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TOPIC | redlining help @.@
hi! im working on an art trade with my nice friend and drawing their character :,0 im a novice digital artist and an even more novice painter(only really started painting seriously for like?? 6-3 months lol, honestly not terribly long. )

I've been working on this piece for quite a while lmao, honestly not sure how long it'll take for me to finish it anyways, honestly/ but im not that great at anatomy so i decided to wonder if you guys could help me? i'm having trouble with the hand next to the chara :')
any other general critiques would be helpful too tho :'0

picture:
http://sta.sh/0nyf972mxzx
hi! im working on an art trade with my nice friend and drawing their character :,0 im a novice digital artist and an even more novice painter(only really started painting seriously for like?? 6-3 months lol, honestly not terribly long. )

I've been working on this piece for quite a while lmao, honestly not sure how long it'll take for me to finish it anyways, honestly/ but im not that great at anatomy so i decided to wonder if you guys could help me? i'm having trouble with the hand next to the chara :')
any other general critiques would be helpful too tho :'0

picture:
http://sta.sh/0nyf972mxzx
@CloudHeart I gave it a go. I hope you don't mind that I painted the arms in a bit, It helps me visualise what's happening better then just lines [img]http://img13.deviantart.net/7fa7/i/2017/064/7/d/screen_shot_2017_03_05_at_8_13_13_pm_by_baelfin-db195ss.jpg[/img] I gotta say that overall the image is really good and you're doing really well for just starting out with digital art, like, [i]really [/i]well :o So, for the edits I made, I made a quick google image search of "sitting girl" to look for poses similar to the one you drew so like this one http://www.zastavki.com/pictures/640x480/2013/Girls___Beautyful_Girls_Girl_sitting_041430_29.jpg the pose isn't exactly the same but it's close enough for what I was after. the arm is stretching out from the body so leave a bit of a gap between the arm and the body. The other arm kinda looked like it wasn't sure what to do and if it wasn't hidden behind the leg, it might actually be going through the rock oops so I sketched out a couple versions of the other arm too. One thing to look out for is the composition, I'm not sure if you were planning on adding more to the background but as it is now, there is a lot of negative(empty) space on the left side and below the chara so I'd recommend cropping it to something like this [img]http://orig03.deviantart.net/0c41/f/2017/064/e/4/untitled_1_by_baelfin-db196sd.jpg[/img] Aand I think that's it. Really great work, you've done a great job with the relaxing atmosphere!
@CloudHeart I gave it a go. I hope you don't mind that I painted the arms in a bit, It helps me visualise what's happening better then just lines

screen_shot_2017_03_05_at_8_13_13_pm_by_baelfin-db195ss.jpg
I gotta say that overall the image is really good and you're doing really well for just starting out with digital art, like, really well :o So, for the edits I made, I made a quick google image search of "sitting girl" to look for poses similar to the one you drew so like this one http://www.zastavki.com/pictures/640x480/2013/Girls___Beautyful_Girls_Girl_sitting_041430_29.jpg the pose isn't exactly the same but it's close enough for what I was after. the arm is stretching out from the body so leave a bit of a gap between the arm and the body. The other arm kinda looked like it wasn't sure what to do and if it wasn't hidden behind the leg, it might actually be going through the rock oops so I sketched out a couple versions of the other arm too.

One thing to look out for is the composition, I'm not sure if you were planning on adding more to the background but as it is now, there is a lot of negative(empty) space on the left side and below the chara so I'd recommend cropping it to something like this untitled_1_by_baelfin-db196sd.jpg

Aand I think that's it. Really great work, you've done a great job with the relaxing atmosphere!
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Thanks ! Yeah, I was planning to fill in the negative space with some trees and stuff(like a darker grey kinds trees) :'0 it's fine that you painted it in, I honestly don't mind lol;

Thanks for the help though :,)
Thanks ! Yeah, I was planning to fill in the negative space with some trees and stuff(like a darker grey kinds trees) :'0 it's fine that you painted it in, I honestly don't mind lol;

Thanks for the help though :,)
bumping this I guess ;0;
Edit: oops totally forgot you can't bump on these forums :') haven't been on this website for like;; forever
bumping this I guess ;0;
Edit: oops totally forgot you can't bump on these forums :') haven't been on this website for like;; forever