So I wanted to try and make an adoptable, and I came up with the idea of Naughty Nocs. Pet shaming nocs. I'd love anyone opinion on how this looks, or ways to improve, or what just plain out doesn't work.
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So I wanted to try and make an adoptable, and I came up with the idea of Naughty Nocs. Pet shaming nocs. I'd love anyone opinion on how this looks, or ways to improve, or what just plain out doesn't work.
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@rororat overall it looks great! The only potential problem I see is that around the mouth area the lineart blends in with the face color. I'm pretty sure it'll only be a problem for darker dragons. Maybe try making it lighter instead of darker then the color? Idk, it might look worse. The same goes for the hand/claw. Other than that minor fix, it's pretty good. It's great quality and a great idea! Also a little extra shading never hurt but its up to you if you want to add it or not.
@rororat overall it looks great! The only potential problem I see is that around the mouth area the lineart blends in with the face color. I'm pretty sure it'll only be a problem for darker dragons. Maybe try making it lighter instead of darker then the color? Idk, it might look worse. The same goes for the hand/claw. Other than that minor fix, it's pretty good. It's great quality and a great idea! Also a little extra shading never hurt but its up to you if you want to add it or not.
@rororat
I would suggest maybe making the lineart darker? For the chest-bit it works but it's a little too light for the rest. And maybe do a solid line for the back of the neck? Other than that it's nice art and a nice concept. I love pet-shaming stuff lol
I would suggest maybe making the lineart darker? For the chest-bit it works but it's a little too light for the rest. And maybe do a solid line for the back of the neck? Other than that it's nice art and a nice concept. I love pet-shaming stuff lol
@rororat
I would suggest maybe making the lineart darker? For the chest-bit it works but it's a little too light for the rest. And maybe do a solid line for the back of the neck? Other than that it's nice art and a nice concept. I love pet-shaming stuff lol
I would suggest maybe making the lineart darker? For the chest-bit it works but it's a little too light for the rest. And maybe do a solid line for the back of the neck? Other than that it's nice art and a nice concept. I love pet-shaming stuff lol
@Wolfskin I'll definitely look into different line art shades, I see what you mean. I'll also amp up my shadow game, I'm always afraid when it comes to shading things, that's a problem of my own I need to fix. Thanks again!
@rainings I'll absolutely be taking a second look at the line art, and thank you for spotting the back line, I absolutely forgot it, oops. Thank you so much!
@rainings I'll absolutely be taking a second look at the line art, and thank you for spotting the back line, I absolutely forgot it, oops. Thank you so much!
@Wolfskin I'll definitely look into different line art shades, I see what you mean. I'll also amp up my shadow game, I'm always afraid when it comes to shading things, that's a problem of my own I need to fix. Thanks again!
@rainings I'll absolutely be taking a second look at the line art, and thank you for spotting the back line, I absolutely forgot it, oops. Thank you so much!
@rainings I'll absolutely be taking a second look at the line art, and thank you for spotting the back line, I absolutely forgot it, oops. Thank you so much!