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[center][size=6][size=5][color=Maroon].+*Write to Win*+. [/color][/size][/center] [center][size=4][color=Maroon].+*It is what it says, Write to win. every one has to write a continuation of the other players. i will judge when the story is finished and lots of players have joined. you may write once a day, but its best paragraph, not the most. here are your prizes:*+. [/color][/size][/center] [size=6]1st Place gets:[/size] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=51688230] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/516883/51688230_350.png[/img] [/url] [size=6]and:[/Size] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=51827538] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/518276/51827538_350.png[/img] [/url] [size=6]2nd Place gets:[/size] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=51827539] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/518276/51827539_350.png[/img] [/url] [size=6]3rd Place gets:[/size] [item=Aerborne Ambassador] x2 [item=skin: strangler] [item=skin: octoflyer] Im gonna start ---------------- Have FUN. [b][i][u]Chapter 1[/u][/i][/b] This IS Sulfur: [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=51475265] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/514753/51475265_350.png[/img] [/url] Sulfur rushed through the castle walls, looking for the spy who just killed the king. Sulfur turned corners, avoiding the small spurts of dragons rushing out of the castle. she spotted Torin. her lifelong friend and lieutenant. Torin was rushing the same way Sulfur was. Sulfur finally got Torin's attention "go make sure everyone is safe. go grab the food supplies to feed the children. Run. Go. Faster" Sulfur yelled. Torin understood and she leaped the other direction. Sulfur watched her until she turned the corner. as general over Torin, Sulfur could tell her what to do. but only when she needed to get something done, like getting everyone safe. Sulfur took a few more turns when he ran into the spy. . . ------ You Make the story, pick one of the dragons in my lair to be the assassin. you choose what sulfur does next. i will delete your post and wright it my own, with a few changes if there is anything bad. and i will put your credit below the paragraph
.+*Write to Win*+.
.+*It is what it says, Write to win. every one has to write a continuation of the other players. i will judge when the story is finished and lots of players have joined. you may write once a day, but its best paragraph, not the most. here are your prizes:*+.

1st Place gets:

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and:

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2nd Place gets:

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3rd Place gets:

Aerborne Ambassador x2
Skin: Strangler
Skin: Octoflyer



Im gonna start
Have FUN.






Chapter 1

This IS Sulfur:


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Sulfur rushed through the castle walls, looking for the spy who just killed the king. Sulfur turned corners, avoiding the small spurts of dragons rushing out of the castle. she spotted Torin. her lifelong friend and lieutenant. Torin was rushing the same way Sulfur was. Sulfur finally got Torin's attention
"go make sure everyone is safe. go grab the food supplies to feed the children. Run. Go. Faster" Sulfur yelled. Torin understood and she leaped the other direction. Sulfur watched her until she turned the corner. as general over Torin, Sulfur could tell her what to do. but only when she needed to get something done, like getting everyone safe. Sulfur took a few more turns when he ran into the spy. . .
You Make the story, pick one of the dragons in my lair to be the assassin. you choose what sulfur does next. i will delete your post and wright it my own, with a few changes if there is anything bad. and i will put your credit below the paragraph


[url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=51488248] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/514883/51488248_350.png[/img] [/url] (The assasine is Gil) Sulfur was face to face with a shadow that soon, took its shape. Gil had an smirk on his face and tapped his sickle claw on the castle's floor "Is too late now..." he said with a uneasy grim, and Sulfur Snarled "How... how could you??" She could feel the adrenaline flowing on her blood, sulfur was ready to pounce at the invasor "Is not about how... is more about why" -------------------------------------------- (I think is good?.... she is supossed to attack him first, btw)

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(The assasine is Gil)

Sulfur was face to face with a shadow that soon, took its shape.
Gil had an smirk on his face and tapped his sickle claw on the castle's floor

"Is too late now..." he said with a uneasy grim, and Sulfur Snarled

"How... how could you??" She could feel the adrenaline flowing on her blood, sulfur was ready to pounce at the invasor

"Is not about how... is more about why"


