@Petall
ifor is only proving to be more and more relatable. the anxiety, the insecurity, but able to push it away when doing something she loves, and being concerned with the judgement of others. she really speaks to me as a character so far! i feel so bad for her sometimes though..
as for her mentor, magiere, all i can say is oof. that definitely wouldn't help ifor's confidence with how condescending magiere is.
midnight certainly has an ego, and i gotta say garnet has a point, even if the truth is harsh. it's one thing to have self esteem and self confidence, but it's another thing to let it get to your head and put yourself above others. i hope garnet can help him uh, tone it down a bit. she does seem like she'll be a strict teacher.
enser is also appealing to me in terms of personality! he seems like a fun-loving character and more relaxed. i wonder if he and ifor may develop a friendship since i feel like he might be able to help her. it's nice to see him being encouragingand midnight embarrassing himself at that festival-
overall, the setting of the festival feels very realistic and appropriate for that event! from ifor's point of view, it's very crowded and awkward, but at least she seemed to have fun!
also, that map is fantastic. i've never been good at drawing maps, or.. backgrounds/environments in general. it's clear and simple, not too cluttered, and you can tell what's going on. only thing i'll say is that the labels are a little small, but i was able to read them and the way everything is arranged looks very neat. you can definitely tell what's going on!
ifor is only proving to be more and more relatable. the anxiety, the insecurity, but able to push it away when doing something she loves, and being concerned with the judgement of others. she really speaks to me as a character so far! i feel so bad for her sometimes though..
as for her mentor, magiere, all i can say is oof. that definitely wouldn't help ifor's confidence with how condescending magiere is.
midnight certainly has an ego, and i gotta say garnet has a point, even if the truth is harsh. it's one thing to have self esteem and self confidence, but it's another thing to let it get to your head and put yourself above others. i hope garnet can help him uh, tone it down a bit. she does seem like she'll be a strict teacher.
enser is also appealing to me in terms of personality! he seems like a fun-loving character and more relaxed. i wonder if he and ifor may develop a friendship since i feel like he might be able to help her. it's nice to see him being encouraging
overall, the setting of the festival feels very realistic and appropriate for that event! from ifor's point of view, it's very crowded and awkward, but at least she seemed to have fun!
also, that map is fantastic. i've never been good at drawing maps, or.. backgrounds/environments in general. it's clear and simple, not too cluttered, and you can tell what's going on. only thing i'll say is that the labels are a little small, but i was able to read them and the way everything is arranged looks very neat. you can definitely tell what's going on!