Advice on Lore | Creative Corner

I have a dragon who i wrote some lore for, and I'd like some advice so i can know if it's good enough or not. It's my first time writing lore, so any advice would be helpful. This is the dragon i wrote it for: [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=49310572] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/493106/49310572_350.png[/img][/url] It's includes LittleLitten2017's dream outfit for her (that's whose she really belongs to, I'm just keeping it safe for her; also she is the one who told me to write it)

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May 11, 2019 09:03:46

I have a dragon who i wrote some lore for, and I'd like some advice so i can know if it's good enough or not. It's my first time writing lore, so any advice would be helpful. This is the dragon i wrote it for:

It's includes LittleLitten2017's dream outfit for her (that's whose she really belongs to, I'm just keeping it safe for her; also she is the one who told me to write it)

Last edited on May 11, 2019 09:05:59 by AprilTheBrave

@ApriltheBrave
The writing itself is great, try using paragraphs so that it isn’t too daunting to read. If you would like so bio templates to stick it in, just ask me about it.

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May 11, 2019 12:26:04

@ApriltheBrave
The writing itself is great, try using paragraphs so that it isn’t too daunting to read. If you would like so bio templates to stick it in, just ask me about it.