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TOPIC | A Forgotten Heart [Pinkerlocke!]
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[center][img]https://i.imgur.com/33mXUeA.png[/img] [size=6][font=Monotype Corsiva]A Forgotten Heart[/size][/font] ----- [size=4][font=Garamond]Hello and welcome to my pinkerlocke! It is more a story than doing actual things on FR. I hope you enjoy. Read thru the rewritten beginning afresh here! https://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2799984#post_2799984 [i][As a warning to you all, this is technically a first draft, so it is full of little mistakes. Regardless, I try to give you all the best writing possible. My biggest mistake was I started to go somewhere with this idea, but it took an entirely different twist, so I've been shifting away from some old ideas that might randomly disappear the closer you get to the current chapters/updates.] [/i][/size][/font] ----- [size=4][font=Garamond][b]SHORT Plotline! [/b] In the realm of Sornieth, ten kingdoms are ruled by priests, but the priesthood is overthrown by ten greedy dragons who seek power and fame. Morrow and Sylph are but two dragons who join together with others to stop these kings before they tear Sornieth apart in war. [/size][/font] ----- [size=4][font=Garamond][b]This is a longer explanation with some lore mingled in. [/b] There are ten kingdoms in the realm (Sornieth), and for centuries they were ruled and guarded by a priesthood. But ten dragons arose within years of each other, taking down the priesthood and seeking power and glory. Morrow is a citadel guard who is thrown into adventure and then responsibility when he decides to follow Sylph, a dragon with a shadowy past. Together, they seek to take down these kings as the realm is on the brink of war, and seek to forge peace anew in the ten kingdoms. Other dragons are scattered throughout the realm with different lives and pasts, but all must play an important role before the ten new kings tear the kingdoms apart with war and a dangerous game of politics. Our main characters, Morrow and Sylph, later become the focus of the story, but everyone has an important part in it and are not neglected. Follow my pinkerlocke for a story of stars, kingdoms, and tragedy...Will everyone find their own peaceful ending? [/size][/font] [size=6][font=Monotype Corsiva]Index[/size][/font] [size=4][font=Garamond]Editing in all three parts later. Please just scroll thru the thread, there should be little to no interruptions between chapters. :) ----- [size=4][font=Garamond] I'm keeping a pinglist for those who wish to be alerted when updates come out, so please let me know if you want to be on it! And I don't mind if you comment or not while I write; I love feedback. :)[/size][/font] ----- [center][img]https://i.imgur.com/33mXUeA.png[/img] [size=6][font=Monotype Corsiva]Rules and Characters[/size][/font] ----- [size=4][font=Garamond]Rules: Rules can be found [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/qnc/1904162/1]here[/url]. My changes are to be more oriented around a story rather than doing more 'physical' actions on FR. --There will be no coliseum. All food drops must require an action scene; they can also be the source of deaths. --Battle stones will still use a coin: heads there must be a near-death or death, tails is nothing. An action scene is required. --Materials and trinkets will still be writing and art, respectively; trinkets will also have a written update. --Clothing drops will either be friendship scenes and/or romance scenes; breeding the actual dragons is optional. --Familiars will be when I can add new dragons. [/size][/font] ----- ----- [size=4][font=Garamond]Characters [columns] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=40241972] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/402420/40241972.png[/img] [/url][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=40220216] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/402203/40220216.png[/img] [/url][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=41438862] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/414389/41438862.png[/img] [/url] [nextcol][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=40325752] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/403258/40325752.png[/img] [/url][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=41873617] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/418737/41873617.png[/img] [/url][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=43133920] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/avatars/431340/43133920.png[/img] [/url] [/columns] ----- ----- [size=4][font=Garamond]Count of Deaths To avoid spoilers to the story, I will be counting the deaths of dragons here, but will not say who they are. ONE death so far. [/size][/font] -----
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A Forgotten Heart


Hello and welcome to my pinkerlocke! It is more a story than doing actual things on FR. I hope you enjoy.

Read thru the rewritten beginning afresh here!
https://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/2799984#post_2799984

[As a warning to you all, this is technically a first draft, so it is full of little mistakes. Regardless, I try to give you all the best writing possible.
My biggest mistake was I started to go somewhere with this idea, but it took an entirely different twist, so I've been shifting away from some old ideas that might randomly disappear the closer you get to the current chapters/updates.]