(I think is good?.... she is supossed to attack him first, btw)
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"then why don't you tell me why? you seem to want me to know, or else you could have darted out of here in a second." Sulfur said. the assassin looked at him like a dragonet who could not get a piece of candy, defeated.
"You weak minded little dragon. you could never live up to be who you wanted to be, your brother defeated you in the battle arena, claiming to be king" he said with a smug voice, sulfur growled at this. "if you were to be strong, you might have saved you brother, but NO. I killed him before you got to even lay a claw on me." he growled. Sulfur lunged out at the assassin, but it was too late. the dragon had dissapeard in a cloud of smoke. . .
"then why don't you tell me why? you seem to want me to know, or else you could have darted out of here in a second." Sulfur said. the assassin looked at him like a dragonet who could not get a piece of candy, defeated.
"You weak minded little dragon. you could never live up to be who you wanted to be, your brother defeated you in the battle arena, claiming to be king" he said with a smug voice, sulfur growled at this. "if you were to be strong, you might have saved you brother, but NO. I killed him before you got to even lay a claw on me." he growled. Sulfur lunged out at the assassin, but it was too late. the dragon had dissapeard in a cloud of smoke. . .
Writing Today ----- Kartary [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=49437911] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/494380/49437911_350.png[/img] [/url] "I told you to kill all the guards! Why are they not DEAD" Kartary yelled, slamming the note down on the table. "Do you really want to know how i got my bad eye, the one with the infection on it!" Gil trembled,he knew what this meant. "Bring out, Venom" Kartary demanded. Gil tried to fly away, away from his death. he could hear chains rattling below him. something gripped Gils leg, pulling him down. he fell to the ground. two guards stormed past him with chains rattling in their hands. another guard came up to him, also with chains. the guard looped them around Gils hands and talons. also along his mouth, where it was sensitive. he heard a wooden cart rolling out, also with the sound of banging metal. a huge massive cage was rolled out. Kartary managed a smug smile as the mirror dragon was brought out. [i]Venom[/i] Gil Thought Venom [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=51639585] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/516396/51639585_350.png[/img] [/url] The mirror had a metal muzzle, keeping his venom away from anyone. All the gaurds backed away, afraid of this deadly power of the mirror. one of the guards aproached Venom with a long pole, with a little hook on the end. after unhooking the chains, the guard jumped back. Venom growled deep inside his throat. the a burst of venom came flying at Gil, and everything went black. "Bring me Deathbringer, She is the new assassin. . .
Writing Today
Kartary

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"I told you to kill all the guards! Why are they not DEAD" Kartary yelled, slamming the note down on the table. "Do you really want to know how i got my bad eye, the one with the infection on it!" Gil trembled,he knew what this meant.
"Bring out, Venom" Kartary demanded. Gil tried to fly away, away from his death. he could hear chains rattling below him. something gripped Gils leg, pulling him down. he fell to the ground. two guards stormed past him with chains rattling in their hands. another guard came up to him, also with chains. the guard looped them around Gils hands and talons. also along his mouth, where it was sensitive. he heard a wooden cart rolling out, also with the sound of banging metal. a huge massive cage was rolled out. Kartary managed a smug smile as the mirror dragon was brought out. Venom Gil Thought

Venom

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The mirror had a metal muzzle, keeping his venom away from anyone. All the gaurds backed away, afraid of this deadly power of the mirror. one of the guards aproached Venom with a long pole, with a little hook on the end. after unhooking the chains, the guard jumped back. Venom growled deep inside his throat. the a burst of venom came flying at Gil, and everything went black.
"Bring me Deathbringer, She is the new assassin. . .
@/GalaxyWarper Bribery AND tales of dragon murder? Excellent ----- Kartary sighed, running a claw along Venom's back, and the mirror purred like someone starting a chainsaw. "Xenon is dead, but if Sulfur still lives, what's the point?" Venom's tongue lolled out as Kartary scratched the top of his head. By the time Deathbringer arrived, Venom's happy drool had started to bubble and eat away at the floor. [center][url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=51638269][img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/516383/51638269_350.png[/img][/url] [i]Deathbringer[/i][/center] "You called for me, my lord?" she asked, her voice sweet as the dawn. "Yes, I did. Deathbringer, you've always been my second-favorite assassin. But good news for you! There's a vacancy for first. If you can manage to kill all of Xenon's guards, I might just let you fill it." Kartary smiled and petted Venom's head to let her know exactly what would happen if she failed. "Of course. But... the guards?" Deathbringer asked. "The king is already dead. What do you care of guards, my lord?" Kartary frowned, handing Venom off to a very perturbed guard of his own. "I don't recall giving you the role of advisor, Deathbringer. Don't disappoint me the way Gil did." "Consider the guards dead," she promised without hesitation, earlier comments forgotten. "It will all become clear to you soon," Kartary reassured her. "When I see fit to let you know."
@/GalaxyWarper Bribery AND tales of dragon murder? Excellent



Kartary sighed, running a claw along Venom's back, and the mirror purred like someone starting a chainsaw. "Xenon is dead, but if Sulfur still lives, what's the point?"

