As the title said,
I'm going to write a poem for 3 people! Edit: I've decided I really like writing these and it doesn't take too long for me to write them, so i'll keep this open! I'd appreciate feedback, but it's not required!
Example 1:
Is your secret hidden
Away from prying eyes?
It won’t be for much longer
Though you can certainly try.
What do you own?
Your untold feelings?
They’re mine now
Your mind’s reeling
But none of this happened
You don’t know what prizes I reap
Because I never told you that
Your secret’s now mine to keep.
Example 2:
Secret hidden away from view?
You were lucky to have ever knew
That it won’t be for much longer
Even if the lock was stronger
For hidden thoughts are not for you
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As the title said,
I'm going to write a poem for 3 people! Edit: I've decided I really like writing these and it doesn't take too long for me to write them, so i'll keep this open! I'd appreciate feedback, but it's not required!
Example 1:
Is your secret hidden
Away from prying eyes?
It won’t be for much longer
Though you can certainly try.
What do you own?
Your untold feelings?
They’re mine now
Your mind’s reeling
But none of this happened
You don’t know what prizes I reap
Because I never told you that
Your secret’s now mine to keep.
Example 2:
Secret hidden away from view?
You were lucky to have ever knew
That it won’t be for much longer
Even if the lock was stronger
For hidden thoughts are not for you
Slots:
1. SilentWinter91
2. Twilightstar123
3. TheAquaWaves
Form (It's here for a reason, please use it!)
Quote:
Dragon:
Notes/Lore:
Feedback (If any):
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Notes/Lore: He doesn't have a lot of lore yet, but I think you can get a general idea of who he is w/ his personality for now
Feedback: Your poems are very good! I like how they rhyme and give a vivid picture of what's described :)
Dragon:
Notes/Lore: He doesn't have a lot of lore yet, but I think you can get a general idea of who he is w/ his personality for now
Feedback: Your poems are very good! I like how they rhyme and give a vivid picture of what's described :)
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Mistyleaf123
I've decided I'll make 1 limerick and 1 normal poem for each person, here's your boy's poems, hope you like them!
You wish you caught me earlier
Though it wouldn’t do a thing
There is never evidence
That I took a little bling~
Plan your smart moves,
It won’t ever matter
All that’s left of your gold
Is a clink and a clatter
But how do you know
If this really is true?
You can’t catch me
If I'm with my crew!
I can’t be caught bound in chains
Not when I have this many brains!
Rules should be bent, if not broken
That itself is a rule unspoken
I know that freedom never wanes!
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Mistyleaf123
I've decided I'll make 1 limerick and 1 normal poem for each person, here's your boy's poems, hope you like them!
You wish you caught me earlier
Though it wouldn’t do a thing
There is never evidence
That I took a little bling~
Plan your smart moves,
It won’t ever matter
All that’s left of your gold
Is a clink and a clatter
But how do you know
If this really is true?
You can’t catch me
If I'm with my crew!
I can’t be caught bound in chains
Not when I have this many brains!
Rules should be bent, if not broken
That itself is a rule unspoken
I know that freedom never wanes!
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that made me laugh- you caught his personality so well! Thank you~
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Azulops
that made me laugh- you caught his personality so well! Thank you~
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No problem! Glad you like it :D
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She needs a poem!
She doesn't have lore but Oleandra is strict and a perfectionist if that helps... oh! She's also very sarcastic!
Some feedback for your poems: Your poems are very nice. I love the imagery that's given, though, I do think you could try to create a stronger beat when you write. Other than that, they are fantastic!
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Azulops
She needs a poem!
She doesn't have lore but Oleandra is strict and a perfectionist if that helps... oh! She's also very sarcastic!
Some feedback for your poems: Your poems are very nice. I love the imagery that's given, though, I do think you could try to create a stronger beat when you write. Other than that, they are fantastic!
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lr21vb Here's your poems! Thank you for the feedback, tried to keep it in mind when writing the poems ^^
Sure, it’s “important”
Listen up!
Move back in line,
Don’t slip up!
You’ll make a mess
So do your thing!
Stop making mistakes
Clean up your wings!
I’d rather ignore you
But it’s for your own good
Even if you’re stupid
Do what you should!
Perfect, now don’t you move!
I guess it could always improve
But you always ruin it every time
That itself should be a crime!
So leave it as is, I approve!
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lr21vb Here's your poems! Thank you for the feedback, tried to keep it in mind when writing the poems ^^
Sure, it’s “important”
Listen up!
Move back in line,
Don’t slip up!
You’ll make a mess
So do your thing!
Stop making mistakes
Clean up your wings!
I’d rather ignore you
But it’s for your own good
Even if you’re stupid
Do what you should!
Perfect, now don’t you move!
I guess it could always improve
But you always ruin it every time
That itself should be a crime!
So leave it as is, I approve!
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@Azulops
I'd love a poem for this spooky evil mage please
[url=https://www1.flightrising.com/dragon/63748052][img]https://www1.flightrising.com/rendern/350/637481/63748052_350.png[/img][/url]
Dragon:
Notes/Lore: He is an evil mage and also a Necromancer
Feedback: I love your poems ^^
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Azulops
I'd love a poem for this spooky evil mage please
Dragon:
Notes/Lore: He is an evil mage and also a Necromancer
Feedback: I love your poems ^^
