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Hello! Do you have an open slot for lore still? :D
Your writing is really energic and lovely, would love some lore for one of my dragons!
Also, sorry if I missed it it's a lot of info, but how much lore do you usually write, and for what price? ^^
Hello! Do you have an open slot for lore still? :D
Your writing is really energic and lovely, would love some lore for one of my dragons!
Also, sorry if I missed it it's a lot of info, but how much lore do you usually write, and for what price? ^^
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@Shoz
yes, i have an open slot for lore!
about 100-1500 words, but this choice is up to you as long as it's within the word range. rates would be 10kt/10g per 100 words :)
@Shoz
yes, i have an open slot for lore!
about 100-1500 words, but this choice is up to you as long as it's within the word range. rates would be 10kt/10g per 100 words :)
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tori • she/her • fr +16
poetry & lore | chibis
Sounds good! I'll order some lore then ^^ This is my dragon Vucim, she has a lot of fragmented lore, but don't pay it any mind, I've wanted to change up her lore a lot since she's on the front page. [ lore ] picture widget of dragon: [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/32847525][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/328476/32847525_350.png[/img][/url] personality: > Stubborn, wants to be good/do good, interested in serving a higher cause > Has a high temper and high standards > Sorely needs a character development.. >Likes soft things and pastel colours? Likes being welldressed and wellprecieved. lore info (eg. headcanons, brief outlines of events): > She's had a little bit of a tough upbringing, as her mother was an exalt escort who slowly but surely got worse mentally due to the job. So she wasn't around much. Morros is her father, and he's very sweet and loves plants and wants whats best for everyone, but she blames him for her mothers fate (she's lost/died) even though he was a young parent and tried his best. > She's moved away and rarely visit him. > Vucim has no spesific profession rn, ?as I really would like her lore to senter around who she is as a person and not just her backstory. > They live by the edge of the sunbeam territory, she likes pastel colours, soft colors and probably has a soft side that just needs a little nourishing. She's got a very gentle familiar, perhaps she can have an interaction where she meets it/finds it, and gets some more peace for herself. Sorry if that's too vague, let me know what other details you'd like me to include! Lore length (no. of words): > 500-600 words payment type (treasure or gems): > Mixed payment if you're open for that! 50/50 treasure and gems ^^ discounts (if applicable): Don't think so?
Sounds good! I'll order some lore then ^^
This is my dragon Vucim, she has a lot of fragmented lore, but don't pay it any mind, I've wanted to change up her lore a lot since she's on the front page.

[ lore ]
picture widget of dragon:

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personality:
> Stubborn, wants to be good/do good, interested in serving a higher cause
> Has a high temper and high standards
> Sorely needs a character development..
>Likes soft things and pastel colours? Likes being welldressed and wellprecieved.

lore info (eg. headcanons, brief outlines of events):
> She's had a little bit of a tough upbringing, as her mother was an exalt escort who slowly but surely got worse mentally due to the job. So she wasn't around much.
Morros is her father, and he's very sweet and loves plants and wants whats best for everyone, but she blames him for her mothers fate (she's lost/died) even though he was a young parent and tried his best.
> She's moved away and rarely visit him.
> Vucim has no spesific profession rn, ?as I really would like her lore to senter around who she is as a person and not just her backstory.
> They live by the edge of the sunbeam territory, she likes pastel colours, soft colors and probably has a soft side that just needs a little nourishing.
She's got a very gentle familiar, perhaps she can have an interaction where she meets it/finds it, and gets some more peace for herself.

Sorry if that's too vague, let me know what other details you'd like me to include!



Lore length (no. of words):
> 500-600 words

payment type (treasure or gems):
> Mixed payment if you're open for that! 50/50 treasure and gems ^^

