Creative Corner

so i'm not gonna post these here b/c there are a couple curse words, but i would like someone to look over a storyboard im doing for a class (that i didnt get a whole lot of feedback on, but there are still quite a few things i want to figure out).

the general storyline is that two kids @ Magical Community CollegeTM accidentally end up summoning a demon while studying for their final. if you're interested, please either ping me here or message me thru FR, and i'll send u my email, we'll talk, i'll send you links or smth to the storyboard. thanks to anyone who can help!

imma bump this once, just in case someone is interested and didnt see.

@orneryOgre

What kind of Critique are you after?

@sai mostly for thoughts on dialogue, art style (simplifying it?), story clarity/flow/pacing. but other general comments are all appreciated! i know other ppl are going to see it differently than me, and can give me suggestions i might not have even considered.

@orneryOgre I'll take a look at it if you like.

[quote name="orneryOgre" date=2016-05-07 10:32:10] @/sai mostly for thoughts on dialogue, art style (simplifying it?), story clarity/flow/pacing. but other general comments are all appreciated! i know other ppl are going to see it differently than me, and can give me suggestions i might not have even considered. [/quote] @orneryOgre I can help with that! I am an aspiring novelist and write my own Manga as well /not uploaded because I'm working on my art before uploading it.

@sai @desnik awesome! i'm gonna message you thru FR with a google doc that has the panels. the images ive got rn are done mostly in pink and are kinda blurry, but ill get some better ones scanned after work.