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TOPIC | == The Pit == (comic)
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ALSO shoutout to a few ppl who helped with some stuf! ty for watching me fumble around w basic bbcode :'3
my boyfriend- who has never touched a piece of technology ever apparently and could not figure out how to reply to messages <3
@maplemoomin -professional frog enthusiast
@Stuffybear - Spoingus bestie club supreme >:3
@Coincidence - HAT.
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[id: a shot of poles passing by. One pole has a strange eye surrounded by a rocky texture on it, similar to the strange bug on the bus stop. end id]
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[id: Cheeseburger looking out of the bus window looking shocked, and then putting his face up to the window to get a better view. end id]

That pole looked ..funny... what will you do?

>Ask the person behind you if he saw it too
>Go to sleep for the rest of the journey

>Click here to vote!<
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This is an interactive comic type thing- the choices of where the comic will be up to you guys! There are multiple endings, the one you end up with depends directly on these choices- there is no one fixed route that I will force you down regardless of what option you choose. That being said, some choices will also not affect the overall path and will only change small things like dialogue :P
Not every update will involve a choice!

-you don't need to read the whole thing to make a choice on the newest update if you're just stumbling onto this! shake things up a little lmao

-In the forms, please only fill it out once or twice. Dont spam the choice you want to override other people.

-Although I do have time set aside in my schedule specifically for this, I do Not have a set update schedule for uploading! Please bear in mind this is a personal passion project im doing for fun, and i am a college student. If you'd like a ping for new updates tho, just let me know! :)

-Also, There are achievements! They correspond with different paths the story goes down based on choices, and are also unlocked through general progress.

Pinglist for updates!
StorytellerIvy Chimerii Sterlingstars
Abysea QuirkyJunimo Azureus

>Self edit pinglist! :]<

If you wanna be added/removed manually that is all good, just let me know! :3

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This is an interactive comic type thing- the choices of where the comic will be up to you guys! There are multiple endings, the one you end up with depends directly on these choices- there is no one fixed route that I will force you down regardless of what option you choose. That being said, some choices will also not affect the overall path and will only change small things like dialogue :P
Not every update will involve a choice!

-you don't need to read the whole thing to make a choice on the newest update if you're just stumbling onto this! shake things up a little lmao

-In the forms, please only fill it out once or twice. Dont spam the choice you want to override other people.

-Although I do have time set aside in my schedule specifically for this, I do Not have a set update schedule for uploading! Please bear in mind this is a personal passion project im doing for fun, and i am a college student. If you'd like a ping for new updates tho, just let me know! :)

-Also, There are achievements! They correspond with different paths the story goes down based on choices, and are also unlocked through general progress.

Pinglist for updates!
StorytellerIvy Chimerii Sterlingstars
Abysea QuirkyJunimo Azureus

