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TOPIC | you ever write something
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...that makes you go damn, I'm great at writing! even as much as a sentence or paragraph, it just sounds so pleasing to the ear and has such a nice flow that it makes you puff out your chest and strut about like a peacock like yes! I made that!
if you've got anything like this I want to read it! post here please share and be proud!! here's a line that I wrote that I thought was nice to get started:

The room is barely lit, the dim glow of the winter sun pretty much the only thing keeping us from darkness...The rest is just as dull as the light: gray, fading, transient, just waiting for the day to end so it can move elsewhere.

(you dont have to offer praise to mine or anything, especially if you dont think its great. I'm not calling myself a poet laureate or anything, but I'm usually extremely picky and critical with my work and I just thought it was nice)
...that makes you go damn, I'm great at writing! even as much as a sentence or paragraph, it just sounds so pleasing to the ear and has such a nice flow that it makes you puff out your chest and strut about like a peacock like yes! I made that!
if you've got anything like this I want to read it! post here please share and be proud!! here's a line that I wrote that I thought was nice to get started:

The room is barely lit, the dim glow of the winter sun pretty much the only thing keeping us from darkness...The rest is just as dull as the light: gray, fading, transient, just waiting for the day to end so it can move elsewhere.

(you dont have to offer praise to mine or anything, especially if you dont think its great. I'm not calling myself a poet laureate or anything, but I'm usually extremely picky and critical with my work and I just thought it was nice)
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yeah it makes me wanna be a furry
yeah it makes me wanna be a furry
I'm great at doing one liners out of nowhere but I always get lost in a story. Everytime I start writing I get distracted/get bored and start on another thing.
I'm great at doing one liners out of nowhere but I always get lost in a story. Everytime I start writing I get distracted/get bored and start on another thing.
I honestly can't be bothered to glorify this.
Yes! I'm clumsy when it comes to writing so when I spit out something legible, I get an amazing feeling of satisfaction and motivation to keep writing! What you wrote up above has some immersive imagery, I love it [emoji=tundra love size=1] [size=2]I haven't written in a while so I've got nothing to show rn[/size]
Yes! I'm clumsy when it comes to writing so when I spit out something legible, I get an amazing feeling of satisfaction and motivation to keep writing! What you wrote up above has some immersive imagery, I love it

I haven't written in a while so I've got nothing to show rn
[quote name="BirdBagel" date="2020-04-26 18:56:20" ] Yes! I'm clumsy when it comes to writing so when I spit out something legible, I get an amazing feeling of satisfaction and motivation to keep writing! What you wrote up above has some immersive imagery, I love it [emoji=tundra love size=1] [size=2]I haven't written in a while so I've got nothing to show rn[/size] [/quote] oh dont worry I think this line may be from...an actual year ago actually. wow most of what ive written recently was unfinished and I thought it would be In Bad Form to post something undone...I just sort of shuffled through my drive and picked out the first thing that sounded good to me tldr I'm a FRAUD but same I'm VERY clumsy and hyper aware of my own clumsiness one reason of many I havent written is probably how tetchy I get with myself
BirdBagel wrote on 2020-04-26 18:56:20:
Yes! I'm clumsy when it comes to writing so when I spit out something legible, I get an amazing feeling of satisfaction and motivation to keep writing! What you wrote up above has some immersive imagery, I love it

I haven't written in a while so I've got nothing to show rn
oh dont worry I think this line may be from...an actual year ago actually. wow

most of what ive written recently was unfinished and I thought it would be In Bad Form to post something undone...I just sort of shuffled through my drive and picked out the first thing that sounded good to me tldr I'm a FRAUD

but same I'm VERY clumsy and hyper aware of my own clumsiness one reason of many I havent written is probably how tetchy I get with myself
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[quote name="BirdBagel" date="2020-04-26 18:56:20" ] Yes! I'm clumsy when it comes to writing so when I spit out something legible, I get an amazing feeling of satisfaction and motivation to keep writing! What you wrote up above has some immersive imagery, I love it [emoji=tundra love size=1] [size=2]I haven't written in a while so I've got nothing to show rn[/size] [/quote] Yeah I'm critical when it comes to my writing so when I spit out something like that I'm just really happy with myself ^-^
BirdBagel wrote on 2020-04-26 18:56:20:
Yes! I'm clumsy when it comes to writing so when I spit out something legible, I get an amazing feeling of satisfaction and motivation to keep writing! What you wrote up above has some immersive imagery, I love it

I haven't written in a while so I've got nothing to show rn
Yeah I'm critical when it comes to my writing so when I spit out something like that I'm just really happy with myself ^-^
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I LOVE that moment! And it always comes out by accident. XD
I LOVE that moment! And it always comes out by accident. XD
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Yup! It’s awesome!
Or that moment when you come up with the PERFECT detail about your character

Yup! It’s awesome!
Or that moment when you come up with the PERFECT detail about your character

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Yes I do!! Sometimes I hit upon a spark of genius and words just flow onto the page, and I sit there grinning like an idiot because that was good and I wrote that.

"No. I'm not doing this. You're not going to buy me coffee and tell me how beautiful life is and pay for my cab home. I won't let you. I'm not doing that again. It doesn't work and it's not true. Just let me go."

That's from one of my fics on AO3 yes I write fanfiction fight me
Yes I do!! Sometimes I hit upon a spark of genius and words just flow onto the page, and I sit there grinning like an idiot because that was good and I wrote that.

"No. I'm not doing this. You're not going to buy me coffee and tell me how beautiful life is and pay for my cab home. I won't let you. I'm not doing that again. It doesn't work and it's not true. Just let me go."

That's from one of my fics on AO3 yes I write fanfiction fight me
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Yes!! A lot of times i think of a specific line or scene and end up writing a whole lot just so i can get that bit to work somewhere, when it does i feel so dang proud

The ring of gold and jewels that shattered on the ground signaled much more than simply a loss of precious stones, the queen knew her rule was over. She stared at the shards resting in a shallow puddle, glinting in the light of the torch sitting in the sconce on the wall. Fire in it's reflection morphed into the bonfire that would be ablaze in the kingdom above.
"The exit is just up ahead, we've left the city limits." The queens assistant called out to her from farther down the tunnel. Her crown had broke as she left her kingdom, what humor.

Atara left the gold pieces behind with a flick of her cloak and her claws clicked against the stone while she fled much more than just her kingdom.


From one of my dragons' lore, Atara was a false queen who was forced to run away after some kids found out she wasn't actually royalty
Yes!! A lot of times i think of a specific line or scene and end up writing a whole lot just so i can get that bit to work somewhere, when it does i feel so dang proud

The ring of gold and jewels that shattered on the ground signaled much more than simply a loss of precious stones, the queen knew her rule was over. She stared at the shards resting in a shallow puddle, glinting in the light of the torch sitting in the sconce on the wall. Fire in it's reflection morphed into the bonfire that would be ablaze in the kingdom above.
"The exit is just up ahead, we've left the city limits." The queens assistant called out to her from farther down the tunnel. Her crown had broke as she left her kingdom, what humor.

Atara left the gold pieces behind with a flick of her cloak and her claws clicked against the stone while she fled much more than just her kingdom.


From one of my dragons' lore, Atara was a false queen who was forced to run away after some kids found out she wasn't actually royalty

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