This was my first draft for the NotN prompt before I went back through and reread the prompt. This was the branch that told how everyone got ready to go beat up Thana instead of going to defend their own home.
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"Thana..." The elder, Petalmonarch, repeated. "I'm not sure that I recognize
the name. I'm sure Myren could possibly tell us something about this Thana." She calls a livid black Coatl with shining green wings over.
"How could they? Why would they? We never did anything to them!" The
Coatl mutters hurrying over, chancing a glace up at the kite her clan called home. Her temper disappears as she gets closer. "You called, Petal?"
"Yes," Petalmonarch looks up at the kite, then to Myren, "this Nocturne says
the other was taken by Thana. Can you remember anything about a Thana from any of the books you've read?"
Myren winces as she thinks of all the books laid to waste in the mimic's
attack. "I'm not sure," Her eyes dart back and forth as if she were quickly trying to read a manuscript, then they go wide, "Actually, I think I do. I read this book of old Shadow fables a few years ago and, if I remember correctly, Thana was the name of an old Mimic who lived in the Forum of the Obscured Crescent and was employed by the Shadowbinder to maintain the fouled pool in the center of the ruined temple. Legend has it she captures the dragons daring enough to try and clean the pool to try and use its clairvoyant powers, and she basically ingests them and turns them slowly and painfully into the goo she uses to desecrate the pool."
"That sounds about right," Voidsong says, "except that she is very much real,
and you don't see her until it's too late."
The other two dragons (or rather, one; the other dragon, a black Wildclaw, is
pacing and fuming, yelling up at the kite and bristling) that had been tending to Nightsong came over and start tending to Voidsong (well, the other dark green Coatl does, the Wildclaw continues ranting up at the kite).
"Alright, hold still. What hurts?" The green Coatl asks Voidsong.
"U-uh, just a couple of bumps, nothing to be that worried about. I'll live." Voidsong stutters as his sister limps over, smiling to assure him that she was okay. The green Coatl wrapped in a thick leaf garb laughs and pulls out some salves in her pouch.
"You're funny, I like you. But now's not the time. Now, where does it hurt? Or
I'm going to have to start poking you until you yelp." She fires back.
"Seriously, I'm fine, don't worry about me." Voidsong answers as he feels a
pang in his wing. The green Coatl huffs a defeated sigh and looks at Myren.
"You mind?" She asks, gesturing to Voidsong.
Myren cracks her knuckles and smiles. "Not at all." She cups her hands
and focuses until they start to glow slightly. Then she slams one hand into Voidsong's chest and he feels all his pain disappear.
"There," Myren says, offering her hand to help him up. "A spell I learned from
a book in the library. It's excellent for fixing up scrapes and bumps without actually have to know where they are."
"What's your name, stranger?" Petalmonarch asks Voidsong. "I'm
Petalmonarch-"
"And I'm Myren," The black Coatl interrupts, helping Voidsong to his feet.
"That's Jumanji, and that black Wildclaw is Noctbloom." She motions to the green Coatl, who smirks evilly, then to the black Wildclaw who was still pacing and flaring her wings.
"Nice to meet you all, I'm Voidsong and this is my sister Nightsong."
Voidsong replies.
"It's nice to meet you! Mind if we call you Void? And you Night? It's just
a little confusing when both your names end in 'song'. Not that that's bad or anything but-" Myren starts, but then Noctbloom interrupts,
"Sorry to break up the party, but shouldn't we get moving? If we don't get
back up there, the kite's gonna fall! And I'm just itching to shred some more mimics." She almost shivers in joy at the thought of mimics crushed in her grasp.
Petalmonarch sighs. "We actually can't, we need to go find their teacher. And
we only have tonight to do it."
"Oh, come ONNN." Noctbloom groans, "You seriously think Archeus can hold
them off without two of his healers and his best fighter?" She motions to Myren and Jumanji when she says 'healers' and to herself when she says 'best fighter'.
Petalmonarch facepalms,
"He'll be fine, his wife is one of the best healers in the clan- no offense," She glances at Jumanji, "And your apprentices Schade and Vanity can tear through mimics as easily as you."
"I hate to interrupt, but shouldn't we be going? Shadowsong won't last the
night in Thana's grasp." Nightsong interrupts.
"Where exactly should we go?" Noctbloom asks, "Thana could be anywhere
by now, and if we have to fly all the way across the continent, your teacher's as good as gone."
Voidsong looks at Myren, "Did your book of fables say anything about her
having a secret lair? And I suppose it's alright if you call us that."
Myren puts her head in her hand and thinks. "I think so? But I can't remember
where." She frowns, but her head plumage fluffs back up as she gets an idea. "But I do remember where the book is, anybody want to guess where?"
