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TOPIC | Petall's PWYW Lair Reviews [OPEN]
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@Petall
Could I get a review , if you have the time? (some of my dragons have full stories, but I'm adding notes to the others!)
@Petall
Could I get a review , if you have the time? (some of my dragons have full stories, but I'm adding notes to the others!)
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@BlueAmmolite

For sure! Adding you to the list! It may take a week or two to get to yours, because I just got hired at a new job and will be busier.
@BlueAmmolite

For sure! Adding you to the list! It may take a week or two to get to yours, because I just got hired at a new job and will be busier.
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@myriadofstars You've got a lot of tabs in your clan! It was difficult to narrow down which dragons I wanted to talk about! You clearly have a lot of creative clan concepts figured out! I'm excited to see what these dragons hold! [center][url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/47374824][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/473749/47374824_350.png[/img][/url][/center] And of course my classic go-to choice? A wildclaw! Meghan is everything a wildclaw should be! She looks fierce (or at least her scar points to that) and yet also has a level of functional elegance with her coat! I love her dearly already, and I love how her broadcast message captures her essence so well! Moving onto her lore, I very much enjoyed reading about the journey she took to get where she is. She truly is a tough dragon, and I very much admire her for it! I'm glad she found a place where she feels at home, particularly one where she takes on such an important role! You've done well with her, and I wish her all the best! She has my heart already. [center][url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/47202864][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/472029/47202864_350.png[/img][/url][/center] Clockwork is really vibing the steampunk apparel! (not that I'd expect anything less from a dragon named Clockwork!) I especially admire how the bee beneath her wings simply looks like an extension of the machinery! I also see that she has a rather fitting accent, adding on all those cogs and gears and I am very much delighting in it! I just read her lore and it is fantastic! I love her creativity and her drive and determination. She sounds like a valuable asset to the clan, and I wouldn't be surprised if she turns out to be my favourite in your lair! [center][url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/46809027][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/468091/46809027_350.png[/img][/url][/center] Maelrys caught my attention because she just looks so soft and sweet and cute! I love the way her scarf nestles in her fur, and the GLASSES! Oh the glasses! I love a good tundra in glasses, it is quite possibly my favourite! The silks also add a nice touch, blending well with her facet, and her bags seem very functional and add well to her overall look! And I can see why she would need those bags, as an archaeologist! I bet she's just so full of knowledge of so many clans gone by, if I were a dragon, I would love to take a peak at her notes! She is doing such a good job, and she better stay safe, because she is too precious for any harm to befall. Just let her keep doing what she's doing. [center][url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/47291795][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/472918/47291795_350.png[/img][/url][/center] Nalene is very pretty! You've made good use of the sylvan apparel! It blends in nicely with her natural coloration, giving here an even more fiery look! Perfect for a blacksmith! I especially like her glimmer, it adds such a nice, warm glow, like embers or something of the like, and her familiar is a perfect fit! I can see how she would have such a fine eye for detail like filigree! I also really really love her pinstripe/trail combo! The darkness inbetween her stripes adds a really nice depth to her colour, rather than leaving her entirely one tone! I can easily imagine it as ash or smoke staining her from her work! [center][url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/51005645][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/510057/51005645_350.png[/img][/url][/center] Everyone needs a good little bog witch aesthetic dragon, and Shoggoth fits that well! Even her name sounds like something old and rugged. AND SHE HAS MULTIGAZE! I didn't even notice that until I clicked on her page, it blends in so well with her natural colouring! I see that she's a cartographer, and I must say she looks well suited to the role! She looks like the sort of mapmaker that would go traipsing all over Sornieth to make her maps, and she certainly doesn't seem like the sort of dragon that would mind getting dirty in the process! When you get her lore written, you'll have to let me know, because I'd love to read it! Honorable Mention: [center][url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/56841133][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/568412/56841133_350.png[/img][/url][/center] I just had to. You have a wonderful lair with a great selection of dragons! It was great to see how all the dragons were connected, particularly in your main clan! I was looking at all of the relations, and there seemed to be a lot of crossover! You've clearly put a lot of thought and time into your clan and dragons, and I you should be very proud of it!
@myriadofstars

