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Hey y'all,

I wrote some lore for my dragons Pesca and Leo and now i don't know how to conclude the mess I have made. The main goal at the end is to get Pesca to trust Leo despite the sin he committed. Here ya go:

BACKSTORY
When Senbonzakura was foraging in the Sunbeam Ruins, he ran across the strangest looking peach he had ever seen. It was oval-shaped but a bit hard and not squishy like a normal peach. He placed it in his bag and flew home, planning on inspecting it when he got back to the lair.

He was found in the dining hall staring at the thing and feeling it trying to figure out what it was. His head lifted as he heard a door open to find Stirling walking in towards him. She came over to where he was sitting and asked what it was. Before he could respond, she had taken a bite of the peach. When she took a bite of the peach, she noticed an unusual slimy texture on the inside. When she had moved the peach away from her face, she realized that this was not only a peach, but it also contained a dragon! Senbonzakura and Stirling decided to name the bright orange peach scented Pearlcatcher Pesca, meaning "peach" in Latin. Pesca was raised by Stirling and Sen and always referred to them as her parents.

One day, when Pesca decided to take a beach trip by herself, she came across the most gorgeous Skydancer she had ever seen walking with his parents. She stared in awe as the Skydancer noticed her as well and paused. His mother encouraged him to keep walking but he walked towards Pesca anyways. Behind his back, he held a hibiscus which he handed to her. His parents watched in shock of what he was doing. His father grabbed him by the feathers of his tail and demanded him to leave Pesca alone. Before he got too far from her he whispered so she could only hear him, "Meet me at 00:30 tomorrow, I take night walks every night. My name is L-"

Before he could finish, he was forced to walk away. Pesca waited until 00:30 to find a Skydancer standing on the beach, staring at the water. Pesca approached him lightly placing her talons on his wing to get his attention. The Skydancer looked at the Pearlcatcher with a gleam in his eyes and a small grin. He introduced himself as Leynth. Pesca could barely see him but when they talked, he was most certainly the most charming dragon she had ever met. He leaned over to be closer to her and planted a kiss on her smooth cheek. He let out a giggle and Pesca asked why. His answer was because she smelled and tasted just like a peach. Something didn't feel right about the kiss, the way he touched her simply didn't feel right. They both heard a ruffle in the bushes and went to look over but nothing was there. Pesca fell asleep on the beach and Leynth left her with a blanket on her.

While she was sleeping, she felt a tap on her snout. She jolted up in panic to find a different Skydancer standing there. He explained that the Skydancer she saw earlier was not him and he had been watching the whole time, he also had introduced himself as Leo. She was a bit freaked out by the thought of Leynth pretending to know her and kissing her on the cheek and not actually knowing her. It was strange how he just left her on the beach with a blanket untouched and just disappeared. When she looked inside of her bag to find all of her money gone, she began to panic, wondering what would happen if she came home with no money to give to Stirling that Stirling let her borrowed. She trembled with fear and began to question why Leo just stood there and watch the whole thing in the first place. He said he could not explain now, but maybe one day he could explain. Pesca trusted him. They laid on the beach together, talking about everything except what Leo spoke about earlier. Holding talons, they fell asleep on the beach together.

It was about 09:30 when they woke up together. Her head rested upon his chest and she listened to his heart. Leo groaned and softly stroked her talons with his claw. She explained she had to go back for breakfast and tell Stirling everything that had happened. As they turned away from each other, she last minute invited him there. He turned to her and said, "meet at 00:30". With disappointment, Pesca flew home and barged in late for breakfast. She twirled and danced around in her seat near Stirling, explaining before she goes to work, she needed to tell her something. Haimona, her power giver who sits next to her at dining time, teased her about how it seems like she's in love. With a big sigh, Pesca announced she was in love and that's what she was supposed to tell Stirling. Staring at the wall smiling, she sat in her chair leaving her food to get cold. Aditsan encouraged her to eat her food before it got too cold to eat.

