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TOPIC | Lysand's PWYW Lore/Writing/PoetryShop!
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One never thought a flower to be pale, but vibrant and beautiful. Yet, a flower was born. He was pale, with no color to show. He was still beautiful, like a peacock.
They thought he should be caged like one, they ripped his name away from him. "The Strange" caught on, and was burned into him like a brand. This flower had his leaves cut, and his petals trimmed.
They silenced him at a young age, he became an object people would watch and laugh at, their eyes just pawning over his skin. His pale skin, and his vibrant..lively purple eyes.
There was no childhood to speak of, only a time of great loneliness although he was always surrounded by people. In fact, even when he was brought to the Emperor and his Empress, Danzi could only force a smile and look down at his tiny feet. The child was hoping they could change it all..
He was so, very wrong. They saw him as an animal they could cage, and show to the rest of the world..like a prize! That's exactly what they did, they dressed him in pastels to match his skin, and made him stand on showcase.
His days were filled with stillness, he felt like a doll that couldn't be played with. He could only watch the other kids laugh and play. He couldn't call for them, and speak. He was only to be seen, and if he didn't listen..he wouldn't have the pleasure of watching the kids. So, he was taught obedience.
He would do what he was told, learning to never question anyone. If he was told to cook, he would cook. If he was told to sleep, he would sleep. It soon became a routine, it was bland and tasteless
Yet, this flower still blossomed. He often found time to go, and retreat. Danzi found himself comforted by those like him, the pale white daisies in the forest. He met a man there, this man gave him a gift..
This gift was a silver ferret! What a rare, and beautiful creature!
"An oddity for the odd" The aristocrat stated, ruffling Danzi's hair before walking out of the flower field. He never saw the man again, but would be forever grateful.
Danzi finally had a friend, one that couldn't laugh or gawk at him. Softly, he hugged the ferret and sobbed. His tears dripped from his chin, upon the flowers at his feet. The Ferret murred and chirped, purring almost as it nuzzled under his chin.
This would be the first creature he'd have to care for other than himself, and he was fearful of how the others would react. Danzi didn't want to lose his pet.
It was very surprising, what came next.
Taking care of his partner was not too hard, he had a natural talent. His touch was gentle, and he had so much love to give. The other's didn't mind the ferret, and infacf thought it made him more unique.
One night, when he was traveling to a gala, to be showcased, Danzi found himself content. Even if he had spent his entire life restricted, and on a pedestal, he enjoyed the time he had to himself.
He didn't need to socialize, or make any other..human friends! The flowers and his ferret were enough for him. It's not like he had a chance to socialize either, though.
Danzi was quiet, he was forced into silence. He was told not to make eye contact as the observers, observed. He was just to play his part, and remain as "The Strange".
While growing up, he spoke a few words here and a few words there..but his voice was reserved for the world that nobody but he knew.
Every morning, it is said you can see him in the flower fields..singing to the birds with his ferret laced across his thin shoulders. The tweets almost reflected his song. He was so serene, and gifted but the world would never recognize that.
Although age has come upon him, his face is still smooth and sweet just as it had been many years before. The world continues to gwak and stare, to rumor and sneer, but he continues to be the good boy he was taught to be.
Our Flower is to be preserved forever, for all to see. Him and his ferret. Danzi, the pale boy, who sings to the flowers. Who talks to the birds, and listens to them talk back.
I am lucky to of written his story. I hope to return and continue it someday, may he still dub me worthy. I don't think he's ever spoken this much to someone. He seems happy to finally tell another human.
This flower has so much more to offer, but the world refuses to accept the gifts he has. It wishes to simply fossilize, and encase him in glass. His talents are wasted, he is simply too great for this world.
Sincerely,
A Traveler.
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I have returned, and he has much more to tell me about.
Nothing has changed in the several years I have been gone, and yet he seems so much happier. Danzi tells me about how he has been writing poetry.
I skim through his book, a lot of the writing is messy but still readable. The first entry is one about him and his life:
•~•~•~•
A flower blooms,
But something bigger looms.
Then, something booms.