You've got a lot of tabs in your clan! It was difficult to narrow down which dragons I wanted to talk about! You clearly have a lot of creative clan concepts figured out! I'm excited to see what these dragons hold!
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And of course my classic go-to choice? A wildclaw! Meghan is everything a wildclaw should be! She looks fierce (or at least her scar points to that) and yet also has a level of functional elegance with her coat! I love her dearly already, and I love how her broadcast message captures her essence so well! Moving onto her lore, I very much enjoyed reading about the journey she took to get where she is. She truly is a tough dragon, and I very much admire her for it! I'm glad she found a place where she feels at home, particularly one where she takes on such an important role! You've done well with her, and I wish her all the best! She has my heart already.
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Clockwork is really vibing the steampunk apparel! (not that I'd expect anything less from a dragon named Clockwork!) I especially admire how the bee beneath her wings simply looks like an extension of the machinery! I also see that she has a rather fitting accent, adding on all those cogs and gears and I am very much delighting in it! I just read her lore and it is fantastic! I love her creativity and her drive and determination. She sounds like a valuable asset to the clan, and I wouldn't be surprised if she turns out to be my favourite in your lair!
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Maelrys caught my attention because she just looks so soft and sweet and cute! I love the way her scarf nestles in her fur, and the GLASSES! Oh the glasses! I love a good tundra in glasses, it is quite possibly my favourite! The silks also add a nice touch, blending well with her facet, and her bags seem very functional and add well to her overall look! And I can see why she would need those bags, as an archaeologist! I bet she's just so full of knowledge of so many clans gone by, if I were a dragon, I would love to take a peak at her notes! She is doing such a good job, and she better stay safe, because she is too precious for any harm to befall. Just let her keep doing what she's doing.
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Nalene is very pretty! You've made good use of the sylvan apparel! It blends in nicely with her natural coloration, giving here an even more fiery look! Perfect for a blacksmith! I especially like her glimmer, it adds such a nice, warm glow, like embers or something of the like, and her familiar is a perfect fit! I can see how she would have such a fine eye for detail like filigree! I also really really love her pinstripe/trail combo! The darkness inbetween her stripes adds a really nice depth to her colour, rather than leaving her entirely one tone! I can easily imagine it as ash or smoke staining her from her work!
51005645_350.png

Everyone needs a good little bog witch aesthetic dragon, and Shoggoth fits that well! Even her name sounds like something old and rugged. AND SHE HAS MULTIGAZE! I didn't even notice that until I clicked on her page, it blends in so well with her natural colouring! I see that she's a cartographer, and I must say she looks well suited to the role! She looks like the sort of mapmaker that would go traipsing all over Sornieth to make her maps, and she certainly doesn't seem like the sort of dragon that would mind getting dirty in the process! When you get her lore written, you'll have to let me know, because I'd love to read it!

Honorable Mention:
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I just had to.

You have a wonderful lair with a great selection of dragons! It was great to see how all the dragons were connected, particularly in your main clan! I was looking at all of the relations, and there seemed to be a lot of crossover! You've clearly put a lot of thought and time into your clan and dragons, and I you should be very proud of it!
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@Petall Thank you, so so much! I hope it's alright if I give a lengthy reply, because gosh you just made my day! (Also, sorry about the million and one lair tabs.)

First off, can I just say how happy I am that you automatically went for Meghan first? She's quite possibly my favorite (she is my avatar, after all), and seeing as she's based off a much-loved OC I'm so happy you liked her.

Clockwork is another favorite, and one of my earliest dragons. I love her with all of my heart, and was so happy that her accent made it into the fest, considering it's perfect for her. Her lore's going to get a revamp soon-ish, so I'm pretty excited for that. :)

Maelrys! You picked another favorite; she was an exalt rescue, and it took me forever to get her outfit all bought (those Wing Silks were not cheap). She has loads of knowledge; she's friends with Clockwork's mate, Lorekeeper, and he likes to transcribe her travels. She also has a very protective familiar and two traveling companions, so she's got plenty of buddies to travel with!

Nalene is one that I really need to write more lore for. I actually didn't like her Pinstripe at first, but now that it's one of my favorite genes I adore it on her.

Shoggoth is a sweetheart. I was surprised she had Multi-Gaze, too – didn't notice it at first either! XD The cartographer part's actually a placeholder title – I'd copied her bio from the actual cartographer, Yselda, and never got around to changing it. She's actually a swamp witch! :) I definitely will; I'm not too sure about background/personality yet, but hopefully I will figure her put soon because she deserves it.

I just had to get Aryssa, I fell in love with that accent and she was perfect for it.
@Petall Thank you, so so much! I hope it's alright if I give a lengthy reply, because gosh you just made my day! (Also, sorry about the million and one lair tabs.)

First off, can I just say how happy I am that you automatically went for Meghan first? She's quite possibly my favorite (she is my avatar, after all), and seeing as she's based off a much-loved OC I'm so happy you liked her.

