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Error in the text of Tomo's Trivia
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It says "From which elemental region to Veilspun originate?" but it should be do instead of to
Error in the text of Tomo's Trivia
It says "From which elemental region to Veilspun originate?" but it should be do instead of to
It says "From which elemental region to Veilspun originate?" but it should be do instead of to
[quote name="Shadowsearcher" date="2022-01-13 04:47:07" ]
I found this at Tomo's Trivia Tablet, I'm wondering whether or not it's a error-
What month does Warrior’s Way run?
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i just ran into the same issue, here is a screenshot [img]https://64.media.tumblr.com/8792eead168099fb8986e7cb88c92eb3/afcbc07537377b8e-30/s1280x1920/3815a4a9c48e14c08859c6adabe9a112514a3925.png[/img]
Shadowsearcher wrote on 2022-01-13 04:47:07:
I found this at Tomo's Trivia Tablet, I'm wondering whether or not it's a error-
What month does Warrior’s Way run?
What month does Warrior’s Way run?
i just ran into the same issue, here is a screenshot
There are two possible answers to this question, Fuiran and Tengu, so one should probably be removed.
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In the Fae breed lore and the world map name, it's spelled 'starwood strand'. On profiles, lair location selection, and the world map description, it's spelled 'star wood strand'. Which one is it supposed to be?
In the Fae breed lore and the world map name, it's spelled 'starwood strand'. On profiles, lair location selection, and the world map description, it's spelled 'star wood strand'. Which one is it supposed to be?
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[item=Breed Change: Aberration] [item=Clanbound Breed Change: Aberration]
The tooltip of [i]Breed Change: Aberration[/i] and [i]Clanbound Breed Change: Aberration[/i] says "Aberration dragons are an ancient breed with a 25-day breeding cooldown." while their [url=https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=114]Encyclopedia page[/url] says they have the breeding cooldown of 20 days. One of these is wrong.
The tooltip of Breed Change: Aberration and Clanbound Breed Change: Aberration says "Aberration dragons are an ancient breed with a 25-day breeding cooldown." while their Encyclopedia page says they have the breeding cooldown of 20 days. One of these is wrong.
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[quote name="Limanya" date="2022-02-15 15:21:24" ]
[quote name="Limanya" date="2021-10-27 06:58:42" ]
[item=Armored Colony]
[quote]A symbiotic creature from whom the fungi benefit from being nurtured by different soil every evening, while the mammal benefits from a poisonous hide.[/quote]
not so much a typo as the description being grammatically dubious and difficult to parse. a possible fix:
[quote]A symbiotic creature: the fungi benefit from being nurtured by different soil every evening, while the mammal benefits from a poisonous hide.[/quote]
this is a fairly simple fix but there's probably a lot more that can done for clarity
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[item=Fungal Garden]
[quote]A carefully cultivated assortment of fungi may help this creature to attract a mate, or it may gather them purely for its own enjoyment.[/quote]
i don't think the fungi likes to gather mates...? similar grammatical issues, a possible fix would be:
[quote]This creature's carefully cultivated assortment of fungi may help it attract a mate, though it is also known to gather mushrooms purely for its own enjoyment.[/quote]
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[item=Vilevenom Kelpie]
[quote]It's poisonous, not venomous. Petition to rename "Poisonparty Kelpie".[/quote]
should be
[quote]It's poisonous, not venomous. Petition to rename [b]it to[/b] "Poisonparty Kelpie".[/quote]
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[item=Ink Ant]
[quote]Dispatching an ink ant is a messy proposition: Don't wear your finest.[/quote]
should be
[quote]Dispatching an ink ant is a messy proposition: [b]d[/b]on't wear your finest.[/quote]
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also a lot of issues with inconsistent capitalization in the lore stories, here's a few i could find
https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=99
[quote]Leifa solemnly accepted the small basket from the previous Nature ambassador, holding The First Seed with trembling claws. To her side, Yugona did the same for the Final Infection.[/quote]
should be
[quote]Leifa solemnly accepted the small basket from the previous Nature ambassador, holding [b]t[/b]he First Seed with trembling claws. To her side, Yugona did the same for the Final Infection.[/quote]
[b]nearly all other instances of "the First Seed" also have "The" incorrectly capitalized[/b], i won't be quoting them all here for length's sake but a ctrl+f will find them for you
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[quote]The largest, an imposing Imperial, turned around, a wicked marrowmask sitting atop his long snout. "Ambassador, The Boneyard is dangerous at night. We've strict orders you're not to leave the quar- ...the embassy unless the sun is out and you're accompanied," he growled.