In a cage I am placed,
With a dress that is laced.
Their eyes are based,
upon me they are faced.
I do not weep,
But how I wish to leap.
My songs do not seep,
But I wish they could see.
•~•~•~•
It was beautiful, and meaningful. I don't dare read further, I don't want to cry in front of him. I simply ask for him to keep speaking. I want to hear more about him.
He tells me he isn't so lonely, and that everything is getting better. Danzi smiles, and then I know his story is complete.
He is a mystery, and reserves the right to stay that way. There is nothing else to write, but I will tell you.
Danzi is sweet, he is kind. He is reserved, and pure. Although he is pale, his colors will blossom and grow in places that you can't. The birds sing to him, and he sings to them..he loves this world even though he is an animal in a human zoo.
Sincerely,
A Traveler.
[center][img]http://i.imgur.com/9FgHvlH.png[/img]
@onionbulb
One never thought a flower to be pale, but vibrant and beautiful. Yet, a flower was born. He was pale, with no color to show. He was still beautiful, like a peacock.
They thought he should be caged like one, they ripped his name away from him. "The Strange" caught on, and was burned into him like a brand. This flower had his leaves cut, and his petals trimmed.
They silenced him at a young age, he became an object people would watch and laugh at, their eyes just pawning over his skin. His pale skin, and his vibrant..lively purple eyes.
There was no childhood to speak of, only a time of great loneliness although he was always surrounded by people. In fact, even when he was brought to the Emperor and his Empress, Danzi could only force a smile and look down at his tiny feet. The child was hoping they could change it all..
He was so, very wrong. They saw him as an animal they could cage, and show to the rest of the world..like a prize! That's exactly what they did, they dressed him in pastels to match his skin, and made him stand on showcase.
His days were filled with stillness, he felt like a doll that couldn't be played with. He could only watch the other kids laugh and play. He couldn't call for them, and speak. He was only to be seen, and if he didn't listen..he wouldn't have the pleasure of watching the kids. So, he was taught obedience.
He would do what he was told, learning to never question anyone. If he was told to cook, he would cook. If he was told to sleep, he would sleep. It soon became a routine, it was bland and tasteless
Yet, this flower still blossomed. He often found time to go, and retreat. Danzi found himself comforted by those like him, the pale white daisies in the forest. He met a man there, this man gave him a gift..
This gift was a silver ferret! What a rare, and beautiful creature!
"An oddity for the odd" The aristocrat stated, ruffling Danzi's hair before walking out of the flower field. He never saw the man again, but would be forever grateful.
Danzi finally had a friend, one that couldn't laugh or gawk at him. Softly, he hugged the ferret and sobbed. His tears dripped from his chin, upon the flowers at his feet. The Ferret murred and chirped, purring almost as it nuzzled under his chin.
This would be the first creature he'd have to care for other than himself, and he was fearful of how the others would react. Danzi didn't want to lose his pet.
It was very surprising, what came next.
Taking care of his partner was not too hard, he had a natural talent. His touch was gentle, and he had so much love to give. The other's didn't mind the ferret, and infacf thought it made him more unique.
One night, when he was traveling to a gala, to be showcased, Danzi found himself content. Even if he had spent his entire life restricted, and on a pedestal, he enjoyed the time he had to himself.
He didn't need to socialize, or make any other..human friends! The flowers and his ferret were enough for him. It's not like he had a chance to socialize either, though.
Danzi was quiet, he was forced into silence. He was told not to make eye contact as the observers, observed. He was just to play his part, and remain as "The Strange".
While growing up, he spoke a few words here and a few words there..but his voice was reserved for the world that nobody but he knew.
Every morning, it is said you can see him in the flower fields..singing to the birds with his ferret laced across his thin shoulders. The tweets almost reflected his song. He was so serene, and gifted but the world would never recognize that.
Although age has come upon him, his face is still smooth and sweet just as it had been many years before. The world continues to gwak and stare, to rumor and sneer, but he continues to be the good boy he was taught to be.
Our Flower is to be preserved forever, for all to see. Him and his ferret. Danzi, the pale boy, who sings to the flowers. Who talks to the birds, and listens to them talk back.
