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TOPIC | [IC] quick lore commissions (closed)
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@shanncrafter

Hallo there ;3

I noticed that all of your 12,5kt slots are already taken and wanted to ask, if you're planning to open some up again in the future? I would really love to commission you then! Thank you very much~
@shanncrafter

Hallo there ;3

I noticed that all of your 12,5kt slots are already taken and wanted to ask, if you're planning to open some up again in the future? I would really love to commission you then! Thank you very much~
@CrashNebula here you go! let me know if you'd like any edits :) I sort of pictured him as a protective sort of derg? all that don't judge a book by its cover thing. [quote=Amatix] Silks drape easily over scars, candles distort the form and cloaks conceal the limp. The clan is small but growing, and already Amatix finds that even the smallest bit of territory In the Starfall Isles isn't completely free from danger. In the beginning, he shoulders the burden alone. No one needs to know that a hostile serthis clan borders theirs, that sometimes the hollow crystals hovering overhead sometimes howl with a chilling cry that resembles neither dragon nor beastclan. Alone, he negotiates terms of a peace treaty with the serthis and take it upon himself to investigate the cause of the phenomenon. The results of both ventures? Scars now marr his flank and an odd burn--almost a brand-- is seared on the back of his left wing, both cleverly hidden by the cloak and wing ribbons. In front of the clan, he puts up a facade. The kindness and the good intentions aren’t faked and neither is the genuine interest he has in everyone’s endeavours, but he hides the wounds, the exhaustion, the fatigue. For months, Amatix does his best to protect his clan from external harm, investigating threats and patrolling the border at night. His own stoicness and protectiveness almost dooms him because he hides and he conceals until he [i]can’t[/i], until his own mate finds him barely alive on the borders severely wounded, though by what he won’t say. Not long after, the clan casts wards and hires guards, so their own leader won’t endanger himself trying to take into account everyone’s safety. He won’t admit it, but he’s grateful for the help. So look past the soft silks and that warm gaze, for beneath the veneer of luxury lies a dragon fierce in his convictions and unyielding in his love. [/quote]
@CrashNebula here you go! let me know if you'd like any edits :) I sort of pictured him as a protective sort of derg? all that don't judge a book by its cover thing.

Amatix wrote:
Silks drape easily over scars, candles distort the form and cloaks conceal the limp. The clan is small but growing, and already Amatix finds that even the smallest bit of territory In the Starfall Isles isn't completely free from danger.

In the beginning, he shoulders the burden alone. No one needs to know that a hostile serthis clan borders theirs, that sometimes the hollow crystals hovering overhead sometimes howl with a chilling cry that resembles neither dragon nor beastclan. Alone, he negotiates terms of a peace treaty with the serthis and take it upon himself to investigate the cause of the phenomenon. The results of both ventures? Scars now marr his flank and an odd burn--almost a brand-- is seared on the back of his left wing, both cleverly hidden by the cloak and wing ribbons.

In front of the clan, he puts up a facade. The kindness and the good intentions aren’t faked and neither is the genuine interest he has in everyone’s endeavours, but he hides the wounds, the exhaustion, the fatigue.

For months, Amatix does his best to protect his clan from external harm, investigating threats and patrolling the border at night. His own stoicness and protectiveness almost dooms him because he hides and he conceals until he can’t, until his own mate finds him barely alive on the borders severely wounded, though by what he won’t say.

Not long after, the clan casts wards and hires guards, so their own leader won’t endanger himself trying to take into account everyone’s safety. He won’t admit it, but he’s grateful for the help.

So look past the soft silks and that warm gaze, for beneath the veneer of luxury lies a dragon fierce in his convictions and unyielding in his love.
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@Domeikuni here you go! this one's turned out to be a bit longer than what I was expecting to write so just let me know if you'd like anything corrected! [quote=Ethan] In a clan as diverse as this, it’s little surprise that one can find a dragon like him with no particular role at all. His is a quiet existence, a peaceful one, and mostly spent gathering flowers or taking care of hatchlings in the nursery. Ethan’s got an aura that seems to draw dragons to him. It isn’t simple to explain, but dragons find it easy to spill out their troubles to him, to feel that understanding gaze upon them and to realise that maybe the world isn’t as cruel as it seems. He does his best to listen, of course, but it is also interesting to note that his potential for magic far exceeds that of a normal dragon and that if he didn’t spend his days romping about in fields, he could just as become one of the most powerful mages in the Windswept Plateau. [/quote]
@Domeikuni here you go! this one's turned out to be a bit longer than what I was expecting to write so just let me know if you'd like anything corrected!
Ethan wrote:
In a clan as diverse as this, it’s little surprise that one can find a dragon like him with no particular role at all. His is a quiet existence, a peaceful one, and mostly spent gathering flowers or taking care of hatchlings in the nursery.

Ethan’s got an aura that seems to draw dragons to him. It isn’t simple to explain, but dragons find it easy to spill out their troubles to him, to feel that understanding gaze upon them and to realise that maybe the world isn’t as cruel as it seems.

