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TOPIC | [OPEN] beta/proof readers!
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@withoutbounds
I have read and added comments :) I love your style of writing; most of the issues were grammatical and how you worded some things. I really like the feeling that the story gives off.
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October 20, 2017 21:58:05
@withoutbounds
I have read and added comments :) I love your style of writing; most of the issues were grammatical and how you worded some things. I really like the feeling that the story gives off.
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@CookieMayhem
Thank you! I really appreciate your input and will be sure to take it in mind. It means more to me than you know :)
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October 21, 2017 12:55:19
@CookieMayhem
Thank you! I really appreciate your input and will be sure to take it in mind. It means more to me than you know :)
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@Sciles301
I've made some edits to the first paragraph, which you mentioned was hard to read. If you have the time, could you read over the edits I've made and see if they've fixed the problem? Link

@CookieMayhem
Sorry to bother you again, but I've made some changes to the part you said was hard to read. If you're available, could you read over it and see if I've fixed the issue? It's been highlighted in green here
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October 21, 2017 14:31:07
@Sciles301
I've made some edits to the first paragraph, which you mentioned was hard to read. If you have the time, could you read over the edits I've made and see if they've fixed the problem? Link

@CookieMayhem
Sorry to bother you again, but I've made some changes to the part you said was hard to read. If you're available, could you read over it and see if I've fixed the issue? It's been highlighted in green here
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@withoutbounds

It's much better! And the use of full stops instead of commas gives the whole 'dance' a little more tension, as if we're kind of expecting them to crash into a shelf lol
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October 21, 2017 23:06:09
@withoutbounds

It's much better! And the use of full stops instead of commas gives the whole 'dance' a little more tension, as if we're kind of expecting them to crash into a shelf lol
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@CookieMayhem
That's good to hear :) thanks for getting back to me!
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October 22, 2017 11:20:50
@CookieMayhem
That's good to hear :) thanks for getting back to me!
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@WithoutBounds
Yes, it sounds much better! Sorry for getting back to you so late. I had family issues to deal with yesterday.
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October 23, 2017 08:04:14
@WithoutBounds
Yes, it sounds much better! Sorry for getting back to you so late. I had family issues to deal with yesterday.
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@Sciles301
No, it's fine, real life comes first, I understand that. But thank you! I hope everything's been resolved with your family :)
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October 23, 2017 08:16:05
@Sciles301
No, it's fine, real life comes first, I understand that. But thank you! I hope everything's been resolved with your family :)
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@CookieMayhem @Sciles301 @QueenOuroboros @Gem4567 @Slayborn
Okay, so I'm running a little behind rn, so idk if any of you guys are still on but if anyone is, I'd really appreciate it if you could read over part two, if you could, It'd be even better if you could do it before 23:40 FR time. Anyone who does will receive 20kt, regardless of pay grade. In advance, thank you so much
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October 29, 2017 22:23:07
@CookieMayhem @Sciles301 @QueenOuroboros @Gem4567 @Slayborn
Okay, so I'm running a little behind rn, so idk if any of you guys are still on but if anyone is, I'd really appreciate it if you could read over part two, if you could, It'd be even better if you could do it before 23:40 FR time. Anyone who does will receive 20kt, regardless of pay grade. In advance, thank you so much
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Last edited on Oct 29, 2017 22:50:17 by WithoutBounds
@CookieMayhem @Sciles301 @QueenOuroboros @Gem4567
Deadline has been extended to 22:00 FR time today, at normal pay rates, I'd really appreciate it if you could read over this document

If any of you have already read of it, please tell me
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October 30, 2017 12:36:50
@CookieMayhem @Sciles301 @QueenOuroboros @Gem4567
Deadline has been extended to 22:00 FR time today, at normal pay rates, I'd really appreciate it if you could read over this document

If any of you have already read of it, please tell me
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Last edited on Oct 30, 2017 12:37:17 by WithoutBounds
@WithoutBounds
I have read it over and made suggestions:)
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October 30, 2017 13:13:01
@WithoutBounds
I have read it over and made suggestions:)
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