[/quote]
should be
[quote]The largest, an imposing Imperial, turned around, a wicked marrowmask sitting atop his long snout. "Ambassador, [b]t[/b]he Boneyard is dangerous at night. We've strict orders you're not to leave the quar[b]—[/b] ...the embassy unless the sun is out and you're accompanied," he growled.
[/quote]
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[quote]“Ambassador, The Boneyard is dangerous at night. I’ve told you this before,” Garote rumbled.[/quote]
should be
[quote]“Ambassador, [b]t[/b]he Boneyard is dangerous at night. I’ve told you this before,” Garote rumbled.
[/quote]
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[quote]Her interactions with Garote were a welcome respite from her nightmares, but she couldn’t avoid sleep forever. Each night The Behemoth cried out for her to heal it as the Viridian Labyrinth died around her.[/quote]
should be
[quote]Her interactions with Garote were a welcome respite from her nightmares, but she couldn’t avoid sleep forever. Each night [b]t[/b]he Behemoth cried out for her to heal it as the Viridian Labyrinth died around her.[/quote]
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[quote]Her throat was parched. She was unbearably hot; no one had told her The Plaguelands would be so hot. “No. The Behemoth is fine, this is all a dream.”
[/quote]
should be
[quote]Her throat was parched. She was unbearably hot; no one had told her [b]t[/b]he Plaguelands would be so hot. “No. The Behemoth is fine, this is all a dream.”[/quote]
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[quote][i]There![/i] The emerald glow of The First Seed![/quote]
should be
[quote][i]There! The emerald glow of [b]t[/b]he First Seed![/i][/quote]
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[quote]Her eyes shone with an emerald light; vines proliferated all along her flanks, originating from a single place - The First Seed, now fused to the druid’s chest.[/quote]
should be
[quote]Her eyes shone with an emerald light; vines proliferated all along her flanks, originating from a single place [b]—[/b] [b]t[/b]he First Seed, now fused to the druid’s chest.[/quote]
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[quote]“Almon, we must go to The Behemoth. I’ve managed to stop the attack but I can’t contain this power for long. If I die, it will be unleashed upon the land and all who dwell here. I may not survive -but The Behemoth, the great tree...bring us to the Behemoth, where this may be contained.”[/quote]
should be
[quote]“Almon, we must go to [b]t[/b]he Behemoth. I’ve managed to stop the attack but I can’t contain this power for long. If I die, it will be unleashed upon the land and all who dwell here. I may not survive [b]—[/b] but [b]t[/b]he Behemoth, the great tree... bring us to the Behemoth, where this may be contained.”[/quote]
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https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=107
[quote]“Fall back! Fall back!” a gaoler cried, stumbling over his fallen comrades, his horns burning and his thick coat charred away. “Fall ba—“[/quote]
should be
[quote]“Fall back! Fall back!” a [b]G[/b]aoler cried, stumbling over his fallen comrades, his horns burning and his thick coat charred away. “Fall ba—“[/quote]
(since it doesn't seem like this dragon is guarding any jails at the moment)
the rest of this story also has [b]breed names incorrectly uncapitalized[/b]
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https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=105
on the encyclopedia Bounty of the Elements page, the [item=Dormant Obelisk Statue] is meant to link to the obelisk story but can't properly be clicked on
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https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=98
for length's sake i won't add all instances of this happening, but nearly all instances i could find of [b]breed names are incorrectly uncapitalized[/b]
[quote]Just below the writhing spiral, Flick let out a whoop, “SHOCK SWIIIIIITCH!”[/quote]
should be
[quote]Just below the writhing [b]S[/b]piral, Flick let out a whoop[b]:[/b] “SHOCK SWIIIIIITCH!”[/quote]
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[quote]“I wouldn’t be so sure about that. Look at Flick here-”[/quote]
should be
[quote]“I wouldn’t be so sure about that. Look at Flick here[b]—[/b]”[/quote]
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[quote]Craklinne wasn’t one to give them compliments - ever.[/quote]
should be
[quote]Craklinne wasn’t one to give them compliments [b]—[/b] ever.[/quote]
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https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=97
similar problem with [b]uncapitalized breed names[/b]
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https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=96
again [b]breed names are uncapitalized[/b]. more recent stories have breed names capitalized, hence why i consider this an error, but this is a problem that appears throughout many of the original Bounty of the Elements stories (though not all)
[quote]Sullenly following his mother, Umbrann trudged down the path to the Thorndark Alter[/quote]
should be
[quote]Sullenly following his mother, Umbrann trudged down the path to the Thorndark Alt[b]a[/b]r[/quote]
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https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=94
same problem with [b]uncapitalized breed names[/b]
[quote]“Aye, and terrifyin’,” he replied. “We should move back-”[/quote]
should be
[quote]“Aye, and terrifyin’,” he replied. “We should move back[b]—[/b]”[/quote]
[b]the use of hyphens where there should be em dashes[/b] (—) is also a problem that occurs very frequently in a lot of these stories, so again i'd recommend a ctrl+f search to find them all since i don't want to make this post endlessly long and no doubt miss a lot anyway.
