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TOPIC | coatl are so hard to draw nnnnnnggg
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[img]https://31.media.tumblr.com/109e83eea3dc87e2ea52ac4e0a2720ad/tumblr_inline_n655e9oGj21rszjoz.png[/img] what how does it even work
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what

how does it even work
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I still don't know what to do omg but I've progressed anyway [img]https://31.media.tumblr.com/1b539133fbc23efad52c34b3d63d18f3/tumblr_inline_n65ib8f4YS1rszjoz.png[/img] Umm basically I'm asking if anyone have any tips for drawing Coatl dragons but no one is commenting :/ *bump*
I still don't know what to do omg but I've progressed anyway

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Umm basically I'm asking if anyone have any tips for drawing Coatl dragons but no one is commenting :/ *bump*
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@amethystleaves

not sure what kind of tips you're looking for, but don't forget the coatl chest mane.. thing :0

i'd make the arms skinnier and the hands smaller, as well. they're stubby little things. the corgis of dragons i'd say.

also, the throat isn't quite right. it sort of starts out thicker closer to the cranium, then thins out as opposed to stays nice and slim from head to shoulder. the skull should be flatter, as their lower jaw is almost completely flat and their head is more dome-shaped with little to no definition between crown and snout.

but that expression is spot on and the tail is super cute!

(i'm being very thorough in these critiques, since you haven't gotten any tips. feel free to discount any of them! the buggers ARE dang hard to draw. i think you're doing great!)
@amethystleaves

not sure what kind of tips you're looking for, but don't forget the coatl chest mane.. thing :0

i'd make the arms skinnier and the hands smaller, as well. they're stubby little things. the corgis of dragons i'd say.

also, the throat isn't quite right. it sort of starts out thicker closer to the cranium, then thins out as opposed to stays nice and slim from head to shoulder. the skull should be flatter, as their lower jaw is almost completely flat and their head is more dome-shaped with little to no definition between crown and snout.

but that expression is spot on and the tail is super cute!

(i'm being very thorough in these critiques, since you haven't gotten any tips. feel free to discount any of them! the buggers ARE dang hard to draw. i think you're doing great!)
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@retrobird Oooh thank you for these tips! They're fine, I needed a bit of guidance, so I won't discount them! And yeah, I am about to draw the poofy mane thing and also made the arms/hands smaller! You're also right about the upper body, I did feel something wasn't quite right with the head but I couldn't tell what it is...it's really strange but Coatls have a snake-like head without it looking TOO snake-like...? But I'm not quite sure what you mean by "no definition between crown and snout" though...do you mean like, the nose should be more directly connected/closer to the forehead? [img]https://31.media.tumblr.com/59be8870bada914ee979eae3b5463288/tumblr_inline_n65ui8Pau11rszjoz.png[/img] And about the neck/throat being not slim enough...I dunno about that since I'm drawing a male Coatl and they seem to have thicker necks than females...(see pic)? But I'll still alter it a bit I guess. Anyhow, thanks sooo much for these critiques, I was beginning to feel helpless since no one commented! :D
@retrobird

Oooh thank you for these tips! They're fine, I needed a bit of guidance, so I won't discount them! And yeah, I am about to draw the poofy mane thing and also made the arms/hands smaller! You're also right about the upper body, I did feel something wasn't quite right with the head but I couldn't tell what it is...it's really strange but Coatls have a snake-like head without it looking TOO snake-like...?

But I'm not quite sure what you mean by "no definition between crown and snout" though...do you mean like, the nose should be more directly connected/closer to the forehead?

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And about the neck/throat being not slim enough...I dunno about that since I'm drawing a male Coatl and they seem to have thicker necks than females...(see pic)? But I'll still alter it a bit I guess.

Anyhow, thanks sooo much for these critiques, I was beginning to feel helpless since no one commented! :D
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@amethystleaves oh yeah you're totally right about the throat thing! i was only looking at a female. ignore that suggestion! this is what i mean about the head: [img]http://i.gyazo.com/e5a225e351ddb91eab6d968d4d175b83.png[/img][img]http://i.gyazo.com/255546beda71ec08c6f1d24f4671bc13.png[/img]
@amethystleaves

oh yeah you're totally right about the throat thing! i was only looking at a female. ignore that suggestion!

this is what i mean about the head:

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heck this helps me thanks @retrobird
heck this helps me thanks @retrobird
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@Samurott

Hello!! I'm not, like, super duper used to drawing coatls, but I drew this a while back and thought it might help?

http://i.imgur.com/oTg2jJ6.jpg http://i.imgur.com/PmKUbnn.jpg http://i.imgur.com/i1IRjw8.jpg
snek > coatl > apparel...

I drew this for a friend a while back? The apparel isn't the best but...

Anyways, always remember that these are dragons, and dragons can typically look however you want!! Do imagine coatls however it suits you, tbh.
@Samurott

Hello!! I'm not, like, super duper used to drawing coatls, but I drew this a while back and thought it might help?

http://i.imgur.com/oTg2jJ6.jpg http://i.imgur.com/PmKUbnn.jpg http://i.imgur.com/i1IRjw8.jpg
snek > coatl > apparel...

I drew this for a friend a while back? The apparel isn't the best but...

Anyways, always remember that these are dragons, and dragons can typically look however you want!! Do imagine coatls however it suits you, tbh.
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@Samurott

I feel this so hard. I have such a hard time with coatls and their anatomy lol
@Samurott

I feel this so hard. I have such a hard time with coatls and their anatomy lol
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@Samurott

I applaud you all. I once considered myself a decent artist, but not anymore. Wow.

P.S. What application is that?

P.P.S. Has anyone seen my jaw? I think it dropped somewhere near the second picture...if anyone finds it, please let me know!
@Samurott

I applaud you all. I once considered myself a decent artist, but not anymore. Wow.

P.S. What application is that?

P.P.S. Has anyone seen my jaw? I think it dropped somewhere near the second picture...if anyone finds it, please let me know!
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@retrobird heck your advice actually helped me get the head right :] thank you so much ^-^ coatls are definitely one of the harder dragons to draw no doubt aha
@retrobird heck your advice actually helped me get the head right :] thank you so much ^-^ coatls are definitely one of the harder dragons to draw no doubt aha
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