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TOPIC | [Auraboa Lore] Update & Apology
We want to apologize for the execution and editing decisions we made as a team on the Auraboa story, Ancient Arboriculture Observations. Your critique of the story and that parallels can be drawn to the struggles faced by native nations and the forced assimilation of their children into a western world have been heard. Looking at the story now, we can absolutely see how such parallels were drawn, and are committed to correcting this. We thank you for both reaching out to us, and for your patience while we worked to address these concerns.

The Auraboa were and are intended to be dragons with a scifi-alien mindset with an innate mental link and a different perception of time, not a native nation. The original draft for the story had many ideas, context, and characterization that were explicitly stated and then cut out for the sake of word count. The expectation was for the breed article to do the heavy lifting required, but it also wound up insufficient to support the needs of the story and as a standalone article. The fact that the hatchlings were changed but still able to freely move between the Loop and a linear time perception was left implied instead of explicitly stated. Regarding the concerns shared on Auraboan speech, the mental link and the non-linear perception of time meant that speech was an inefficient and alien form of communication for the Auraboa, resulting in stilted speech patterns that we will be evaluating with a critical eye to avoid harmful stereotypes.

We appreciate the critique and feedback. We will use this as an opportunity to better our lore and restore much of this original context to make sure we are telling the story and building the world we want and intend to tell. We are also re-evaluating our length limits based on the individual stories we want to tell and the world building we hope for these entries to do. We've been restricting the story lengths to prevent writing ourselves into corners like the Tidelord and the long, long break between Bounty of the Elements and its planned conclusion in Adventure Mode. And like with the Undertide story, the Auraboa story suffered under this artificial limit. This time, this combination lead to us publishing a story that could be read in multiple and harmful ways.

We also need to note that in the United States we are entering a holiday weekend and many of our employees will be taking or are already on paid time off. We apologize that a change cannot be effected as immediately as we would like, but will work to improve the story as swiftly as possible (November, ideally.)

For today: The Auraboa breed article has been expanded to more fully cover the connection that the Auraboa have in the Loop, duality of the nature of Auraboa hatchlings, and to make clear that the Auraboa born now are not and have not been severed from their connections and family.

We will update Site Status again when the short story is updated with the additional context, direction, and ending. We want to thank the community again for your feedback and commitment to bettering the world of Flight Rising. As always, we ask that feedback on topics that touch on real world matters of significance are submitted directly to us through Contact Us.
We want to apologize for the execution and editing decisions we made as a team on the Auraboa story, Ancient Arboriculture Observations. Your critique of the story and that parallels can be drawn to the struggles faced by native nations and the forced assimilation of their children into a western world have been heard. Looking at the story now, we can absolutely see how such parallels were drawn, and are committed to correcting this. We thank you for both reaching out to us, and for your patience while we worked to address these concerns.

The Auraboa were and are intended to be dragons with a scifi-alien mindset with an innate mental link and a different perception of time, not a native nation. The original draft for the story had many ideas, context, and characterization that were explicitly stated and then cut out for the sake of word count. The expectation was for the breed article to do the heavy lifting required, but it also wound up insufficient to support the needs of the story and as a standalone article. The fact that the hatchlings were changed but still able to freely move between the Loop and a linear time perception was left implied instead of explicitly stated. Regarding the concerns shared on Auraboan speech, the mental link and the non-linear perception of time meant that speech was an inefficient and alien form of communication for the Auraboa, resulting in stilted speech patterns that we will be evaluating with a critical eye to avoid harmful stereotypes.

We appreciate the critique and feedback. We will use this as an opportunity to better our lore and restore much of this original context to make sure we are telling the story and building the world we want and intend to tell. We are also re-evaluating our length limits based on the individual stories we want to tell and the world building we hope for these entries to do. We've been restricting the story lengths to prevent writing ourselves into corners like the Tidelord and the long, long break between Bounty of the Elements and its planned conclusion in Adventure Mode. And like with the Undertide story, the Auraboa story suffered under this artificial limit. This time, this combination lead to us publishing a story that could be read in multiple and harmful ways.