When work time came around, she had gotten absolutely nothing done. She stared at the plant she was supposed to grow smiling because at this time everything seemed absolutely positively wonderful. Even when Divinity scowled at her, she could not help but to only think about Leo and how he was the one for her. This behavior lasted through dinner and the free time that is given at the end of the day. Century attempted to speak to her like she does every night but Pesca only wanted to talk about how amazing Leo is.

When 00:30 rolled around, she was out the door and sprinted to the same spot on the beach she had met Leo. She sat with her beach blanket in her talons held against her chest. She smelled the blanket and held it close to her as it smelled like Leo. She waited for about five minutes when Leynth showed up. Pesca threw the blanket onto the sand and demanded to know what he wanted. He tried to be charming and explain that all he wanted was her. He wrapped his talons gently around her back, expecting her to be affectionate back. Instead, he got a punch in the nose and another demand of knowing what is going on. Leynth quickly flew away and Leo jumped out from the bushes. Pesca shrieked, startled, and mostly anxious that she had just punched a dragon in the face. Leo began to panic and said that Pesca should not have punched him and that Leo quickly needed somewhere to run to. As he shook and trembled, Pesca set aside her fears about what had just happened and wrapped her arms around him. She told him that she would take care of him, no matter what would happen.

She grabbed his talons and flew him back to her lair. She explained to Stirling that Leo was her love that she was talking about, he was in trouble and needed a safe place to go. Stirling said as long as he was not a convict, he was welcomed. Pesca could not promise her anything considering how she did not even know how he was in trouble, but she hoped for the best and told her that he wasn't a convict. She took him in the living room to relax and get comfortable to get away from all of the chaos. When he settled himself down, Stirling offered him a choice of a room or staying with Pesca. He chose to stay with Pesca for the night

When they walked into the room, the Skydancer went wide-eyed. Pesca asked why and he said it was because the whole room smelled like one giant peach. Pesca laughed and said that she could not smell it. Just after they sat on the bed together, Leo decided to tell Pesca the truth about who Leynth is and why he was the first to come rather than Leo. The story behind the strange event has to do with Leo and his disabled sister, Creir. She would always get her siblings into trouble due to her lack of mental ability. Two of the other siblings, Barrayar and Domenico, had died for her because she got herself into trouble and the brothers could not bear to watch such a young innocent dragon die. Leo was tired of how all of his brothers kept dying for a disabled dragon who he saw had no potential. Unhappily, Leo made the decision he had to kill her for the sake of his other siblings. In the middle of the night, while she was sleeping, he woke her up and lead her to the Ashfall Waste, the location where she was destined to die. Without Leo's knowledge, Leynth, his brother, had followed him to the giant pools of lava. Leo and Creir laughed and played up the volcano. When they came upon the top, Leo tied up Creir's wings to her body and said it was a game. She smiled and let out an oblivious giggle, unknowing of the fate that awaited her. They stood on the edge of the volcano and Leo gently held her talons. "I'm sorry," he whispered, shoving her into the giant pit of lava. Creir screamed his name as she fell, crying. Disintegrated into the pit, her screams before her death haunted Leo. He stood at the edge and couldn't believe what he had done. As he was crying and the occasional pop and sizzle of lava kissed his hand, Leynth emerged from a burned tree nearby, tears smeared on his face. Leo begged him to not tell anyone and tried to explain himself but Leynth blackmailed him. He said his secret would be safe and the murder would be covered up if the first dragon Leo falls in love with is also to be his. Leo doubted he would ever be in love until now, so he agreed.

Pesca was left speechless and wide-eyed. Eventually, she spat out, "you need to sleep in another room tonight. Goodnight, Leo." Pesca rose from the cushion she was sitting on and walked down the hall to talk to Stirling. Pesca had told her nothing about the murder but lied and said how she was simply uncomfortable with a man she barely knew sleeping in the same room as her. Stirling walked into the room and lead Leo in another room isolated from the rest of the rooms. Pesca anxiously fell asleep, unknowing of how she felt about Leo, she didn't know whether to see him as cruel or logical.