I am lucky to of written his story. I hope to return and continue it someday, may he still dub me worthy. I don't think he's ever spoken this much to someone. He seems happy to finally tell another human.
This flower has so much more to offer, but the world refuses to accept the gifts he has. It wishes to simply fossilize, and encase him in glass. His talents are wasted, he is simply too great for this world.
Sincerely,
A Traveler.
I have returned, and he has much more to tell me about.
Nothing has changed in the several years I have been gone, and yet he seems so much happier. Danzi tells me about how he has been writing poetry.
I skim through his book, a lot of the writing is messy but still readable. The first entry is one about him and his life:
•~•~•~•
A flower blooms,
But something bigger looms.
Then, something booms.
In a cage I am placed,
With a dress that is laced.
Their eyes are based,
upon me they are faced.
I do not weep,
But how I wish to leap.
My songs do not seep,
But I wish they could see.
•~•~•~•
It was beautiful, and meaningful. I don't dare read further, I don't want to cry in front of him. I simply ask for him to keep speaking. I want to hear more about him.
He tells me he isn't so lonely, and that everything is getting better. Danzi smiles, and then I know his story is complete.
He is a mystery, and reserves the right to stay that way. There is nothing else to write, but I will tell you.
Danzi is sweet, he is kind. He is reserved, and pure. Although he is pale, his colors will blossom and grow in places that you can't. The birds sing to him, and he sings to them..he loves this world even though he is an animal in a human zoo.
Sincerely,
A Traveler.
@SkylordLysand
-DOES SOMMERSAULTS IN AIR-
IS SHOUTING AT TOP OF LUNGS
WOW This is exactly what I was looking for for the longest time, and It fits Danzi so perfectly!!
I can’t thank you enough!
I love how you did the travelers point of view, it adds so much depth to the piece!
Thank you again for such a beautiful work of art! You really are such a talented writer!! QuQ
-ECSTATIC-
-COULDNT BE HAPPIER-
-DOES SOMMERSAULTS IN AIR-
IS SHOUTING AT TOP OF LUNGS
WOW This is exactly what I was looking for for the longest time, and It fits Danzi so perfectly!!
I can’t thank you enough!
I love how you did the travelers point of view, it adds so much depth to the piece!
Thank you again for such a beautiful work of art! You really are such a talented writer!! QuQ
-ECSTATIC-
-COULDNT BE HAPPIER-
@SkylordLysand
-DOES SOMMERSAULTS IN AIR-
IS SHOUTING AT TOP OF LUNGS
WOW This is exactly what I was looking for for the longest time, and It fits Danzi so perfectly!!
I can’t thank you enough!
I love how you did the travelers point of view, it adds so much depth to the piece!
Thank you again for such a beautiful work of art! You really are such a talented writer!! QuQ
-ECSTATIC-
-COULDNT BE HAPPIER-
-DOES SOMMERSAULTS IN AIR-
IS SHOUTING AT TOP OF LUNGS
WOW This is exactly what I was looking for for the longest time, and It fits Danzi so perfectly!!
I can’t thank you enough!
I love how you did the travelers point of view, it adds so much depth to the piece!
Thank you again for such a beautiful work of art! You really are such a talented writer!! QuQ
-ECSTATIC-
-COULDNT BE HAPPIER-
@SkyLordLysand
I really need to get a bio of my favourite boi.
Type of Writing: Bio
*Ref: [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=36699454]
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*Personality: charming and persuasive. Kaas lives for the casino life he loves the thrill of gambling and is often found in local casinos. But then Kaas found his mate Kira, some things changed but he still stuck to his gambling roots. Until his daughter was hatched, Brynn. Kaas is now slightly fearful of his mate Kira. Her violent tendencies often are towards their daughter.
*Description of your character: Well fit, not overly muscular. Fills out his suit. Has a couple of scars on his back. Two large ones near his spine. And a couple missing spikes. His eyes are always narrowed unless he is really frightened.
Additional information: His daughter wants to be just like him while Kira wants her to become a warrior like her.