We also need to note that in the United States we are entering a holiday weekend and many of our employees will be taking or are already on paid time off. We apologize that a change cannot be effected as immediately as we would like, but will work to improve the story as swiftly as possible (November, ideally.)

For today: The Auraboa breed article has been expanded to more fully cover the connection that the Auraboa have in the Loop, duality of the nature of Auraboa hatchlings, and to make clear that the Auraboa born now are not and have not been severed from their connections and family.

We will update Site Status again when the short story is updated with the additional context, direction, and ending. We want to thank the community again for your feedback and commitment to bettering the world of Flight Rising. As always, we ask that feedback on topics that touch on real world matters of significance are submitted directly to us through Contact Us.
Spoilers ahead regarding the status of the First Seed below:


After the events of The Seed and The Sickness, Leifa was left fused with the First Seed, a direct connection to the Behemoth. Her being connected to the tree has introduced linear time and individual perception to the Loop that the Auraboa use. And the Loop is a construct supported by the Behemoth itself—and why the Auraboa hatchlings are now being born with a dual nature.
Spoilers ahead regarding the status of the First Seed below:


After the events of The Seed and The Sickness, Leifa was left fused with the First Seed, a direct connection to the Behemoth. Her being connected to the tree has introduced linear time and individual perception to the Loop that the Auraboa use. And the Loop is a construct supported by the Behemoth itself—and why the Auraboa hatchlings are now being born with a dual nature.
Update, November 30, 2023:

Hello everyone, we have a quick update for you on the status of the Auraboa short story, Ancient Arboriculture Observations. We'd hoped to have the updated story published before the end of November, but it doesn't look like that's going to happen.

The updated draft is nearly finalized. We pulled additional world building and context from the original draft, built out more defined terms, context, and structure for Auraboan communication, and completely reworked the ending beat to that of the one originally intended, which had been scrapped due to length concerns.

Once this draft is finalized, it will need to undergo some sensitivity reviews. After those read-throughs are completed, the draft may have to again undergo editing and possibly additional drafting, and close out with another round of sensitivity reviews depending on the initial feedback.

We are priortizing this update, and are dedicating time and care to ensure the story we share with you is the one we intended to tell you, with context and worldbuilding. Thank you for your patience and understanding while we engage with this process.
Update, November 30, 2023:

Hello everyone, we have a quick update for you on the status of the Auraboa short story, Ancient Arboriculture Observations. We'd hoped to have the updated story published before the end of November, but it doesn't look like that's going to happen.

The updated draft is nearly finalized. We pulled additional world building and context from the original draft, built out more defined terms, context, and structure for Auraboan communication, and completely reworked the ending beat to that of the one originally intended, which had been scrapped due to length concerns.

Once this draft is finalized, it will need to undergo some sensitivity reviews. After those read-throughs are completed, the draft may have to again undergo editing and possibly additional drafting, and close out with another round of sensitivity reviews depending on the initial feedback.

We are priortizing this update, and are dedicating time and care to ensure the story we share with you is the one we intended to tell you, with context and worldbuilding. Thank you for your patience and understanding while we engage with this process.
Update, February 21, 2024
  1. The content originally cut for length was restored.
  2. The writing team worked on this draft based on player feedback.
  3. This draft underwent a sensitivity read with beta readers.
  4. The writing team made updates based on the beta reader feedback.
  5. There were delays in revisiting the draft due to the 2023 holidays and rolling team outages from illness.
  6. Currently: We are holding for a professional editor and writer to go over the current iteration of the draft instead of having our writing team perform copyedit passes over the base draft.

Thank you for your patience while we continue our work to address your concerns with and feedback on the Auraboa lore story.
Update, February 21, 2024
  1. The content originally cut for length was restored.
  2. The writing team worked on this draft based on player feedback.
  3. This draft underwent a sensitivity read with beta readers.
  4. The writing team made updates based on the beta reader feedback.
  5. There were delays in revisiting the draft due to the 2023 holidays and rolling team outages from illness.
  6. Currently: We are holding for a professional editor and writer to go over the current iteration of the draft instead of having our writing team perform copyedit passes over the base draft.

Thank you for your patience while we continue our work to address your concerns with and feedback on the Auraboa lore story.