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https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=95
same issues as above - uncapitalized breed names, hyphens instead of em dashes
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https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=93
same issues as above - uncapitalized breed names, hyphens instead of em dashes
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https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=92
same issues as above - uncapitalized breed names, hyphens instead of em dashes. the word "beastclan" is also uncapitalized (whereas it was capitalized in the recent Warrior's Way story).
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[skin=42011] is named [b]Glass Explosion[/b]; the [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/forums/skin/3064256/18#post_49307685]original submission[/url] was named [b]Glass Exposition[/b]. i have no way of knowing if this change was intentional so i thought i'd bring this up in case it was a mistake?
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[item=Hazel Harvest Celebration]
[quote]May contain the hazel bracelet, goblet, wreath, robe, sandals, tail twist, and vines. Will provide TWO random items.[/quote]
"Hazel" is not capitalized in the description, unlike the other bundles where the color variants are capitalized.
all harvest bundles also do not have the item names capitalized; compare [item=Warden's Spoils] which does have capitalization for everything.
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[item=Courageous Warhorse]
[quote]Its name is "Courage: the courageous warhorse".[/quote]
quotation marks seem unnecessary?
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[item=Abyss Vulture]
[quote]Abyss vultures scavenge carrion off the seabed. They are not picky eaters. Today you eat Abyss vulture, years from now Abyss vulture eats you...[/quote]
either "Abyss" needs to be uncapitalized or "vulture" needs to be capitalized
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[item=Pale Smallmouth]
[quote]These fish are unable to tolerate water touched by plaguebringer's brood. Their presence is a good indication if the water is safe to drink.[/quote]
"plaguebringer" needs to be capitalized
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[item=Dark Harvest Goblet]
[quote]A goblet of grape vineyards to celebrates a bountiful harvest![/quote]
same error across all recolors
"to celebrates" should be "that celebrates" or "to celebrate". "a goblet of grape vineyards" also doesn't make much sense; at the very least "grape" should go since 'vineyard' already implies grapes. but it also sounds like the goblets contain vineyards.
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[item=Copper Harvest Wreath]
same error across all recolors
[quote]A crown of grapes celebrate a bountiful harvest![/quote]
needs to be "celebrates" or to "celebrate"
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[item=Plasma Mask]
[quote]An ...attempt at protective wear.[/quote]
should be
[quote]An... attempt at protective wear.[/quote]
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[item=Lovebirds Dried Tea]
[quote]Being able to offer a wide variety of fresh, delicious tea will help to make one valuable to a wide variety of palettes.[/quote]
"palates", not "palettes"
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[item=Current Caller Raiment]
[item=Cinnabar Plaguebringer]
at this point i have no idea if "flight" (as in "water flight", "plague flight") is meant to be capitalized - it isn't in the current caller raiment's description, but it is in the descriptions of all the deity statues. should be made consistent either way.
[/quote]
one of tomo's questions:
[quote]Which of the following is a food item indigenous to [b]T[/b]he Southern Icefield?[/quote]
also has incorrect capitalization on the word "the"
[/quote]
the [url=https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=115]new lore story[/url] has a couple of errors:
inconsistent breed name capitalization
[quote][b]The mirror dragon and his spiral companion[/b] had been assigned by Warchief Morix[/quote]
[quote]The[b] Spiral[/b] shot upright and into the air, her eyes wide with shock.[/quote]
'patrol' needs to be uncapitalized
[quote]This is an order from the Warchief himself, Scout Cariane: [b]P[/b]atrol the Rim, report back anything suspicious.[/quote]
nature needs to be capitalized
[quote]“NononononoNO! That horrid [b]nature[/b] seed didn’t get this far!” [/quote]
missing a 'the'
[quote]He caught Mirror with his body in mid-air.[/quote]
Limanya wrote on 2022-02-15 15:21:24:
Limanya wrote on 2021-10-27 06:58:42:
Quote:
A symbiotic creature from whom the fungi benefit from being nurtured by different soil every evening, while the mammal benefits from a poisonous hide.