>Self edit pinglist! :]<

If you wanna be added/removed manually that is all good, just let me know! :3

back to home
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[b](archive copy)[/b] [img]https://i.ibb.co/183YCpm/9-DEE6902-3-A19-41-DA-94-A7-61338-D980-F7-C.png[/img][i][size=1][id: two men in suits sit in a talk show setting. Bob, on the right is talking as Isaac, on the right is silent. end id][text: Bob-Welcome! we're live in studio with IBAC CEO Isaac Shrewe. Lets talk about the recent Jumpgate incident. End text.] [img]https://i.ibb.co/ZBNZjF5/DF81001-F-F0-B3-44-DE-B085-879-BADA54238.png[/img] [i][id: the same image, but now Isaac is talking as Bob is silent. end id.][text: Isaac-Hi, Bob. Its great to be here. Lets talk Jumpgates. end text.] [img]https://i.ibb.co/G0ZGG5y/5-FBA9-F67-6196-466-A-BB7-B-80-BC20-E58019.png[/img] [i][id:the same background and Isaac has the same expression, but Bob now has a slightly concerned look on his face as he talks. end id][text:Bob-There's been some... discussion about the overall safety of jumpgates. This is the third major malfunction since they were launched only a couple of years ago. end text.] [img]https://i.ibb.co/VMx8V9R/3-E9-F0506-33-E0-4635-B401-A5-E59-DEFF4-A7.png[/img] [i][id: The background and Bob's expression are the same, but Isaac now has an annoyed expression as he talks. end id][text: Isaac-Ok, Bob, but theres so much misinformation out there right now which hurts us as a business. end text.] [img]https://i.ibb.co/ZhD8kPw/E9-C238-F6-7-C11-494-F-9-BBA-A4-BD6-A100151.png[/img] [i][id: The background is now of a stranger's apartment. There's minimal furniture, with a TV on the floor and a stranger obscuring the rest of the furniture for now. The wallpaper is peeling and there is a poster pn the wall of a cat punching the air with the word HIT above it. The stranger is fiddling with an earpiece and walkie-talkie device, and is wearing an orange worker's uniform with fluorescent strips on the chest. Isaac's text box continues over the screen as he talks. end id.][text: Isaac- Firstly, the cleanup crew handling the aftermath are wonderful. Legally I cannot call them professional but ever since we launched our 'Coupon Survival Bonus' program they have been particularly motivated. End text.] [img]https://i.ibb.co/qMvjTF1/F4897-B2-E-2-E96-4-C78-B9-F8-16763-A60-ADFF.png[/img] [i][id: a wide-shot of a large, smooth curved piece of machinery which has spots of rust and is withering in places in front of an ambiguous background with lumpy terrain and phone poles. end id][text: isaac- I mean c'mon people, gates are the safest way to travel. You're more likely to be stabbed by a shark on a bus than you are to be in a Jumpgate accident. end text.] [img]https://i.ibb.co/KK0CyCm/515243-C3-9041-4-BAF-9-BDD-2-FDD70-A4-B73-E.png[/img] [i][id: A stranger in the same orange uniform as the stranger from the apartment in a room. The left of the room is full of various machinery, vaguely resembling computer routers and tape recorders. The right of the room leads off into a couch but is obscured partially by the stranger. The stranger's face is obscured by shadow and is rummaging with something in their coat. end id][text: Isaac- And regardless, there was no way we could of possibly prevented this. Bob, does your car have a safety measure protecting it from someone throwing a tiger with a gun into its engine? End text.] [img]https://i.ibb.co/WDbbtnR/93-D22243-6-FA2-46-A2-81-FE-81-AD84-F9-BCAF.png[/img] [i][Id: In the talk show setting once again, Bob and Isaac still looking concerned and annoyed. End id][text: Bob- U-uh, I don't believe it does. end text.] [img]https://i.ibb.co/0JFM30k/2-BB5857-A-36-A4-49-B9-BC65-09-A34211-A51-A.png[/img] [i][Id: The same shot as before, now with Isaac speaking again. End id.][text: Isaac- Well, there we go. Folks, Jumpgates are safe. end text.] [img]https://i.ibb.co/cyrmyWx/0-A00-A918-1725-4-D11-8063-0-F107626-FF3-C.gif[/img] [i][Id: A shot of a city with Isaac's text box over it. end id][text: isaac- I can assure you, there is nothing to worry about. end text] [img]https://i.ibb.co/GtM7bnQ/FE745-CC9-4-A80-4-D33-88-F3-065-B74504-C07.png[/img] [i][Id: The screen fades from black to the apartment scene from before, this time with no text box or person obscuring it. There is a messy mattress on the floor as a bed, next to the TV which has a red beanbag near it. There is a couple of loose pieces of litter on the floor, and a phone is charging. end id.] ------ You've taken up a job at IBAC industries to help clean up the site of the recent Jumpgate accident. You've got a little while until your first shift begins. What will you do? >Stay at home for now. |[i]or[/i]| >Hang out at the station until your bus comes. ------- [url=https://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/3050041/2#post_48785310]next>[/url]