He does his best to listen, of course, but it is also interesting to note that his potential for magic far exceeds that of a normal dragon and that if he didn’t spend his days romping about in fields, he could just as become one of the most powerful mages in the Windswept Plateau.
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@Justdevon here you go! I was a bit stumped for her at first but I hope this does her justice! also sorry for pinging you twice I got a bit mixed up whoops
Deadra wrote:
As acting bodyguard to the Empress, Deadra soon realises that it isn’t as easy of a job as she’d initially thought. Oh, she can fend off the occasional assassin and escort the Empress to a safe house when a mob gets riled up, but the true challenge is in holding her tongue when the council convenes for war.

It’s worse when the Empress herself has to shoot her a warning glance when one of the council members make a mistake, because no, that’s a death trap and if you position those troops there you’re sacrificing hundreds of lives.

But what does she know? She’s never commanded armies before, never taken a single class in the strategy of war, yet she sees each and every move clear as day and understands the schematics of it as well as any of the council members.

So she watches with a mixture of frustration and satisfaction as everything she predicts will come true happens. The Empress, perceptive as ever, tells her in no uncertain terms to hold her tongue, even as another avoidable mistake is made on the table before her and she taps the hilt of her sword unconsciously, itching to correct it.

And what’s even more infuriating is that her sense of duty and her reasoning wins out every time. She grinds her teeth, silent but obedient, loyal to an Empress who won’t listen and to an empire steadily losing a war.

And while Deadra cannot quite place a claw on what exactly she’s good at, she does realise that she has potential. Whether it be on the frontlines or commanding armies, she is deadly throughout. Till she learns to keep her impatience in check and gains a bit more experience, she must be content at the side of her mistress.

Now, if only the Empress would trust her.
@Justdevon here you go! I was a bit stumped for her at first but I hope this does her justice! also sorry for pinging you twice I got a bit mixed up whoops
Deadra wrote:
As acting bodyguard to the Empress, Deadra soon realises that it isn’t as easy of a job as she’d initially thought. Oh, she can fend off the occasional assassin and escort the Empress to a safe house when a mob gets riled up, but the true challenge is in holding her tongue when the council convenes for war.

It’s worse when the Empress herself has to shoot her a warning glance when one of the council members make a mistake, because no, that’s a death trap and if you position those troops there you’re sacrificing hundreds of lives.

But what does she know? She’s never commanded armies before, never taken a single class in the strategy of war, yet she sees each and every move clear as day and understands the schematics of it as well as any of the council members.

So she watches with a mixture of frustration and satisfaction as everything she predicts will come true happens. The Empress, perceptive as ever, tells her in no uncertain terms to hold her tongue, even as another avoidable mistake is made on the table before her and she taps the hilt of her sword unconsciously, itching to correct it.

And what’s even more infuriating is that her sense of duty and her reasoning wins out every time. She grinds her teeth, silent but obedient, loyal to an Empress who won’t listen and to an empire steadily losing a war.

And while Deadra cannot quite place a claw on what exactly she’s good at, she does realise that she has potential. Whether it be on the frontlines or commanding armies, she is deadly throughout. Till she learns to keep her impatience in check and gains a bit more experience, she must be content at the side of her mistress.

Now, if only the Empress would trust her.
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@Juri01 slots are now open!
@Juri01 slots are now open!
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@shanncrafter It seems all your slots are taken, but could I get a ping when the 12.5kt slots are open? ^^
@shanncrafter It seems all your slots are taken, but could I get a ping when the 12.5kt slots are open? ^^
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@shanncrafter Ohhhh~~ thank you for the ping! May I claim a slot, please? :3 [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=36063322] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/360634/36063322_350.png[/img] [/url] meet [b]Haneul[/b], the newly appointed co-leader of my clan. I have nothing on here character whise, only a little [url=http://www1.flightrising.com/forums/cc/1838332#post_19563168]pointer[/url] she actually got that position^^" feel free to look around my lore thread, both her parents and jobs are listed there too ;3 Can't wait so read your story! (Should payment be send right away?)
@shanncrafter


Ohhhh~~ thank you for the ping! May I claim a slot, please? :3


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meet Haneul, the newly appointed co-leader of my clan. I have nothing on here character whise, only a little pointer she actually got that position^^" feel free to look around my lore thread, both her parents and jobs are listed there too ;3

Can't wait so read your story!
(Should payment be send right away?)
@shanncrafter Can I buy 2 of the 5kt slots please? For these dragons, they have a little basic info on their pages. Thanks either way! [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=9066034] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/90661/9066034_350.png[/img] [/url] [url=http://flightrising.com/main.php?dragon=24311386] [img]http://flightrising.com/rendern/350/243114/24311386_350.png[/img] [/url]
@shanncrafter
Can I buy 2 of the 5kt slots please? For these dragons, they have a little basic info on their pages. Thanks either way!

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Do I have a gen.1 obsession? I think I might, is that bad?
@Shanncrafter ahhhh thank you! I love it <3
@Shanncrafter ahhhh thank you! I love it <3
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@Justdevon glad you like it! ah also could you please just add a line of credit at the bottom, just a by @ shanncrafter would be great! thank you :)

@Juri01 got it! I usually accept payment after I've sent the commission but it's ok! :)

@Quintillion sure!

@blackflamewolf sure! thanks :)
@Justdevon glad you like it! ah also could you please just add a line of credit at the bottom, just a by @ shanncrafter would be great! thank you :)

@Juri01 got it! I usually accept payment after I've sent the commission but it's ok! :)

@Quintillion sure!

@blackflamewolf sure! thanks :)
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