Quote:
A symbiotic creature: the fungi benefit from being nurtured by different soil every evening, while the mammal benefits from a poisonous hide.
Quote:
A carefully cultivated assortment of fungi may help this creature to attract a mate, or it may gather them purely for its own enjoyment.
Quote:
This creature's carefully cultivated assortment of fungi may help it attract a mate, though it is also known to gather mushrooms purely for its own enjoyment.
Quote:
It's poisonous, not venomous. Petition to rename "Poisonparty Kelpie".
Quote:
It's poisonous, not venomous. Petition to rename it to "Poisonparty Kelpie".
Quote:
Dispatching an ink ant is a messy proposition: Don't wear your finest.
Quote:
Dispatching an ink ant is a messy proposition: don't wear your finest.
also a lot of issues with inconsistent capitalization in the lore stories, here's a few i could find
https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=99
Quote:
Leifa solemnly accepted the small basket from the previous Nature ambassador, holding The First Seed with trembling claws. To her side, Yugona did the same for the Final Infection.
Quote:
Leifa solemnly accepted the small basket from the previous Nature ambassador, holding the First Seed with trembling claws. To her side, Yugona did the same for the Final Infection.
Quote:
The largest, an imposing Imperial, turned around, a wicked marrowmask sitting atop his long snout. "Ambassador, The Boneyard is dangerous at night. We've strict orders you're not to leave the quar- ...the embassy unless the sun is out and you're accompanied," he growled.
Quote:
The largest, an imposing Imperial, turned around, a wicked marrowmask sitting atop his long snout. "Ambassador, the Boneyard is dangerous at night. We've strict orders you're not to leave the quar— ...the embassy unless the sun is out and you're accompanied," he growled.
Quote:
“Ambassador, The Boneyard is dangerous at night. I’ve told you this before,” Garote rumbled.
Quote:
“Ambassador, the Boneyard is dangerous at night. I’ve told you this before,” Garote rumbled.
Quote:
Her interactions with Garote were a welcome respite from her nightmares, but she couldn’t avoid sleep forever. Each night The Behemoth cried out for her to heal it as the Viridian Labyrinth died around her.
Quote:
Her interactions with Garote were a welcome respite from her nightmares, but she couldn’t avoid sleep forever. Each night the Behemoth cried out for her to heal it as the Viridian Labyrinth died around her.
Quote:
Her throat was parched. She was unbearably hot; no one had told her The Plaguelands would be so hot. “No. The Behemoth is fine, this is all a dream.”
Quote:
Her throat was parched. She was unbearably hot; no one had told her the Plaguelands would be so hot. “No. The Behemoth is fine, this is all a dream.”
Quote:
There! The emerald glow of The First Seed!
Quote:
There! The emerald glow of the First Seed!
Quote:
Her eyes shone with an emerald light; vines proliferated all along her flanks, originating from a single place - The First Seed, now fused to the druid’s chest.
Quote:
Her eyes shone with an emerald light; vines proliferated all along her flanks, originating from a single place — the First Seed, now fused to the druid’s chest.
Quote:
“Almon, we must go to The Behemoth. I’ve managed to stop the attack but I can’t contain this power for long. If I die, it will be unleashed upon the land and all who dwell here. I may not survive -but The Behemoth, the great tree...bring us to the Behemoth, where this may be contained.”
Quote:
“Almon, we must go to the Behemoth. I’ve managed to stop the attack but I can’t contain this power for long. If I die, it will be unleashed upon the land and all who dwell here. I may not survive — but the Behemoth, the great tree... bring us to the Behemoth, where this may be contained.”
https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=107
Quote:
“Fall back! Fall back!” a gaoler cried, stumbling over his fallen comrades, his horns burning and his thick coat charred away. “Fall ba—“
Quote:
“Fall back! Fall back!” a Gaoler cried, stumbling over his fallen comrades, his horns burning and his thick coat charred away. “Fall ba—“
the rest of this story also has breed names incorrectly uncapitalized
https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=105
on the encyclopedia Bounty of the Elements page, the is meant to link to the obelisk story but can't properly be clicked on
https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=98
for length's sake i won't add all instances of this happening, but nearly all instances i could find of breed names are incorrectly uncapitalized
Quote:
Just below the writhing spiral, Flick let out a whoop, “SHOCK SWIIIIIITCH!”
Quote:
Just below the writhing Spiral, Flick let out a whoop: “SHOCK SWIIIIIITCH!”
Quote:
“I wouldn’t be so sure about that. Look at Flick here-”
Quote:
“I wouldn’t be so sure about that. Look at Flick here—”
Quote:
Craklinne wasn’t one to give them compliments - ever.