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9-DEE6902-3-A19-41-DA-94-A7-61338-D980-F7-C.png[id: two men in suits sit in a talk show setting. Bob, on the right is talking as Isaac, on the right is silent. end id][text: Bob-Welcome! we're live in studio with IBAC CEO Isaac Shrewe. Lets talk about the recent Jumpgate incident. End text.] DF81001-F-F0-B3-44-DE-B085-879-BADA54238.png [id: the same image, but now Isaac is talking as Bob is silent. end id.][text: Isaac-Hi, Bob. Its great to be here. Lets talk Jumpgates. end text.] 5-FBA9-F67-6196-466-A-BB7-B-80-BC20-E58019.png [id:the same background and Isaac has the same expression, but Bob now has a slightly concerned look on his face as he talks. end id][text:Bob-There's been some... discussion about the overall safety of jumpgates. This is the third major malfunction since they were launched only a couple of years ago. end text.] 3-E9-F0506-33-E0-4635-B401-A5-E59-DEFF4-A7.png [id: The background and Bob's expression are the same, but Isaac now has an annoyed expression as he talks. end id][text: Isaac-Ok, Bob, but theres so much misinformation out there right now which hurts us as a business. end text.] E9-C238-F6-7-C11-494-F-9-BBA-A4-BD6-A100151.png [id: The background is now of a stranger's apartment. There's minimal furniture, with a TV on the floor and a stranger obscuring the rest of the furniture for now. The wallpaper is peeling and there is a poster pn the wall of a cat punching the air with the word HIT above it. The stranger is fiddling with an earpiece and walkie-talkie device, and is wearing an orange worker's uniform with fluorescent strips on the chest. Isaac's text box continues over the screen as he talks. end id.][text: Isaac- Firstly, the cleanup crew handling the aftermath are wonderful. Legally I cannot call them professional but ever since we launched our 'Coupon Survival Bonus' program they have been particularly motivated. End text.] F4897-B2-E-2-E96-4-C78-B9-F8-16763-A60-ADFF.png [id: a wide-shot of a large, smooth curved piece of machinery which has spots of rust and is withering in places in front of an ambiguous background with lumpy terrain and phone poles. end id][text: isaac- I mean c'mon people, gates are the safest way to travel. You're more likely to be stabbed by a shark on a bus than you are to be in a Jumpgate accident. end text.] 515243-C3-9041-4-BAF-9-BDD-2-FDD70-A4-B73-E.png [id: A stranger in the same orange uniform as the stranger from the apartment in a room. The left of the room is full of various machinery, vaguely resembling computer routers and tape recorders. The right of the room leads off into a couch but is obscured partially by the stranger. The stranger's face is obscured by shadow and is rummaging with something in their coat. end id][text: Isaac- And regardless, there was no way we could of possibly prevented this. Bob, does your car have a safety measure protecting it from someone throwing a tiger with a gun into its engine? End text.] 93-D22243-6-FA2-46-A2-81-FE-81-AD84-F9-BCAF.png [Id: In the talk show setting once again, Bob and Isaac still looking concerned and annoyed. End id][text: Bob- U-uh, I don't believe it does. end text.] 2-BB5857-A-36-A4-49-B9-BC65-09-A34211-A51-A.png [Id: The same shot as before, now with Isaac speaking again. End id.][text: Isaac- Well, there we go. Folks, Jumpgates are safe. end text.] 0-A00-A918-1725-4-D11-8063-0-F107626-FF3-C.gif [Id: A shot of a city with Isaac's text box over it. end id][text: isaac- I can assure you, there is nothing to worry about. end text] FE745-CC9-4-A80-4-D33-88-F3-065-B74504-C07.png [Id: The screen fades from black to the apartment scene from before, this time with no text box or person obscuring it. There is a messy mattress on the floor as a bed, next to the TV which has a red beanbag near it. There is a couple of loose pieces of litter on the floor, and a phone is charging. end id.]
You've taken up a job at IBAC industries to help clean up the site of the recent Jumpgate accident. You've got a little while until your first shift begins. What will you do? >Stay at home for now. |or| >Hang out at the station until your bus comes.
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>Hang out at the station until your bus comes.
>Hang out at the station until your bus comes.

One day, will these too become but distant memories?
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Yes, in the blink of an eye.

@x0blivi0nx
Oh wow >:0
This looks heckin cool

>>Hang out at the station until your bus comes.
@x0blivi0nx
Oh wow >:0
This looks heckin cool

>>Hang out at the station until your bus comes.
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> Sterling/Star
> Fine with any pronouns/neopronouns
> I simply vibe
^v^
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This is insanely well made! If u got a ping list to notify for updates, do add me.

>Stay at home for now
This is insanely well made! If u got a ping list to notify for updates, do add me.

>Stay at home for now
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@StorytellerIvy aa ty!! ;w; and i had actually forgotten to put that anywhere lol so thanks for reminding me! added you just now :]
@StorytellerIvy aa ty!! ;w; and i had actually forgotten to put that anywhere lol so thanks for reminding me! added you just now :]
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