At 00:30 she woke up in panic. She had just dreamt that Leynth was standing over her watching her sleep. As she cried, Leo heard her cries and burst into her room to hold her. Despite how cruel she thought he was, she felt safe in his arms as her tears ran down her cheeks and onto his chest. Her crying quieted and she fell asleep again. Leo stayed awake the whole night holding her, unwanting to move her in fear of waking her up.

When morning had come around, Pesca was surprised to find herself in the loving embrace of a murderer. The Skydancer had been resting his head on hers and fell asleep holding her. Pesca didn't move because her brain told her to stay still, but her heart told her to lay him down and cover him with blankets while he slept. She followed her heart and slipped out of his grasp to lay him down, heading to the Dining Hall for breakfast.

When she arrived, she noticed she was late, as everyone else was there already eating. She received looks of confusion from certain dragons. Genevieve, an acquaintance of hers, asked how she was feeling. Pesca claimed she was not sick and just overslept. Sitting back in her seat, she was tense due to what had just happened. The day went through and she acted tenser than ever, she kept thinking about the dream she had last night and how out of all the people, Leo came in to comfort her. The following night, the dream she previously had was real. She woke to Leynth standing over her, holding a white katana in his talon. Pesca screamed but only for a half of a second before her mouth was clamped by his talons. "I'll be the last thing you ever see, your soul will be mine," Leynth whispered. Tears flooded out of Pesca's eyes while Leo walked in. Not jumping after him to tackle him or slitting his throat from behind, he instead approached gently. He acknowledged how infuriated Leynth was by Leo breaking the deal he made. Leo tried to explain to Leynth that keeping Leynth away from Pesca was for the better of both Leynth and Pesca.
Hey y'all,

I wrote some lore for my dragons Pesca and Leo and now i don't know how to conclude the mess I have made. The main goal at the end is to get Pesca to trust Leo despite the sin he committed. Here ya go:

BACKSTORY
When Senbonzakura was foraging in the Sunbeam Ruins, he ran across the strangest looking peach he had ever seen. It was oval-shaped but a bit hard and not squishy like a normal peach. He placed it in his bag and flew home, planning on inspecting it when he got back to the lair.

He was found in the dining hall staring at the thing and feeling it trying to figure out what it was. His head lifted as he heard a door open to find Stirling walking in towards him. She came over to where he was sitting and asked what it was. Before he could respond, she had taken a bite of the peach. When she took a bite of the peach, she noticed an unusual slimy texture on the inside. When she had moved the peach away from her face, she realized that this was not only a peach, but it also contained a dragon! Senbonzakura and Stirling decided to name the bright orange peach scented Pearlcatcher Pesca, meaning "peach" in Latin. Pesca was raised by Stirling and Sen and always referred to them as her parents.

One day, when Pesca decided to take a beach trip by herself, she came across the most gorgeous Skydancer she had ever seen walking with his parents. She stared in awe as the Skydancer noticed her as well and paused. His mother encouraged him to keep walking but he walked towards Pesca anyways. Behind his back, he held a hibiscus which he handed to her. His parents watched in shock of what he was doing. His father grabbed him by the feathers of his tail and demanded him to leave Pesca alone. Before he got too far from her he whispered so she could only hear him, "Meet me at 00:30 tomorrow, I take night walks every night. My name is L-"

Before he could finish, he was forced to walk away. Pesca waited until 00:30 to find a Skydancer standing on the beach, staring at the water. Pesca approached him lightly placing her talons on his wing to get his attention. The Skydancer looked at the Pearlcatcher with a gleam in his eyes and a small grin. He introduced himself as Leynth. Pesca could barely see him but when they talked, he was most certainly the most charming dragon she had ever met. He leaned over to be closer to her and planted a kiss on her smooth cheek. He let out a giggle and Pesca asked why. His answer was because she smelled and tasted just like a peach. Something didn't feel right about the kiss, the way he touched her simply didn't feel right. They both heard a ruffle in the bushes and went to look over but nothing was there. Pesca fell asleep on the beach and Leynth left her with a blanket on her.

