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TOPIC | clan lore [wip, please dont post!]
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a mysterious illness has spread throughout the clan. to cure it they need research... and lots of funds. the more the clan earns, the more resources they can allocate in search of a cure.

three factions:

warriors, entertainers, and tamers

My progens, both devoted to serving the Stormcatcher, worked hard and built a lair for their clan. At some point they basically adopted Debacle, a Light mirror with a somewhat shady past. Debacle is a lazy butt, but mostly well-meaning and truly devoted to his clan.

And then, suddenly, both progens decide that its time for both of them to go off to serve the Stormcatcher directly, leaving Debacle in charge. Debacle, panicking and completely unprepared, with almost no technical skills to fall back on, decides to use the one thing he does have - a large lair at the base of the Tempest Spire.

((ORR maybe he gives tours and cruises on the outer sea?? i really want to incorporate that into the lore, but unsure how - having a hotel seems very cliche, @ myself))

Dragons of all flights seek to serve the Stormcatcher directly for reasons of their own - Debacle simply provides them with room, board, and, eventually, hires other dragons that could offer training to the newcomers so that they could be better suited to serve the deity. ((Basically my in-universe explanation for exalting dragons))

I still need to think through everything and consider all options, but yeah! This is what I have at the moment, and I would, of course, love to hear any suggestions or ideas!! O:


v2:

perhaps debacle is a courteasan/entertainer leader and cadfael is a warlord leader?? HMMM romance and pairing and stuff???? (part of the clan are warriors/engineers for hiring - going out to hunt, protect, and offer their services, the other part stays at home in comfort and safety (and any who wish it make sure to erm, "entertain" the warriors whenever they come home).

@ self: more info in google doc "clan lore"


by boxparts!!
box_galore - Last Friday at 9:02 PM
good lore in format 10/10
also as for your lore What i your progens worked hard and had everything set for a clan. A beginning of a self sufficient lair. ran by robots or grand mechanical architects. However plans cut short as they were called upon their deity and left to the stormcatcher. idk if i read the snippets right but your progens chose Debacle? In one scenario they were already gone and Debacle was the first to make it into the lair. They notice it's abandon but there is so much to utilize . Other dragons that come in assume that all these grand things were then provided by Debacle. Any at some point they realize it was actually your progens but they all sit too comfortably to question the other dragon about it. Now such a lair would probably draw attention but I'd like to think it's a somewhat hidden lair that shows what it needs and to others they view the more "intimidating" dragons //Asphodel, Frost, cadfael (I mean he's a sentinel but tbh I cant find him scary)// a balance is kinda stuck all that technology hidden by what looks alike a small lair of wanderers. None looking like they belong in the same lair.... On the second scenario. With him being chosen and having all said warriors and protectors among such carefree lair is it's not as safe as everyone assumes Your entertainers,seers, and dragons that are living peacefully and content never realized what the progens left behind is something other might want to take maybe the dragons that take to arms/fighting let the majority of your lair kind of live in a bubble(?)
HUGE WARNING I JUST WOKE UP SO THIS MIGHT ME WORD VOMITTING
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a mysterious illness has spread throughout the clan. to cure it they need research... and lots of funds. the more the clan earns, the more resources they can allocate in search of a cure.

three factions:

warriors, entertainers, and tamers

My progens, both devoted to serving the Stormcatcher, worked hard and built a lair for their clan. At some point they basically adopted Debacle, a Light mirror with a somewhat shady past. Debacle is a lazy butt, but mostly well-meaning and truly devoted to his clan.

And then, suddenly, both progens decide that its time for both of them to go off to serve the Stormcatcher directly, leaving Debacle in charge. Debacle, panicking and completely unprepared, with almost no technical skills to fall back on, decides to use the one thing he does have - a large lair at the base of the Tempest Spire.

((ORR maybe he gives tours and cruises on the outer sea?? i really want to incorporate that into the lore, but unsure how - having a hotel seems very cliche, @ myself))

Dragons of all flights seek to serve the Stormcatcher directly for reasons of their own - Debacle simply provides them with room, board, and, eventually, hires other dragons that could offer training to the newcomers so that they could be better suited to serve the deity. ((Basically my in-universe explanation for exalting dragons))

I still need to think through everything and consider all options, but yeah! This is what I have at the moment, and I would, of course, love to hear any suggestions or ideas!! O:


v2:

perhaps debacle is a courteasan/entertainer leader and cadfael is a warlord leader?? HMMM romance and pairing and stuff???? (part of the clan are warriors/engineers for hiring - going out to hunt, protect, and offer their services, the other part stays at home in comfort and safety (and any who wish it make sure to erm, "entertain" the warriors whenever they come home).