Quote:
Craklinne wasn’t one to give them compliments — ever.
https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=97
similar problem with uncapitalized breed names
https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=96
again breed names are uncapitalized. more recent stories have breed names capitalized, hence why i consider this an error, but this is a problem that appears throughout many of the original Bounty of the Elements stories (though not all)
Quote:
Sullenly following his mother, Umbrann trudged down the path to the Thorndark Alter
Quote:
Sullenly following his mother, Umbrann trudged down the path to the Thorndark Altar
https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=94
same problem with uncapitalized breed names
Quote:
“Aye, and terrifyin’,” he replied. “We should move back-”
Quote:
“Aye, and terrifyin’,” he replied. “We should move back—”
https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=95
same issues as above - uncapitalized breed names, hyphens instead of em dashes
https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=93
same issues as above - uncapitalized breed names, hyphens instead of em dashes
https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=wiki&article=92
same issues as above - uncapitalized breed names, hyphens instead of em dashes. the word "beastclan" is also uncapitalized (whereas it was capitalized in the recent Warrior's Way story).
is named Glass Explosion; the original submission was named Glass Exposition. i have no way of knowing if this change was intentional so i thought i'd bring this up in case it was a mistake?
Quote:
May contain the hazel bracelet, goblet, wreath, robe, sandals, tail twist, and vines. Will provide TWO random items.
all harvest bundles also do not have the item names capitalized; compare which does have capitalization for everything.
Quote:
Its name is "Courage: the courageous warhorse".
Quote:
Abyss vultures scavenge carrion off the seabed. They are not picky eaters. Today you eat Abyss vulture, years from now Abyss vulture eats you...
Quote:
These fish are unable to tolerate water touched by plaguebringer's brood. Their presence is a good indication if the water is safe to drink.
Quote:
A goblet of grape vineyards to celebrates a bountiful harvest!
"to celebrates" should be "that celebrates" or "to celebrate". "a goblet of grape vineyards" also doesn't make much sense; at the very least "grape" should go since 'vineyard' already implies grapes. but it also sounds like the goblets contain vineyards.
same error across all recolors
Quote:
A crown of grapes celebrate a bountiful harvest!
Quote:
An ...attempt at protective wear.
Quote:
An... attempt at protective wear.
Quote:
Being able to offer a wide variety of fresh, delicious tea will help to make one valuable to a wide variety of palettes.
at this point i have no idea if "flight" (as in "water flight", "plague flight") is meant to be capitalized - it isn't in the current caller raiment's description, but it is in the descriptions of all the deity statues. should be made consistent either way.
one of tomo's questions:
Quote:
Which of the following is a food item indigenous to The Southern Icefield?
the new lore story has a couple of errors:
inconsistent breed name capitalization
Quote:
The mirror dragon and his spiral companion had been assigned by Warchief Morix
Quote:
The Spiral shot upright and into the air, her eyes wide with shock.
'patrol' needs to be uncapitalized
Quote:
This is an order from the Warchief himself, Scout Cariane: Patrol the Rim, report back anything suspicious.
nature needs to be capitalized
Quote:
“NononononoNO! That horrid nature seed didn’t get this far!”
missing a 'the'
Quote:
He caught Mirror with his body in mid-air.
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The Aberration Encyclopedia entry has an extra "to".
[quote]Left to their own devices, Aberrations feel that anything that is not directly corrosive or damaging is a fine [color=red]to[/color] place to rest, collapsing together in open-air piles.[/quote]
The Aberration Encyclopedia entry has an extra "to".
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Left to their own devices, Aberrations feel that anything that is not directly corrosive or damaging is a fine to place to rest, collapsing together in open-air piles.
Looking for a White/Silver/Brick G1 with Ice eyes!!!!!
also looking for a Platinum/Dust/Caribbean G1 with Plague eyes
In chronic need of food. Always.
Doing some art for food >w>
also looking for a Platinum/Dust/Caribbean G1 with Plague eyes
In chronic need of food. Always.
Doing some art for food >w>
The breed change aberration says they have a 25 day breeding cooldown when they actually have a 20 day breeding cooldown (forgive me idk how to make it hoverable)
[img]https://www1.flightrising.com/static/cms/trinket/43576.png[/img]
*this also applies to the clanbound version
[img]https://www1.flightrising.com/static/cms/trinket/43577.png[/img]
The breed change aberration says they have a 25 day breeding cooldown when they actually have a 20 day breeding cooldown (forgive me idk how to make it hoverable)
*this also applies to the clanbound version
*this also applies to the clanbound version