Creative Corner

So, I was messing around and decided to make a wallpaper for BTS (a kpop band I love) and honestly I'm happy with how it turned out? But honestly I'm also a bit wary b/c I don't know if I should be as proud of it as I am lol. I feel like some spaces are too empty but at the same time I want it to be simplistic aaaa. For non-fans: the circle stuff at the bottom is from their album last year..well, 2 years ago (ugh it's 2018) they each represent a different member. [img]https://68.media.tumblr.com/cd063eeffaf0ed9fd6fb0b99d85d5bf7/tumblr_p2y2zmtQT41wxs9gto1_1280.png[/img] (here's the [url=https://yoongis-infires-man.tumblr.com/post/169991717061/i-made-a-thingthe-size-is-supposed-to-be][b]link[/b][/url] to the post I made)

@InfinityLlama

This is super cool! I love the simplified style you're going with, very classy. One thing you might want to change is the color balance. It looks a little off-balance with the lighter color at the bottom and the black on the top. I think you should either flip them or balance them out more. This is really great, though!

@InfinityLlama

I'd say very well done! It has a great sense of depth thanks to you layering the fog over the specks of light in the background. And the idea to have a color gradient in the fog itself is brilliant as well. But on the subject of the fog, I can see what jennaflare is saying about the lighter pink hue looking out of place at the bottom. It gives the image a bottom-heavy feeling, which draws more attention to the number-circles at the bottom (if this was your intention, congrats! It worked).

If you are looking for more of a balance, add a little bit of the pink to the fog that sits at the tip of the upper part of your centerpiece symbol. With a small smattering on either side, the viewers eyes may be led in more of a circle around the piece rather than resting at the bottom where all the light colors are.

(Sorry if this is too long, I'm half-way using this as practice for the critiques I have to do in classes.)

@jennaflare @sidia
Thank you! I was wondering about that, and in the end I just didn't, but now I'll change that :p

@jennaflare @Sidia + anyone else is this better? (the symbol at the top represents the fandom..bts actually made an official logo for their fans :D) [img]https://s19.postimg.org/jxc92mikz/BTS_Wallpaper2.png[/img] (It didn't upload in hd so it's hd [url=https://yoongis-infires-man.tumblr.com/post/170068039911/added-to-it-phone-wallpaper]here[/url])

@InfinityLlama - Yeah, I think the balance is much better this way; fantastic work!

@jennaflare
Alright, thanks :D

@InfinityLlama

It's so lovely!

One thing that is throwing me off a bit though is the circles. They seem a bit unbalanced?(Sorry that's not quite the word I'm looking for buts it close and maybe it's just my OCD speaking) But looking at it the circle to the far left looks larger and all the others look uniform in size? It is throwing off the symmetry of the piece.

Other than that it looks Fan-tastic!

@InfinityLlama

I agree with Arrakis.

I don't think the circles are quite symmetrical with the rest of the image, and it may be due to the size of the far left circle.

I like the addition of the fandom's symbol at the top, but the sudden change from the navy to the pale pink/orange at the top is a bit off. I think it would be better if you kept it like the original image in which the colour faded from top to bottom. Perhaps changing it to silver, or just having the same darker blue might look more unified.

But i looks great. The simplistic style is perfect and it's well spaced. It matches well with their own style (I listened to a couple of songs.)

@Arrakis @Solanceae
Alright, tbh I was thinking that too, but I wasn't sure. I can resize it tho. And, yeah, I couldn't figure out what the original color at the bottom was so I was kinda close but not quite, the blue might be a better idea, I'll do that~