discounts (if applicable):
Don't think so?
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@Hootsforce
hello! here is your poem :D i hope you like it!
Quote:
battered wooden spoon in cup
clockwise she stirs and stirs and stirs
muttering words as pale liquid sloshes
she uncaps jars of stiff honey
lining them against the flowers
the bees and butterflies, they come close
as she gets up she lets her apron drop away
a sharpened stick in her grip
is she welcoming them? is she shooing them?
it is not known to others why or what
she proceeds to scrawl in the earth
symbols spindly like spiders’ legs
then she snaps the twig so abruptly
scattering the pieces around
it is a daily occurrence
she does not seek conflict
nor does she seek peace
there are things she sees that others don’t
the things she wards her home from -
they are not to be discussed out loud.
@Hootsforce
hello! here is your poem :D i hope you like it!
Quote:
battered wooden spoon in cup
clockwise she stirs and stirs and stirs
muttering words as pale liquid sloshes
she uncaps jars of stiff honey
lining them against the flowers
the bees and butterflies, they come close
as she gets up she lets her apron drop away
a sharpened stick in her grip
is she welcoming them? is she shooing them?
it is not known to others why or what
she proceeds to scrawl in the earth
symbols spindly like spiders’ legs
then she snaps the twig so abruptly
scattering the pieces around
it is a daily occurrence
she does not seek conflict
nor does she seek peace
there are things she sees that others don’t
the things she wards her home from -
they are not to be discussed out loud.
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tori • she/her • fr +16
poetry & lore | chibis
@Shoz
don't worry, that should be sufficient information! mixed payment would mean 25kt and 25g :)
@Shoz
don't worry, that should be sufficient information! mixed payment would mean 25kt and 25g :)
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tori • she/her • fr +16
poetry & lore | chibis
[ poetry ] [b]picture widget of dragon[/b]: [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/68081377][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/680814/68081377_350.png[/img][/url] [b]personality[/b]: > Cold, Harsh, Strict. Despite his personality on the outside, he deeply cares about his fellow companions, but he must act tough to help them gain courage to keep living on. [b]what the poem should be about (lore, appearance, etc)[/b]: > How everyone sees him as a leader to be proud of, but in reality he is stressed and exhausted from putting on an act for so many years. [b]poem type (A, B or C)[/b]: > C [b]payment type (treasure or gems)[/b]: > Treasure [b]special requests (rhyme, specific kind of poem, etc.)[/b]: > I really enjoy Yaso Saij?'s style of writing. If you can, could you try to write in a similar style to his? If not, that's fine too. Just figured I would ask! [b]discounts (if applicable)[/b]: > None.
[ poetry ]
picture widget of dragon:
68081377_350.png

personality:
> Cold, Harsh, Strict. Despite his personality on the outside, he deeply cares about his fellow companions, but he must act tough to help them gain courage to keep living on.

what the poem should be about (lore, appearance, etc):
> How everyone sees him as a leader to be proud of, but in reality he is stressed and exhausted from putting on an act for so many years.

poem type (A, B or C):
> C

payment type (treasure or gems):
> Treasure

special requests (rhyme, specific kind of poem, etc.):
> I really enjoy Yaso Saij?'s style of writing. If you can, could you try to write in a similar style to his? If not, that's fine too. Just figured I would ask!

discounts (if applicable):
> None.
@MechanicalHands
oo yaso sajio! i spooked myself reading his poems omg

is it possible if you could direct me to a translation or analysis website of his poems? it's because his poems are in japanese (which i can't read, sadly) and i don't know what style it is that you'd like me to incorporate into the poem!

if you can maybe send a translation of one of his poems (like tamino's hell), i'll try to see what i can do :) the only idea i can think of would be following japanese poets' style of metre, 7775, where the numbers represent the number of syllables in each four-line stanza.

if it's too much work, it's totally fine haha :D it'll be 18kt then!
@MechanicalHands
oo yaso sajio! i spooked myself reading his poems omg

is it possible if you could direct me to a translation or analysis website of his poems? it's because his poems are in japanese (which i can't read, sadly) and i don't know what style it is that you'd like me to incorporate into the poem!

if you can maybe send a translation of one of his poems (like tamino's hell), i'll try to see what i can do :) the only idea i can think of would be following japanese poets' style of metre, 7775, where the numbers represent the number of syllables in each four-line stanza.

if it's too much work, it's totally fine haha :D it'll be 18kt then!
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tori • she/her • fr +16
poetry & lore | chibis
It's so rare to find someone who actually knows of his work, he's an amazing man.
The one I enjoy a lot is called "Butterfly" - it's my favorite right after "Tamino's Hell".

I found a site with both the Japanese and English versions, hopefully this will work!
I suppose if I had a way to describe the type I am looking for, it would be a twisted and yet disturbing reasoning that makes such a peaceful scene.

https://longdream.wordpress.com/category/poetry/saijo-yaso/

Really, just do what ever you'd like! I'm happy enough to know another person who enjoys Saijo's work. I have already sent a CR, and added extra as well~
It's so rare to find someone who actually knows of his work, he's an amazing man.
The one I enjoy a lot is called "Butterfly" - it's my favorite right after "Tamino's Hell".

I found a site with both the Japanese and English versions, hopefully this will work!
I suppose if I had a way to describe the type I am looking for, it would be a twisted and yet disturbing reasoning that makes such a peaceful scene.

https://longdream.wordpress.com/category/poetry/saijo-yaso/

Really, just do what ever you'd like! I'm happy enough to know another person who enjoys Saijo's work. I have already sent a CR, and added extra as well~
@Shoz
hello! i just wanted to ask if you're 100% sure about your order? because i'll only start once i get your payment and you might have overlooked my reply :)
@Shoz
hello! i just wanted to ask if you're 100% sure about your order? because i'll only start once i get your payment and you might have overlooked my reply :)
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tori • she/her • fr +16
poetry & lore | chibis
@starryLune

I'm so sorry!! Yes I'm a 100% sure, sending payment right away! My family suddenly went camping and my mind went woosh, but I'm sending it right away!
Thank you for your patience!
@starryLune

I'm so sorry!! Yes I'm a 100% sure, sending payment right away! My family suddenly went camping and my mind went woosh, but I'm sending it right away!
Thank you for your patience!
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