@ self: more info in google doc "clan lore"


by boxparts!!
box_galore - Last Friday at 9:02 PM
good lore in format 10/10
also as for your lore What i your progens worked hard and had everything set for a clan. A beginning of a self sufficient lair. ran by robots or grand mechanical architects. However plans cut short as they were called upon their deity and left to the stormcatcher. idk if i read the snippets right but your progens chose Debacle? In one scenario they were already gone and Debacle was the first to make it into the lair. They notice it's abandon but there is so much to utilize . Other dragons that come in assume that all these grand things were then provided by Debacle. Any at some point they realize it was actually your progens but they all sit too comfortably to question the other dragon about it. Now such a lair would probably draw attention but I'd like to think it's a somewhat hidden lair that shows what it needs and to others they view the more "intimidating" dragons //Asphodel, Frost, cadfael (I mean he's a sentinel but tbh I cant find him scary)// a balance is kinda stuck all that technology hidden by what looks alike a small lair of wanderers. None looking like they belong in the same lair.... On the second scenario. With him being chosen and having all said warriors and protectors among such carefree lair is it's not as safe as everyone assumes Your entertainers,seers, and dragons that are living peacefully and content never realized what the progens left behind is something other might want to take maybe the dragons that take to arms/fighting let the majority of your lair kind of live in a bubble(?)
HUGE WARNING I JUST WOKE UP SO THIS MIGHT ME WORD VOMITTING
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latte / wisteria / oilslick
latte / forest/ oilslick
posion / alloy / opal

dragon?age=1&body=100&bodygene=25&breed=11&element=5&eyetype=10&gender=0&tert=94&tertgene=17&winggene=13&wings=108&auth=04916cfe4f124effa1daf1fb5d4a0b8cc68415c0&dummyext=prev.png

spruce / terracotta / [strike](sand, tarnish, ivory?)[/strike] copper

lionfish / butterfly / opal

swirl eyes (thank god)

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copper / maroon / blood

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antique/beige/???
wasp/constellation/???

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smoke / flaxen / (sand)??

python / toxin / capsule
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tarnish/terracotta/spruce
copper/rust/denim
spruce/denim (watermelon-raspberry/orchid)
tapir/bee/stained
steel/spruce/lead or shale
orca/fog/ obsidian or eldritch or midnight
antique/steel/tarnish


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for stained good references:

denim bee/magenta stained
peacock BEE/raspberry stained

metals pinstripe/x/smoke peacock

grapefruit metallic/shadow/blackberry

caramel skin/ copper hypnotic

maize okapi looks really good on soft colors like banana iri

periwinkle poison with abyss okapi!!

steel/sky shimmer with copper thylacine

charcoal paint looks spectacular

a male bog with piebald/glimmer

storm petals/buttefly looks very good with pearl glimmer

midnight/pistachio/pistacio male with ice eyes

wisteria/blackberry/pearl

lavender/midnight/midnight guard m iri/pere/okapi

heather/wine/turquoise ripple/facet/gembond

hunter spinner/skink with nightshade stained

male mirror: samurai helmet + lion headdress + baldwin earrings

perfect facet/glimmer combos:

blood/facet
plum/amethyst
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a breeding challenge where i breed a m mirror that shows off a particular Gene or even Gene combo. some genes just don't work best with mirrors, hmm.
bloodborne themed/inspired mirror with hunter color
crimson capsule
fire capsule
algae jaguar
gloom savannah
honeydew Butterfly/ Coral Capsule
cinnamon opal
spruce poison, clay spinner, bronze capsule
x/copper/cinnamon pair
peacock hypnotic
honeydew/lapis poison/current


dragons that struck me for some reason:
copper/maroon/blood falcon/butterfly/glimmer
tarnish/teracotta savannah/butterfly
avocado capsule
heather butterfly
murk jaguar red facet honeydew runes
Phthalo bee
tarnish wasp or pinstripe/tarnish bee/goldenrod runes
chartreuse gembond
sky scales (and scales in general on m guardians)
orca/midnight/shadow giraffe/shimmer/smirch
Carmine Python/Chartreuse Toxin/Pumpkin Runes and Strawberry Python/Aqua Toxin/Pumpkin Runes (pumpkin runes on a reddish python or python in general)
denim crystal
flint/lead/pear pinstripe/lead/pear
http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=30518591

abyss/denim/peacock ripple/rosette/crackle]scales on m imps


apparel:
good apparel combo!!
good outfit!!