Clockwork is another favorite, and one of my earliest dragons. I love her with all of my heart, and was so happy that her accent made it into the fest, considering it's perfect for her. Her lore's going to get a revamp soon-ish, so I'm pretty excited for that. :)

Maelrys! You picked another favorite; she was an exalt rescue, and it took me forever to get her outfit all bought (those Wing Silks were not cheap). She has loads of knowledge; she's friends with Clockwork's mate, Lorekeeper, and he likes to transcribe her travels. She also has a very protective familiar and two traveling companions, so she's got plenty of buddies to travel with!

Nalene is one that I really need to write more lore for. I actually didn't like her Pinstripe at first, but now that it's one of my favorite genes I adore it on her.

Shoggoth is a sweetheart. I was surprised she had Multi-Gaze, too – didn't notice it at first either! XD The cartographer part's actually a placeholder title – I'd copied her bio from the actual cartographer, Yselda, and never got around to changing it. She's actually a swamp witch! :) I definitely will; I'm not too sure about background/personality yet, but hopefully I will figure her put soon because she deserves it.

I just had to get Aryssa, I fell in love with that accent and she was perfect for it.
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@Petall Ahh, so sorry for the late reply, this got buried in my notifs!!! Tysm for your kind words, I love hearing ppl talk about my kids [img]https://cdn.discordapp.com/emojis/403343836916744192.png[/img]
@Petall

Ahh, so sorry for the late reply, this got buried in my notifs!!! Tysm for your kind words, I love hearing ppl talk about my kids

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@Lazukii Alright! Just got home from my first day at a new job, and I'm ready to unwind by doing a lair review before dinner! I'm excited to dig into your dragons, it looks as though you've got so many pretty ones!!! [center][url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/60739580][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/607396/60739580_350.png[/img][/url][/center] Now, Zera's outfit is one I absolutely adore!!! The beauty and grace of it all! I love the class her hat provides, and it pairs so nicely with that jacket! I never thought of combining those two pieces! Also, the wind apparel is a nice touch and fits very well with her natural colouration! She looks so soft and delicate, especially with her tones, but she also seems like a dragon you wouldn't want to mess with and I am DIGGING that duality there. She just deserves all the good things and I want to give them to her! [center][url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/57763824][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/577639/57763824_350.png[/img][/url][/center] Fluff, an adorable name, an even more adorably dragon!!! My favourite part of her outfit has to be the tree and bird combination, it's just so *presses fingers to lips like a fancy french person.* Also, she is STYLING in that dress and hat, she looks ready to take on the world in that thing, and by take on the world, I mean take it on with her impeccable looks. I don't usually go for softer tones dragons like her, but you did such a good job with her aesthetic that I couldn not resist! Her art is adorable too, she's just such a precious dragon and I hope that she knows that. [center][url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/59776428][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/597765/59776428_350.png[/img][/url][/center] Wow, I really have a thing for coatls in fancy hats, don't I? I'm starting to wish I had a chosen a more diverse group of dragons, but I also couldn't just leave Archie out in the cold! What struck me about Archie was the use of his starlit guise. I really haven't seen many male dragons wear it, and he is really pulling it off! The locket is also a very nice touch, and of course, the hat. Coatls really look good in those ovalcrowns, don't they? I've never realized it before! Also, he reminds me of a starlit night and I love it. [center][url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/57927089][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/579271/57927089_350.png[/img][/url][/center] Well, we've moved away from coatls, but Obsidian is still quite dapper! He just looks so SLEEK in that waistcoat and top hat! It's a delight for the eyes! And the depth of his starmap and shimmer, the way it smoothly blends his suave style! And then the pop of colour the filigree gives, while still being sophisticated and fancy! That art is impressive too, I can really see in the way he holds his neck that he takes himself very seriously, and he should! He's a good looking dragon! You've put together a true master! [center][url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/55627404][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/556275/55627404_350.png[/img][/url][/center] And here, I have saved the best for last! There are so many elements to Zukii, it's hard to decide what to start with. The first thing I noticed about him was the unicorn horn, which I think combined with the tailcoat gives him a very mystical and dramatic vibe that I am very much here for! Then, of course, there's the lightning! The action! The drama! The intensity! And then there's the sword, casting him in a heroic light. He looks like a great chosen one hero who has risen the ranks and is now living in his story beyond what the book has shown, which, I have just realized, would be a very interesting thing to explore. What happens to heroes after they save the world? Anyways, I'm getting off topic. I can really see why you like this dragon so much, he looks absolutely spectacular and you should be very proud! Honorable mention: [center][url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/58846310][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/588464/58846310_350.png[/img][/url][/center] Delightful colours! All in all, I can really tell you know how to dress your dragons, so many of them are to my taste! I really do apologize for not branching out to more aesthtics, normally I try to really diversify my selection, but gosh, you really hit the nail on the head of my favourite flight rising style, and that is an accomplishment in and of itself because I don't even know how to describe it half the time! Keep up the good work with your dragons, and I am very curious about this lore you are revamping!
@Lazukii