SHORT Plotline!

In the realm of Sornieth, ten kingdoms are ruled by priests, but the priesthood is overthrown by ten greedy dragons who seek power and fame. Morrow and Sylph are but two dragons who join together with others to stop these kings before they tear Sornieth apart in war.


This is a longer explanation with some lore mingled in.

There are ten kingdoms in the realm (Sornieth), and for centuries they were ruled and guarded by a priesthood. But ten dragons arose within years of each other, taking down the priesthood and seeking power and glory.

Morrow is a citadel guard who is thrown into adventure and then responsibility when he decides to follow Sylph, a dragon with a shadowy past. Together, they seek to take down these kings as the realm is on the brink of war, and seek to forge peace anew in the ten kingdoms.

Other dragons are scattered throughout the realm with different lives and pasts, but all must play an important role before the ten new kings tear the kingdoms apart with war and a dangerous game of politics.

Our main characters, Morrow and Sylph, later become the focus of the story, but everyone has an important part in it and are not neglected.

Follow my pinkerlocke for a story of stars, kingdoms, and tragedy...Will everyone find their own peaceful ending?




Index

Editing in all three parts later. Please just scroll thru the thread, there should be little to no interruptions between chapters. :)



I'm keeping a pinglist for those who wish to be alerted when updates come out, so please let me know if you want to be on it! And I don't mind if you comment or not while I write; I love feedback. :)



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Rules and Characters


Rules:


Rules can be found here.

My changes are to be more oriented around a story rather than doing more 'physical' actions on FR.

--There will be no coliseum. All food drops must require an action scene; they can also be the source of deaths.
--Battle stones will still use a coin: heads there must be a near-death or death, tails is nothing. An action scene is required.
--Materials and trinkets will still be writing and art, respectively; trinkets will also have a written update.
--Clothing drops will either be friendship scenes and/or romance scenes; breeding the actual dragons is optional.
--Familiars will be when I can add new dragons.



Characters


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Count of Deaths

To avoid spoilers to the story, I will be counting the deaths of dragons here, but will not say who they are.


ONE death so far.

x8z3xmt.pngFor God so loved the world that he gave his one and only son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life." - John 3:16
@Amphithere @Spottedleaf125

Hey guys! As I am bored and avoiding my shower for as long as possible, I decided to throw up the new pinkerlocke page. When I'm actually gonna start I am not sure, but this'll be here for whenever I am ready to start writing again.

Thank you for your interest and I hope you will enjoy this story, too! I'm very excited and happy about my ideas for this...Even if I'm not starting right away.

As for Spotted: I'm unsure if you actually wanted to be pinged for this, but I just assumed...Hope that's okay with you. :')
@Amphithere @Spottedleaf125

Hey guys! As I am bored and avoiding my shower for as long as possible, I decided to throw up the new pinkerlocke page. When I'm actually gonna start I am not sure, but this'll be here for whenever I am ready to start writing again.

Thank you for your interest and I hope you will enjoy this story, too! I'm very excited and happy about my ideas for this...Even if I'm not starting right away.

As for Spotted: I'm unsure if you actually wanted to be pinged for this, but I just assumed...Hope that's okay with you. :')
x8z3xmt.pngFor God so loved the world that he gave his one and only son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life." - John 3:16
@MorningSkye

Yes, I totally want a ping!! Ahhh this looks like it's going to be GOOD!! (I'm all over romance in stories, lol.) New dragons for this tale, right? Can't wait to see!!! New characters to scream over yessss!!
@MorningSkye

Yes, I totally want a ping!! Ahhh this looks like it's going to be GOOD!! (I'm all over romance in stories, lol.) New dragons for this tale, right? Can't wait to see!!! New characters to scream over yessss!!
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@Spottedleaf125
Ah thanks! I actually wasn't planning on making it a romance story, though now that you say it, it helps my mind think of good plot ideas... x)

Yup! A whole new start; hopefully this time it won't run awry like my other pinkerlocke did, aha.

I most likely will start it during the next month...I know I have a bit of a spring break right now with my brother being home, but I just need a good month of no distracting pinkerlockes to get my focus set on school and other more important things. x)
@Spottedleaf125
Ah thanks! I actually wasn't planning on making it a romance story, though now that you say it, it helps my mind think of good plot ideas... x)

Yup! A whole new start; hopefully this time it won't run awry like my other pinkerlocke did, aha.

