Dragon Share

I think an important question to ask is what are you trying to say and how do you want to say it? Some questions you can ask to see if you've fleshed out the bio enough: Do you have more to say about the character, either personality, desires, background, etc.? Do you want to keep it as short blurbs of biographical information, or do you want to expand it into short stories? Are these characters going to be used in a story others can read, and do they need any more information? Do [i]you[/i] think you've put enough there that a reader can get an accurate picture? Is there anything else you think is important, but aren't sure how to convey? It's fine if your answer to some of these is "that's not what I want to do," or, "those aren't really important things for me to consider." It's just important to think about what you want to write and how you want it to be. Personally, I think you have a great overview of your characters! I really like how you specifically describe their appearance and mannerisms in the "for art" section! I like how you used the symbols to convey the neutral, positive, and negative traits at the top. On formatting: The bios right now have a lot of listed information, which can be hard to read in big blocks. Separating it out with line breaks, bullet points, and columns can make it more readable. One example could be: [quote name="Bullet Points"]wants (concious): [LIST] [*]break from tiring home life drama; [*]a place to crash and earn money (which is the hospital, at the moment) [/LIST] needs (subconcious): [LIST] [*]more bean juice than they are allowed [/LIST][/quote] Bullet points are easy to use because there's a button for them in the text box. (2 to the right of the emoji button!) Columns make things appear pretty fancy like so: [quote name="Columns"][Columns]wants (concious): break from tiring home life drama; a place to crash and earn money (which is the hospital, at the moment) [nextcol] needs (subconcious): more bean juice than they are allowed [/columns][/quote] And you can add in things like making the titles bold, adding bullet points, adding images, etc.! [quote name="Very Fancy"][columns][item=flowering vulpine plushie][nextcol][b]wants (concious):[/b] [LIST] [*]break from tiring home life drama; [*]a place to crash and earn money (which is the hospital, at the moment) [/LIST][nextcol][item=bean juicer][nextcol] [b]needs (subconcious): [/b] [LIST] [*]more bean juice than they are allowed [/LIST][/columns][/quote] Here are some of the codes I used: [code] Bullet Points: [list] [*] bullet point 1 [*] bullet point 2 [/list] [columns] use [nextcol] to shift to the next column [/columns] [item= any item icon on FR] this will bring up the little box that has the description when you scroll over it- you can use it for any icon on the site! [/code] These are just some examples, and there's a lot more you can do! It will all depend on how much you want to code and how much time you feel like spending on that. Although once you get a good template going, you can just change the actual bio information in them! When I do bios, I play around a lot with formatting till I get everything how I want. But every character's bio doesn't have to look the same, and you can switch them up as well! Sorry that I've gone on and on, but hopefully I've given you some ideas to work with!!