"The kite." Nightsong and Noctbloom say simultaneously. Nightsong's face
falls as Noctbloom bristles in anticipation.
"Yup," Myren says. "in my nook near the library's ceiling. Noctbloom and I will
go, you four meet us by the forge in half an hour, if we're not back by then start flying towards the Crescent as fast as you can, it's the best bet we have." Myren jumps into the air and heads back up towards the kite. Noctbloom follows twitching with excitement.
"Well, you heard her. Let's get to the forge." Jumanji says. "Can you fly,
Night? It's not that far, but it would be faster to fly."
"Yeah, I'll be fine, let's go." Nightsong replies stiffly taking off.
- - - - -
"Quick, get inside! Icecap just came with the message and Evroult, Magiere,
and I were just about to head out to go help." Said a black Coatl with bright blue wings as he ushered everyone inside the tall blacksmith building which had a laboratory on the second floor.
"You'd better hurry, I'm not sure how long they'll be able to hold out. Archeus
needs every able dragon he can find. Myren and Noctbloom were with us but they headed back up to the kite to find a book that we need to help find these Nocturnes' teacher who was taken by the mimics." Jumanji says.
"You mean Myren's up there? Is she alright?" The blue-winged Coatl asks, frazzled.
"She was fine, relax Raiden. Her and Noctbloom can take care of themselves."
Petalmonarch answers as a black-and-white Skydancer comes running down the stairs and almosts bumps into Raiden, his alchemy bag full of toxic chemicals almost falling off his shoulder. After him comes a mottled brown and navy Nocturne covered in mechanical components crackling with electricity.
"Come on Raiden, we can't waste much time!" Says the Nocturne, being
careful not to touch anyone or anything with his electrified armor.
"Right, I'm coming. You guys start heading towards the kite." Raiden replies,
strapping on a pair of gloves with sharpened claws on the fingers, but notices one of the pinky claws is missing. He runs over to a white Coatl who seems to be sharpening something and hands the last claw up to Raiden when he sees him coming over. Raiden clicks the last claw into place and runs back towards the door, almost running into Myren and Noctbloom trying to get inside.
"We have the book!" Noctbloom yells, shoving past Myren who catapulted
herself at Raiden to give him a hug. Noctbloom throws the book at Jumanji who leafs through the book until she finds the fable. She reads aloud,
"Once a year, on Nocturne's Night,
Thana emerges to cause a fright;
Startling hatchlings and feeding on fears,
she steals them away to her den of tears;
Turning them slowly to piles of muck,
though they fight to be free they don't have much luck;
For those daring enough to rescue their friends,
she ensures their nightmares never have ends;
Waiting in silence, she crouches and prowls,
taking the shapes of mushrooms and owls;
And then at last when the moon is high,
she feasts upon those who to her castle draw nigh;
The rest of the night she spends working and toiling,
refreshing the pool of which she is soiling;
Dragons and children of Shadow alike,
beware this cursed beast in terror bedight."
"Well that doesn't sound at all terrifying." Noctbloom says when Jumanji finishes. She
looks at the illustration on the other page.
"You said it." Myren says walking over with Raiden. "Check the footnote, I
think that says where her hideout is." Jumanji looks at the bottom of the page and reads aloud:
"To those brave enough to look, you can find Thana's lair in the brambles
fighting for life in the land of ash."
"There's your 'den of tears'." Raiden says. "We need to go, I can't leave
Archeus waiting much longer." He looks at Myren and smiles. "Make sure you come back in one piece." He laughs.
"I will, you just make sure you don't die before I can tell you about our adventure."
Myren smiles back at him and gives him one more tight hug before Raiden hurriedly runs out the door and flies in the direction of the kite with the Skydancer and Nocturne. The white Coatl from earlier jogs over and dumps a bunch of weapons on the ground in front of everyone and hums something to Myren.
"Oh, thank you, Schlamm! We'll definitely put these to good use." She smiles at
him and he nods before jogging back to the furnace work on a dagger. "These are for us," Myren continues. "Schlamm, our blacksmith, got straight to work fixing and sharpening whatever weapons he could find when Icecap, our courier, got here to tell everyone that the mimics attacked. And he did quite a lot in the little time he had." She chuckles, then walks over to a weapon rack by the door and grabs a sword almost as long as her and pulls the sheath over her head so the sword lays across her back. She then walks back to the weapon pile and picks out a shortsword. Petalmonarch picks out a dagger and prays she won't have to use it, Jumanji picks out a rapier, and Noctbloom picks out a pair of butterfly swords, thinking that they could not possibly be sharper than her own claws. Voidsong and Nightsong both pick out longswords and hope they can figure out how to use them.