While she was sleeping, she felt a tap on her snout. She jolted up in panic to find a different Skydancer standing there. He explained that the Skydancer she saw earlier was not him and he had been watching the whole time, he also had introduced himself as Leo. She was a bit freaked out by the thought of Leynth pretending to know her and kissing her on the cheek and not actually knowing her. It was strange how he just left her on the beach with a blanket untouched and just disappeared. When she looked inside of her bag to find all of her money gone, she began to panic, wondering what would happen if she came home with no money to give to Stirling that Stirling let her borrowed. She trembled with fear and began to question why Leo just stood there and watch the whole thing in the first place. He said he could not explain now, but maybe one day he could explain. Pesca trusted him. They laid on the beach together, talking about everything except what Leo spoke about earlier. Holding talons, they fell asleep on the beach together.

It was about 09:30 when they woke up together. Her head rested upon his chest and she listened to his heart. Leo groaned and softly stroked her talons with his claw. She explained she had to go back for breakfast and tell Stirling everything that had happened. As they turned away from each other, she last minute invited him there. He turned to her and said, "meet at 00:30". With disappointment, Pesca flew home and barged in late for breakfast. She twirled and danced around in her seat near Stirling, explaining before she goes to work, she needed to tell her something. Haimona, her power giver who sits next to her at dining time, teased her about how it seems like she's in love. With a big sigh, Pesca announced she was in love and that's what she was supposed to tell Stirling. Staring at the wall smiling, she sat in her chair leaving her food to get cold. Aditsan encouraged her to eat her food before it got too cold to eat.

When work time came around, she had gotten absolutely nothing done. She stared at the plant she was supposed to grow smiling because at this time everything seemed absolutely positively wonderful. Even when Divinity scowled at her, she could not help but to only think about Leo and how he was the one for her. This behavior lasted through dinner and the free time that is given at the end of the day. Century attempted to speak to her like she does every night but Pesca only wanted to talk about how amazing Leo is.

When 00:30 rolled around, she was out the door and sprinted to the same spot on the beach she had met Leo. She sat with her beach blanket in her talons held against her chest. She smelled the blanket and held it close to her as it smelled like Leo. She waited for about five minutes when Leynth showed up. Pesca threw the blanket onto the sand and demanded to know what he wanted. He tried to be charming and explain that all he wanted was her. He wrapped his talons gently around her back, expecting her to be affectionate back. Instead, he got a punch in the nose and another demand of knowing what is going on. Leynth quickly flew away and Leo jumped out from the bushes. Pesca shrieked, startled, and mostly anxious that she had just punched a dragon in the face. Leo began to panic and said that Pesca should not have punched him and that Leo quickly needed somewhere to run to. As he shook and trembled, Pesca set aside her fears about what had just happened and wrapped her arms around him. She told him that she would take care of him, no matter what would happen.

She grabbed his talons and flew him back to her lair. She explained to Stirling that Leo was her love that she was talking about, he was in trouble and needed a safe place to go. Stirling said as long as he was not a convict, he was welcomed. Pesca could not promise her anything considering how she did not even know how he was in trouble, but she hoped for the best and told her that he wasn't a convict. She took him in the living room to relax and get comfortable to get away from all of the chaos. When he settled himself down, Stirling offered him a choice of a room or staying with Pesca. He chose to stay with Pesca for the night