Connects to others: [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=339179&did=36811592]Kira[/url] Kaas’s mate, strong and fearless. Works as a warrior in the coliseum, has been getting increasingly more violent with her clanmates. Kaas is worried about her mental health. [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?p=lair&tab=dragon&id=339179&did=38582062]Brynn[/url] kaas’s daughter, quick-witted and strong-headed. Is currently training to become a magician like her father. Kaas loves her so much.
Role: magician. Entertains dragons and gets paid for it. Still likes to gamble.
*Basic info (of subject): hardcore gambler until he met Kira. Became a dedicated mate. Still gambled. Daughter Brynn was born and now he is having trouble with his mate Kira. Fears for his daughters life.
@SkyLordLysand
I really need to get a bio of my favourite boi.
Type of Writing: Bio
*Ref:
*Personality: charming and persuasive. Kaas lives for the casino life he loves the thrill of gambling and is often found in local casinos. But then Kaas found his mate Kira, some things changed but he still stuck to his gambling roots. Until his daughter was hatched, Brynn. Kaas is now slightly fearful of his mate Kira. Her violent tendencies often are towards their daughter.
*Description of your character: Well fit, not overly muscular. Fills out his suit. Has a couple of scars on his back. Two large ones near his spine. And a couple missing spikes. His eyes are always narrowed unless he is really frightened.
Additional information: His daughter wants to be just like him while Kira wants her to become a warrior like her.
Connects to others: Kira Kaas’s mate, strong and fearless. Works as a warrior in the coliseum, has been getting increasingly more violent with her clanmates. Kaas is worried about her mental health. Brynn kaas’s daughter, quick-witted and strong-headed. Is currently training to become a magician like her father. Kaas loves her so much.
Role: magician. Entertains dragons and gets paid for it. Still likes to gamble.
*Basic info (of subject): hardcore gambler until he met Kira. Became a dedicated mate. Still gambled. Daughter Brynn was born and now he is having trouble with his mate Kira. Fears for his daughters life.
I really need to get a bio of my favourite boi.
Type of Writing: Bio
*Ref:
*Personality: charming and persuasive. Kaas lives for the casino life he loves the thrill of gambling and is often found in local casinos. But then Kaas found his mate Kira, some things changed but he still stuck to his gambling roots. Until his daughter was hatched, Brynn. Kaas is now slightly fearful of his mate Kira. Her violent tendencies often are towards their daughter.
*Description of your character: Well fit, not overly muscular. Fills out his suit. Has a couple of scars on his back. Two large ones near his spine. And a couple missing spikes. His eyes are always narrowed unless he is really frightened.
Additional information: His daughter wants to be just like him while Kira wants her to become a warrior like her.
Connects to others: Kira Kaas’s mate, strong and fearless. Works as a warrior in the coliseum, has been getting increasingly more violent with her clanmates. Kaas is worried about her mental health. Brynn kaas’s daughter, quick-witted and strong-headed. Is currently training to become a magician like her father. Kaas loves her so much.
Role: magician. Entertains dragons and gets paid for it. Still likes to gamble.
*Basic info (of subject): hardcore gambler until he met Kira. Became a dedicated mate. Still gambled. Daughter Brynn was born and now he is having trouble with his mate Kira. Fears for his daughters life.
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@Hexingisfun Hi!! I apologize so much! Your lore will have to wait until this weekend! I lost track of your ping due to a game I'm subbed to! I hope you're still looking for lore from me! :)
@Hexingisfun Hi!! I apologize so much! Your lore will have to wait until this weekend! I lost track of your ping due to a game I'm subbed to! I hope you're still looking for lore from me! :)
@Hexingisfun I'm playing a mafia game! It's extremely busy usually. It's a little quieter today. ^^'
I'm literally a villager, who's main mission is to only scream.
I'm literally a villager, who's main mission is to only scream.
@Hexingisfun I'm playing a mafia game! It's extremely busy usually. It's a little quieter today. ^^'
I'm literally a villager, who's main mission is to only scream.
I'm literally a villager, who's main mission is to only scream.