Noctbloom straightens up and starts walking towards the door. "Well, let's go.
Any of you every been to the Ashfall Waste?"
the name. I'm sure Myren could possibly tell us something about this Thana." She calls a livid black Coatl with shining green wings over.
"How could they? Why would they? We never did anything to them!" The
Coatl mutters hurrying over, chancing a glace up at the kite her clan called home. Her temper disappears as she gets closer. "You called, Petal?"
"Yes," Petalmonarch looks up at the kite, then to Myren, "this Nocturne says
the other was taken by Thana. Can you remember anything about a Thana from any of the books you've read?"
Myren winces as she thinks of all the books laid to waste in the mimic's
attack. "I'm not sure," Her eyes dart back and forth as if she were quickly trying to read a manuscript, then they go wide, "Actually, I think I do. I read this book of old Shadow fables a few years ago and, if I remember correctly, Thana was the name of an old Mimic who lived in the Forum of the Obscured Crescent and was employed by the Shadowbinder to maintain the fouled pool in the center of the ruined temple. Legend has it she captures the dragons daring enough to try and clean the pool to try and use its clairvoyant powers, and she basically ingests them and turns them slowly and painfully into the goo she uses to desecrate the pool."
"That sounds about right," Voidsong says, "except that she is very much real,
and you don't see her until it's too late."
The other two dragons (or rather, one; the other dragon, a black Wildclaw, is
pacing and fuming, yelling up at the kite and bristling) that had been tending to Nightsong came over and start tending to Voidsong (well, the other dark green Coatl does, the Wildclaw continues ranting up at the kite).
"Alright, hold still. What hurts?" The green Coatl asks Voidsong.
"U-uh, just a couple of bumps, nothing to be that worried about. I'll live." Voidsong stutters as his sister limps over, smiling to assure him that she was okay. The green Coatl wrapped in a thick leaf garb laughs and pulls out some salves in her pouch.
"You're funny, I like you. But now's not the time. Now, where does it hurt? Or
I'm going to have to start poking you until you yelp." She fires back.
"Seriously, I'm fine, don't worry about me." Voidsong answers as he feels a
pang in his wing. The green Coatl huffs a defeated sigh and looks at Myren.
"You mind?" She asks, gesturing to Voidsong.
Myren cracks her knuckles and smiles. "Not at all." She cups her hands
and focuses until they start to glow slightly. Then she slams one hand into Voidsong's chest and he feels all his pain disappear.
"There," Myren says, offering her hand to help him up. "A spell I learned from
a book in the library. It's excellent for fixing up scrapes and bumps without actually have to know where they are."
"What's your name, stranger?" Petalmonarch asks Voidsong. "I'm
Petalmonarch-"
"And I'm Myren," The black Coatl interrupts, helping Voidsong to his feet.
"That's Jumanji, and that black Wildclaw is Noctbloom." She motions to the green Coatl, who smirks evilly, then to the black Wildclaw who was still pacing and flaring her wings.
"Nice to meet you all, I'm Voidsong and this is my sister Nightsong."
Voidsong replies.
"It's nice to meet you! Mind if we call you Void? And you Night? It's just
a little confusing when both your names end in 'song'. Not that that's bad or anything but-" Myren starts, but then Noctbloom interrupts,
"Sorry to break up the party, but shouldn't we get moving? If we don't get
back up there, the kite's gonna fall! And I'm just itching to shred some more mimics." She almost shivers in joy at the thought of mimics crushed in her grasp.
Petalmonarch sighs. "We actually can't, we need to go find their teacher. And
we only have tonight to do it."
"Oh, come ONNN." Noctbloom groans, "You seriously think Archeus can hold
them off without two of his healers and his best fighter?" She motions to Myren and Jumanji when she says 'healers' and to herself when she says 'best fighter'.
Petalmonarch facepalms,
"He'll be fine, his wife is one of the best healers in the clan- no offense," She glances at Jumanji, "And your apprentices Schade and Vanity can tear through mimics as easily as you."
"I hate to interrupt, but shouldn't we be going? Shadowsong won't last the
night in Thana's grasp." Nightsong interrupts.
"Where exactly should we go?" Noctbloom asks, "Thana could be anywhere
by now, and if we have to fly all the way across the continent, your teacher's as good as gone."
Voidsong looks at Myren, "Did your book of fables say anything about her
having a secret lair? And I suppose it's alright if you call us that."
Myren puts her head in her hand and thinks. "I think so? But I can't remember
where." She frowns, but her head plumage fluffs back up as she gets an idea. "But I do remember where the book is, anybody want to guess where?"
"The kite." Nightsong and Noctbloom say simultaneously. Nightsong's face
falls as Noctbloom bristles in anticipation.