I most likely will start it during the next month...I know I have a bit of a spring break right now with my brother being home, but I just need a good month of no distracting pinkerlockes to get my focus set on school and other more important things. x)
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@MorningSkye

I'm thinking of starting a Nuzlocke soon too, and I'd love to be pinged for yours when you start it!
@MorningSkye

I'm thinking of starting a Nuzlocke soon too, and I'd love to be pinged for yours when you start it!
@FrostStrix
Thank you for the interest--I'll add ya for when I get started. It most likely will be at the start of April, but if I can get back into the rhythm of school after spring break (I'm homeschooled lol) during this week I might get to it sooner.

And neat! I'd love to read yours, too, whenever you start as well. :)
@FrostStrix
Thank you for the interest--I'll add ya for when I get started. It most likely will be at the start of April, but if I can get back into the rhythm of school after spring break (I'm homeschooled lol) during this week I might get to it sooner.

And neat! I'd love to read yours, too, whenever you start as well. :)
x8z3xmt.pngFor God so loved the world that he gave his one and only son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life." - John 3:16
[center][size=6][font=Monotype Corsiva]Starter Characters[/size][/font] ----- [size=3][font=Garamond]Pinglist: @FrostStrix @Amphithere @Spottedleaf125[/size][/font] ----- [size=4][font=Garamond]I decided to go ahead and get my characters to start out with, as I don't necessarily need to begin with them being children. If all goes to plan, I'll be starting this in about ten days anyways, and they still need time to grow up. So my first random number I got a Coatl; I bought the youngest off the auction house for 5 gems. 'Morrow' [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=40241972] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/402420/40241972_350.png[/img] [/url] My second was a Guardian; I bought the youngest off the auction house for 5 gems. 'Grace' [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=40220216] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/402203/40220216_350.png[/img] [/url]
Starter Characters


Pinglist: @FrostStrix @Amphithere @Spottedleaf125
I decided to go ahead and get my characters to start out with, as I don't necessarily need to begin with them being children. If all goes to plan, I'll be starting this in about ten days anyways, and they still need time to grow up.

So my first random number I got a Coatl; I bought the youngest off the auction house for 5 gems.

'Morrow'

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My second was a Guardian; I bought the youngest off the auction house for 5 gems.

'Grace'

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x8z3xmt.pngFor God so loved the world that he gave his one and only son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life." - John 3:16
@MorningSkye
Hello! I believe I first saw you on Spottedleaf's Pinkerlocke, right?
Anyways, I only read snippets of your last pinkerlocke, but I'd love to be pinged for the start of this one! It seems really cool already :D
@MorningSkye
Hello! I believe I first saw you on Spottedleaf's Pinkerlocke, right?
Anyways, I only read snippets of your last pinkerlocke, but I'd love to be pinged for the start of this one! It seems really cool already :D
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@MorningSkye

Ooh, cool babies!! That coatl is so soft and cute looking, and that guardian is bright and interesting! Can't wait to see how their stories go! ^^
@MorningSkye

Ooh, cool babies!! That coatl is so soft and cute looking, and that guardian is bright and interesting! Can't wait to see how their stories go! ^^
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@Aetherstorm
Hmm, I think so? lol.
I'll add you to the pinglist, thanks for your interest! :) (Man my other pinkerlocke was all over the place, haha, my main goal is to keep this thing orderly)

@Amphithere
Thanks! I know, when I saw the Guardian I was like, 'oh gosh...' At least she has a good name lol. (I honestly don't mind it, but definitely not my first choice of dragon ha)

@Spottedleaf125
Thanks! Both are adorable, aren't they? cx
@Aetherstorm
Hmm, I think so? lol.
I'll add you to the pinglist, thanks for your interest! :) (Man my other pinkerlocke was all over the place, haha, my main goal is to keep this thing orderly)

@Amphithere
Thanks! I know, when I saw the Guardian I was like, 'oh gosh...' At least she has a good name lol. (I honestly don't mind it, but definitely not my first choice of dragon ha)

@Spottedleaf125
Thanks! Both are adorable, aren't they? cx
x8z3xmt.pngFor God so loved the world that he gave his one and only son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life." - John 3:16
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