@SkylordLysand
Haha! Nice! I would love to join a mafia game but I’m only really used to playing Town of Salem so I would be really bad at it! Well I hope the game goes well for you!
Haha! Nice! I would love to join a mafia game but I’m only really used to playing Town of Salem so I would be really bad at it! Well I hope the game goes well for you!
@SkylordLysand
Haha! Nice! I would love to join a mafia game but I’m only really used to playing Town of Salem so I would be really bad at it! Well I hope the game goes well for you!
Haha! Nice! I would love to join a mafia game but I’m only really used to playing Town of Salem so I would be really bad at it! Well I hope the game goes well for you!
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@Hexingisfun sadly we're nearly to the end, a loss at that. Thank you though! Just a quick question, is Kira harmful toward Kaa?
Does he contemplate ever leaving her? Is there anything further to know about the failing matehood?
Does he contemplate ever leaving her? Is there anything further to know about the failing matehood?
@Hexingisfun sadly we're nearly to the end, a loss at that. Thank you though! Just a quick question, is Kira harmful toward Kaa?
Does he contemplate ever leaving her? Is there anything further to know about the failing matehood?
Does he contemplate ever leaving her? Is there anything further to know about the failing matehood?
@SkylordLysand
Kira is more violent towards their daughter for not following in her footsteps. But she does get vio towards Kaas. Kaas wants to try and help Kira the best he can but is getting increasingly more fearful of her. He doesn’t exactly want to leave her while he is scared of her, he almost feels like leaving her would result in more harm than good. Mind you Kira controls herself long enough to leave the area and uh kill a dragon that isn’t apart of her clan. She understands that her hurting her clanmates is wrong. She just loses control of her temper and has been getting more and more bloodthirsty. Kaas remembers when Kira was just a warrior and not a bloodthirsty monster. And wants to help her get back to her normal self. He loves her truly and really tries not to upset her.
Woo that was a lot! Hope that cleared somethings up!
Kira is more violent towards their daughter for not following in her footsteps. But she does get vio towards Kaas. Kaas wants to try and help Kira the best he can but is getting increasingly more fearful of her. He doesn’t exactly want to leave her while he is scared of her, he almost feels like leaving her would result in more harm than good. Mind you Kira controls herself long enough to leave the area and uh kill a dragon that isn’t apart of her clan. She understands that her hurting her clanmates is wrong. She just loses control of her temper and has been getting more and more bloodthirsty. Kaas remembers when Kira was just a warrior and not a bloodthirsty monster. And wants to help her get back to her normal self. He loves her truly and really tries not to upset her.
Woo that was a lot! Hope that cleared somethings up!
@SkylordLysand
Kira is more violent towards their daughter for not following in her footsteps. But she does get vio towards Kaas. Kaas wants to try and help Kira the best he can but is getting increasingly more fearful of her. He doesn’t exactly want to leave her while he is scared of her, he almost feels like leaving her would result in more harm than good. Mind you Kira controls herself long enough to leave the area and uh kill a dragon that isn’t apart of her clan. She understands that her hurting her clanmates is wrong. She just loses control of her temper and has been getting more and more bloodthirsty. Kaas remembers when Kira was just a warrior and not a bloodthirsty monster. And wants to help her get back to her normal self. He loves her truly and really tries not to upset her.
Woo that was a lot! Hope that cleared somethings up!
Kira is more violent towards their daughter for not following in her footsteps. But she does get vio towards Kaas. Kaas wants to try and help Kira the best he can but is getting increasingly more fearful of her. He doesn’t exactly want to leave her while he is scared of her, he almost feels like leaving her would result in more harm than good. Mind you Kira controls herself long enough to leave the area and uh kill a dragon that isn’t apart of her clan. She understands that her hurting her clanmates is wrong. She just loses control of her temper and has been getting more and more bloodthirsty. Kaas remembers when Kira was just a warrior and not a bloodthirsty monster. And wants to help her get back to her normal self. He loves her truly and really tries not to upset her.
Woo that was a lot! Hope that cleared somethings up!
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