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Egg thank you! The second quote is supposed to be a reference to my dragon Timebender, but now that you point it out I do see how that can be a bit confusing. I'll see if I can rewrite it a bit^^
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Egg thank you! The second quote is supposed to be a reference to my dragon Timebender, but now that you point it out I do see how that can be a bit confusing. I'll see if I can rewrite it a bit^^
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Waywind Wanderers
We will wander wherever the wind takes us.
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Now that I’m off both work and school... I guess we’re open again!
Now that I’m off both work and school... I guess we’re open again!
boop - I have more free time now :)
boop - I have more free time now :)
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Egg hi! thank you so much for offering this service. would you be willing to critique a piece in dm's? thank you so much c:
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Egg hi! thank you so much for offering this service. would you be willing to critique a piece in dm's? thank you so much c:
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Egg You seem to know what you are doing. Think you can You can help me out with a description?
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Egg You seem to know what you are doing. Think you can You can help me out with a description?
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Kazima
Sure thing! A description for what? :)
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Kazima
Sure thing! A description for what? :)
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Egg A RotG NBC fanfic. Second half of it seems stale.
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Egg A RotG NBC fanfic. Second half of it seems stale.
Oh man this is EXACTLY what I've been looking for, for well over a year... I am so glad I came across this ;3; Please do [b]mess me up[/b] but I totally understand if you don't want to critique the below dragon's lore, they've been knocked back before but I don't know of any reason unfortunately; not that they needed any but I could've worked on or at least took note of whatever it was haha
Also I hope you don't consider me pushing the word limit since they have around 1000 words each, but they're a couple and their lore is woven together around half way through ;3; Both don't necessarily need criticized jointly but if you were up for doing both I'd love to know your overall thoughts <3
This is Typhoeus & Echidna, my greek mythos lore pair heavily inspired by their irl namesakes (: I have proof-read their bios [i]many[/i] times and made a lot of adjustments but uhm, I have a tendency to read what I thought I've wrote instead of what's actually written, therefor creating the terrible issue of me skipping over errors. I can be very inconsistent with tense, and my punctuation usage can be a bit messy - commas in particular tend to seem overused to me.
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Oh man this is EXACTLY what I've been looking for, for well over a year... I am so glad I came across this ;3; Please do
mess me up but I totally understand if you don't want to critique the below dragon's lore, they've been knocked back before but I don't know of any reason unfortunately; not that they needed any but I could've worked on or at least took note of whatever it was haha
Also I hope you don't consider me pushing the word limit since they have around 1000 words each, but they're a couple and their lore is woven together around half way through ;3; Both don't necessarily need criticized jointly but if you were up for doing both I'd love to know your overall thoughts <3
This is Typhoeus & Echidna, my greek mythos lore pair heavily inspired by their irl namesakes (: I have proof-read their bios
many times and made a lot of adjustments but uhm, I have a tendency to read what I thought I've wrote instead of what's actually written, therefor creating the terrible issue of me skipping over errors. I can be very inconsistent with tense, and my punctuation usage can be a bit messy - commas in particular tend to seem overused to me.
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Kazima
I am happy to take a look if it is under 1k :)
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Kazima
I am happy to take a look if it is under 1k :)