Alright! Just got home from my first day at a new job, and I'm ready to unwind by doing a lair review before dinner! I'm excited to dig into your dragons, it looks as though you've got so many pretty ones!!!
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Now, Zera's outfit is one I absolutely adore!!! The beauty and grace of it all! I love the class her hat provides, and it pairs so nicely with that jacket! I never thought of combining those two pieces! Also, the wind apparel is a nice touch and fits very well with her natural colouration! She looks so soft and delicate, especially with her tones, but she also seems like a dragon you wouldn't want to mess with and I am DIGGING that duality there. She just deserves all the good things and I want to give them to her!
57763824_350.png

Fluff, an adorable name, an even more adorably dragon!!! My favourite part of her outfit has to be the tree and bird combination, it's just so *presses fingers to lips like a fancy french person.* Also, she is STYLING in that dress and hat, she looks ready to take on the world in that thing, and by take on the world, I mean take it on with her impeccable looks. I don't usually go for softer tones dragons like her, but you did such a good job with her aesthetic that I couldn not resist! Her art is adorable too, she's just such a precious dragon and I hope that she knows that.
59776428_350.png

Wow, I really have a thing for coatls in fancy hats, don't I? I'm starting to wish I had a chosen a more diverse group of dragons, but I also couldn't just leave Archie out in the cold! What struck me about Archie was the use of his starlit guise. I really haven't seen many male dragons wear it, and he is really pulling it off! The locket is also a very nice touch, and of course, the hat. Coatls really look good in those ovalcrowns, don't they? I've never realized it before! Also, he reminds me of a starlit night and I love it.
57927089_350.png

Well, we've moved away from coatls, but Obsidian is still quite dapper! He just looks so SLEEK in that waistcoat and top hat! It's a delight for the eyes! And the depth of his starmap and shimmer, the way it smoothly blends his suave style! And then the pop of colour the filigree gives, while still being sophisticated and fancy! That art is impressive too, I can really see in the way he holds his neck that he takes himself very seriously, and he should! He's a good looking dragon! You've put together a true master!
55627404_350.png

And here, I have saved the best for last! There are so many elements to Zukii, it's hard to decide what to start with. The first thing I noticed about him was the unicorn horn, which I think combined with the tailcoat gives him a very mystical and dramatic vibe that I am very much here for! Then, of course, there's the lightning! The action! The drama! The intensity! And then there's the sword, casting him in a heroic light. He looks like a great chosen one hero who has risen the ranks and is now living in his story beyond what the book has shown, which, I have just realized, would be a very interesting thing to explore. What happens to heroes after they save the world? Anyways, I'm getting off topic. I can really see why you like this dragon so much, he looks absolutely spectacular and you should be very proud!

Honorable mention:
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Delightful colours!

All in all, I can really tell you know how to dress your dragons, so many of them are to my taste! I really do apologize for not branching out to more aesthtics, normally I try to really diversify my selection, but gosh, you really hit the nail on the head of my favourite flight rising style, and that is an accomplishment in and of itself because I don't even know how to describe it half the time! Keep up the good work with your dragons, and I am very curious about this lore you are revamping!
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@Petall ahhhh thank you so much for reviewing my lair, it's always so nice to see others comment on and appreciate my kids :D I'll send the payment over now!
@Petall ahhhh thank you so much for reviewing my lair, it's always so nice to see others comment on and appreciate my kids :D I'll send the payment over now!
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@Petall

Hiya!
If you have time, I'd love to get a review on my lair!

You have a really nice thread here, thank you so much for all the work you're doing!
@Petall

Hiya!
If you have time, I'd love to get a review on my lair!

You have a really nice thread here, thank you so much for all the work you're doing!
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@HoraDusk

Yeah, for sure! I just got a job, so it might be a bit of a delay, but I can put you on the list and get to you when I get to you!
@HoraDusk

Yeah, for sure! I just got a job, so it might be a bit of a delay, but I can put you on the list and get to you when I get to you!
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@Petall ayooooooooooo ya fam needs a review :D
@Petall ayooooooooooo ya fam needs a review :D
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