Venom's tongue lolled out as Kartary scratched the top of his head. By the time Deathbringer arrived, Venom's happy drool had started to bubble and eat away at the floor.
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Deathbringer

"You called for me, my lord?" she asked, her voice sweet as the dawn.

"Yes, I did. Deathbringer, you've always been my second-favorite assassin. But good news for you! There's a vacancy for first. If you can manage to kill all of Xenon's guards, I might just let you fill it." Kartary smiled and petted Venom's head to let her know exactly what would happen if she failed.

"Of course. But... the guards?" Deathbringer asked. "The king is already dead. What do you care of guards, my lord?"

Kartary frowned, handing Venom off to a very perturbed guard of his own. "I don't recall giving you the role of advisor, Deathbringer. Don't disappoint me the way Gil did."

"Consider the guards dead," she promised without hesitation, earlier comments forgotten.

"It will all become clear to you soon," Kartary reassured her. "When I see fit to let you know."
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Toaster: [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=48436008] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/484361/48436008_350.png[/img] [/url] "Toaster, come grab Deathbringer! Make it snappy!" Kartary yelled "Yes my lord!" an aviator said from the backside of the room, "let me grab the carri- "Deathbringer does not need a carrier! What she needs is some time to stretch her wings!" Kartary interrupted. Venom had caught a mouse, and was now slowly killing the poor little thing. Deathbringer huffed "if i may, your lord" she asked "Yes?" Kartary replied "ive been flying all day and- "nonsense! You shall FLY, all the way there!" Kartary inturrupted, and everyone, including Deathbringer, went silent. Toaster motioned her to follow, and they flew out of the dark cave, where she had been raised. her first time free from the darkness. she enjoyed it. her wings weren't trapped inside a tight flying area under the cave. she could EXPLORE! "Whooooo, YEAH! Is this what its always like" Deathbringer yelled over the wind in her ears. she flipped and rolled a lot. "i would not give it so much enthusiasm!" Toaster laughed, as they soared toward the castle. it got bigger and bigger as they came closer, and soon it towered over their heads. "Hey Torin, how y'a doing Sulfur" Toaster greeted the two gaurds at the gate. "hows life!" Torin shuffled her feet, and Sulfur just blew up "the king is dead! and and assassin came to the castle. Venom has been taken away. im STARVING. man i could go for a cow. hows your life been. you look thin. where were yo-" Sulfur looked up and saw Toaster give her a look "sorry about her." Torin shot out "she got to close to the mystic weeds!" "I understand" Toaster said "this is Deathbringer, could you find her a home. we found her alone in the woods. would you?" "Hi!" Deathbringer blurted out "how are you ------- (they are supposed to bring Deathbringer to the good side) -----
Toaster:

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"Toaster, come grab Deathbringer! Make it snappy!" Kartary yelled

"Yes my lord!" an aviator said from the backside of the room, "let me grab the carri-

"Deathbringer does not need a carrier! What she needs is some time to stretch her wings!" Kartary interrupted.
Venom had caught a mouse, and was now slowly killing the poor little thing. Deathbringer huffed

"if i may, your lord" she asked

"Yes?" Kartary replied

"ive been flying all day and-

"nonsense! You shall FLY, all the way there!" Kartary inturrupted, and everyone, including Deathbringer, went silent. Toaster motioned her to follow, and they flew out of the dark cave, where she had been raised. her first time free from the darkness. she enjoyed it. her wings weren't trapped inside a tight flying area under the cave. she could EXPLORE!

"Whooooo, YEAH! Is this what its always like" Deathbringer yelled over the wind in her ears. she flipped and rolled a lot.

"i would not give it so much enthusiasm!" Toaster laughed, as they soared toward the castle. it got bigger and bigger as they came closer, and soon it towered over their heads.

"Hey Torin, how y'a doing Sulfur" Toaster greeted the two gaurds at the gate. "hows life!"

Torin shuffled her feet, and Sulfur just blew up

"the king is dead! and and assassin came to the castle. Venom has been taken away. im STARVING. man i could go for a cow. hows your life been. you look thin. where were yo-"

Sulfur looked up and saw Toaster give her a look

"sorry about her." Torin shot out "she got to close to the mystic weeds!"

"I understand" Toaster said "this is Deathbringer, could you find her a home. we found her alone in the woods. would you?"

"Hi!" Deathbringer blurted out "how are you

(they are supposed to bring Deathbringer to the good side)
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