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TOPIC | The Masked Crescente (story / critique?)
This is a story I began writing some time ago, and I really need critique and help on how to improve it.

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3129368/1/The-Masked-Crescente

Thank you, for any comments.
Nyansmoothie
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July 17, 2013 08:01:30
This is a story I began writing some time ago, and I really need critique and help on how to improve it.

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3129368/1/The-Masked-Crescente

Thank you, for any comments.