"Yup," Myren says. "in my nook near the library's ceiling. Noctbloom and I will
go, you four meet us by the forge in half an hour, if we're not back by then start flying towards the Crescent as fast as you can, it's the best bet we have." Myren jumps into the air and heads back up towards the kite. Noctbloom follows twitching with excitement.
"Well, you heard her. Let's get to the forge." Jumanji says. "Can you fly,
Night? It's not that far, but it would be faster to fly."
"Yeah, I'll be fine, let's go." Nightsong replies stiffly taking off.
- - - - -
"Quick, get inside! Icecap just came with the message and Evroult, Magiere,
and I were just about to head out to go help." Said a black Coatl with bright blue wings as he ushered everyone inside the tall blacksmith building which had a laboratory on the second floor.
"You'd better hurry, I'm not sure how long they'll be able to hold out. Archeus
needs every able dragon he can find. Myren and Noctbloom were with us but they headed back up to the kite to find a book that we need to help find these Nocturnes' teacher who was taken by the mimics." Jumanji says.
"You mean Myren's up there? Is she alright?" The blue-winged Coatl asks, frazzled.
"She was fine, relax Raiden. Her and Noctbloom can take care of themselves."
Petalmonarch answers as a black-and-white Skydancer comes running down the stairs and almosts bumps into Raiden, his alchemy bag full of toxic chemicals almost falling off his shoulder. After him comes a mottled brown and navy Nocturne covered in mechanical components crackling with electricity.
"Come on Raiden, we can't waste much time!" Says the Nocturne, being
careful not to touch anyone or anything with his electrified armor.
"Right, I'm coming. You guys start heading towards the kite." Raiden replies,
strapping on a pair of gloves with sharpened claws on the fingers, but notices one of the pinky claws is missing. He runs over to a white Coatl who seems to be sharpening something and hands the last claw up to Raiden when he sees him coming over. Raiden clicks the last claw into place and runs back towards the door, almost running into Myren and Noctbloom trying to get inside.
"We have the book!" Noctbloom yells, shoving past Myren who catapulted
herself at Raiden to give him a hug. Noctbloom throws the book at Jumanji who leafs through the book until she finds the fable. She reads aloud,
"Once a year, on Nocturne's Night,
Thana emerges to cause a fright;
Startling hatchlings and feeding on fears,
she steals them away to her den of tears;
Turning them slowly to piles of muck,
though they fight to be free they don't have much luck;
For those daring enough to rescue their friends,
she ensures their nightmares never have ends;
Waiting in silence, she crouches and prowls,
taking the shapes of mushrooms and owls;
And then at last when the moon is high,
she feasts upon those who to her castle draw nigh;
The rest of the night she spends working and toiling,
refreshing the pool of which she is soiling;
Dragons and children of Shadow alike,
beware this cursed beast in terror bedight."
"Well that doesn't sound at all terrifying." Noctbloom says when Jumanji finishes. She
looks at the illustration on the other page.
"You said it." Myren says walking over with Raiden. "Check the footnote, I
think that says where her hideout is." Jumanji looks at the bottom of the page and reads aloud:
"To those brave enough to look, you can find Thana's lair in the brambles
fighting for life in the land of ash."
"There's your 'den of tears'." Raiden says. "We need to go, I can't leave
Archeus waiting much longer." He looks at Myren and smiles. "Make sure you come back in one piece." He laughs.
"I will, you just make sure you don't die before I can tell you about our adventure."
Myren smiles back at him and gives him one more tight hug before Raiden hurriedly runs out the door and flies in the direction of the kite with the Skydancer and Nocturne. The white Coatl from earlier jogs over and dumps a bunch of weapons on the ground in front of everyone and hums something to Myren.
"Oh, thank you, Schlamm! We'll definitely put these to good use." She smiles at
him and he nods before jogging back to the furnace work on a dagger. "These are for us," Myren continues. "Schlamm, our blacksmith, got straight to work fixing and sharpening whatever weapons he could find when Icecap, our courier, got here to tell everyone that the mimics attacked. And he did quite a lot in the little time he had." She chuckles, then walks over to a weapon rack by the door and grabs a sword almost as long as her and pulls the sheath over her head so the sword lays across her back. She then walks back to the weapon pile and picks out a shortsword. Petalmonarch picks out a dagger and prays she won't have to use it, Jumanji picks out a rapier, and Noctbloom picks out a pair of butterfly swords, thinking that they could not possibly be sharper than her own claws. Voidsong and Nightsong both pick out longswords and hope they can figure out how to use them.
Noctbloom straightens up and starts walking towards the door. "Well, let's go.
Any of you every been to the Ashfall Waste?"