reference for blue daintyboot's mirror accent
reference for ravenheart's once upon a dream accent
good hypnotic colors:

cream, lead, coal, black, blackberry, grape, sapphire, overcast, steel, denim, cyan, abyss, thicket, peacock, murk, grapefruit, metals, clay, umber, tarnish, sanguine, cerise,
for stained good references:

denim bee/magenta stained
peacock BEE/raspberry stained

metals pinstripe/x/smoke peacock

grapefruit metallic/shadow/blackberry

caramel skin/ copper hypnotic

maize okapi looks really good on soft colors like banana iri

periwinkle poison with abyss okapi!!

steel/sky shimmer with copper thylacine

charcoal paint looks spectacular

a male bog with piebald/glimmer

storm petals/buttefly looks very good with pearl glimmer

midnight/pistachio/pistacio male with ice eyes

wisteria/blackberry/pearl

lavender/midnight/midnight guard m iri/pere/okapi

heather/wine/turquoise ripple/facet/gembond

hunter spinner/skink with nightshade stained

male mirror: samurai helmet + lion headdress + baldwin earrings

perfect facet/glimmer combos:

blood/facet
plum/amethyst
[/color]
a breeding challenge where i breed a m mirror that shows off a particular Gene or even Gene combo. some genes just don't work best with mirrors, hmm.
bloodborne themed/inspired mirror with hunter color
crimson capsule
fire capsule
algae jaguar
gloom savannah
honeydew Butterfly/ Coral Capsule
cinnamon opal
spruce poison, clay spinner, bronze capsule
x/copper/cinnamon pair
peacock hypnotic
honeydew/lapis poison/current


dragons that struck me for some reason:
copper/maroon/blood falcon/butterfly/glimmer
tarnish/teracotta savannah/butterfly
avocado capsule
heather butterfly
murk jaguar red facet honeydew runes
Phthalo bee
tarnish wasp or pinstripe/tarnish bee/goldenrod runes
chartreuse gembond
sky scales (and scales in general on m guardians)
orca/midnight/shadow giraffe/shimmer/smirch
Carmine Python/Chartreuse Toxin/Pumpkin Runes and Strawberry Python/Aqua Toxin/Pumpkin Runes (pumpkin runes on a reddish python or python in general)
denim crystal
flint/lead/pear pinstripe/lead/pear
http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=30518591

abyss/denim/peacock ripple/rosette/crackle]scales on m imps


apparel:
good apparel combo!!
good outfit!!

reference for blue daintyboot's mirror accent
reference for ravenheart's once upon a dream accent
good hypnotic colors:

cream, lead, coal, black, blackberry, grape, sapphire, overcast, steel, denim, cyan, abyss, thicket, peacock, murk, grapefruit, metals, clay, umber, tarnish, sanguine, cerise,
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projects/goals:

max out hibernal den
gene/dress all dragons
all warriors to lvl 25 in golem workshop


gw boss hunt - both!
the long drop challange? where to start though
find the perfect pair for primal eyes
develop hybrid concepts - multi-gaze on certain breeds gives another set of eyes on the head - mirror crossbreeds!! mb even a mirror/non-mirror breed?? or get a wc/wc pair and after the multi is born, change one parent to a mirror
projects/goals:

max out hibernal den
gene/dress all dragons
all warriors to lvl 25 in golem workshop


gw boss hunt - both!
the long drop challange? where to start though
find the perfect pair for primal eyes
develop hybrid concepts - multi-gaze on certain breeds gives another set of eyes on the head - mirror crossbreeds!! mb even a mirror/non-mirror breed?? or get a wc/wc pair and after the multi is born, change one parent to a mirror
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something has gone wrong. the lair is prosperous as ever, but an odd... affectation is starting to plague some dragons.

cadfael, the outer leader, is afflicted, as is debacle, the inner one. this worries the clan. new warriors are needed, the protection of the clan is paramount. but the clan has always been particular about its members - in fact, many of the impermanent warriors are on their way out.

the clouds are gathering, and a storm is approaching.

(meanwhile, a hunter and prey chase each other. criminal and law enforcer, coy and stern circle)
something has gone wrong. the lair is prosperous as ever, but an odd... affectation is starting to plague some dragons.

cadfael, the outer leader, is afflicted, as is debacle, the inner one. this worries the clan. new warriors are needed, the protection of the clan is paramount. but the clan has always been particular about its members - in fact, many of the impermanent warriors are on their way out.

the clouds are gathering, and a storm is approaching.

(meanwhile, a hunter and prey chase each other. criminal and law enforcer, coy and stern circle)
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