!
@MasterEggy Reminder about your hold. It expires tonight!
@MegaraFrostalon no worries! I'd by lying if I said I didn't love the subspecie myself since I've bred the beb there are a total of four siblings from that nest and they will all be featured in the hatchery :3.
@MegaraFrostalon no worries! I'd by lying if I said I didn't love the subspecie myself since I've bred the beb there are a total of four siblings from that nest and they will all be featured in the hatchery :3.