When they walked into the room, the Skydancer went wide-eyed. Pesca asked why and he said it was because the whole room smelled like one giant peach. Pesca laughed and said that she could not smell it. Just after they sat on the bed together, Leo decided to tell Pesca the truth about who Leynth is and why he was the first to come rather than Leo. The story behind the strange event has to do with Leo and his disabled sister, Creir. She would always get her siblings into trouble due to her lack of mental ability. Two of the other siblings, Barrayar and Domenico, had died for her because she got herself into trouble and the brothers could not bear to watch such a young innocent dragon die. Leo was tired of how all of his brothers kept dying for a disabled dragon who he saw had no potential. Unhappily, Leo made the decision he had to kill her for the sake of his other siblings. In the middle of the night, while she was sleeping, he woke her up and lead her to the Ashfall Waste, the location where she was destined to die. Without Leo's knowledge, Leynth, his brother, had followed him to the giant pools of lava. Leo and Creir laughed and played up the volcano. When they came upon the top, Leo tied up Creir's wings to her body and said it was a game. She smiled and let out an oblivious giggle, unknowing of the fate that awaited her. They stood on the edge of the volcano and Leo gently held her talons. "I'm sorry," he whispered, shoving her into the giant pit of lava. Creir screamed his name as she fell, crying. Disintegrated into the pit, her screams before her death haunted Leo. He stood at the edge and couldn't believe what he had done. As he was crying and the occasional pop and sizzle of lava kissed his hand, Leynth emerged from a burned tree nearby, tears smeared on his face. Leo begged him to not tell anyone and tried to explain himself but Leynth blackmailed him. He said his secret would be safe and the murder would be covered up if the first dragon Leo falls in love with is also to be his. Leo doubted he would ever be in love until now, so he agreed.

Pesca was left speechless and wide-eyed. Eventually, she spat out, "you need to sleep in another room tonight. Goodnight, Leo." Pesca rose from the cushion she was sitting on and walked down the hall to talk to Stirling. Pesca had told her nothing about the murder but lied and said how she was simply uncomfortable with a man she barely knew sleeping in the same room as her. Stirling walked into the room and lead Leo in another room isolated from the rest of the rooms. Pesca anxiously fell asleep, unknowing of how she felt about Leo, she didn't know whether to see him as cruel or logical.

At 00:30 she woke up in panic. She had just dreamt that Leynth was standing over her watching her sleep. As she cried, Leo heard her cries and burst into her room to hold her. Despite how cruel she thought he was, she felt safe in his arms as her tears ran down her cheeks and onto his chest. Her crying quieted and she fell asleep again. Leo stayed awake the whole night holding her, unwanting to move her in fear of waking her up.

When morning had come around, Pesca was surprised to find herself in the loving embrace of a murderer. The Skydancer had been resting his head on hers and fell asleep holding her. Pesca didn't move because her brain told her to stay still, but her heart told her to lay him down and cover him with blankets while he slept. She followed her heart and slipped out of his grasp to lay him down, heading to the Dining Hall for breakfast.

When she arrived, she noticed she was late, as everyone else was there already eating. She received looks of confusion from certain dragons. Genevieve, an acquaintance of hers, asked how she was feeling. Pesca claimed she was not sick and just overslept. Sitting back in her seat, she was tense due to what had just happened. The day went through and she acted tenser than ever, she kept thinking about the dream she had last night and how out of all the people, Leo came in to comfort her. The following night, the dream she previously had was real. She woke to Leynth standing over her, holding a white katana in his talon. Pesca screamed but only for a half of a second before her mouth was clamped by his talons. "I'll be the last thing you ever see, your soul will be mine," Leynth whispered. Tears flooded out of Pesca's eyes while Leo walked in. Not jumping after him to tackle him or slitting his throat from behind, he instead approached gently. He acknowledged how infuriated Leynth was by Leo breaking the deal he made. Leo tried to explain to Leynth that keeping Leynth away from Pesca was for the better of both Leynth and Pesca.
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@coranicole073 Maybe Leo owns up to what he did coming clean and accepts punishment? If something is off about Leynth maybe he needs to be locked up or something so he leaves Pesca alone... Especially since he was sneaking in with bad intent
@coranicole073 Maybe Leo owns up to what he did coming clean and accepts punishment? If something is off about Leynth maybe he needs to be locked up or something so he leaves Pesca alone... Especially since he was sneaking in with bad intent
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@Freydra thank you so much for reading it! I like your idea :)
@Freydra thank you so much for reading it! I like your idea :)
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